1. Hard (4.85 stars, 310 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 482 notes)
3. Normal (2.91 stars, 149 notes)

m i z u k i wrote:

BGに雪がない　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

• Fine.

• ●00:05:301 (3) - Add new combo to consist your setting .
  ●00:11:654 (3) - ^

• ●Although I never mind but still to remind you .. You have used 4 slider speeds in this diff and I think the 1.1x section from 01:59:654 is really needless tho .. I can't feel any obvious difference between 1.0x and 1.1x .
  ●00:25:595 (4,5,6) - 1 grid left ? Looks better imo.
  ●00:26:124 (6,1,2) - Spacing here is a little confused .. @_@
  ●00:57:007 (2) - I suggest to stack this on slider 3 instead of 1 to make it more readable .

• ●00:40:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (Comment only) Hard to read at 1st play O.O
  ●01:59:124 (x) - End KIAI here instead of 01:58:595 like how you did on other 2 diffs . I think it will be better if you unify them .
  ●02:09:889 (4) - Could be stacked better .

1. Timing: To play this map comfortably I had to add +10ms local. I still had some slightly late, but that's normal in a way. I suggest you try offset 1076 (+10ms).

1. 01:24:360 (1) - I think a whistle would be more fitting than a finish here. The finish sound doesn't have an immediate impact, but it leaves a nice sound after a while, I just can't see this note with anything other than a whistle though. That's just what I think atleast, it's only a suggestion.
2. 01:33:360 (2,3,4,5) - I really HATE to be nazi, but since the mapset is so flawless, for these, swap to grid level 4 and move them 1 grid right. This will make the pattern look perfect. The star still won't be a perfect star, but it doesn't have to be, its symmetrical, plays good and looks damn nice!
3. 01:35:301 (5) - You could shape this slider a little better. Look here.

1. 00:04:595 (6) - Make this slider look like this?
   Here's the code if you can't do it yourself (slightly improved on grid4 though).
   
   SPOILER

   232,280,4595,2,0,B|216:312|180:328|136:324|112:292,1,140,0|4

2. 00:28:595 (7) - New combo.
3. 00:36:007 (2) - This slider was kinda ugly as well. Maybe try this?
   Here's the code for the slider, and the circle after it, so they both look nice.
   
   SPOILER

   400,208,36007,2,0,B|372:256|316:280|252:260|224:216,1,210,4|0
   200,176,36889,1,0

4. 01:42:713 (1,2,3) - Fix the spacing a little, so they are distanced from each other the same. Best way to do this is to move the endpoint of the slider 01:42:713 (1) by 1 grid to the right.
5. 02:04:595 (5,1) - This spacing is too misleading. You need to distance the other sakura pattern further away. Such spacing is really confusing and is hard to read. If you can't distance it further, I suggest to put 1 where 3 is currently, and go from there somehow. You could also fix the pattern a little so it looks better, but that's up to you.

1. HPdrain -1.
2. 01:18:360 (2,3) - You should increase spacing between these, it could be slightly confusing. Best way would probably be to move the slider a bit further down.
3. 01:36:360 (1) - Remove this new combo, it makes your combos look better if you do.
4. 01:38:477 (5) - New combo and remove new combo from 01:39:536 (1).
5. 01:55:065 (6) - Whistle?
6. 02:09:183 (2,3) - Same thing, you need to increase the spacing between these.