1. Easy (1,07 stars, 86 notes)
2. Hard (4,99 stars, 383 notes)
3. Not So Hard (4,49 stars, 236 notes)

Combo1 : 188,37,29

TicClick wrote:

Not Hard
00:16:422 (6) - два хлопка? неа, там нормал секция специально
00:16:937 (1) - убери с середины финиш. ноу, трипл финиши ;D
00:23:108 (3) - отсюда убрать бы тоже. ^
00:28:422 (2,3) - на таких парах можно убрать первый мягкий свисток. а я специально делал оО
01:08:537 (1,2,3) - милая штука Ooooook~
01:11:794 (1,2,3,4) - и так далее — ты потеряла хлопки? На тело можно повесить свисток. А финишей лучше поменьше сделать.
нет, я не "потеряла" хлопки(I'm a boy o/), мной расставлены финиши по сильным секциям, игра хитсаундов, все дела.
01:32:194 (3) - не знаю, можно попробовать сделать «продолжением» слайдера, чтобы по кругу шло. Треугольник не смотрится.
Да, в круг было бы лучше, но у меня есть один принцип, называется "не подыгрывать крутильщикам". Когда объекты выстраиваются в каком-то направлении, то в этом направлении проще крутить, засчет чего крутильщику не нужно совершать противодвижений, следовательно он накрутит больше. Поэтому в таких случаях перед спиннерами я не задаю направляющие паттерны.стараюсь по крайней мере. чтобы уравнять шансы.

Aleks719 wrote:

@ Reiji : [Normal] - Aleks719 <= напиши название как есть, а не нормал.

Aleks719 wrote:

Да, в круг было бы лучше, но у меня есть один принцип, называется "не подыгрывать крутильщикам". Когда объекты выстраиваются в каком-то направлении, то в этом направлении проще крутить, засчет чего крутильщику не нужно совершать противодвижений, следовательно он накрутит больше. Поэтому в таких случаях перед спиннерами я не задаю направляющие паттерны.стараюсь по крайней мере. чтобы уравнять шансы.[/color]

240,300,90994,5,4
304,212,91680,1,0
252,120,92365,1,4
148,148,93051,1,0
140,256,93737,5,4

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via in-game PM

Hya~ Sorry for being quite late You are not late :3

[General]
-> "Not So Hard" uh... Maybe use diff name "Challenging"? Waiting for Aleks
-> There's an unnecessary transparency on the comboburst.png (idk this is intentional or not, though) Uh, I'll fix it
-> Consider adding a light green sliderborder? :3 Aww, how can I do this? o:

[Hard]
00:06:822 (3) - Add whistle on repeat? (because you added whistle at 00:13:165 (8)) Fixed
00:27:908 (1) - Quite tricky spacing here, but plays fine I think it's ok :3
00:30:651 (1) - Same as above ^
00:39:394 (2) - I think curving to this direction : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157007 flows better Yeah, it's better, fixed
00:48:137 (5) - I personally dislike how this touches (10). Maybe change (4,5,6) into a jump with (5) below (10)? Done
01:00:308 (8,9,10) - Looks quite weird on play mode imo, but plays fine B-but I like triple stack :<
01:09:051 (4,5,6) - Create something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157010 ? Done!
01:27:908 (5,6,1) - Again, this triple stack looks quite weird imo. But this one is much better than the last one :<
02:02:880 (5) - Curved too much imo Fixed~

...That's all from me, mostly suggestions :3
Amazing map, ready to be ranked already imo >< Gaw >w<

PS : You SHOULD tell me next time if Aleks719 and IceBeam makes a diff here, I'll mod it instantly orz Okay, I'll tell you!

Nivalis wrote:

[General]
-> "Not So Hard" uh... Maybe use diff name "Challenging"? No, thanks
-> Consider adding a light green sliderborder? :3 Combocolors are light green already, not sure here, imo white sliderborder works good

[Not So Hard]
00:05:965 (1,2) - I personally doesn't like this curving technique (with 1 or 3 waypoint would be better imo) >< Plays well thoughokay, leave as was
00:10:594 (6,7) - Remove hitsound on (6) and use clap hitsound on (7)? (I personally feel one clap after another is too noisy here)
clap on (7) already, like my whistle on (6), leave as was
00:16:937 (1) - The repeat somewhat got covered by (5)'s comboburst but the reaction time is still enough imo reaction time is still enough imo too, leave as was
00:20:194 (3) - idk why, I feel this whistle sound strange (plus there's no whistle on 01:04:080 (4)) Ok, whistle on (3) has been removed
00:31:165 (2,3) - Move these two few grids left so it will form a better triangle? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157000 Ok, fixed
00:48:137 (2) - I think, moving this few grids up will flow better Ok, fixed
01:23:108 (2,4) - Definitely could be curved smoother orz Oh, no need, leave as was
01:28:937 (2) - Move few grids down like : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157003 ? (tieff style jumps orz) No, thanks, hate tieff's style. also it'll break my distance snap.
02:03:908 (1) - This linear slider breaks the flow imo Ok, fixed

Also added 1 timing point.

Nivalis wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:451 (1) - Standard curve like : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156995 plays better imo. However if you don't want to change it at least you can wave it better (: alright!
00:27:908 (1,1,1,1) - I prefer the claps being on the first repeat and the slider's end rather than in the second repeat, but it's just my personal opinion I'm really stunned with hitsounding these sliders ._. but I'll think of it,thanks!
00:42:994 (2) - Move the middle waypoint one grid left and up? (grid modding yeah xD) ok
00:47:108 (1) - I can see the 2nd tick is not in the center. Maybe center this slider with turning off grid snap? fixed,should be better now
01:11:794 (1,1,1,1) - Same as 00:27:908 yep,I'll think of it
01:30:994 (1,2,3,4,1) - Create a better pentagon here? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156997) thanks,but did in my personal way

240,300,90994,5,4
304,212,91680,1,0
252,120,92365,1,4
148,148,93051,1,0
140,256,93737,5,4

01:58:422 (1) - Is it intentional not to place this slider in the center? o.o - Also, I believe you can wave this smoother :3 fixed!
02:06:651 (1) - Uh... Move the inherit section 1/4 later maybe so players who clicked this note early don't get too loud sound I think you've meant earlier,but I got it,thanks,nice suggestion!

1. Mp3 Bitrate : 192kbps (okay)
   
2. Video (frame size) : No Vid (Okay)
   
3. Skin : comboburst (fine) why don't you add one more or two ? if there's more xD
   
4. Background : 1024x768 (okay)
   
5. Kiai time : [Not so hard] and [Hard] lost a kiai time. 00:49:851 , 01:00:822 , 01:11:794 , 01:22:765 and more, is this small kiai really needed ?
   
6. Snapping : No problem here (okay)
   
7. Preview Point : No problem here (okay)
   
8. Diffs : 1 easy , 1 not so hard (change to normal ?) , 1 hard (Okay)
   
9. Audio Lead-in : No problem here (Okay)
   
10. Artist : Cameron Strother (Okay)
    
11. Title : Bucho mio , Caps the "b" and I think " ~LocoRoco Green's Theme~ " delete ?
    
12. source : LocoRoco
    
13. Tags : add " green's theme " , remove " ~LocoRoco green's theme~ " , since " LocoRoco" at source , just add " green's theme" at tags.
    
14. Disable letterbox?

1. 01:33:051 (4) -make star here ?
2. 01:33:737 (1) - remove new combo
3. 01:41:622 (3) - add clap , it sounds good xD if two times the beat
4. 01:44:365 (3) - add clap , ^
5. 01:46:080 (2) - add clap at the return , wanna the hitsounds flow correctly :p
6. 01:48:822 (2) - add clap at the return , ^
7. 01:51:565 (2) - add clap at the return , ^
8. 01:54:308 (2) - add clap at the return , ^
9. 01:57:051 (2) - add clap at the return , ^
10. 01:59:794 (2) - add clap at the return , ^
11. 02:02:537 (2) - add clap at the return , ^
12. 02:05:280 (2) - add clap at the return , ^
    

1. Please change it to " Normal " but its quite hard =w=
   
2. 00:25:165 (2) - add whistle at the slider?
3. 00:36:308 (2) - remove clap at the starting, put whistle at the slider.
4. 00:36:822 (3) - remove clap at the starting , put whistle at the slider.
5. 00:38:194 (x) - add a circle ?there "gen" xD
6. 01:09:051 (2) - put whistle at the slider ?
7. 01:15:051 (2) - 1 grid right (level 4)
8. 02:02:537 (3) - remove whistle at the end of the slider , put clap there

1. 00:24:651 (1) - spacing
2. 02:09:051 (x) - add a circle?
   

nice beatmap is always nice. Thumbs Up.

HeatKai wrote:

helo as your request ~ Haaai >w<

[General]

1. Mp3 Bitrate : 192kbps (okay)
   
2. Video (frame size) : No Vid (Okay)
   
3. Skin : comboburst (fine) why don't you add one more or two ? if there's more xD N-no, I haven't found more :<
   
4. Background : 1024x768 (okay)
   
5. Kiai time : [Not so hard] and [Hard] lost a kiai time. 00:49:851 , 01:00:822 , 01:11:794 , 01:22:765 and more, is this small kiai really needed ? I want this kiais
   
6. Snapping : No problem here (okay)
   
7. Preview Point : No problem here (okay)
   
8. Diffs : 1 easy , 1 not so hard (change to normal ?) , 1 hard (Okay)
   
9. Audio Lead-in : No problem here (Okay)
   
10. Artist : Cameron Strother (Okay)
    
11. Title : Bucho mio , Caps the "b" and I think " ~LocoRoco Green's Theme~ " delete ? No-no, it's full title as in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6467
    
12. source : LocoRoco
    
13. Tags : add " green's theme " , remove " ~LocoRoco green's theme~ " , since " LocoRoco" at source , just add " green's theme" at tags.
    
14. Disable letterbox? okay

[Hard]

1. 00:24:651 (1) - spacing fixed~
2. 02:09:051 (x) - add a circle? N-no, sorry
   

I really love this diff , it flows good ah, thanks >w<

nice beatmap is always nice. Thumbs Up.

Hope its helping

HeatKai wrote:

[Not so hard]

1. Please change it to " Normal " but its quite hard =w= No, it's not a Normal, but i hate + and - in names. Leave as is.
   
2. 00:25:165 (2) - add whistle at the slider?
3. 00:36:308 (2) - remove clap at the starting, put whistle at the slider. no
4. 00:36:822 (3) - remove clap at the starting , put whistle at the slider. no
5. 00:38:194 (x) - add a circle ?there "gen" xD ok
6. 01:09:051 (2) - put whistle at the slider ? no
7. 01:15:051 (2) - 1 grid right (level 4) nah, no
8. 02:02:537 (3) - remove whistle at the end of the slider , put clap there remapped

lovhin456 wrote:

Not so Hard;
- Slider tick 2 ? Sounds nice Ah, sorry, disagree
- 00:09:737 >> How about this ? Sorry, disagree
- 02:08:022 >> Start decreasing the volume from here ? This note feels too strong Ah, okay, reduced here from 50 --> 30.
- No kiai ? ): There are some fountains :S
- Hitsounds on all the diff seem a little too strong, lower the volume a bit ? lol, are you joking ? My diff is almost 60%, sometimes lower. Look at other diffs, they are 60% too, how my diff can be louder?

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! What language is this ? I like the song! Hello! Oh, I don't know, sorry D:

General;
- It might be a good idea to put the name of the creator of the diff in the respective diff. Some people don't take the time to read the OP, but is up to you Aw, I'll think about it

Hard;
- No kiai ? Except for that which isn't a real 'problem' I see no issues, nice diff

* Star ~

1. 02:06:651 (1) - add finish

1. 00:13:851 (2) - How about something like this? http://puu.sh/7Bif
2. 00:27:565 (5) - delete slider, add note 00:27:565 and 00:27:908 http://puu.sh/7Bls
3. 01:30:137 (4) - this slider is not beautiful, (288,148) square delete (nazi)
4. 01:39:222 (1) - remove finish, add clap

1. 00:05:965 (1) - slider end 00:06:565
2. 00:07:851 (5) - change slider slider end 00:08:022
3. 00:10:594 (9,1) - delete (1), (9) changed slider end 00:10:937
   └00:11:280 (3) add clap and whistle
4. 00:33:908 (3,4,5) - How about something like this? http://puu.sh/7BdI
5. 00:36:822 (5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/7BdY
6. 00:40:937 (X) - add note
7. 00:43:680 (X) - ^
8. 00:46:251 (7,8) - delete (8), (7) change slider end 00:46:594 and add clap slider end
9. 01:17:965 (5,6,7,8) - How about something like this? http://puu.sh/7Bfq
10. 01:20:708 (5,6,7,8) - same in 01:17:965
11. 01:28:251 (1,2) - (1)remove new combo, (2) add new combo
12. 01:52:765 (1) - delete note and add note 01:52:937, add new combo
13. 02:00:994 (7) - delete note and add note 02:01:165, add new combo
    └02:01:337 (1) - remove new combo

1. The BG already contain so many green so I suggest to use/add another color other than green (maybe red or brown, the same color with the eyes of the character). It's up to you to change or not, this is just my opinion as a modder~
2. I agree that you should add the name of the each diff creator on every guest diff, I have to browse the thread to know who make which diff
3. I suggest to use the same kiai as Easy diff, it's emphasis the end of the map very good

1. The only thing that bother me is how you use short slider with 2 repeats mixed with short slider with 1 repeat. It's not hard but novice may still get confused. So I suggest to decrease the circle size to biggest size or alternatively you can increase the difficulty setting and call this Normal (or rename this diff to not so easy lol)

1. The whistle slider slide here sounds so awkward, it's not good. Try using a whistle at the start or at the end too
2. 00:11:469 (1,2) - this really bugs me. It's a bad overlap no matter how many time I see it, maybe use the same pattern as 00:05:983 (1,2)
3. 00:25:165 (2) - the red way point made the slider have a little bulge near the center. I suggest to make the red way point to normal then rise the way point near the center way point up by 2 grid (for the way point on the upper side) and lower the other way point down by 2 grid (for the way point on the lower side). It'll make the slider look like http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot024-19.jpg

1. If you can try using normal-whistle sound, there are some good place that can use it e.g. 00:16:937 (2,4), 00:19:679 (4,6), 00:26:365 (6), etc. It's better if you could use more variety on the hitsound
2. 00:14:726 (5,1) - this jump is rather surprising considering the intensity of this part of the song is quite low as it's still in the beginning. I highly suggest to use normal spacing here