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Camellia - GHOST [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
-mint-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, October 21, 2021 at 9:08:04 PM

Artist: Camellia
Title: GHOST
Tags: qqqant dubstep drumstep drum and bass dnb pumpcore trap cyphisonia e.p. ep ctcd-014 fa featured artist かめるかめりあ kamelcamellia cametek masaya oya mentholzzz polytetral electronic instrumental
BPM: 220
Filesize: 12019kb
Play Time: 05:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab PHANTASM [MX] - 4Key (4.02 stars, 3004 notes)
  2. GHOST-NOVA (2019) - 4Key (5.23 stars, 4130 notes)
  3. SHADOW [HD] - 4Key (3.02 stars, 2233 notes)
  4. SPECTRE (2017) - 4Key (6.02 stars, 4461 notes)
  5. SPIRIT (2017) - 4Key (5.03 stars, 3534 notes)
  6. WISP [NM] - 4Key (1.99 stars, 1285 notes)
Download: Camellia - GHOST
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Wow. This is really popular. I would've never expected this, honestly. I'm not proud of this map at all, and I've obviously improved quite a lot since 2017, but I'm glad that something that I made back in the day is still appreciated to this day.

Old MX map by Mentos vs. Poly

hs diff

SPECIAL THANKS
Mentholzzz and Polytetral for collaborating with me on the Collab PHANTASM difficulty.
Protastic101 for hitsound help.
All of the people who shot stars at this for a really funny joke. Sadly the star shooting system is outdated now, else we'd be seeing the total in all its glory.
Electrized
I don't really have much mapping experience, but i think the core parts of the song on SC are kind of boring to play compared to the rest of the map. They could be mapped in a more engaging way
Topic Starter
-mint-

Electrized wrote:

I don't really have much mapping experience, but i think the core parts of the song on SC are kind of boring to play compared to the rest of the map. They could be mapped in a more engaging way
I do agree actually, I've actually been thinking a bit about how to fix that, but I can't seem to think about any other patterns of similar difficulty ;-; It's either rolly stream or heck

If you do have a solution to this I'd be happy to hear it :D
Mentholzzz
Where is awa ewe iwi owo uwu diff ? D: i miss it :^)
Topic Starter
-mint-

Mentholzzz wrote:

Where is awa ewe iwi owo uwu diff ? D: i miss it :^)
it was bound to not remain like that anyways so
Protastic101
awa ewe iwi owo uwu or riot
Polytetral

qqqant wrote:

Mentholzzz wrote:

Where is awa ewe iwi owo uwu diff ? D: i miss it :^)
it was bound to not remain like that anyways so
[quote="qqqant"]

There's always the "grave separate mapset" method xd
It would be cool to have a separate mapset to compare to the finish product after the modding and updates etc to see how things change :)
Would also appreciate some in-depth mods for the collab GD because it's my first GD pushing for rank and I'm pretty sure there is also space to improve :")
Ryzen_old_1

Another Lie wrote:

From discord
SHD
03:12:890 (192890|0,192924|1,192958|2,192992|3,193027|1,193061|0,193095|2,193129|3,193163|1,193197|0,193231|3,193265|2,193299|0,193333|1,193367|3,193402|2) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8603644
04:32:527 (272527|1) - try use LN for covering 1/4 sound
04:33:345 (273345|1) - ^
04:34:708 (274708|1) - ^
04:35:527 (275527|1) - ^
04:38:390 (278390|1,278390|0) - try LN for variation & covering the background music (just suggestion)
04:38:936 (278936|0,278936|1) - ^
04:39:481 (279481|0,279481|1) - ^
04:40:027 (280027|1,280027|0) - ^
03:57:208 (237208|2) - missed snap here? i think that should be at blue line
05:07:027 (307027|2) - ^
SV Addition for SC & SHD
Addition for SHD below
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SC
01:01:708 (61708|1) - LN, sound already increased there
02:55:572 - missing 1 note? if yes, then add. if no, why 02:55:845 (175845|0,175845|3) - 2 notes?
03:22:436 (202436|0,202436|2) - i better change the position, LN to 3 & SN to 4. 03:22:572 (202572|3) - change as LN?
03:57:208 (237208|0) - should be on blue line
04:32:527 - add LN to col 2 until 04:32:799 - for variation & covering the background music
04:38:936 (278936|0,278936|1) - ^
04:39:481 (279481|0,279481|1) - ^
04:40:027 (280027|1,280027|0) - ^
04:49:981 - missed note?
05:07:027 (307027|0) - should be at blue line
Mentos & Poly
may i ask about 00:28:163 - until 00:42:890 - the consistency about double is randomed on purpose or something?
03:13:777 (193777|2,193845|1,193913|2) - what is this?
05:07:027 (307027|2) - should be at blue line
NM
01:00:890 (60890|2) - should delete this, try adding more note 1/1 until 01:02:254 -
01:07:436 (67436|2) - pretty ez tbh, consider re-arrange & add 1/1 LN (similiar to prot's)
01:11:799 (71799|3) - ^
01:27:072 (87072|3) - consider adding note 1/1 until 01:28:436 -
02:11:799 (131799|1) - isn't this supossed to be at red line?
02:55:436 - consider adding note 1/1 until 02:56:254 -
03:11:799 (191799|2) - slice that LN with 1/1 LN until 03:12:617 -
03:57:072 - until 04:01:436 - should be double notes to keep consistency
04:06:345 (246345|0) - make it 3 for 1/1 LN 04:06:617 - 04:06:890 -
04:10:708 (250708|3) - ^ 04:10:981 - 04:11:254 -
04:40:163 (280163|2) - try this for variation https://puu.sh/wKUIQ.png
05:07:436 - until 05:11:254 - should be double notes to keep consistency
05:16:981 - until 05:24:890 - empty or still WIP?
Electrized

qqqant wrote:

Electrized wrote:

I don't really have much mapping experience, but i think the core parts of the song on SC are kind of boring to play compared to the rest of the map. They could be mapped in a more engaging way
I do agree actually, I've actually been thinking a bit about how to fix that, but I can't seem to think about any other patterns of similar difficulty ;-; It's either rolly stream or heck

If you do have a solution to this I'd be happy to hear it :D
I think changing up the patterns to be less repetitive, and maybe using some more SVs could make it a bit more unique, although i'm not sure if the song really supports many other patterns
Topic Starter
-mint-

Ryzen wrote:

Another Lie wrote:

From discord
SHD
03:12:890 (192890|0,192924|1,192958|2,192992|3,193027|1,193061|0,193095|2,193129|3,193163|1,193197|0,193231|3,193265|2,193299|0,193333|1,193367|3,193402|2) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8603644 ok
04:32:527 (272527|1) - try use LN for covering 1/4 sound
04:33:345 (273345|1) - ^
04:34:708 (274708|1) - ^
04:35:527 (275527|1) - ^
i dont think it suits that section and nowhere else in the map is the harpsichord sound mapped with 1/4 LN
04:38:390 (278390|1,278390|0) - try LN for variation & covering the background music (just suggestion)
04:38:936 (278936|0,278936|1) - ^
04:39:481 (279481|0,279481|1) - ^
04:40:027 (280027|1,280027|0) - ^
that would just inflate the pattern even more, dont want to do that
03:57:208 (237208|2) - missed snap here? i think that should be at blue line
05:07:027 (307027|2) - ^ fixed owo
SV Addition for SC & SHD
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237617,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0 it's not 1x average so i'll just do the sv's myself later
SC
01:01:708 (61708|1) - LN, sound already increased there fixed
02:55:572 - missing 1 note? if yes, then add. if no, why 02:55:845 (175845|0,175845|3) - 2 notes? that's just how i set the pattern, i'll consider changing it if someone else points it out, i guess
03:22:436 (202436|0,202436|2) - i better change the position, LN to 3 & SN to 4. 03:22:572 (202572|3) - change as LN? wha?
03:57:208 (237208|0) - should be on blue line yee fixed
04:32:527 - add LN to col 2 until 04:32:799 - for variation & covering the background music
04:38:936 (278936|0,278936|1) - ^
04:39:481 (279481|0,279481|1) - ^
04:40:027 (280027|1,280027|0) - ^ the reason i didnt map those sounds besides the harpsichord was because this is the calm little break of the song and if i map everything it would be too confusing
04:49:981 - missed note? oh yeah lol
05:07:027 (307027|0) - should be at blue line fixed
Mentos & Poly
may i ask about 00:28:163 - until 00:42:890 - the consistency about double is randomed on purpose or something?
03:13:777 (193777|2,193845|1,193913|2) - what is this?
05:07:027 (307027|2) - should be at blue line
NM
01:00:890 (60890|2) - should delete this, try adding more note 1/1 until 01:02:254 - done
01:07:436 (67436|2) - pretty ez tbh, consider re-arrange & add 1/1 LN (similiar to prot's)
01:11:799 (71799|3) - ^ idk i did that originally but then i thought it was a bit too much for an NM map qwq
01:27:072 (87072|3) - consider adding note 1/1 until 01:28:436 - fixed
02:11:799 (131799|1) - isn't this supossed to be at red line? i'll change it when more people say the snaps are incorrect
02:55:436 - consider adding note 1/1 until 02:56:254 - i thought that was a bit too much for that sound, maybe i will change it if more people say that it is fine for NM
03:11:799 (191799|2) - slice that LN with 1/1 LN until 03:12:617 - i dont know what you mean but i did change the LN in col 3
03:57:072 - until 04:01:436 - should be double notes to keep consistency done
04:06:345 (246345|0) - make it 3 for 1/1 LN 04:06:617 - 04:06:890 -
04:10:708 (250708|3) - ^ 04:10:981 - 04:11:254 - again, will change if more people say it's fine for NM
04:40:163 (280163|2) - try this for variation https://puu.sh/wKUIQ.png the LN is mapping the string sound and 1/2 snap is a bit too much for NM imo
05:07:436 - until 05:11:254 - should be double notes to keep consistency yee
05:16:981 - until 05:24:890 - empty or still WIP? empty
thank you for the mod, lie! but how do i give you kds when youre restricted?
Topic Starter
-mint-

Electrized wrote:

I think changing up the patterns to be less repetitive, and maybe using some more SVs could make it a bit more unique, although i'm not sure if the song really supports many other patterns
I've tried a lot of things there qwq I just don't know what to do D:
Meiju
o hi
nice AC BG xd
Add GD's charters nicknames in the tags

1|2|3|4
SHD
00:27:890 - i don't really get why here's triple, there is no exuding sounds like 00:27:617
00:27:754 - 00:27:890 - 00:28:027 - hah, all sounds are same but only one of them is triple :?

00:49:708 - add note to 3

01:01:640 - add note to 4

01:27:822 - add note for drum sound

01:33:890 - why double? make single
01:42:617 - same

02:47:390 - here you use double, but 02:43:027 - 02:51:754 - here don't, but sounds are same

02:56:254 - i already pointed it

03:21:890 - isn't it should be triple? cuz you used triples in any 2/1

03:44:186 - add note?

03:48:617 - i already pointed it

04:32:936 - 04:33:754 - 04:35:117 - 04:35:936 - would be cool if you put notes for that sound, on same line before 1/1 notes, i mean - https://puu.sh/wMVRR/4c94481071.png

04:39:072 - here starts 1/8
Mentos vs. Poly's MX
There are SVs from SC diff, right? Remove them, or make them easier

00:10:708 (10708|0,10708|3,11527|0,11527|3) - why these doubles are repeating, bot other next ones are not? 00:12:890 (12890|0,12890|2,13708|1,13708|3) - 00:15:072 (15072|0,15072|3,15890|1,15890|3) - and etc

00:28:163 - i don't understand 1/4 notes in this part. 00:28:231 (28231|1,28640|2,29595|1,30413|3,30822|2) - i can't hear any sound, but 00:29:186 - 00:29:731 - 00:30:140 - 00:30:277 - 00:31:367 - but here and etc., i hear :^)
00:29:663 - 00:31:845 - 00:34:027 - aaaa why you put here doubles, explain please
00:28:981 - 00:29:527 - 00:31:163 - but here are single notes..
00:33:617 - 00:35:799 - 00:37:981 - and here.. are triples.. why

01:02:799 (62799|1) - i hear nothing, remove

01:03:617 - add note for double

01:06:617 - 01:06:890 - 01:07:981 - 01:12:345 - and etc. - make doubles

01:07:981 (67981|1) - finish this LN 01:08:254 - here,

01:46:231 (106231|2,106299|3,106367|2) - remove please and 01:46:436 (106436|3) - make start of this LN 01:46:163 - here

02:37:163 (157163|3,157299|3) - emm.. 02:37:299 - note should be here, and LN 02:37:436 - starts here

03:03:345 - add note

03:10:299 - add note

03:13:367 (193367|3,193436|3) - what this jack for

03:27:072 - make triple

03:35:390 (215390|1,215663|1) - replace to simple notes

03:48:072 - add note

03:52:708 (232708|1,232981|2) - better to make 1 2/1 LN

04:01:436 - make double

04:23:254 (263254|0,263390|1,263527|2,263663|3) - make 1 2/1 LN

04:23:799 - patterns in this part are harder then in SC diff.. Make them easier04:28:254 -

04:28:254 - why you use 1/3, there is 1/4

04:40:163 (280163|3,280299|2) - make 1 1/1 LN

05:02:527 (302527|1,302799|2) - again, make 1 2/1 LN
Prot's HD
00:36:345 - it's should be triple actually, but make double

00:41:117 - add note to 3

01:01:981 - 01:02:254 - there should be doubles, because sounds same as 01:00:890 - 01:01:163

01:15:617 - should be double

01:28:163 - 01:28:436 - doubles, sound same as 01:27:072 - 01:27:345 - 01:27:617 ,
01:27:345 - https://puu.sh/wMYXu/e7489ba877.jpg - looks cool

02:48:345 - why here's double, but 02:43:981 - 02:52:708 - here not, sounds are same

04:03:345 (243345|1) - hmm this should be 1/2 LN like other ones 04:02:799 (242799|3,243072|3,243617|3,243890|3)

04:53:458 (293458|3,293458|1,293663|3,293663|1) - these doubles should be on 1/3, 04:53:436 - here and 04:53:617 - here owo
Good luck!
Topic Starter
-mint-

Mage wrote:

o hi
nice AC BG xd
Add GD's charters nicknames in the tags oh yeah haha forgot about that

1|2|3|4
SHD
00:27:890 - i don't really get why here's triple, there is no exuding sounds like 00:27:617
00:27:754 - 00:27:890 - 00:28:027 - hah, all sounds are same but only one of them is triple :?

there is a unique sound at 00:27:890 but its not as significant as 00:27:617 so i'll just change it to a double

00:49:708 - add note to 3 fixed

01:01:640 - add note to 4 then i would have to add note at 01:01:095 (same sound), i'll change that section in particular if more people point it out

01:27:822 - add note for drum sound i never would have caught that :0

01:33:890 - why double? make single
01:42:617 - same fixed owo

02:47:390 - here you use double, but 02:43:027 - 02:51:754 - here don't, but sounds are same the harpsichord shows up here, i think that's what i did there

02:56:254 - i already pointed it

03:21:890 - isn't it should be triple? cuz you used triples in any 2/1 fixed

03:44:186 - add note? ye thanks for pointing that out

03:48:617 - i already pointed it

04:32:936 - 04:33:754 - 04:35:117 - 04:35:936 - would be cool if you put notes for that sound, on same line before 1/1 notes, i mean - https://puu.sh/wMVRR/4c94481071.png wow good idea OWO

04:39:072 - here starts 1/8 done
Mentos vs. Poly's MX
There are SVs from SC diff, right? Remove them, or make them easier was going to do that already but i havent done that yet

00:10:708 (10708|0,10708|3,11527|0,11527|3) - why these doubles are repeating, bot other next ones are not? 00:12:890 (12890|0,12890|2,13708|1,13708|3) - 00:15:072 (15072|0,15072|3,15890|1,15890|3) - and etc

00:28:163 - i don't understand 1/4 notes in this part. 00:28:231 (28231|1,28640|2,29595|1,30413|3,30822|2) - i can't hear any sound, but 00:29:186 - 00:29:731 - 00:30:140 - 00:30:277 - 00:31:367 - but here and etc., i hear :^)
00:29:663 - 00:31:845 - 00:34:027 - aaaa why you put here doubles, explain please
00:28:981 - 00:29:527 - 00:31:163 - but here are single notes..
00:33:617 - 00:35:799 - 00:37:981 - and here.. are triples.. why

01:02:799 (62799|1) - i hear nothing, remove

01:03:617 - add note for double

01:06:617 - 01:06:890 - 01:07:981 - 01:12:345 - and etc. - make doubles

01:07:981 (67981|1) - finish this LN 01:08:254 - here,

01:46:231 (106231|2,106299|3,106367|2) - remove please and 01:46:436 (106436|3) - make start of this LN 01:46:163 - here

02:37:163 (157163|3,157299|3) - emm.. 02:37:299 - note should be here, and LN 02:37:436 - starts here

03:03:345 - add note

03:10:299 - add note

03:13:367 (193367|3,193436|3) - what this jack for

03:27:072 - make triple

03:35:390 (215390|1,215663|1) - replace to simple notes

03:48:072 - add note

03:52:708 (232708|1,232981|2) - better to make 1 2/1 LN

04:01:436 - make double

04:23:254 (263254|0,263390|1,263527|2,263663|3) - make 1 2/1 LN

04:23:799 - patterns in this part are harder then in SC diff.. Make them easier04:28:254 -

04:28:254 - why you use 1/3, there is 1/4

04:40:163 (280163|3,280299|2) - make 1 1/1 LN

05:02:527 (302527|1,302799|2) - again, make 1 2/1 LN
Prot's HD
00:36:345 - it's should be triple actually, but make double

00:41:117 - add note to 3

01:01:981 - 01:02:254 - there should be doubles, because sounds same as 01:00:890 - 01:01:163

01:15:617 - should be double

01:28:163 - 01:28:436 - doubles, sound same as 01:27:072 - 01:27:345 - 01:27:617 ,
01:27:345 - https://puu.sh/wMYXu/e7489ba877.jpg - looks cool

02:48:345 - why here's double, but 02:43:981 - 02:52:708 - here not, sounds are same

04:03:345 (243345|1) - hmm this should be 1/2 LN like other ones 04:02:799 (242799|3,243072|3,243617|3,243890|3)

04:53:458 (293458|3,293458|1,293663|3,293663|1) - these doubles should be on 1/3, 04:53:436 - here and 04:53:617 - here owo
Good luck! thank you! :D
Protastic101

Mage wrote:

o hi
nice AC BG xd
Add GD's charters nicknames in the tags Ant, can you do that for me, im too lazy

1|2|3|4
Prot's HD
00:36:345 - it's should be triple actually, but make double

00:41:117 - add note to 3

01:01:981 - 01:02:254 - there should be doubles, because sounds same as 01:00:890 - 01:01:163

01:15:617 - should be double

01:28:163 - 01:28:436 - doubles, sound same as 01:27:072 - 01:27:345 - 01:27:617 ,
01:27:345 - https://puu.sh/wMYXu/e7489ba877.jpg - looks cool Left them as singles as I think using 1/3 + jumps at 220 BPM in the HD diff is a bit overkill. 1/3 is fast enough to present a challenge so I dont want to add more density to it.

02:48:345 - why here's double, but 02:43:981 - 02:52:708 - here not, sounds are same

04:03:345 (243345|1) - hmm this should be 1/2 LN like other ones 04:02:799 (242799|3,243072|3,243617|3,243890|3) Over extended it to end at the same time that 04:03:208 (243208|2) - ends for simplicity as all the others have ended with its paired LN.

04:53:458 (293458|3,293458|1,293663|3,293663|1) - these doubles should be on 1/3, 04:53:436 - here and 04:53:617 - here owo Sounded like the second note came in at on the blue tick but aaa. Listening at 25% makes it seem like they're evenly spaced out, so yeah, accepted.
Good luck!
Everything else is accepted o/
FadillSan
Hello :3
Feel free to reject :3
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NM
00:47:527 - maybe add note here ?
00:48:072 - and here
00:49:708 - ^
00:50:254 - ^
00:51:890 - ^
00:52:436 - ^
00:54:072 - ^
02:47:663 - should be add note here on 3, and..
02:47:799 (167799|2) - move this on 2
03:04:436 - why not same as 02:46:981 ?
03:13:981 - my suggestion : 03:13:981 (193981|3) -

remove this, 03:13:981 (193981|2) - move this at 4, and

03:14:117 - add note here on 4
04:41:254 - my suggestion same as 03:13:981
HD
00:46:436 (46436|0) - move this to 4
00:48:617 (48617|1) - move to 3
00:50:799 (50799|0) - move to 2
00:52:981 (52981|3) - move to 3
00:55:436 (55436|3) - move to 2
01:01:845 - add note here for drum
01:02:117 - here too
01:21:617 (81617|0) - move to 2
01:23:799 (83799|3) - move to 2
Topic Starter
-mint-

FadillSan wrote:

Hello :3
Feel free to reject :3
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

all suggestions in NM taken, thanks for the mod!

NM
00:47:527 - maybe add note here ?
00:48:072 - and here
00:49:708 - ^
00:50:254 - ^
00:51:890 - ^
00:52:436 - ^
00:54:072 - ^
02:47:663 - should be add note here on 3, and..
02:47:799 (167799|2) - move this on 2
03:04:436 - why not same as 02:46:981 ?
03:13:981 - my suggestion : 03:13:981 (193981|3) -

remove this, 03:13:981 (193981|2) - move this at 4, and

03:14:117 - add note here on 4
04:41:254 - my suggestion same as 03:13:981
HD
00:46:436 (46436|0) - move this to 4
00:48:617 (48617|1) - move to 3
00:50:799 (50799|0) - move to 2
00:52:981 (52981|3) - move to 3
00:55:436 (55436|3) - move to 2
01:01:845 - add note here for drum
01:02:117 - here too
01:21:617 (81617|0) - move to 2
01:23:799 (83799|3) - move to 2
Protastic101

FadillSan wrote:

Hello :3
Feel free to reject :3
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
HD
00:46:436 (46436|0) - move this to 4
00:48:617 (48617|1) - move to 3
00:50:799 (50799|0) - move to 2
00:52:981 (52981|3) - move to 3
00:55:436 (55436|3) - move to 2 All rejected because I stacked the notes in groups of four so that the column would change only on the first downbeat of the next measure. It's also easier to group them in fours as the song is in 4/4 time so it helps the player keep their rhythm.
01:01:845 - add note here for drum
01:02:117 - here too Didn't apply these either because I just want to focus on the growing synth there. I only used jumps because of the two snares in the beginning of the measure.
01:21:617 (81617|0) - move to 2
01:23:799 (83799|3) - move to 2 Also did not apply these because the way the LNs are set up is by using complementary chords such as [12][34] or [14][23] or [13][24], and they switch every measure. If I move the notes, then it would switch on beat four which would be an awkward beat to change it on as it would give the impression of being in 3/4 to the player as opposed to 4/4.
Thanks for the mod, will get to your map pretty soon
Virtue-
hi protato

[HD]
  1. 00:45:072 - and 00:45:347 - add LN to represent the 1/8, try this http://puu.sh/wQP2q/d5b18eb7c5.jpg
  2. 00:45:617 (45617|0) - 00:46:436 (46436|0) - 00:47:799 (47799|1) - 00:48:617 (48617|1) - 00:49:981 (49981|0) - etc same as above
  3. 00:27:072 (27072|1,27140|2,27208|0,27208|3,27345|3,27345|0,27481|2,27549|1,27617|0,27617|3,27754|0,27754|3,27890|1,27890|2,28027|1,28027|2,28163|2,28163|3,28163|0) - pls, they're too fuckin hard. try this http://puu.sh/wQP8D/9056e1dbd2.jpg
  4. 00:44:390 (44390|0) - LN or delete
  5. 01:15:072 (75072|0) - move to 2
  6. 01:15:345 (75345|1) - move to 1
  7. 01:28:527 (88527|2) - move to 2
  8. 01:28:617 (88617|1) - move to 1
  9. 02:55:845 (175845|3,175913|2,175981|0,175981|1,176117|1,176117|0,176254|2,176254|3,176390|2,176390|3) - flip
  10. 02:56:527 (176527|3,176527|1,176527|0,176663|2) - flip
  11. 03:12:549 - add note
  12. if u accept ^ then change this 03:12:481 (192481|1,192617|3,192686|2,192754|0,192822|1,192890|3,192958|2,193027|1,193095|0,193163|3,193231|2,193299|1,193367|2,193436|0,193572|0) - into something like this http://puu.sh/wQPFf/344492a7a9.jpg

thats all, good luck!
Verniy_Chan

Hi qqqant, prot, mentos and poly

Mod Via PM Request

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. I think this map still WIP, some diff not hitsound yet.
NM

OD : 7
HP : 7
  1. 00:29:527 - 00:30:345 - why there's suddenly chord 2 note? for kick sounds like this~ it should be 1 note like 00:28:981 - 00:31:163 - do you've reason? imo be consistent with other sounds, if you use kick 2 note, is okay, but you must add a note one here 00:28:981 - 00:31:163 - etc.. or conversely
  2. 00:45:890 - you missed a note for clap sound like this 00:46:163 (46163|1,46708|0) -
  3. 01:01:845 - 01:02:117 - add a note for snare sound like this 01:01:436 -
  4. 01:16:981 (76981|0,77254|1,77527|2) - maybe change it to LN for 1/2 electronic sounds, since you also use LN on here 01:17:799 (77799|0,78072|3) - for sounds like that
  5. 01:27:617 - add a note for high pitch snare, this is really loud, please add chord
  6. 03:05:254 - maybe you can cover kick 1/2 with long note from 03:05:254 - until 03:09:617 - to avoid monotone pattern
  7. 03:44:527 (224527|2) - move to |1| for variety pattern and it different pitch from 03:43:981 -
  8. 03:52:708 - add a note for consistency loud beat main instrument like previous notes, also 03:57:072 -
  9. 04:10:708 (250708|3) - intead of make LN like this, maybe try 1/1 LN 04:10:708 - 04:10:981 - 04:11:254 -
  10. 04:15:345 - maybe add a note, there's cymbal
  11. 04:20:527 (260527|3,260527|2) - are you sure used chord for kick and 04:20:254 (260254|1) - only a note for sound like this? check consistency previous pattern
  12. 04:30:617 - i think... is okay put a note on here, not really hard
  13. 04:31:163 - missed a note for main instrument
  14. 04:36:890 - add more LN please for stream beat sounds
  15. 05:16:981 - hey.. you can mapping this sound too, for consistency ending pattern like other diff, also : 05:17:527 - 05:18:345 - 05:19:163 - 05:19:708 - 05:20:527 - 05:21:345 - 05:21:890 - 05:22:708 - 05:23:527 - 05:24:072 - 05:24:890 -
Notes : Good diff
Prot's HD

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5
  1. 00:28:299 - until 00:44:663 - almost all red line have low synth sounds, and why you're mapped only some part? maybe it's intentional?
  2. 01:01:845 - maybe you can add a LN here to cover 1/2 sound like snare+long synth, also 01:02:117 -
  3. 01:36:617 (96617|1,96754|0) - move to right collums 1x, for mirror pattern like 01:35:117 (95117|3,95663|3,96208|3) -
  4. 01:43:436 - add a LN for consistency mirror pattern like there 01:34:708 -
  5. 01:46:708 - until 01:54:754 - maybe try chatch other sounds, to avoid monote pattern. How about use LN or mapping all red/white line with a note
  6. 01:56:527 (116527|3,116936|3,117072|3,117345|3,117617|3) - maybe try avoid this anchor
  7. 02:36:890 - how about use LN on here, this long piano is anoyed me XD
  8. 03:13:708 (193708|3,194117|1) - maybe try use shield pattern like 4th kiai section 04:41:117 (281117|2,281390|2) -
  9. 03:36:072 - add a note for clap sound, also 03:44:799 -
  10. 04:47:527 (287527|0,287595|1,287663|3,287731|2) - i think this's a bit hard for hard diff, maybe just put all 1/4 LN instead of use 2: 1/2 + 1: 1/4 LN for friendly pattern
  11. 04:49:436 (289436|2,289436|3) - swap collum for pitch relevancy follow 04:49:572 (289572|1,289708|2,289845|1) -
  12. 05:06:890 (306890|2) - move to |4| for variety
  13. 05:21:208 - there's no need use chord for piano sounds, i think this's wrong place, chord sould be on here 05:21:072 - and 05:21:345 - for kick like 05:17:799 -
Notes : Soild diff, good job. I like your shield pattern

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score
84

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Protastic101
will respond to baka virtue and verniy soon(tm) aaaa become too lazy to respond to mods :c

Virtue- wrote:

hi protato g0 4 17 b01s when

[HD]
  1. 00:45:072 - and 00:45:347 - add LN to represent the 1/8, try this http://puu.sh/wQP2q/d5b18eb7c5.jpg It's a good suggestion but my only issue is consistency then because I've mapped the 1/4 + 1/8 bursts with 1/2 notes in a section which mostly utilizes 1/1. So it would be inconsistent to emphasize the 1/8 differently in that case. On a more preferential side, I would prefer to keep the LNs simple for the harpsichord as that's what Im mainly trying to give emphasis to.
  2. 00:45:617 (45617|0) - 00:46:436 (46436|0) - 00:47:799 (47799|1) - 00:48:617 (48617|1) - 00:49:981 (49981|0) - etc same as above Would prefer to emphasize the claps instead. If I were to add LNs, then it would also make the layering inconsistent as I'd sometimes have jumps and sometimes have singles.
  3. 00:27:072 (27072|1,27140|2,27208|0,27208|3,27345|3,27345|0,27481|2,27549|1,27617|0,27617|3,27754|0,27754|3,27890|1,27890|2,28027|1,28027|2,28163|2,28163|3,28163|0) - pls, they're too fuckin hard. try this http://puu.sh/wQP8D/9056e1dbd2.jpg I would like to keep the [14] and [23] chords stacked as the sounds they're paired with are the same.
  4. 00:44:390 (44390|0) - LN or delete This is what I meant in response to the first point. Rather than use LNs to represent the 1/8 or 1/4,
    I just increased the rhythm from a constant 1/1 to a short 1/2 burst to show that the music differs slightly there.
  5. 01:15:072 (75072|0) - move to 2
  6. 01:15:345 (75345|1) - move to 1both accepted
  7. 01:28:527 (88527|2) - move to 2
  8. 01:28:617 (88617|1) - move to 1 rearranged a bit differently
  9. 02:55:845 (175845|3,175913|2,175981|0,175981|1,176117|1,176117|0,176254|2,176254|3,176390|2,176390|3) - flip I would prefer to keep these stacked in the same column as each other for pitch relevance as they're the same type of snare.
  10. 02:56:527 (176527|3,176527|1,176527|0,176663|2) - flip Because of the above, that would create an awkward three note jump stack in [34] which I would like to avoid if the sounds aren't exactly the same.
  11. 03:12:549 - add note Decided to make 03:12:617 - a 1/2 LN jump cause there was a 1/8 type roll there so the LN was to represent it,
    but the note you suggested I add wasn't as it wasn't yet to the point where the kicks gave it a bit more emphasis.
  12. if u accept ^ then change this 03:12:481 (192481|1,192617|3,192686|2,192754|0,192822|1,192890|3,192958|2,193027|1,193095|0,193163|3,193231|2,193299|1,193367|2,193436|0,193572|0) - into something like this http://puu.sh/wQPFf/344492a7a9.jpg ^

thats all, good luck!

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi qqqant, prot, mentos and poly =w=)/

Mod Via PM Request

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. I think this map still WIP, some diff not hitsound yet. Blame me for being lazy orz
snip NM mod
Prot's HD

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5
  1. 00:28:299 - until 00:44:663 - almost all red line have low synth sounds, and why you're mapped only some part? maybe it's intentional? Yeah, it was. The 1/2 notes only occur at places where the hihat snap goes 1/4 or above. I ignored all other 1/2 hihats to make the 1/4 and 1/8 ones stand out a bit more. I could have tried LNs, but I feel like that would have blended in with the harpsichord's line on the 1/1. I also didn't want to use 1/4 so soon in the map as the BPM is too fast for more common usage of it imo, which is why I stuck to 1/2.
  2. 01:01:845 - maybe you can add a LN here to cover 1/2 sound like snare+long synth, also 01:02:117 - The snap for the snare there is a bit odd (it's like 1/16 after the upbeat), and I mainly just wanted to emphasize the growing synth every 1/1.
  3. 01:36:617 (96617|1,96754|0) - move to right collums 1x, for mirror pattern like 01:35:117 (95117|3,95663|3,96208|3) - Oh sweet,
    I hadn't even noticed that little repetition, thanks for pointing it out.
  4. 01:43:436 - add a LN for consistency mirror pattern like there 01:34:708 - Ah, good point, added in col 4 and moved a few notes around
  5. 01:46:708 - until 01:54:754 - maybe try chatch other sounds, to avoid monote pattern. How about use LN or mapping all red/white line with a note Didn't add notes as I wanted to keep the rhythm solely focused on the kick -> snare here, but I did add some LNs that repeated every two bars so add a bit of variation to the monotony https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8700222
  6. 01:56:527 (116527|3,116936|3,117072|3,117345|3,117617|3) - maybe try avoid this anchor Moved two notes to the left hand
  7. 02:36:890 - how about use LN on here, this long piano is anoyed me XD I get that the pause doesn't really feel that natural, but I would prefer not to break consistency in this short note only section by suddenly introducing a 3/2 LN before the actual transition into the next phase of the music at 02:38:254 -
  8. 03:13:708 (193708|3,194117|1) - maybe try use shield pattern like 4th kiai section 04:41:117 (281117|2,281390|2) - Ah oops, my bad
  9. 03:36:072 - add a note for clap sound, also 03:44:799 - added. Turns out there were a few more inconsistencies between those two parts so I fixed that too
  10. 04:47:527 (287527|0,287595|1,287663|3,287731|2) - i think this's a bit hard for hard diff, maybe just put all 1/4 LN instead of use 2: 1/2 + 1: 1/4 LN for friendly pattern I think that using the overlaps is ok because they're in pairs so it's easier to group them while reading, and the 1/2 LN release timing is pretty easy at this BPM since the player doesn't need to hold for very long. I like the small challenge it presents to the players and is a bit of much needed variation in this section full of mostly simple 1/1 LNs and rhythms which helps keep player attention and engagement.
  11. 04:49:436 (289436|2,289436|3) - swap collum for pitch relevancy follow 04:49:572 (289572|1,289708|2,289845|1) - It seems as if they're different pitches to me. Additionally, I'd like to follow the alternating LN pattern set up in the previous measure, as you can see the kicks follow three of the same ones before shifting, 04:47:799 (287799|0,287799|1,288072|1,288072|0,288345|1,288345|0) - 04:48:617 (288617|1,288617|2,288890|2,288890|1,289163|2,289163|1) - 04:49:436 (289436|2,289436|3,289708|3,289708|2,289981|3,289981|2) - [12][23][34]
    and the LN switches column each time so that they stack in 2/1 rather than 1/1
  12. 05:06:890 (306890|2) - move to |4| for variety done
  13. 05:21:208 - there's no need use chord for piano sounds, i think this's wrong place, chord sould be on here 05:21:072 - and 05:21:345 - for kick like 05:17:799 - Oh dear, I don't even know what happened to my chord layering there lol. All fixed, thank you.
Notes : Soild diff, good job. I like your shield pattern Thanks, it was kind of a last minute attempt for some kind of variation in the map since it's mostly just 1/1 and 1/2 orz

Verniy_Chan wrote:

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just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Thank you virtue and verniy for the mods!
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