1. Challenge (4.9 stars, 282 notes)
2. Extra (5 stars, 299 notes)
3. Heavy (4.85 stars, 207 notes)
4. Light (1.28 stars, 60 notes)
5. Standard (3.43 stars, 104 notes)
6. Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 618 notes)

1. 00:14:105 (1) - add finish to the beginning?
2. 00:24:870 (3) - clap?
3. 00:31:223 (6,7,8) - doesn't look well for me, try this: http://puu.sh/dfjq
4. 00:33:164 (6,7) - I don't like how they lie under previous slider
5. 00:36:341 (8) - new combo?
6. 00:38:458 (6) - whistle?
7. 00:39:164 (1) - remove clap from here and put it to the end of 00:39:341 (3)
8. 00:41:635 (4) - remove claps from the 2nd and 4th repeats
9. 00:51:164 (2) - remove clap from the end?
10. 01:04:047 (1,2,3) - you better place them symmetrical
11. 01:07:399 (1,2) - whistle on body is too sudden, in my opinion. What if you remove it?
12. 01:16:576 (5) - I don't know why, but I don't like how does it look

spboxer3 wrote:

Hi~I'm from #modreqs

[general]

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1. Settings
2. remove letterbox In Breaks in all diff (you have letter box in Taiko diff~remove it!!)
3. remove kiai #2 in all diff! ((it's not on the Downbeat and it not obvious effect
4. reset hitsound plz!! it's really too noise and not fit in this song

Done. reset hitsounds? huh.

[light]

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  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:58:047 -

Weird. It should've been removed on a previous upload. Fixed.

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:50:635 (1,2) -

Distance snapped, but okay.

mapping

• 00:05:635 (2) - let it regular? It's not regular now~ ((use ctrl+h check it
  00:16:929 (2) - awkward slider~let it pretty plz orz done
  00:18:341 (4) - ^ and too cover in Easy diff, I think. It's too confuse for the new player in Easy diff

1. 00:33:517 (3) - NC
2. 00:36:341 (5) - NC
3. 00:39:164 (7) - NC
4. 00:47:811 (1,1) - awkward slider
5. 00:52:046 (2,1,2) - confuse spacing for this rhythm!
6. 00:58:223 (1,2,3,4) - not good pattern, it's look like unconsidered pattern
7. 01:05:988 (5) - NC
8. 01:05:988 (5,6,7) - strange rhythm~The correct rhythm look like↓
   
   photo

   
9. 01:11:635 (5) - NC
10. 01:11:635 (5,6,7,8) - same as 01:05:988 (5,6,7) -
11. 01:14:458 (3) - ^
12. 01:17:282 (1,1) - too far spacing for the center and too close rhythm in Easy diff~

[Standard]

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  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:58:047 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:42:693 (3,7) -

mapping

1. 00:07:752 (1) - whistle on the slider head?
2. 00:27:517 (8) - too long stream in the standard diff
3. 00:43:399 (5) - NC
4. 00:53:282 (1) - I think you can let it more beautiful
5. 00:53:282 (1,3) - too cover in Standard diff
6. 00:56:105 (3) - awkward slider~let it pretty plz
7. 00:58:223 (1) - I think you can let it more beautiful redone with a spinner as a base
8. 01:07:223 (6) - NC
9. 01:13:046 (7) - NC
10. 01:21:693 (5) - ^

fixed most

[Heavy]

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  

1. 00:42:693 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2. 01:02:458 (4,5,6) -

mapping

1. 00:18:870 (4) - let it regular? It's not regular now~ ((use ctrl+h check it
2. 00:22:576 (4) - ^ a bit depart [nazi]
3. 00:23:988 (2) - ^
4. 00:30:694 (1) - awkward slider~it can be pretty
5. 00:31:223 (3) - ^
6. 00:43:223 (5) - NC
7. 00:50:988 (2) - set on the center?
8. 00:51:693 (4) - ^
9. 01:08:811 (3) - awkward slider~

nice finds ty.

[Challange]

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  

1. 00:43:576 (9,10) -
2. 01:10:929 (3,4) -

mapping

1. 00:08:282 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - lol this... it's look like unconsidered patter on purpose, will redo if someone else wants to
2. 00:15:517 (6) - awkward slider and a bit over the windows ranked maps have these sliders, done with purpose of a small rest in the flow
3. 00:16:929 (4) - ^
4. 00:23:635 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:31:223 (6) - awkward slide~
6. 00:34:399 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - (9,1)It's not good pattern~ It's overlaps? maybe you can let (1,2,3,4,5) move to stack on (9)~ I'd be happy of a pic to understand you
7. 01:05:811 (6,8,10) - Down 1 grid (size 3)?~ because I think you can should let 01:07:223 (10,3) - on stack~

nice.

[Taiko Oni]

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  Settings
  

1. set AR=5
   HP=5~7
   OD=5~7 ((from Taiko Rule
2. slider tick set 1
   

mapping

1. 00:30:693 (1,2,3,4) - 1/8 rhythm~ you sure? pretty sure, mostly for unique pattern, but another ask and change.
2. 00:32:105 (10,11,12,13) - ^
   
3. 00:03:870 (6) - k? k.
4. 00:21:164 (114,115,116,117,118) - kdddk?I prefer kkddk
5. 00:57:870 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210) - don't let it stream~ It's overmap for this part! eeven authentic taiko songs have overmaps, and this one isn't that bad imo
6. 01:18:693 (366,367,368,369,370) - kkddk? kkddk.

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

It's need more work~

1. Your hitsounds are too loud. Set volume to 70% everywhere
2. You need more finish hitsounds. Every time you hear finish in music, add finish to note / slider beginning

1. 01:15:870 (4) - add new combo

1. 00:07:752 (1,2,3) - reduce spacing and make it constant
2. 00:10:047 (4,5,6) - it's hard to read, don't do sudden jumps from white ticks to red
3. 00:18:164 (1,2) - it plays really weird. Maybe use note+slider instead of slider+note?
4. 00:19:576 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:20:458 (1,2,3) - whistles sound bad here
6. 00:23:811 (5) - remove whistle
7. 00:27:341 (3,4) - it's not easy to catch. Re-make it?
8. 00:44:635 (4,5) - remove these notes, there are too much of them so player needs a little rest
9. 00:53:105 (7) - better remove it, I think
10. 01:13:046 (2,3) - make them nice and symmetrical

1. 00:14:105 (1,2,3) - no. This spacing is too wide for 1/4, place sliders closer to note. Like.. 1x or 0.9x
2. 00:27:341 (4,5,6,7) - might be confusing to read because previos notes were 1/2
3. 00:25:929 (4) - if you wanna keep this whistle, remove it from beginning and end (leave only on slider body)
4. 00:46:752 (2,3,4) - fix spacing
5. 00:48:341 (2) - no, don't make sudden jump here

1. 00:20:282 (7,1) - even if I know there will be a jump, I keep missing it. Maybe it's because it doesn't fit music, I don't know. Ask somebody else about it
2. 00:33:164 (6,7) - why do you use sliders here instead of notes? I'd go with notes
3. 00:43:311 (6,8) - better remove these whistles, they don't fit
4. 00:43:576 (9) - add whistle to beginning here and here: 00:44:105 (12). If you like it, don't forget to do the same for the rest of the map
5. 00:49:752 (10) - remove whistle from the whole slider and add it only to its beginning
6. 00:52:576 (5) - ^
7. 01:24:517 (1) - instead of it I would map some triplets and streams here, and start spinner from 01:28:752

TicClick wrote:

General

1. Your hitsounds are too loud. Set volume to 70% everywhere
2. You need more finish hitsounds. Every time you hear finish in music, add finish to note / slider beginning

Done.

Standard

1. 01:13:046 (2,3) - make them nice and symmetrical > They are symmetrical.

Heavy

1. 00:46:752 (2,3,4) - fix spacing tried fixing it but it seems to be snapped.

Challenge

1. 00:33:164 (6,7) - why do you use sliders here instead of notes? I'd go with notes To avoid a feel of constant streams mostly. If someone else thinks it's better to change it then it'll change.
2. 01:24:517 (1) - instead of it I would map some triplets and streams here, and start spinner from 01:28:752 That's a bit of overmap; besides spinner consistency.

Also, what CDFA said. It looks much better now! Thanks!

Xgor wrote:

[General]
Please add Naoki to tags because as far as I know DE-SIRE retunes is a alias for Naoki. yessir

This doesn't really strike me as a song when kiai works on. I think it would be better if you remove it. Not sure.

01:24:341 (1) - I know this spinner kinda fits but it's really long! Can't you make it shorter I'd rather not.

That brown combo colour blends waaay too much with the BG. please change it into something else.I'll take suggestions.

[Light]
I think having beats 1/2 close together is too hard with this BPM on a easy. I would recommend you avoid that. Fixing later...

00:02:811 (1,2) - Can you please try to avoid overlapping these.
00:36:341 (1,2,1) - Align these to each other.
01:08:458 - remove the break here.


[Light/Standard]
Man... boring hitsounding... making it interesting later.

00:53:282 - 01:04:399 I don't really get why this part is easier on Standard than on Light.... should be the opposite. Hmm true. Perhaps swapping them..

[Standard]
I suggest you raise the SV to make it feel more different from Light, It would also be nice because those short sliders are kind boring. Remake it? Okay.

00:43:223 (4,1) - This feels like unneeded and just adds useless difficulty for a difficulty like standard and doesn't really make the map more fun imo
00:46:046 (3,4) - ^
00:48:870 (3,4) - ^
00:51:693 (3,4) - ^

[Heavy]
I don't think those 1/4 streams belong in this difficulty. They are much harder than the rest in the difficulty. I'll ask for some more opinions.

[Challenging]
AR 9 is quite unfitting to this song. 8 works better imo. Changed. Not much difference for me though.

00:11:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I don't get why this is harder and more streamy than the part before it that's way more insane Mapping to drums. Welp, waiting for more input on this one.

00:30:694 - 00:53:105 - I know those are following the song but I can't help that this part is much part is much harder than the rest when it's less intense than many other parts in the song.. Actually while it sounds less intense, it tries to be the most /interesting/ part of the song itself. Welp, once again, awaiting for some more input..