This is going to be a bit of a caustic mod, so I'm going to be overly critical of some parts. Just please try out the suggestions. If you don't think my suggestion is better or worse than the way you have it, consider changing it anyway, since I'm trying to map to the emphasized parts in the music.
[bmax]
00:24:773 (2) - not sure why you did 1/6 in this first section. It may sound better to you, (it doesn't to me) but a steady beat is more important. Check the whole section.
00:43:043 (2,3,4) - reverse this rhythm. this sounds like it fits the piano a little better.
00:43:367 - if you listen here, you hear the drums start a double, drop the white tick, and pick up the double again, which I think you should map but only if you do the previous
00:43:773 (7) - overmapped. map the piano properly here by streaming up to the downbeat.
00:44:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1/6 snap, 4/5/6 is peculiar too. I won't point out 1/6 anymore unless it's really bad, but I have to wonder why you would map a song that is so chock full of sextuplets.
00:49:367 (1,2,3,4) - these would be better starting on red ticks and ending on white ticks. Keep an eye out for the 1/6 if you care about mapping those. In general, the triples throughout the song would sound better on red blue white rather than white blue red. The reason here is that the piano is playing B D G (or something like that) going in a raising pitch, then drops. It's better to omit the low note at the start of the pattern rather than in the middle of the pattern.
00:53:340 (2) - overmapped, I would also recommend you not stack notes at the end of a compressed stream like this. It looks bad and creates weird spacing.
00:56:503 (4,5) - these were so obviously 1/6 to me from the music, I assumed you mapped it correctly and slider broke here. There's a few repeats later on too
01:02:991 (9) - new combo
01:14:908 (2,3) - add 2 more notes after this. Don't map a phrase if you're only going to map half of it.
01:20:989 (7,8) - end 7 1/4 earlier, move 8 up and add a circle onto the end to put the emphasis on the notes you actually hit.
01:37:367 (1) - this one is overmapped, it's just 1/4
01:34:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this feels better if it's a full stream
01:39:962 (1,2) - use long sliders for these 2, and make (3) into part of the stream. Change the previous and next ones as well.
01:46:611 (3) - I don't hear this in the music. is it something you made up or is there some emphasized note I'm just not hearing on the start of these sliders?
01:47:097 (5) - I hear this start but it should be 1/4 shorter
03:08:178 (5,6,7,8,9) - this would be infinitely better with long sliders starting on the white tick and a circle in between the 2 sliders.
03:32:908 (2) - overmapped
03:32:827 (1) - in general this section was disappointing because you didn't follow the piano. I can't make you do it, but we just got through with following the drums and and straight quarter notes/doubles. it would be a good change to follow the offbeat parts in the piano, especially with the heavy on the beat bass drum.
03:43:286 (2) - overmapped
03:53:097 (9,10,11) - this part isn't following the drums properly.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22674603:55:530 (1,2) - these should be 1/6
04:04:043 (2) - overmapped
04:08:503 (5) - these dynamics make no sense with the music. The drums don't get softer, they just cut out in the measure afterwards. Completely unneeded.
[taiko]
make sure you tell my why if you don't fix something so I can learn from it.
00:37:359 (25,26,27,28) - straight 1/4
00:55:684 (169,170) - should be on 1/6 and 1/1. Looks like you missed this every time so double check every time.
00:56:495 (175,176,177) - why no 1/6 here?
00:59:576 (200,201,202) - 1/6
01:02:170 (232,233,234) - ^
01:03:549 (250) - continue 1/6
01:25:522 (107,108,109,110) - I wouldn't change these to 1/8, but that's what they are.
02:21:954 (606,607,608) - 1/6
02:23:251 (620,621,622) - ^
02:26:332 (658,659,660) - ^
02:29:576 (697) - 2 choices here: start 1/6 to map piano or delete this note to map drums.
02:29:819 (700) - delete, overmapped.
02:39:468 (813,814,815) - 1/6
03:53:414 (1587,1588,1589) - ^
consider lowering to drain rate a little bit, as this is a very long song with over 2000 notes.
looks it's only TimingPoints orz...
I'm hearing a drum on 6, 8, and the end of the 10. Another sort of drum on the 9.
