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Don Tetto - No Digas Lo Siento

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-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 4 de enero de 2019 at 02:01:34

Artist: Don Tetto
Title: No Digas Lo Siento
Tags: español rock pop shini spanish happyrocket88 gero
BPM: 134
Filesize: 3750kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dolor (4.09 stars, 534 notes)
  2. Gero's Normal (1.99 stars, 236 notes)
  3. Rocket's Hard (3.01 stars, 337 notes)
Download: Don Tetto - No Digas Lo Siento
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#32

#Spanish #Español #Hispanos #RockLatino

Dolor by me
Hard by HappyRocket88
Normal by Gero
Last edited by -Sh1n1- , edited 39 times in total.
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo
nos dolerá por un momento
2017-08-06 17:37 -Sh1n1-: bro, una preguntilla inocente
2017-08-06 17:37 -Sh1n1-: me darias tu opinion acerca de un mapa que acabo de hacer
2017-08-06 17:38 iYiyo: preguntilla inocente? D:
2017-08-06 17:38 iYiyo: claro
2017-08-06 17:38 iYiyo: mande np
2017-08-06 17:38 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-08-06 17:38 -Sh1n1-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1374122 Don Tetto - No digas lo siento [Es Hora De Decir Adios]]
2017-08-06 17:38 -Sh1n1-: primera vez que mapeo algo en ese bpm asi que noc
2017-08-06 17:38 -Sh1n1-: (std)
2017-08-06 17:39 iYiyo: :o
2017-08-06 17:40 iYiyo: se nos está enamorando sh1n1?
2017-08-06 17:40 -Sh1n1-: haha porque?
2017-08-06 17:40 iYiyo: por la canción
2017-08-06 17:40 iYiyo: xD
2017-08-06 17:40 -Sh1n1-: la song me encanto desde la primera vez que la vi :3
2017-08-06 17:40 iYiyo: escuchaste*
2017-08-06 17:40 iYiyo: xD
2017-08-06 17:40 -Sh1n1-: la escuche*
2017-08-06 17:41 -Sh1n1-: xD
2017-08-06 17:41 iYiyo: ajskdas
2017-08-06 17:41 -Sh1n1-: esque vi el videoclip po :p
2017-08-06 17:41 iYiyo: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1374122 Don Tetto - No digas lo siento [Es Hora De Decir Adios]]
2017-08-06 17:41 iYiyo: aaah así pos si
2017-08-06 17:41 iYiyo: xD
2017-08-06 17:41 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-08-06 17:41 iYiyo: estoy con mouse :x
2017-08-06 17:43 -Sh1n1-: pro
2017-08-06 17:43 -Sh1n1-: yo con mouse apesto xd
2017-08-06 17:44 -Sh1n1-: nani kore!
2017-08-06 17:44 iYiyo: aaah}
2017-08-06 17:44 iYiyo: ya
2017-08-06 17:44 iYiyo: estaba buscando mi lapiz xd
2017-08-06 17:44 -Sh1n1-: xdd
2017-08-06 17:44 iYiyo: siento que debe estar divertida en dt
2017-08-06 17:44 iYiyo: lets see
2017-08-06 17:44 -Sh1n1-: xdd
2017-08-06 17:44 -Sh1n1-: fucking pro
2017-08-06 17:44 iYiyo: igual ando manco
2017-08-06 17:47 iYiyo: no digas lo sieentoo
2017-08-06 17:47 iYiyo: (8)
2017-08-06 17:47 -Sh1n1-: fucking lap top se reinicio
2017-08-06 17:47 iYiyo: xDD
2017-08-06 17:47 -Sh1n1-: orz
2017-08-06 17:47 -Sh1n1-: hahaha
2017-08-06 17:47 -Sh1n1-: tmr
2017-08-06 17:47 iYiyo: si quieres le doy de nuevo o.o
2017-08-06 17:47 -Sh1n1-: pls
2017-08-06 17:47 -Sh1n1-: :3
2017-08-06 17:47 iYiyo: y me supero en acc
2017-08-06 17:47 iYiyo: 93.28%
2017-08-06 17:48 -Sh1n1-: :o
2017-08-06 17:48 iYiyo: a superarme
2017-08-06 17:48 -Sh1n1-: holly
2017-08-06 17:50 -Sh1n1-: haha que le haces a la pobre :c
2017-08-06 17:50 iYiyo: xDD
2017-08-06 17:50 iYiyo: un retoque facial
2017-08-06 17:50 -Sh1n1-: xddd
2017-08-06 17:51 -Sh1n1-: queda el bg con la song?
2017-08-06 17:51 iYiyo: sip
2017-08-06 17:51 -Sh1n1-: que tal? le falta mucho?
2017-08-06 17:51 iYiyo: te digo en 1 sec
2017-08-06 17:52 iYiyo: yap xd
2017-08-06 17:52 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-08-06 17:52 iYiyo: 00:50:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2017-08-06 17:52 iYiyo: me gustó este pattern
2017-08-06 17:52 iYiyo: aunque podrías hacer que parta más cerca, y se vaya alejando un poco más
2017-08-06 17:53 -Sh1n1-: ohh oks
2017-08-06 17:53 -Sh1n1-: a mi tmb me encanto :3
2017-08-06 17:53 iYiyo: lo más probable es que te webeen por eso
2017-08-06 17:53 iYiyo: típico
2017-08-06 17:53 iYiyo: low bpm
2017-08-06 17:53 -Sh1n1-: es un training de pp farm
2017-08-06 17:53 iYiyo: jumps
2017-08-06 17:53 iYiyo: fuck it
2017-08-06 17:53 -Sh1n1-: xd
2017-08-06 17:53 iYiyo: no los pesques xd
2017-08-06 17:53 iYiyo: it's ok
2017-08-06 17:54 iYiyo: 01:01:441 (3,4) - este tipo de DS lo vi en hartas partes
2017-08-06 17:54 -Sh1n1-: 02:39:276 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - eso no me termina de gustar
2017-08-06 17:54 -Sh1n1-: lo he remapeado 5 veces
2017-08-06 17:54 iYiyo: luego de hacer 00:59:873 (3,4,5,6) - este tipo de espaceado, como que achicar tanto otras partes no quedan muy bien
2017-08-06 17:55 iYiyo: mmmh ya veo
2017-08-06 17:55 iYiyo: si igual se sintió raro al jugar
2017-08-06 17:55 iYiyo: a ver, te podría dar un pattern que se me viene a la mente
2017-08-06 17:55 -Sh1n1-: 01:01:441 (3,4) - quieres decir mas distancia?
2017-08-06 17:55 iYiyo: sip
2017-08-06 17:56 -Sh1n1-: sure oks
2017-08-06 17:56 iYiyo: 01:08:605 (3,4) - 
2017-08-06 17:56 iYiyo: como acá
2017-08-06 17:56 iYiyo: aquí está bien
2017-08-06 17:56 -Sh1n1-: okie
2017-08-06 17:57 iYiyo: https://puu.sh/x3pKg/d5cff09c00.jpg
2017-08-06 17:57 iYiyo: algo así estaría bueno o.o
2017-08-06 17:59 -Sh1n1-: y el 1/6 que hay en 02:40:396 -
2017-08-06 17:59 -Sh1n1-: donde lo pongo
2017-08-06 17:59 iYiyo: no tienes por qué ponerlo según yo
2017-08-06 18:00 iYiyo: es super sutil
2017-08-06 18:00 iYiyo: la otra sería poner un reverse de 1/6
2017-08-06 18:00 iYiyo: pero como que no queda bien la jugabilidad
2017-08-06 18:01 -Sh1n1-: sii uwu
2017-08-06 18:01 -Sh1n1-: me quedo con tu patron
2017-08-06 18:02 -Sh1n1-: fuck 01:48:008 (3,4) - ahi tmb tendre que agrandar la distancia
2017-08-06 18:03 iYiyo: yep
2017-08-06 18:03 iYiyo: 01:25:172 (4,5) - ctrl+g acá?
2017-08-06 18:03 iYiyo: 01:25:396 - este tick blanco quedaría mejor con el sliderhead
2017-08-06 18:03 iYiyo: en vez de end
2017-08-06 18:03 -Sh1n1-: ohh nice catch
2017-08-06 18:03 iYiyo: para enfatizar
2017-08-06 18:04 -Sh1n1-: ya decia yo porque sonaba tan feo
2017-08-06 18:04 -Sh1n1-: xdddd
2017-08-06 18:04 iYiyo: 01:21:143 (2,3,4) - similar acá
2017-08-06 18:04 iYiyo: sip
2017-08-06 18:04 iYiyo: xDD
2017-08-06 18:04 iYiyo: es como la parte que menos me cuadraba en cuanto a ritmo
2017-08-06 18:04 iYiyo: y creo que sería eso :3
2017-08-06 18:05 -Sh1n1-: :o espera
2017-08-06 18:05 iYiyo: espero
2017-08-06 18:05 -Sh1n1-: 01:21:143 (2,3,4) - eso esta mal?
2017-08-06 18:06 iYiyo: no del todo mal... PERO, como 01:24:948 (3,4,5,1) - acá haces un ritmo completamente distinto, dándole al downbeat
2017-08-06 18:06 iYiyo: creo que deberías ser fiel a uno de los 2
2017-08-06 18:07 -Sh1n1-: ohh oks
2017-08-06 18:07 iYiyo: lo otro sería mover 01:25:844 (1) -  01:25:620 - acá
2017-08-06 18:08 -Sh1n1-: mmm mejor arreglo 01:21:143 (2,3,4) -
2017-08-06 18:08 -Sh1n1-: nice
2017-08-06 18:09 -Sh1n1-: Thx bro
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: nada de gracisa
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: ahora dame mis kudosus
2017-08-06 18:09 -Sh1n1-: por cierto, tienes el log? para darte un sexy kudosu
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: para no parecer inactivo
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: xDD
2017-08-06 18:09 -Sh1n1-: haha see
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: sisi, yo lo publico jaja
2017-08-06 18:09 -Sh1n1-: yo necesito el sp
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: xD
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: dale :3
2017-08-06 18:09 -Sh1n1-: oks
2017-08-06 18:09 iYiyo: en un ratito
2017-08-06 18:09 -Sh1n1-: oks

suerte con el mapa <3
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
thx bro
DeletedUser_10414170
DeletedUser_10414170
Hello from my mod queue!

Mod
Insane

00:42:187 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These two stacks are overmapped, and don't fall on any sounds in the song

01:28:754 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

01:42:411 (1) - 00:55:172 (1) - At one of these small stops in the song you use a spinner, but in another you don't. It would be better to either have them both be one, or neither

That's all I could find really, short mod sorry!
Cris-
Beatmap Nominator
551 posts
Joined March 2015
Cris-
M4M

Rocket's Hard

Hay varias notas que podrian estar mejor sobrepuestas durante todo el map (ej: 00:38:829 (4,1) - 00:48:903 (2,1) - etc)
  1. 00:07:038 (1) - Talvez podrias reemplazar este reverse por un slider 1/2 seguido de 3 circulos, creo que enfatizaria mejor con la cancion
  2. 00:15:097 (3) - ^ (pero con un slider 1/1 despues)
  3. 00:31:664 (1,1) - Stack? (00:04:351 (4,1) - algo asi como esto)
  4. 00:36:590 (3,4) - Esto se siente algo forzado, talvez puedas expandir mas estas notas para un flujo mas "natural"
  5. 01:07:038 (3,1) - No se si sea buena idea stackear estas notas, ya que anteriormente usaste esta idea para otros patrones ej: 00:11:515 (4,1)
  6. 01:16:441 (2) - Podrias usar 01:12:858 (1) - este slider o uno similar aqui, ya que el sonido es bastante parecido
  7. 01:32:560 (1,1) - Esto podria resultar un poco confuso para los jugadores nuevos
  8. 01:48:008 (2) - x:124 y:72? (imo queda mejor ya que sigue directo del slider anterior y hace un blanket con el siguiente owo)
  9. 02:39:276 (1) - Te recomiendo eliminar este spinner y mappear esta parte, imo es bastante sorpresivo y no da tiempo de recuperarte para seguir con el kiai
  10. 03:02:560 - Talvez podrias mapear el final de la cancion como en la dificultad de Sh1n1

Es Hora De Decir Adios
  1. 00:17:784 - Talvez podrias mapear esto, seria interesante jugar un cambio de ritmo aqui, ademas de que es la top diff y un descanso tan largo no queda bien imo
  2. 01:22:261 (5) - NC
  3. 01:29:426 (9) - ^
  4. 02:05:694 (2) - Podrias reemplazar este circulo por un slider corto (02:05:806 aqui yo escucho un sonido)
  5. 02:06:478 - Circulo
  6. 02:07:150 - ^
  7. 02:07:821 - ^
Buena suerte Sh1n1! :3
Yugu
Elite Mapper
1,006 posts
Joined August 2013
Yugu
hi! m4m from my q

your map is so good so i think i can only give subjective advice

Es Hora De Decir Adios
pls use ai mod check your map


00:12:858 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe you can make the slider end and notes become a pentagon
00:14:202 (1) - i think stack on the end of 00:12:858 (3) - or make 00:12:858 (3,1) - 's ds the same as 00:11:515 (3,1) - is better
01:12:411 (3,1) - why they are stack and not same as 01:15:992 (3,1) -
02:40:396 (1,2) - maybe change it become a 1/4 slider is better(when player play it)
03:01:888 (5,7) - make them like 03:01:664 (4,6) - 's Mirror image?
03:07:709 (2,3,4) - make them volume become about 40 cuz the sound of whistle is a bit loud and make them more in tune with the song

Rocket's Hard
pls check the ai mod


00:04:799 (1,4) - stack?
00:06:142 (3,6) -try to make them don t naiz overlap 00:04:799 (1) - ?
00:08:381 (2,4) - fix blanket
00:31:664 (1,1) - ds similar to 00:33:008 (3,1) - ? their rhythm is different . 00:04:351 (4,1) - 's rhythm is same as 00:31:664 (1,1) - but they are stack.
01:44:650 (3,4) - ^
00:38:829 (4,1,2) - ^ (make their ds like 00:54:724 (2,3) - is better i think)
00:45:993 (6,1) - maybe it s hard to read for new player . it s confusion
00:47:112 (2,4) - stack?
00:56:515 (1,2) - make them nearer . they have 2.8x ds.... i think it s a bit far in hard
01:07:933 (1,2,3) - fix ds
01:32:560 (1,1) - unrankable . it s hide the reverse arrow
02:33:679 (3,4,1,2) - reaaaaally easy to miss . 02:33:903 (1,2) - separated by 1/1 and 02:33:679 (3,4,1) - is stream
02:36:142 (4,5,1) - i think you should use low ds to show the relaxed part of music
03:01:889 (1,2,3) - make them like a equilateral triangle

i tried my best in my level xd
gl!

I have always been curious about this song is what language
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

QuiescentRabbit wrote:

Hello from my mod queue!

Mod
Insane

00:42:187 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These two stacks are overmapped, and don't fall on any sounds in the song there is a clearly sound that supports it

01:28:754 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ same as above

01:42:411 (1) - 00:55:172 (1) - At one of these small stops in the song you use a spinner, but in another you don't. It would be better to either have them both be one, or neither cause at 01:42:411 - there is a different sound that support spinner, in the other hand at 00:55:396 -, this part is empty

That's all I could find really, short mod sorry!

Thanks for your mod <3

Cris_1 wrote:

M4M

Es Hora De Decir Adios
  1. 00:17:784 - Talvez podrias mapear esto, seria interesante jugar un cambio de ritmo aqui, ademas de que es la top diff y un descanso tan largo no queda bien imo me parece bien el break porque no hay ni un sonido de bateria ahi.
  2. 01:22:261 (5) - NC
  3. 01:29:426 (9) - ^
  4. 02:05:694 (2) - Podrias reemplazar este circulo por un slider corto (02:05:806 aqui yo escucho un sonido) siento que seria overmapear mucho, pero lo considerare
  5. 02:06:478 - Circulo no hay guitarra
  6. 02:07:150 - ^ igual
  7. 02:07:821 - ^ aca si no escuche nada que merite una nota
Buena suerte Sh1n1! :3
Gracias por el mod bro

Yugu wrote:

hi! m4m from my q

your map is so good so i think i can only give subjective advice

Es Hora De Decir Adios
pls use ai mod check your map ohh my bad, fixed


00:12:858 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe you can make the slider end and notes become a pentagon 00:12:858 (3,6) - it's blanquet already also I tried my best to make a pentagram uwu
00:14:202 (1) - i think stack on the end of 00:12:858 (3) - or make 00:12:858 (3,1) - 's ds the same as 00:11:515 (3,1) - is better it's not at all noticeable, also if I move 00:12:858 (3) - closer to 00:14:202 (1) - I'll ruin the current pentagram.
01:12:411 (3,1) - why they are stack and not same as 01:15:992 (3,1) - that's true, fixed
02:40:396 (1,2) - maybe change it become a 1/4 slider is better(when player play it) with 02:40:396 (1,2,1) - I skipped a 1/6 that was kinda hard to play,
the current pattern is trying to show the different in sounds between 02:40:396 - and 02:40:620 -, and notes fits these sounds propertly imo
03:01:888 (5,7) - make them like 03:01:664 (4,6) - 's Mirror image? okie
03:07:709 (2,3,4) - make them volume become about 40 cuz the sound of whistle is a bit loud and make them more in tune with the song reduced to 50

i tried my best in my level xd
gl!

Thank you very much, I'll mod your map today

I have always been curious about this song is what language

spanish intensifies :3
Gonzvlo
osu! Alumni
2,896 posts
Joined January 2010
Gonzvlo
Ohhhh, spanish map. estrella
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
Gonzvlo, que bueno verte por aqui, muchas gracias!!
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
que divertida esta la diff normal 👀
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
hahaha cortesia de Gerin.
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Gero's Normal
osu file format v14

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115,81,175396,6,0,B|55:81|4:132|-10:192|-10:192|4:252|55:303|115:303,1,360,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,177187,2,0,L|76:192,2,180,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,303,178978,2,0,B|457:303|508:252|522:192|522:192|508:132|457:81|397:81,1,360,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,180769,2,0,L|436:192,2,180,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,298,182560,6,0,B|141:309|141:309|169:298,1,60,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,358,183008,2,0,B|256:347|256:347|284:358,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,299,183456,2,0,P|399:318|455:299,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,139,184351,2,0,L|424:84,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,79,185023,2,0,L|365:24,2,60,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,19,185694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,129,186142,6,0,B|136:148|136:148|104:148,1,60,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,235,186590,2,0,B|136:235|136:235|155:255,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,192,187038,2,0,L|297:276,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,236,187933,2,0,L|503:278,2,60,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,148,188605,2,0,L|503:105,2,60,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,192,189276,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,148,189500,1,4,3:0:0:0:
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance
pretty quick mod, i'm kinda noob at standard since i haven't modded since I left BNG, sh1n1 asked me to mod gero's diff

  1. 00:05:247 (4,5,6) - Don't know, the overlaps look kind of ugly to me, how about this?
  2. 00:15:993 (4,5,6) - you used different structure here than you did at 00:12:411 (4,5,6) - , is it intended?
  3. 00:39:948 (2) - the overlap is pretty ugly, any way to avoid this?
  4. 00:47:784 (2,3) - A timeline like this feels better to me since the long guitar is absent on the second long slider.
  5. 00:54:053 (2,3,4,1) - ctrl+j'ing this and moving it to the original location seems like it would be less confusing since it avoids the odd structure at 00:54:053 (2,3,4,1) - .
  6. 01:25:843 (1,2,3) - similar overlap thing to before
  7. 01:34:351 (2,3) - with this as well (did you copypaste? :P)
  8. 01:40:172 (1,2,3,4,1) - same again
  9. 02:31:888 (3,4) - maybe 4 should start on the red tick to better emphasize the drums?
  10. 02:46:441 (4) - I think a 1/1 repeat + circle feels like the better rhythm choice here
  11. 03:04:351 (4,5,6) - same as the first suggestion
Gl!
ShinodaYuu
631 posts
Joined May 2016
ShinodaYuu
Hi, from my queue

[Normal]
00:15:993 (4,5,6) - Why did you left red ticks empty? You filled them on 00:12:411 (4,5,6) -
00:39:276 (1,2,3) - AS https://osu.ppy.sh/u/Ascendance said it's looks kinda ugly
01:02:560 (1,2) - Looking at vocals CTRL G the rhythm
01:25:843 (1,2,3) - Another overlap
01:49:127 (1,2) - As before
02:26:291 (4,1) - isn't it too extreame in topic of reading at normal diff?
02:46:441 (4) - Pattern like 02:44:650 (1,2,3) - would fit rhythmically much more


[Dolor]
  • 00:06:142 (4,5,6) - Music is more intense here, consider spacing more/ bigger SV
    00:42:187 (4,5,6) - I think that 1/6 would fit better
    01:10:620 (3,4,5,6) - Imo the flow would benefit if you do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10930733
    01:28:754 (4,5,6) - Same as before
    01:30:321 (2,3) - Since 3 is a clap and a strong sound this distance don't show it at all
    02:03:008 (1,2) - CTRL G rhythm, should be better
    02:14:426 (5,1) - ^
    02:21:590 - Why is this empty?
    02:51:366 (7,8) - Is there any reason it's not like 02:50:470 (3,4,5,6) - ?
Hope some of these will help. GL
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue Yahallo~~

[Dolor]
  • 00:06:142 (4,5,6) - Music is more intense here, consider spacing more/ bigger SV added a little bit of more distance
    00:42:187 (4,5,6) - I think that 1/6 would fit better I'm agree with you, changed
    01:10:620 (3,4,5,6) - Imo the flow would benefit if you do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10930733 prefer my current pattern cause I'll need to find a new place for the last slider since your last jump in the pic seems too short and the last sound is the strongest one
    01:28:754 (4,5,6) - Same as before fixed~~
    01:30:321 (2,3) - Since 3 is a clap and a strong sound this distance don't show it at all I'm enphasizing guitar at this section, that's why claps doesn't have jumps
    02:03:008 (1,2) - CTRL G rhythm, should be better nope cause 02:02:560 - and 02:03:232 - are following guitar.
    02:14:426 (5,1) - ^ same
    02:21:590 - Why is this empty? omg you are totally right, changed the long slider into 2 (1/2) sliders
    02:51:366 (7,8) - Is there any reason it's not like 02:50:470 (3,4,5,6) - ? any, I'll rearrange this part, thx
Hope some of these will help. GL
thank you very much, really helpful
-Tarcup-
24 posts
Joined January 2017
-Tarcup-
Hi, nm you requested!~

Dolor
This is just a suggestion.
03:07:709 - I feel like this is a little awkward. At least for me. It's the ending of the sliders that eventually throw me off.

Honestly, this beat map is really good as it is. At my level of modding, I can't see much wrong at least
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-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

-Tarcup- wrote:

Hi, nm you requested!~

Dolor
This is just a suggestion.
03:07:709 - I feel like this is a little awkward. At least for me. It's the ending of the sliders that eventually throw me off. this can be played as a normal triplet, I'm trying to follow the most prominent sounds as posible

Honestly, this beat map is really good as it is. At my level of modding, I can't see much wrong at least


Thank you very much for your help <3
Manquito
518 posts
Joined March 2017
Manquito
El mapa es perfecto!!! espero verlo rankeado algun dia :D
Weedy
773 posts
Joined January 2014
Weedy
i love my 1 kd
Gero's Normal

  1. 00:05:247 (4,5,6) - imo better rhythm for all instances of this is 1/1 slider - 1/2 circle - 1/2 reverse
  2. 00:16:888 (6) - imo two 1/2 sliders is better for representing the rhythm here
  3. 01:17:784 (6) - ^


rocket's hard

  1. 00:06:142 (3,4,5,6) - honestly hexgrid is the best choice here for organization https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10965977
  2. 00:16:441 (1,1) - why the hell is the spacing 2.32x, the song doesnt even get that intense
  3. 00:46:441 - i dont see how the sudden slowdown in ds is justified, the song doesn't change all that much
  4. 00:57:187 (1,3) - covering reverses is unrankable i thought
  5. 01:15:097 (1) - move this to 302:359 for 01:15:097 (1,2) - better blanket and 01:14:426 (5,6,7,1) - pair aesthetics
  6. 02:25:396 (1) - no nc here, you didnt nc 02:21:814 (5) - this; consistency
  7. 02:28:306 (1) - ^
  8. 02:31:888 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - the triple should be at the start of the reverse chain https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10966008 look at timeline; easier to understand rhythm
  9. 02:41:067 (1,3) - unrankable?
  10. 03:01:889 (1,2,3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10966013 imo this is better for jump structure, flows nicer


pain

  1. 00:06:142 (4,5) - nazi lol (5) not in slider path, should be adjusted 2 +- 1 px down-left
  2. 00:16:888 (5) - nc for follow point + jump organization
  3. 00:50:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yo i get you're trying to milk pp but this is like the shittiest place to do it; the song is literally just filler drum beat there
  4. 01:04:351 (1,2,3,4) - rip vocal emphasis
  5. 01:28:754 (4,5,6,7,8) - ew linear flow gross
  6. 01:36:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - zzzzzzzzz
  7. 01:42:411 (1) - remove spinner for consistency, this is only kiai with spinner to start
  8. 01:50:918 (1,2,3,4) - aaa vocals
  9. 03:08:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - missed opportunity for full screens kappa

glgl
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

[[Pika]] wrote:

i love my 1 kd I love your mods~~

pain

  1. 00:06:142 (4,5) - nazi lol (5) not in slider path, should be adjusted 2 +- 1 px down-left omg you are so picky, fixed
  2. 00:16:888 (5) - nc for follow point + jump organization sure~~
  3. 00:50:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yo i get you're trying to milk pp but this is like the shittiest place to do it; the song is literally just filler drum beat there why everything is related to pp now xd, I never map based on pp, I'll reduce the distance a little bit :3
  4. 01:04:351 (1,2,3,4) - rip vocal emphasis it's fine, I'm following instruments here.
  5. 01:28:754 (4,5,6,7,8) - ew linear flow gross I don't understand at all, so I think my current pattern is fine, I can't find a problem with it.
  6. 01:36:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - zzzzzzzzz I understood!! xd nerfed a lot~~
  7. 01:42:411 (1) - remove spinner for consistency, this is only kiai with spinner to start well this is the only place where a sound is asociated with spinner, I think is fine, if sounds are differents, why should I keep consistency?
  8. 01:50:918 (1,2,3,4) - aaa vocals one more time, I don't follow vocals all the time, instruments here are prominents so they have more enphasis.
  9. 03:08:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - missed opportunity for full screens kappa niceeee desuuu~~ yeah, increased distances here, thanks for the suggestion~~

glgl
Thank you very much~~
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