1. Futsuu (2,22 stars, 214 notes)
2. Kantan (1,51 stars, 122 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2,84 stars, 328 notes)
4. Oni (3,32 stars, 422 notes)

1. Well it's a little strange through the diffs the first note. I mean mapping something on 00:03:911 - Muzu and Oni and 00:04:177 - on Kantan on Futsuu is a little strange. I think starting all of them on 00:04:177 - sounds really better cuz strong sound comes here. I'm not trying to force you to do the same on every diffs, but I think it's greater considering there's the drum taiko drum game ?) xD
2. Spread is currently (sorry to say this ;;) bad:
   
   1. Kantan Futsuu: 49 notes
   2. Futsuu Muzukashii: 171 notes
      You should take a relook about this. Adding some notes on Futsuu is the best way imo ^^
      Muzu Oni is fine imo.
3. There isn't Preview timing point. 00:48:711 - I suggest this :p
4. I think you could start with 50% volume and add a greenline on 00:05:511 - with 70%. Tbh I would preffer 80% on this and kiai: they're really higher compared than other sections

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4 on notepad :p
2. I think you should use more 4/1 breaks through the song. Using them just on 00:15:111 - section and Kiai (considering Kiai is the 'hardest' part of the song) is a little strange (even they're not real 4/1 breaks xD). Also I think there are lot of unnecesary triples for Kantan but... I'll skip them since you wanted to do them ^^
3. 00:04:177 (1) - this could be fine as big note considering there are strong sounds. Also you can add some notes here and shouldn't be that bad imo
4. I think by moving 00:10:111 (10) - 00:10:311 - should be fine considering you're using triples on this section and this one doesn't deserve a section break
5. You should use kat on 00:24:711 (29) - since you're mixing vocals with little drums there. Also there are some dons in a row tho
6. 00:30:711 (38,39) - ctrl + g these according to same above suggest
7. 00:41:911 (58) - delete this since next part is using redlines
8. Kiai is a little overmapped. Specially sections like 01:04:711 - even it's not that hard. Just comparing to the rest of the song you should make a 2/1 break here at least :p
9. 01:15:911 (109) - K imo
10. 00:07:111 (5) - I think using k like on 01:19:111 (113) - sounds better
11. 01:19:911 (114,115,116) - using the same as the first section is an option. But I pref you to use k k k instead to make it a little different :p

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4
2. 00:04:177 (1,2,3) - big notes probably depends on you
3. Since you're following the high pitch on first section I suggest you to make d k d k d on 00:11:111 (16,17,18) - instead d d d cuz it feels a little empty
4. 00:11:511 (17) - kat to emphatise next don?
5. Suggest: what about deleting 00:13:911 (23) - and adding don on 00:15:311 - 00:15:911 - 00:16:511 -00:18:511 - 00:19:111 - 00:19:711 - ? I think is really good for a Futsuu diff
6. 00:26:711 (44) - kat since you're following vocals
7. 00:34:311 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - I feel like you're following drums here and it's really great but suddenly you start following vocals on 00:37:511 (69,70,71,72,73) - and it feels really strange. Decide over them to have a consistency, that triple doesn't fit at all imo
8. 01:27:111 - kind of same as above
   I liked this diff tbh but it can be really better specially about 2/1 spacings :p

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4
2. 00:03:911 (1) - as I said above I think you should delete this note ^^ this isn't that important imo
3. Since you're following the high pitch here you should delete notes like 00:07:111 (15) - 00:10:311 (27) - etc (applies through the whole map so I'll skip commenting all of them xD)
4. For the same reason as above you should make 00:08:711 (21) - kat
5. 00:11:911 (34) - ^
6. 00:33:311 (122) - this note is unnecesary since you're following vocals here :p
   Well in general dw about finishing on blue lines if it's neccesary :p
7. As I say always I don't like making the same on all diffs but on 00:47:311 - I think you could delete some notes and don't overfollow the whole vocal (this can help you about spread aswell)
8. I think on Kiai triples aren't that consistent (same as patterns) so you can take a whole review about this imo :c
9. 01:01:511 (234) - I feel like big note isn't that neccesary on this
10. It's a little strange following the (metalophone? xD) on 01:13:111 (281,282,283,284,285,286) - and suddenly start following vocals on 01:16:511 (291,292,293) -

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4
2. 00:03:911 (1) - same as muzu :p
3. 00:08:311 (22) - this should be kat according to what you're following
4. 00:08:711 (24) - ^
5. 00:13:511 (50) - ^
   This section feels a little strange since you're following drums and the high pitch (idk wtf is that) on the first section so it's hard to get it ;;
6. Since you made break on 00:51:911 - you should make this 1/1 break on 00:52:711 - aswell. Sounds great
7. 01:13:511 - same as muzu
   Not anything more to say, nice diff ^^

xfraczynho wrote:

Hey o: first mod. I hope this can help you ^^. Remember they're just suggestions so feel free do deny whatever you want to!

[General]

1. Well it's a little strange through the diffs the first note. I mean mapping something on 00:03:911 - Muzu and Oni and 00:04:177 - on Kantan on Futsuu is a little strange. I think starting all of them on 00:04:177 - sounds really better cuz strong sound comes here. I'm not trying to force you to do the same on every diffs, but I think it's greater considering there's the drum taiko drum game ?) xD You're absolutely right here, there isn't even any distinct sound at 00:03:911 lol. Fixed
2. Spread is currently (sorry to say this ;;) bad:
   
   1. Kantan Futsuu: 49 notes
   2. Futsuu Muzukashii: 171 notes
      You should take a relook about this. Adding some notes on Futsuu is the best way imo ^^
      Muzu Oni is fine imo.
   I'll try to do something later... When mapping I consider actual difficulty more than note count. If I start to add notes on Futsuu, it can easily become almost as hard as Muzu. I know that more even note count increase would be advisable, but is it something that REALLY matters in the end? Anyway, I've taken note of this and wil probably change things a little.
3. There isn't Preview timing point. 00:48:711 - I suggest this :p Nice noob mistake... Fixed
4. I think you could start with 50% volume and add a greenline on 00:05:511 - with 70%. Tbh I would preffer 80% on this and kiai: they're really higher compared than other sections Did some other volume changes in the beginning & the middle. Kiai still the same, since it is as loud as the part from 00:05:511 onwards

[Kantan]

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4 on notepad :p How does that even happen? Fixed.
2. I think you should use more 4/1 breaks through the song. Using them just on 00:15:111 - section and Kiai (considering Kiai is the 'hardest' part of the song) is a little strange (even they're not real 4/1 breaks xD). Also I think there are lot of unnecesary triples for Kantan but... I'll skip them since you wanted to do them ^^
3. 00:04:177 (1) - this could be fine as big note considering there are strong sounds. Also you can add some notes here and shouldn't be that bad imo OK
4. I think by moving 00:10:111 (10) - 00:10:311 - should be fine considering you're using triples on this section and this one doesn't deserve a section break The old rhythm fits the song way better. No change.
5. You should use kat on 00:24:711 (29) - since you're mixing vocals with little drums there. Also there are some dons in a row tho K
6. 00:30:711 (38,39) - ctrl + g these according to same above suggest Nah it's better as is imo
7. 00:41:911 (58) - delete this since next part is using redlines This part feels kinda awkward without it, so no change.
8. Kiai is a little overmapped. Specially sections like 01:04:711 - even it's not that hard. Just comparing to the rest of the song you should make a 2/1 break here at least :p Did something
9. 01:15:911 (109) - K imo I think D is better to distinguish it from 01:17:511 (105) -
10. 00:07:111 (5) - I think using k like on 01:19:111 (113) - sounds better Yep.
11. 01:19:911 (114,115,116) - using the same as the first section is an option. But I pref you to use k k k instead to make it a little different :p Went with k k d.

[Futsuu]

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4
2. 00:04:177 (1,2,3) - big notes probably depends on you Done
3. Since you're following the high pitch on first section I suggest you to make d k d k d on 00:11:111 (16,17,18) - instead d d d cuz it feels a little empty
4. 00:11:511 (17) - kat to emphatise next don? Yep
5. Suggest: what about deleting 00:13:911 (23) - and adding don on 00:15:311 - 00:15:911 - 00:16:511 -00:18:511 - 00:19:111 - 00:19:711 - ? I think is really good for a Futsuu diff Yep
6. 00:26:711 (44) - kat since you're following vocals Yep
7. 00:34:311 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - I feel like you're following drums here and it's really great but suddenly you start following vocals on 00:37:511 (69,70,71,72,73) - and it feels really strange. Decide over them to have a consistency, that triple doesn't fit at all imo The vocals have a really high emphasis on 00:37:911 so I put k in there. All other notes follow the drums. No change
8. 01:27:111 - kind of same as above Done
   I liked this diff tbh but it can be really better specially about 2/1 spacings :p ...I'll see what I can do...

[Muzukashii]

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4
2. 00:03:911 (1) - as I said above I think you should delete this note ^^ this isn't that important imo Deleted
3. Since you're following the high pitch here you should delete notes like 00:07:111 (15) - 00:10:311 (27) - etc (applies through the whole map so I'll skip commenting all of them xD) I don't think mapping according to both the high pitch and the drum sound is bad as long as it fees natural to play. Which it does, at least for me. No change.
4. For the same reason as above you should make 00:08:711 (21) - kat Done
5. 00:11:911 (34) - ^ Did some other change that you probably don't agree with >:D
6. 00:33:311 (122) - this note is unnecesary since you're following vocals here :p Added finish there + deleted next note. Feels much better imo.
   Well in general dw about finishing on blue lines if it's neccesary :p
7. As I say always I don't like making the same on all diffs but on 00:47:311 - I think you could delete some notes and don't overfollow the whole vocal (this can help you about spread aswell) Deleted all notes from there for now.
8. I think on Kiai triples aren't that consistent (same as patterns) so you can take a whole review about this imo :c
9. 01:01:511 (234) - I feel like big note isn't that neccesary on this And I think it fits pretty well... There is a distinct finish-like sound in the background, even tho it isn't that loud.
10. It's a little strange following the (metalophone? xD) on 01:13:111 (281,282,283,284,285,286) - and suddenly start following vocals on 01:16:511 (291,292,293) - Did some changes.

[Oni]

1. SliderMultiplier:1.39999996423721 1.4
2. 00:03:911 (1) - same as muzu :p And changed, again.
3. 00:08:311 (22) - this should be kat according to what you're following Changed what I'm following.
4. 00:08:711 (24) - ^ ↑
5. 00:13:511 (50) - ^ ↑
   This section feels a little strange since you're following drums and the high pitch (idk wtf is that) on the first section so it's hard to get it ;;
6. Since you made break on 00:51:911 - you should make this 1/1 break on 00:52:711 - aswell. Sounds great ...I just don't agree with that.
7. 01:13:511 - same as muzu Changed
   Not anything more to say, nice diff ^^

I think that's all! I hope this can be helpful for you and waiting for your reply ^^

Diva Days wrote:

[ General]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"SpectatorIsKindBAT.png",0,25 - fix this for BG. due this, won't hide girl's eye in bg.

also you forgot to turn off Widescreen support.

*The last note could be spin.

[ Kantan]

00:10:111 (11) - u did 1/1 at (16) but why not here? That pattern kinda fits there imo. Not every similar part has to be mapped the same way. Anyway, it does stand out a little, so I might change it later.
00:39:911 - 00:36:711 not have any notes but why here? Changed that part a bit.

[ Futsuu]

00:18:311 - why didn't same as 00:15:111? Fixed lol. I don't know how I forgot to add those...

[ Muzukashii]

00:20:711 (69) - change to k, same sound as (70) It's not tho
00:22:311 (73) - better change to d for play. Done
00:49:411 - maybe u forgot k here, cuz of (202) Added
01:04:311 (239) - better change to k for play, also following next D. Yup
01:12:111 - forgot d here. Nah, I think it's fine without it.

[ Oni]

i'd have to mod this diff but it looks fine to me.

sorry for my bad mod, than your m4m. x:

if u think this mod is useless, no kds to me.

404 AccNotFound wrote:

hi~ sorry for big delay ;w;

[ Kantan ]

00:04:177 (1,2,3) - D K D? for the pitch of melody. Doesn't really fit imo

00:24:111 (27) - move to 00:23:711 - ? here has more impactive power imo.

00:25:511 (29) - k? overall part of here almost high pitch. Yep


[ Futsuu ]

00:05:244 (3) - move to 00:04:444 - so that more easy and emphasize 00:05:511 (4) - . Maybe... No change for now..

00:15:111 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - it okay but same with muzu, so how about KK DD KK? Don't like this at all.

00:24:111 (44) - move to 00:23:711 - ? has more impact. Added k instead, as well as into the next similar part.


[ Oni ]

00:04:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - melody is going higher but not k, only d. even 00:05:511 (6) - here is low than 00:05:244 (5) - . how about use k and last is D? for example, ddkkkD It's this way to emphasize the higher pitch and volume of 00:05:511 (6). No change.

00:20:711 (80) - k? if here follow melody pitch, maybe k. No. 00:20:311 (78,81) - have way higher pitch, adding k there would just feel weird imo.

00:24:911 (102,140) - delete? for the staccato of here, like you did at 00:23:311 - ↓

00:28:711 - this is my opinion, how about use circle at the place that has vocal melody like 00:28:711 - and delete no vocal melody like 00:29:711 (129) - ? the same reason above.　Changed couple notes to fit this.


overall diff all good to me xD
Oni was really fun.
GL~