1. Deviant Star - 4Key (3.75 stars, 3191 notes)

Umo- wrote:

I thought u only map halozy .o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o.o. because i cant find more marathon D:
NM req from some random modding queue
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Deviant Star

00:01:689 - I dont think that the sound is that strong for a triple, you could remove this note 00:01:689 (1689|0) - i think i can put it triple, because its for the crash and for the impact
00:21:655 (21655|0) - move to 3, it plays better imo yup its better
00:28:172 - I think quad would be nice here okay, quad seems nice and more challenging to play owob
00:27:758 - I think those SV's dont fit music that well change 00:27:758 - to 1,30x umm, yeah i think the svs dont really suit the song/this section. but i think 1.3 its too slow, i mean the snare something voice is much stronger than the sv if i put 1.3x so i've made up my mind to make it 1.5x. But, i'll try to buff it as good as possible, thanks
00:52:999 (52999|0,52999|1) - I dont see why that should be a double, single would work way better so the first LN is for the guitar, and the second LN is for the something wierd effect
00:54:655 (54655|3,55275|2,55896|0) - wtf do these LN's follow? its for the guitar, isn't it obvious?
01:05:620 (65620|0) - move to 3 and then move 01:05:827 (65827|2) - to 4, it fits better imo okay, its a very nice sugggestion. but the sound of the guitar is still in the same pitch, but i'll consider this again. thanks
01:22:793 (82793|2) - if you followed vocals then this should end at 01:23:206 - okay, descen it
01:39:965 (99965|3) - move to 3 same reason as above
01:45:758 (105758|0) - to 2 same reason as above
02:55:482 (175482|1) - should end at 02:55:896 - yup, extend it
03:37:689 (217689|0) - I think this should end at 03:37:896 - yup, extend it
04:00:034 (240034|0) - this should end at 04:02:827 - yup, extend it
04:39:551 (279551|0,279551|2) - this is not really that strong for a double tbh rip this
05:06:034 (306034|0,306034|1) - ^ rip this

this map could definetly go over 4* how =w=
Good Luck!

FadillSan wrote:

Hello~

NM req from my queue~

Deviant Star

00:40:999 (40999|2,40999|0) - ini dibikin single aja nope, itu kek suara snare/clap tapi kecil bet
Dari 01:19:689 - sampe 01:21:137 - mumpung gak ada suara drum, saran w suara gitarnya juga jadiin note ummm, w sih lebih milih LN karena ini sengaja w buat map basednya tuh LN, mungkin w akan bertimbangkan lagi wkwk
01:28:379 - add note buat apa ya? disana g ad suara selain hihat yg udh w wakilin dengan LN
02:58:379 - add note, karna di sesi ini snare nya full kolom kan ? itu udh triple wkwkw, klo w tambahin lagi jadi quad dong
03:02:517 - ^ ^
03:33:137 (213137|1,213137|2) - ini suara kecil, single note aja udah cukup nope, w berusaha untuk tetap menjaga konsisten yang ada di ni map
04:25:896 (265896|2) - add note yg diatas di suruh jadiin single, trs ini di jadiin triple :v hadeh hadeh wkwkwkwk konsisten dong :"v
04:52:999 (292999|0) - *kalo w, bakal kasih sv disini :3 zeeb gan, ntar w tambahin wkwk
05:26:930 (326930|0) - Ini LN harusnya sampe 05:27:344 - OO YA WKWKWK
05:27:241 (327241|2) - menyesuaikan sama yg ^ OK OK

Maap cuma dikit, w kurang bisa ngemod diff insane :"v gpp kok, bnyk bljr ntar juga mahir >w<
Good luck~
*Lagunya enak sayang susah dimainin, nyesel w jadi noob qwq osu*ppy*sh/ss/9250439

AchsanLovers wrote:

YES NICE NAYUTA SONGS HAH

masa w yg ngemod dluan, M4M from your q btw
koleb yok kita lagu felt yg after day kuy

[General]
00:01:689 - tambahin lagi 1 red lines disini, soalnya ada cymbal pengulang gitu lah :v (anjir cara ngomongin nya gimana :v) bisa dilihat setiap cybmal pasti slalu brhenti di tick ketiga, bisa dilihat di 02:00:862 - 03:07:068 - coba kasih itu red line di yg pertama da lihat hasilnya awkakw

kyk nya ada yg lain dari metadatanya, coba cek disini http://amateras-records.com/C90/ w mager cari satu2 =w= dah lengkap smw plz

[Deviant Star]
00:11:620 (11620|2,12241|1) - CTRL + H ? buat ngehindari trilnya yg kelamaan di 00:10:586 (10586|3,10793|2,11206|3,11310|2,11517|3,11620|2) - ha?

00:20:827 (20827|0) - should be move to 2 for hand balance with 00:19:068 (19068|2,20724|3,20930|2) - moved

00:26:206 (26206|3) - move to 2 juga buat ngehindari anchor yg disini 00:25:793 (25793|3,25999|3,26206|3) - hadehhhhhhhhh, moved =w=

00:54:448 - add note satu lagi buat emphasis? okay, biar making kenchang

02:02:724 (122724|3,122930|3,123137|3,123344|3,123758|3,123965|3,124275|3,124586|3,124793|3,124999|3,125206|3) - anchornya tolong dikondisikan hehe :3

03:35:517 (215517|1) - gapaham maksud mini LN disini, pdhl beda sama yg 03:37:482 (217482|3,217586|2) - dengerin pake 25% maz, itu snapny sama buat pitchny aja yg beda

dah tu aja, otherwise map udah sloid t\da tersktruktur (mahlum et mapper) cuma anchor dan trillnya pls

good luck ~

FAMoss wrote:

owo desu ~ owo

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02:16:895 (136895|2,136999|3,137102|0,137102|1) - disini bisa ctrl + h karena ada perulangan lagu nya ( bisa denger atau telinga gua salah ya ) apa hubny ctrl h sama pengulangan lagu? :/

02:58:378 - seharusnya di col 3 harus ada note tapi ada ln , turunkan ln 02:58:378 (178378|1) - ke 02:58:171 - dan tarik sampe 02:58:792 - gagal paham w, itu jelas" vocalny disitu. dibawahny dia g ada apa" tolong

03:48:033 (228033|1) - 03:48:861 (228861|3) - 03:50:516 (230516|3) - 03:51:344 (231344|2) - 03:52:171 (232171|1) - 03:52:999 (232999|3) - disini ga pake sih, denger musik nya agak lembut sebenerny g gitu lembut juga, soalny dibagian sini kan smwny hihat tapi kan yg paling kenceng berada disitu (yang kamu snap)

04:22:585 (262585|0,262585|1,262792|3,262792|2,262999|2,262999|3,262999|1) - di ctrl + g ini karena ada hentakan sama ha?

04:53:102 - bisa dijadiin sv, tambahkan di 04:53:102 - slider velocity nya x0,55 - di 04:53:309 - slider velocity nya x1,10 dan disini 04:53:413 - x1,00 situ pake rumusnya beda sama rumus w wkwkwk, cmn ya gua tetep taro sv disitu wkwk
05:09:964

05:10:792 (310792|1,310792|0,311620|1,311620|0,312447|1,312447|0,312861|1,312861|0) - ini kenapa sama semua coba ganti ke col lain wadoo wkwkwk, changed

dan 05:16:792 - tambahin 1 note di col 2 euy buat apa?

ok good luck ya,, semoga ranked

FelixSpade wrote:

bismillah bisa membantu :v

Column prefs : 0|1|2|3

SV Suggestion

00:01:688 - 0.8x
00:02:516 - 0.82x
00:04:171 - 0.84x
dst.
00:14:930 - 1.00x

01:34:378 - 0.8x
01:36:033 - 0.82x
01:37:689 - 0.84x
dst.
01:45:964 - 1.00x
lebih menghayati lagunya klo mulai dari 0.8x - 1.0x daripada 0.9x - 1.0x
all accepted

Bintang Nyasar ftw

02:06:861 (126861|3,127068|3,127275|3,127482|3) - harusnya ini anchor bisa dihindari how? =w=
02:20:102 (140102|0,140309|0,140516|0,140723|0) - ^ ^
02:26:930 (146930|0,146930|1,147137|2,147137|3,147344|1,147344|2) - mungkin bisa ditambah SV? kek 03:06:654 - 03:07:068 - added
04:20:309 (260309|3) - pindah ke col 2 biar sama untuk selanjutnya moved

hadeh, rata2 dah bagus tuh patternnya :v go speedrank my brudda :v

EDIT : have a star from meeee~ lagu aslinya fav gw, apalagi di remix + vocal kek gini ehehehe~

AlisceaSparku wrote:

halo vir-chan~ HI HI >W<
short mod here (sorry for late and short one ;w;)

col. 1/2/3/4

1. 00:28:171 - 00:52:999 - to make the map more challenging, you could add jacks for that new sound that occurs at 00:28:999 - , then again at 00:29:206 - , 00:29:309 - , and so on. Streaming with hands and jumps for almost 30 seconds is quite repetitive and subjectively easy, so adding those jacks in some parts will make it more challenging, at the same time more variation in terms of patterns. umm.. can you give me some examples? cause im suck at making jacks lol =w=
2. 00:54:654 - maybe it's only me, but I find it disturbing that all sliders in this section onward have the same length, when for example at 00:55:895 - , the guitar sounds longer than the rest. This is also noticeable for parts such as 00:57:137 - and 00:57:551 - , when the LNs could be rearranged to make a shield pattern instead, which follows more accurately in my opinion. Additionally, parts like 00:56:930 (56930|0) - doesn't seem to be a guitar sound, but considering how the beat "echoes", it's better to put a 1/4 slider. dunno how to respond this, but the sliders is for the guitar are actually in the same length and for the 00:56:930 (56930|0) - its not an "echoes" why? i assume that you already know the pitch between "echoes" and the original. i mean,
   the sound itself its the same as the other, how would i become an "echoes"?
   ----these ones can actually be applied to other parts, so do consider this.
   
3. 01:26:930 - a short 1/4 burst could be added here for that weaker sound. nope, i already put those LNs for the vocal
4. 03:36:861 (216861|1) - perhaps you can remove this and make 1/4 sliders for that fluctuating guitar sound? the fluctuation here seems very, very audible compared to the rest. If you're trying to differentiate it with the 1/4 sliders at 03:40:171 - , then I suggest to make 1/4 slider one hand trill. Literally, it's not accurate, but it feels more accurate (hope you get it xd) yeah i know what you meant xD but im gonna keep this since the sound is pitch is different owo
5. 03:45:964 (225964|1) - same with the above suggestion ^
   
   tbh I don't really have to suggest anything else, since there are parts that are copypasted and mirrored only (example, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9459943 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9459950
   i don't know, but maybe half of it are copypasted and mirrored only actually, yes. i copypasta on that part, but i make it different somehow.
   dont worry xD

anyway good luck to your map!

deadbill wrote:

RNGesus bless you

00:26:723 (26723|2,26775|3,27033|1,27085|0) - kurang nyaman nih.. coba di CTRL+H, CTRL+G, biar sesuai sama bagian sini
00:27:137 (27137|3,27189|2,27240|1,27292|0,27344|3,27395|2,27447|0,27499|1,27551|2,27602|3,27654|0,27706|1) - nope, w berusaha untuk membuat semuany berbeda owo jadilah kek gini wkwk

00:54:240 - 2 3 3 mungkin mau dipertimbangkan lagi konsistensinya. sama suaranya dengan bagian sini, tapi bagian sini pakai 2 2 4 00:27:757 -
saran ane sih, hapus 00:54:447 (54447|2) - tambah satu note di 00:54:654 - fixed wkwkw mabok gua :'v

oiye, ini bagian 00:54:654 - sampai 01:21:137 - LNs nya ngikutin apa? berasa out of place banget ikutin gitar

01:23:620 (83620|1) - kepanjangan nih klo ngikutin vokal re-arranged
01:23:930 - tambah LN
01:24:240 - tambah LN
01:30:240 (90240|1) - sama ini juga
untuk kedua LN itu, w mauny tuh biar g ad yg pake 1/4 makany w rada maksain kek gitu wkwk, cmn udh w re-arranged kok (tambahin 1 LN)

kalo gak ya jangan ngikutin vokal, napa gak ngikutin melodi gitar? .-.

01:32:723 - sama kasus dengan 00:26:723 same as above

01:38:102 (98102|1) - deleted 01:38:620 (98620|1) - ? disitu ada perkusi wkwk
perkusi mulai dari sini 01:38:723 -

01:47:620 - eeeh... normal notesnya ngikutin apa nih? hihat yg paling kenceng
tambahin LNs di
01:54:551 -
01:54:861 -
01:55:378 -

ini buang 01:55:482 (115482|2) - harusnya mulai dari 01:55:378 - udh w jelasin ya diatas wkwk

02:27:344 - sama kasus dengan 00:54:240 - same as above
tambahin satu note 02:27:344 - g konsisten dong jadiny, masa yg laen triple ini quad sendirian :'v

welp.. ini juga out of place LNs nya.. 02:27:344 - sampai 02:53:826 - udh di jelasin diatas wkwk

02:56:309 (176309|2) - kepanjangan, sesuaikan dengan vokal
02:56:620 - tambah LN
03:00:447 (180447|0) - kepanjangan
03:00:861 - tambah LN
03:02:930 (182930|2) - kepanjangan
03:03:240 - tambah LN
03:03:551 - tambah LN
udh di jelasin diatas wkwk

03:34:171 (214171|2,214792|2) - beda nada jangan di satu kolom welp, sebenerny g terlalu beda since orang" juga ngiranya ini sama .
jadi tuh ni 2 suara kek bedany cmn 20-30% doang makanya g gitu kedengeran bedany

bandingin deh
03:35:413 (215413|0,215516|1,215620|3) - bend release
03:37:482 (217482|3,217585|2,217689|0) - normal picking
ga paham mksdny apa ;w;

bedain mendingan patternya. 03:37:482 (217482|3) - pendekin dah nope, sengaja bikin gitu untuk "visual"

03:43:068 (223068|3,223068|2,223137|1,223206|0,223275|3,223344|2,223413|1,223482|0) -
pickingnya belum beres, masih pakai ketukan yang sama, tiba2 ganti pattern .-. buat gitarny uy wkwkwk

03:45:964 (225964|1) - ini let ring sampai sini 03:46:585 - wut?
03:46:378 (226378|3) - berhenti di 03:46:585 - biar apa? =w=
03:46:585 - tambah LN nope

03:49:895 (229895|2,229999|1) - normal notes, tapi bagian sini 03:40:171 - pakai LNs .-. changed to LN
bagian sini 03:50:930 - sampai sini 03:52:585 - coba panjang pendek LNs nya disesuaikan dengan sustain dan mute -.- itu udah sesuai wkwkwk

aaaa lanjut aja melodinyaaa 03:58:378 - ga enak tiba2 ganti begitu ya w kan mauny ngikutin burstny =w=

04:24:033 - sama kasus 00:26:723 udh di jelasin diatas wkwk

goodluck o/

atian540 wrote:

m4m utang :''v

1\2\3\4

wew

aaudionya tulung dikurangin mz, bitratenya 262 kbps,pantesan ukuran mapnya 12 MBan,MP3nya aja 10 MB =w=
BGnya juga di compres,masa jpeg mau 1MB ?
ini kelupaan ?

1. 00:50:930 (50930|3,50930|0,50930|2,51757|3,51757|0,51757|2,52585|2,52585|0,52585|3) - 3 kali clap di colom yg sama, mungkin coba pattern lain wokeee, re-arranged
2. 01:20:516 (80516|3) - mugkin ini di jadiin LN di col 1 kaya di 01:18:861 - ?? zeeb
3. 02:08:620 (128620|2) - ini LN keknya mulainya disini deh 02:08:723 - trus ext ke 02:09:137 - trus ini 02:08:930 (128930|0) jadiin normal note, kek kaya kurang pas gitu suara yg kaya terompet itu loh,just suggest =w= emg bener kok wkwk udh gua re-arranged
4. 02:21:861 - ^ same
5. 02:53:206 - ini sama kek no 2 done
6. 03:35:516 - ini kok LN ? padahal ga ada suara gitar yg cepet kek bagian 03:37:585 kan ada suara gitar cepetnya :'3 re-arranged somehow yg di depan, bnut yg ini keep
7. 03:45:551 (225551|1,225654|0) - ctrl + J ? biar lebih ena sip
8. 04:20:723 - 04:21:551 - 04:22:378 - 04:22:792 - 4 note kayaknya lebih ena =w= nope, g konsisten.. masa tiba" di ni map ada quad tanpa sebab
9. 04:52:999 - mungkin 2 LN lebih mantap ?? g ded :'v
10. wew

short mod keknya soalnya dah bagus b(=w=)d
dah utangnya lunas :''v
goodluck

Tofu1222 wrote:

Done a final check for this map before finding BNs. Good luck!

Chat Log

12:09 Virtue-: tofu, can you do a fast check on my map? i need my last mod because its been a while since i got the last mod ._.
12:10 Tofu1222: on your whiteout gd?
12:10 Tofu1222: or other map?
12:10 Virtue-: nope
12:10 *Virtue- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1428213 Amateras Records - Stray Star [Deviant Star]]
12:10 Virtue-: other
12:10 Tofu1222: yeah ok
12:11 Virtue-: i wanna req a bn check but i need a single last mod to make sure that everything is play
12:11 Virtue-: *okay
12:11 Virtue-: =w=
12:13 Tofu1222: yeah
12:35 Tofu1222: 00:57:033 - 00:57:861 - 01:00:344 - 01:01:171 - 01:03:654 - 01:04:482 - and etc. I think you miss some guitar sounds that you are supposed to map them?
12:36 Tofu1222: u may look at each and sort out for those that you wanna ignore and those you don't
12:36 Tofu1222: but imo these sounds are quite obvious
12:37 Virtue-: but the sound is too low i guess
12:37 Virtue-: but okay =w=
12:37 Tofu1222: and if you do add them, make sure you add in the same part after
12:37 Tofu1222: until 01:20
12:37 Virtue-: sure
12:40 Tofu1222: 02:29:723 - 02:33:033 - stuff like these timing lines are just similar to the previous point
12:40 Virtue-: copypasta
12:40 Virtue-: :D
12:40 Virtue-: =w=
12:40 Tofu1222: lol 
12:40 Tofu1222: anyway fix them too
12:41 Tofu1222: 03:03:551 - I think you need a short ln here, ending it at 03:03:757 - ?
12:41 Tofu1222: for the vocal
12:41 Virtue-: added
12:43 Tofu1222: 03:46:378 (226378|3) - I think this guitar should end at 03:46:585 - ?
12:43 Tofu1222: 03:49:792 (229792|0) - I don't think here is a guitar, so maybe make this note just a normal one?
12:44 Virtue-: yea it shd be end there but there's another guitar at 03:46:585 (226585|1) - but i dont want to add it because they're kinda same
12:44 Virtue-: soo...
12:44 Virtue-: nope
12:44 Tofu1222: yeah logical
12:44 Tofu1222: oki
12:44 Tofu1222: 03:51:344 - Another missed guitar sound here, so maybe change one note into a short LN?
12:45 Virtue-: 03:49:792 (229792|0) - have you hear it with 25%? :/ i think that's a guitar with very low pitch
12:45 Virtue-: but dunno 'w'
12:45 Tofu1222: but if that is the case, it really goes quite off from this melody line made by the guitar, right?
12:45 Tofu1222: and I don'
12:45 Tofu1222: don't really hear it tbh XD
12:46 Virtue-: ummm... sorry but i cant hear any guitar =w= at 03:51:344 (231344|0) -
12:46 Virtue-: o
12:46 Virtue-: rip my ear
12:46 Virtue-: its getting broken D:
12:46 Virtue-: changed =w=
12:46 Tofu1222: XD sometimes you just cant really help with it 
12:47 Virtue-: b-but...
12:47 Virtue-: D:
12:49 Tofu1222: me too, sometimes just cant really hear sth
12:49 Tofu1222: but when someone else pointed out that
12:49 Tofu1222: holy shit it's so obvious
12:49 Tofu1222: XD
12:49 Tofu1222: 05:16:171 - to 05:17:826 - 
12:50 Tofu1222: how bout mapping some melody sound?
12:50 Tofu1222: like 05:16:482 - 05:16:792 - 
12:51 Tofu1222: 05:12:861 - to 05:16:171 - you actually have notes on all such melody sounds (even tho i know you are only placing notes besides vocals on 1/1 lines)
12:51 Tofu1222: but i do think such synths will be doing good to more variability
12:52 Virtue-: jesus christ
12:52 Virtue-: why its soo hard
12:52 Virtue-: =w=
12:54 Tofu1222: And the final concern for me is for such LN, 01:23:620 (83620|1) - 
12:54 Tofu1222: I think you definitely have space to split such apart
12:54 Tofu1222: assign LNs to different vocal sounds
12:55 Tofu1222: then why not? you actually didnt really do such combination in kiai at all 'w'
12:56 Virtue-: umm, actually i dont like 1/4 to be there so i wont split the LN into 1/4 ._.
12:57 Tofu1222: i see
12:57 Tofu1222: so well
12:57 Tofu1222: you map 1/4 in kiai, but only 1/2 in such parts, right?
12:57 Virtue-: yup
12:57 Tofu1222: hmmm that's another logic, but acceptable too XD
12:58 Tofu1222: yeah then just go for your own way then
12:58 Tofu1222: guess no more errors in this map
12:58 Virtue-: i make it different and i think to make it easier at some parts and harder on the kiai where everything goes hype 'w'
12:58 Virtue-: im the on who got many error xD
12:58 Virtue-: *one
12:59 Tofu1222: nah you are already good than many many other mappers
12:59 Tofu1222: qwq
12:59 Tofu1222: *better
12:59 Virtue-: xD

dudehacker wrote:

hitsound:

01:03:757 (63757|0) - change to kick
01:04:585 (64585|3) - ^
01:07:482 (67482|1) - remove clap
02:36:447 (156447|3,157275|0) - change to kick
I don't hear the change in the pattern of kick snare kick snare, not sure why you changed the pattern there.


for this calm part i think it might be better to change your hitnormal into something more soft, bell like sound
04:00:861 (240861|3) - to 04:19:482 (259482|0) -
05:19:482 (319482|2) - to end

I suggest this sound, https://puu.sh/yNobo/f2f47a67aa.wav

very good choice of hitsound, good job