1. Hard (4.67 stars, 348 notes)
2. Normal (2.69 stars, 196 notes)
3. vivicat's Insane (4.91 stars, 459 notes)

Megurine Luka wrote:

啦啦啦沙发is mine.

加油加油> <

What wrote:

OMG~!!
Gooooooooooood Song ang Gooooooood map
wow need star!
This is my little MOD

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]
01:11:081 (10) - NC?
01:18:700 (8) - ^
01:26:319 (7) - ^
01:45:367 (8) - ^

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

0 star 0 mod = ok then xD
http://puu.sh/7Ev2 = hitsound mod
added some custom.....

terametis wrote:

Hi~~
These are all suggestions.

[Noraml]
I suggest,it is better to make to the last.Your map is awesome.

from Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
Your difficulties should all have about the same play-length. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy looks sloppy/lazy in most cases. A fully-mapped Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.
Now, Normal diff is mapped to the end of the song

If you do not make to the last, you should delete unnecessary timing points.

IMO,
4/4 song
0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0
0 is a heavy beat, so I suggest adding some custom sounds.
Oh,I update now,I think that is improved.Do your best~

00:29:176 (3)　　　　　　How about this?

SPOILER

fixed


[Hard]
I feel that many clap sounds is used too much.
How about reducing?

00:39:652 (3)~(6)　　　I don't like this pattern.
01:10:128 (6)~(9)　　　^
This pattern is fine here

01:34:890 (7)　　　　　　add NC
01:35:843 (1)　　　　　　remove NC
Here NC is follow the rhythm, so I set NC in the long white lone. But if anyone mentioned it, I will consider to change them

sorry,,, I couldn't really find a problem.
Your map is great.
I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~

• 00:46:319 (1) - Almost hit the bottom edge orz. I suggest to move (4) 2-3 grids up and move this slider one grid up
  00:51:557 (2) - Move few grids up? Will be more flowy imo
  00:53:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...Is this a pentagon? Well, if so, (2,3,4,5) should be moved few grids down and right (:
  01:33:462 (2,3) - Curve (2) a bit? Would play better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/171367
  02:16:796 (4) - Add clap?

• 00:04:890 (3) - The instrument, in any way, starts 1/4 later after this slider starts. Plays fine though
  00:14:890 (7,1) - Use clap only on (7)'s start, and remove the whistle from (1)'s start?
  00:34:890 (7) - I can hear a kicking bass sound here, maybe hitsound finish with lowered volume here better
  01:07:271 (1) - I don't think clap fits here, whistle much better orz
  01:18:700 (8) - New combo here
  02:17:271 (4) - Move few grids up?

Niva wrote:

Mod request from Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> Your .mp3 is still 320kbps - max. allowed is 192 kbps (:
Really? In my computer it is 191... well, full summit again
-> I suggest to set your preview point manually to 68000 or somewhere earlier, with 68119 you can't hear the first chorus' note on the web preview
fixed
-> ...I have a feeling BPM 126.003 sounds much better >< Well, I'm not a timing expert though
I think it's OK now.

[Normal]

• 00:46:319 (1) - Almost hit the bottom edge orz. I suggest to move (4) 2-3 grids up and move this slider one grid up
  fixed
  00:51:557 (2) - Move few grids up? Will be more flowy imo
  fixed
  00:53:938 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...Is this a pentagon? Well, if so, (2,3,4,5) should be moved few grids down and right (:
  In fact, i make them though Ctrl + Shift + R every 72°
  01:33:462 (2,3) - Curve (2) a bit? Would play better imo : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/171367
  fixed
  02:16:796 (4) - Add clap?

[Hard]

• 00:04:890 (3) - The instrument, in any way, starts 1/4 later after this slider starts. Plays fine though
  I realized it is really need to put off, but if I do it, the rhythm will be broken, so I would not to change it
  00:14:890 (7,1) - Use clap only on (7)'s start, and remove the whistle from (1)'s start?
  fixed
  00:34:890 (7) - I can hear a kicking bass sound here, maybe hitsound finish with lowered volume here better
  add whistle
  01:07:271 (1) - I don't think clap fits here, whistle much better orz
  fixed
  01:18:700 (8) - New combo here
  set NCs of Hard diff
  02:17:271 (4) - Move few grids up?
  fixed

Awesome map. Awesome song choice also :3
Good luck ~

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

Normal:
AR: -1
No, thanks. I think it's fine now
00:19:176(5) - Aline this to (3)
No, thanks. I think it's fine now
00:54:890(3,4) - Aline (3) to (2) and (4) to (1)
do some changes, but not like your suggestion
01:38:224(6,7,8) - x:48 y:192 for (6), x:68 y:312 for (7), and x:184 y:340 for the last note. from there u need to use Ctrl+R for the sliders until the break
No, thanks. I think it's fine now

Hard:
00:02:509(4) - NC
00:06:319(4) - ^
00:13:938(5) - ^
00:17:747(5) - ^
00:21:557(5) - ^
00:25:366(7) - ^
00:29:176(5) - ^
00:45:366(7) - ^
00:48:700(7) - ^ if u ignore this make the previous note a NC
00:52:033(7) - NC
00:55:843(7) - ^
00:59:652(7) - ^
01:11:081(10) - ^
01:14:890(9) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC
01:18:700(8) - NC
01:22:509(8) - ^
01:26:319(7) - ^
01:34:890(7) - ^
01:41:557(6) - ^
01:45:366(8) - ^
01:49:176(7) - ^
01:52:985(6) - ^
reset NCs

This is the best i can do. GL

Scorpiour wrote:

general:

bpm : 126.003
offset : 590

0.001的bpm偏差就会导致unrankable，所以还是请修正bpm，否则会出现明显的偏差。

另外这个timing只是我个人测的，可能也不是很准确，必要的话还是去timing queue里请求帮助。
已经有两个人提了，大概真是有大问题了，改~

另外那种很短的kiai time可能并不被建议使用
这个实在是不想改的说，因为那两个喷泉的效果不错啊

normal:
00:06:329 (3) - 建议收在白线
01:31:091 (2) - ^
这两个都没有改，再改就更像Easy了...

没什么问题，不过建议加入一些hit sound，你的S:C很不错的，加上吧。
本来是想像Hard一样的，但是发祥好多都被Slider给掐断了，我懒得再折腾一个N:C-slidertick了，总之就是懒了...

hard:
没看到什么问题
不过虽然速度很慢，但是在hard难度中这样大量的使用1/4连打真的没问题嘛
减了几个，最近陷入overmap怪圈，已经有一个MAT+一个BAT在我的两张图中提过了...我很无奈啊啊啊啊啊~

音效大赞
自恋中~
就这些了，很好的图，加油！

kissfly wrote:

总体的
十面埋伏很能体现中国音乐的特色（外加配上NB音效），不过中国歌大部分也真的很送分-，-
就是很难rank

Easy
00:30:113 这里结尾改成whistle比较合适音乐吧
fixed
01:00:588 ~
fixed
01:39:635 声音40% 01:51:539 55% 01:43:444 70% 01:47:251 在还原你的50%好了
这个没改，感觉70%声音好大啊
02:25:348 不合适像上面这样，因为Slider短会很吵
这个也没有改，最后一段Kiai了，上一点难度嘛，前面加了点东西，让难度变化有一点过渡

Hard
找不到问题

Vivicat's Insane
01:22:016(4) new combol
01:36:301(2) 这个(2)微斜了一点，我看他好象是想放平行的，所以指出来了
02:19:991(3) 距离错了吧，空了一跟红线，距离不变的？而且前后都是连贯的
02:20:943(3) ~
好吧 02:19:991~02:25:348 跪求重做-，- 想想文艺青年应该怎样放吧。。。
这个猫姐自己改了，我就负责上传...

总体非常好，而且又是中国歌，支持你。

BinJip wrote:

3. How about Insane diff? Are the distances of jumps suitable? Which part you play so uncomfortable?

Jump is very good but 02:17:729 (1) - 1/3?? i feel it suddenly

MOD

16th personal mod

song for sleeping
Normal

-think about silent the slider bodies add this file to your folder http://puu.sh/81rf

00:04:399 (6) - no new combo and centre?
00:08:208 - remove the mini kiai here, I think is enough whit the finish on the slider
00:10:113 (3) - for better hitsounds, no clap here
00:10:589 (4) - clap on slider repeat
00:13:923 (3) - no clap at start of slider
00:14:875 (4) - clap here
00:17:732 (2) - no clap here, well instead using a clap every 3 white ticks, sounds better if you use a clap every 5 white ticks, the whistles are ok
00:31:065 (1) - no whistle here >_<
00:38:684 - mini kiai >:
01:01:540 (1) - no new combo?
01:08:207 (1) - no whistle
01:18:683 - replace clap whit a finish instead?

Hard

- huh rise up the aproach rate and overall difficulty? at least 1 tick

00:06:304 (1) - move this to next blue tick then delete 00:07:018 (2)
00:08:208 - oh this kiai
00:08:685 - ok your claps pattern is ok on the first repetition, then becomes some annoying because of have non sound to back it up keep reading ↓↓↓
00:12:970 (3) - remove this clap also clap on 00:13:923 (1) sounds better this way, make it like here on next claps
00:35:351 - remove break?
00:40:589 (1,2,3) - huh delete 2? stream here dont fells good... same for next streams? instead streams why dont use some jumps?
01:40:587 (3,4,5) - streams on kiai feels better (=
01:01:540 (1) - no new combo?


vivicat's insane

00:03:447 (1) - clap here
02:17:729 (1) - ok here we are whit this painful 1/3 section >_< I dont gonna say to you delete it, maybe use less circles?
sleepy because of the song x3