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Between The Buried And Me - Telos [OsuMania]

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Phil
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 2. Januar 2018 at 13:58:00

Artist: Between The Buried And Me
Title: Telos
Tags: progressive metal marathon
BPM: 250
Filesize: 11009kb
Play Time: 09:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Reborn - 4Key (4,58 stars, 6870 notes)
Download: Between The Buried And Me - Telos
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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07/05/17



She Writes:
I awake to a cold touch. Two arms in four-armed bed. The touch of wind wrapping around me. I'm trying to follow its scent. The scent of isolation. Every door opened, every aspect of our life... gone. Hauling around our memories. Every corner a display of our life. A life I assume will never be the same again. No signs, no clues. A game that I will question until the end. Where have you gone? Was I ever important? The late nights lend ideas, but nothing to gather actual progress.

Years go by. The constant stare. The constant grip inside. Every organ grinding. Every day seems easier until I step back in our box. Boxed in. Surrounded by life, while suffocating inside a poor version of one. Grip the match, set the fire. Don't save a thing.
Rebirth. Reborn. Now this is progress. The black box will reveal only this. I will sit. Sit and wait until not a breath escapes my body. Burning in our box. What did all of this even mean? More objects to represent a status. One we can't even prove. Hide behind what we have taken. You have done this. The memory of me will leave with the ash of lost treasures. Goodbye to you. Goodbye to everything.


_RamiWins_
Hier ist deine Mod ! xd

Vor ab:
wenn Ich stellen aufliste und dann "..." schreibe meine Ich alle ähnlichen Stellen in der section oder der Map
die darauf folgen, ausserdem habe Ich auf English geschrieben weil duh.
wenn du noch fragen hast PM mich gerne :D

Rebirth:
00:04:820 (4820|1) - ghost note I think
00:07:820 (7820|0) - ^
00:08:840 (8840|1,8840|2) - technically this jump should be on 1,2 judging on how you mapped these sounds prior.
00:27:680 (27680|2) - + 00:31:520 (31520|2) - + 00:35:360 (35360|2) - + …
at this point the guitar changes pitch, accordingly the trill pattern should change.
00:40:280 (40280|0,40280|3,40280|2) - is a hand and 00:40:520 (40520|1) - + 00:40:760 (40760|2) - … are singles representing the same sound in a short amount of time, this should be more consistent.
01:24:764 (84764|1) - ghost note
01:37:418 (97418|3) - + 01:37:418 (97418|3) - + 01:40:936 (100936|1) - +... I feel like this sound should be mapped as a jump or a hand, since it seems very important in that section.
01:51:372 (111372|0,111502|1,111502|2) - +01:52:415 (112415|1,112546|2,112546|3) - + … should‘nt this be a jack as well ? Or am I just stupid ? xd
refering to 01:50:328 (110328|3,110459|2,110459|3) -
02:13:672 (133672|1) - ghost note
02:38:455 (158455|1,158455|3,158455|0) - the guitar plays a quick riff I would suggest a pattern similar to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9670634
02:39:107 (159107|1,159107|3) - and 02:39:237 (159237|0,159237|2) - are the the same sound this should be a jump jack
same with 02:42:237 (162237|1,162237|3) - and 02:42:368 (162368|0,162368|2) -
also with 02:43:150 (163150|1,163150|2,163281|0,163281|3,163411|2,163411|1) -

03:07:551 (187551|3) - this should be a jump
03:15:629 (195629|2) - felt a little uncomfortable on the right hand try: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9670852
03:23:700 (203700|2) - this note should be on 4
03:34:920 (214920|1) - this note should start one snap later on 1/12
03:34:980 (214980|0) - ghost note ?
03:52:980 (232980|1,233100|0,233220|2,233340|3,233460|2) – feels very akward, try changing it to face inward maybe a little like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9670898 but you should experiment yourself with that since I am not trustworthy when it comes to LN xD
06:39:060 (399060|1,399060|2,399060|0) - I feel like since this stream is so long it would be good to use some slight burst variaton at sounds like these in form of trills.
06:24:780 (384780|3,384780|2) - this should be on 1/6
06:24:900 (384900|1,384900|0) - this on 1/12 one snap back
07:24:207 (444207|1,444267|2,444327|1,444327|0) - this feels a little weird would change to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9671326 or similar
07:33:687 (453687|0,453687|3) - this should be a single
09:10:491 (550491|1) - this note should go 1 snap higher on ¼
would suggest adding this jump https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9671414
09:39:694 (579694|1,579807|3,579932|2,580045|0) - idk these notes are not snapped on the grid, seems correct tho (might be a 32nd), would suggest just placing a timing point here.
09:41:514 (581514|2) - ^
09:45:015 (585015|1,585015|0) - ^

Viel glück noch mit der Map <3
Topic Starter
Phil
Okay vor ab, ich hab jetzt gerade am Ende gemerkt, dass ich die Hex Codes vertauscht habe und ehrlich gesagt zu faul bin, das jetzt noch zu ändern. Also machen wir den Hipstermodus:
Green: declined
Red: accepted

_RamiWins_ wrote:

Hier ist deine Mod ! xd

Vor ab:
wenn Ich stellen aufliste und dann "..." schreibe meine Ich alle ähnlichen Stellen in der section oder der Map
die darauf folgen, ausserdem habe Ich auf English geschrieben weil duh.
wenn du noch fragen hast PM mich gerne :D

Rebirth:
00:04:820 (4820|1) - ghost note I think Ops, good catch
00:07:820 (7820|0) - ^ These 16ths follow the the same guitar gimmick as in the intro.
00:08:840 (8840|1,8840|2) - technically this jump should be on 1,2 judging on how you mapped these sounds prior. [color#00BF00]These jumps don’t follow a particular pattern. Only thing I payed attention to was to not overlayer it by creating unnecessary jacks while factor in finger motion.[/color]
00:27:680 (27680|2) - + 00:31:520 (31520|2) - + 00:35:360 (35360|2) - + …
at this point the guitar changes pitch, accordingly the trill pattern should change. Been thinking about this for quite some time after seeing Shoegazer’s chart of it. Will change it for now as I don’t have much of a choice musical relevance-wise.
00:40:280 (40280|0,40280|3,40280|2) - is a hand and 00:40:520 (40520|1) - + 00:40:760 (40760|2) - … are singles representing the same sound in a short amount of time, this should be more consistent. 00:40:280 (40280|0,40280|3,40280|2) is more prominent than the other two. (you could argue that 40:520 is as loud as 40:280 but that would be too convoluted for me.
01:24:764 (84764|1) - ghost note That’s the guitar.
01:37:418 (97418|3) - + 01:37:418 (97418|3) - + 01:40:936 (100936|1) - +... I feel like this sound should be mapped as a jump or a hand, since it seems very important in that section. I omitted this sound on purpose because overlayer reasons.
01:51:372 (111372|0,111502|1,111502|2) - +01:52:415 (112415|1,112546|2,112546|3) - + … should‘nt this be a jack as well ? Or am I just stupid ? xd Can’t hear anything that justifies a jump (present jumps are snare). But I found other pattern errors in that section thanks to your point which are fixed now.
refering to 01:50:328 (110328|3,110459|2,110459|3) -
02:13:672 (133672|1) - ghost note Wasn’t sure with that, looked up a drum playthrough, good ear mango.
02:38:455 (158455|1,158455|3,158455|0) - the guitar plays a quick riff I would suggest a pattern similar to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9670634 The guitar goes in a ¼ snap.
02:39:107 (159107|1,159107|3) - and 02:39:237 (159237|0,159237|2) - are the the same sound this should be a jump jack
same with 02:42:237 (162237|1,162237|3) - and 02:42:368 (162368|0,162368|2) -
also with 02:43:150 (163150|1,163150|2,163281|0,163281|3,163411|2,163411|1) - Completely overlooked that, thanks.

03:07:551 (187551|3) - this should be a jump fixed
03:15:629 (195629|2) - felt a little uncomfortable on the right hand try: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9670852 Works better, fixed.
03:23:700 (203700|2) - this note should be on 4 fixed
03:34:920 (214920|1) - this note should start one snap later on 1/12 Lns after had an error as well, fixed
03:34:980 (214980|0) - ghost note ? There’s clearly a pitch change. I agree that this part looks like hell but I don’t have many options on the other hand musical relevance-wise.
03:52:980 (232980|1,233100|0,233220|2,233340|3,233460|2) – feels very akward, try changing it to face inward maybe a little like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9670898 but you should experiment yourself with that since I am not trustworthy when it comes to LN xD Not sure about this, really. Added your suggestion for now.
06:39:060 (399060|1,399060|2,399060|0) - I feel like since this stream is so long it would be good to use some slight burst variation at sounds like these in form of trills. I get your point but this would cause a technical error plus I’m too concerned that it will play bad finger motion-wise so I’ll keep it. Creative idea though.
06:24:780 (384780|3,384780|2) - this should be on 1/6 This is fine as it is.
06:24:900 (384900|1,384900|0) - this on 1/12 one snap back This one is 1/16 too late, fixed.
07:24:207 (444207|1,444267|2,444327|1,444327|0) - this feels a little weird would change to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9671326 or similar changed
07:33:687 (453687|0,453687|3) - this should be a single The jumps go for the palm muted guitar chords.
09:10:491 (550491|1) - this note should go 1 snap higher on ¼ The note is fine but I aligned the note before that one (3) to the 1/6 snap.
would suggest adding this jump https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9671414
09:39:694 (579694|1,579807|3,579932|2,580045|0) - idk these notes are not snapped on the grid, seems correct tho (might be a 32nd), would suggest just placing a timing point here. You’re right, they are charted to the waveform. Tried to figure a way with timing points there but couldn’t get it to fit every note on a snap so I went 100% technically correct there.
09:41:514 (581514|2) - ^ Was able to align this to a snap.
09:45:015 (585015|1,585015|0) - ^

Viel glück noch mit der Map <3
Vielen Danke für deinen Mod, hast mir sehr geholfen mit deinen Vorschlägen und es möglich gemacht ziemlich viele Errors auszuradieren.
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