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Nanahira - Fukkura Fuwaama Cake

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cRyo[iceeicee]
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cRyo[iceeicee]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年8月7日 at 11:04:58

Artist: Nanahira
Title: Fukkura Fuwaama Cake
Tags: vredina h3k1ru c79 poyatchio kanarin
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5870kb
Play Time: 02:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (5 stars, 597 notes)
  2. Easy (1.62 stars, 134 notes)
  3. Hard (4.94 stars, 338 notes)
  4. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1109 notes)
  5. Normal (3.99 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Nanahira - Fukkura Fuwaama Cake
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
♥♥♥♥ Nanahiraaaaa ♥♥♥♥
*****♥♥♥ h3k1 ♥♥♥****
********************

Mapset:
[Collab] - Done with ♥ h3k1ru ♥ >///<
[Hard] - Done
[Normal] - Done
[Easy] - Done
[Taiko] - Done by ♥ KanaRin ♥
Last edited by cRyo[iceeicee] , edited 51 times in total.
h3k1ru
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Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
bossandy
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2010
bossandy
Can I make a TK diff?
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
cRyo♥
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

bossandy wrote:

Can I make a TK diff?
oh sry already asked for taiko, just forgot to add it (/ω＼)

-Chata- wrote:

cRyo♥
/me blush ><
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
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cRyo[iceeicee]
Thx for *star* Laurier~ ></
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ cRyo[iceeicee] ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file ><.

[Collab]


  1. 00:36:718 - Try Add a note here.

[Hard]


  1. 00:37:634 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here.

[Normal]


  1. 01:52:301 - Add finish.

That's all ~ moe song and very nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~ ;)
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
SPOILER

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ cRyo[iceeicee] ~ :) Hi ~Kawayi Rika~ ></

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file ><. BAT/MAT said that i can keep it \:D/

[Collab]


  1. 00:36:718 - Try Add a note here. hmm, no it will break jump patern, also i didnt hear tripe note here...

[Hard]


  1. 00:37:634 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here. yep~

[Normal]



  1. 01:52:301 - Add finish. nah..its too loud for me ><

That's all ~ moe song and very nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~ ;)
Thx for mod Rika~ :)
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
hi ♥ cRyo ♥

thanks for your request~
General

fine.

Easy

looks good.

Normal

... great

Hard

Awesome!!!

Collab

excellent!!!!!!1


http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243511
><


star~
no kds plz

General
add "poyahchio" to tags. that's circle name

Normal
00:32:968 (3) - 1grid up
00:37:634 (1,2) - spacing~

Hard
00:42:301 (5) - 3grid left?

Collab
00:30:634 (6) - missing clap?
00:31:801 (1) - clap th the end
00:56:968 (3) - ^
01:17:468 (1) - clap?
01:18:635 (1,2) - switch newcombo
01:22:468 (5) - clap to the end
01:22:801 (1) - ^
02:17:134 (1,2) - switch newcombo
cRyo[iceeicee]
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Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]

Melophobia wrote:

hi ♥ cRyo ♥ Melophobiaaaaaaaaaaaa \></

thanks for your request~
General

fine.

Easy

looks good.

Normal

... great

Hard

Awesome!!!

Collab

excellent!!!!!!1


http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/243511
><


star~
no kds plz NO ==!

General
add "poyahchio" to tags. that's circle name added ><!

Normal
00:32:968 (3) - 1grid up its ok ==!
00:37:634 (1,2) - spacing~ yep ><

Hard
00:42:301 (5) - 3grid left? yeah, me baka www, missclicked ><

Collab
00:30:634 (6) - missing clap? forgot wwww
00:31:801 (1) - clap th the end dont like this clap ><
00:56:968 (3) - ^ its already there xD
----- h3k1's ♡~ part ----
01:17:468 (1) - clap?
01:18:635 (1,2) - switch newcombo
01:22:468 (5) - clap to the end
01:22:801 (1) - ^
02:17:134 (1,2) - switch newcombo
Thx for mod ~Melophobia~ ><
h3k1ru
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h3k1ru
thx for mod melo-sama~

Download: Nanahira - Fukkura Fuwaama Cake (cRyo[iceeicee]) [Collab].osu
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
HI~ cRyo~ :)

thank you for the request~ :oops:

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - tags - 「poyahchio」⇒ maybe 「poyatchio」 is correct
[Easy]
  1. 00:36:301 (3) - add finish instead to clap & whistle. I do not like putting a whistle here ;x; because sound of the whistle is a moment, but vocal is growing up to 00:37:301.
  2. 01:26:968 (3) - ^
  3. 01:28:301 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ? ( same as 00:37:634 (1) )
  4. 01:52:301 (3) - add NC ( rhythm change point )
  5. 02:10:968 - Unnecessary green line
[Normal]
  1. 01:19:968 (3) - add NC and 01:22:301 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:968 (2) - add NC ( same as 00:29:301 (1) ~)
  2. 01:28:259 - Unnecessary green line
  3. 01:39:634 (1) - remove NC ( why same combocolor o.o? I think the usage of such a color that there is not a meaning ;x;)
  4. 01:45:468 (1) - ^
  5. 01:50:301 (1) - ^
  6. 02:14:801 (1) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:968 (1) - remove NC( Placement of a different color with 01:13:634 (3). it is better unify ? )
  2. 00:25:468 (1) - ^ (01:16:134 (4) )
  3. 00:37:593 - Unnecessary green line
  4. 00:42:634 (6) - 1 grid left. nazi >< http://puu.sh/lzSj
  5. 00:52:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - make more beautiful star formation. ↓ try and when you use it, please adjust the position
    SPOILER
    180,148,52634,5,10
    250,30,52801,1,0
    259,167,52968,1,2
    171,63,53134,1,0
    303,96,53301,1,10
  6. 01:28:259 - Unnecessary green line
  7. 01:47:801 (x) - add note and 01:48:301 (1) - spinner start 01:48:134 ( just my suggestion )
[Collab]
  1. HD +1 ?
  2. 00:37:593 - Unnecessary green line
  3. 01:28:259 - ^
[SB]
  1. fine :oops:
sorry, very nazi mod ;x;

very nice map~. Star☆☆~ :oops:

Good luck~
cRyo[iceeicee]
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Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
SPOILER

kosiga wrote:

HI~ cRyo~ :) Hi~ kosigaaaaaaaa \^^/

thank you for the request~ :oops:

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - tags - 「poyahchio」⇒ maybe 「poyatchio」 is correct
fixed ><!

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:301 (3) - add finish instead to clap & whistle. I do not like putting a whistle here ;x; because sound of the whistle is a moment, but vocal is growing up to 00:37:301.
  2. 01:26:968 (3) - ^
  3. 01:28:301 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ? ( same as 00:37:634 (1) )
  4. 01:52:301 (3) - add NC ( rhythm change point )
  5. 02:10:968 - Unnecessary green line
[Normal]
  1. 01:19:968 (3) - add NC and 01:22:301 (1) - remove NC and 01:22:968 (2) - add NC ( same as 00:29:301 (1) ~)
  2. 01:28:259 - Unnecessary green line
  3. 01:39:634 (1) - remove NC ( why same combocolor o.o? I think the usage of such a color that there is not a meaning ;x;) wwwww dunno how this happened baka osu /><\
  4. 01:45:468 (1) - ^
  5. 01:50:301 (1) - ^
  6. 02:14:801 (1) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:968 (1) - remove NC( Placement of a different color with 01:13:634 (3). it is better unify ? )
  2. 00:25:468 (1) - ^ (01:16:134 (4) )
  3. 00:37:593 - Unnecessary green line
  4. 00:42:634 (6) - 1 grid left. nazi >< http://puu.sh/lzSj
  5. 00:52:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - make more beautiful star formation. ↓ try and when you use it, please adjust the position
  6. 01:28:259 - Unnecessary green line
  7. 01:47:801 (x) - add note and 01:48:301 (1) - spinner start 01:48:134 ( just my suggestion )
hmm, no dont like it ><

[Collab]
  1. HD +1 ?
  2. 00:37:593 - Unnecessary green line
  3. 01:28:259 - ^
[SB]
  1. fine :oops:
sorry, very nazi mod ;x;

very nice map~. Star☆☆~ :oops:

Good luck~
All fixed www ><!
Thx for mod and star*2 kosiga~ \:D/
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
给语言帝跪了，能别欺负吾等英语彩笔么。
General
  1. N/A
SB/Skin
  1. N/A
Collab
  1. 00:21:634 (3) - use soft sample finish and improve sound volume here
  2. 00:37:634 (1) - ^
  3. 01:12:301 (1) - ^...
    >>Overall:
    1. All fine,but too much blank at the end
Hard
  1. 01:37:301 (3,6) - Unrankable issue.3 & it's combo fire covered 6's reverse arrow
    >>Overall:
    1. :!:
Normal
  1. 01:16:634 (3,1) - the same issue,combo fire covered reverse arrow,especially it's a Normal diff
    >>Overall:
    1. :!:
Easy
  1. N/A
    >>Overall:
给跪，实在找不出什么
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
cRyo[iceeicee]
SPOILER

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
给语言帝跪了，能别欺负吾等英语彩笔么。
General
  1. N/A
SB/Skin
  1. N/A
Collab
  1. 00:21:634 (3) - use soft sample finish and improve sound volume here dont like soft finish ><
  2. 00:37:634 (1) - ^
  3. 01:12:301 (1) - ^...
    >>Overall:
    1. All fine,but too much blank at the end
Hard
  1. 01:37:301 (3,6) - Unrankable issue.3 & it's combo fire covered 6's reverse arrow hmm, i think its not 100% covered, mb change it later~
    >>Overall:
    1. :!:
Normal
  1. 01:16:634 (3,1) - the same issue,combo fire covered reverse arrow,especially it's a Normal diff yep. changed~
    >>Overall:
    1. :!:
Easy
  1. N/A
    >>Overall:
给跪，实在找不出什么
Thx for mod~
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]

Only find SB in Collab
If .osb file is empty then delete it.

[Easy] and [Hard] - nothing found

[Normal]

00:10:301 (3,4) - too difficult for Normal, change to a easier pattern

[Insane]

I tend to avoid shelter in high bpm map. Because player can only on charts by Hidden&HardRock, and shelters cause difficulty to this. If you don't like this kind of mod, just skip.
Many notes are put at center region of screen.
00:17:635 (1,4) - shelter
00:22:134 (4,2) - ^ easily miss in first play
00:22:968 (1) - nazi - 1 grid right(grid 4)
00:24:134 (1,2,3) - ^
00:24:968 (5,1) - shelter
00:26:134 (4) - nazi - 1 grid left and 1 grid up
00:25:801 (2,3) - nazi - (2): x=400,y=132 (4): x=420,y=240
00:40:801 (2,3) - not looks so good, move 00:40:801 (2) downside a little?

That's all I can find. GL~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

nice map ...

Easy

  1. 00:12:301 (2) - move down a little, too close to the previous slider
  2. 00:59:634 (2) - 2nd slider point (384,216) 3rd (484,200)
  3. 02:32:968 (2) - 2nd slider point (108,144) 3rd (44,200)
Normal

  1. no spinner
  2. great map
Hard

  1. 01:00:968 (1) - change to 2 sliders..? or 3 notes stream
  2. 01:57:134 (2) - closer spacing..
  3. 02:08:301 (1,2) - move slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/281531
Collab

  1. 00:11:468 (4) - move the last slider point 2 grids down
  2. 01:18:635 (6) - ctrl+r
  3. 01:20:801 (2) - larger spacing (312,212) maybe
that's all

Good luck~
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32
From my queue~ Sorry for the delay :(
[General]
.osb is useless,so delete it and refull-submit.
[Easy]
I think the hitsound sounds weird...I think you may use clap at each 2nd white line?
00:11:968(x) - add a note here?
01:29:301(x) - ^
[Normal]
00:36:634(x) - add a note will be better here.
00:36:968(x) - ^
00:37:301(x) - ^
[Hard]
Nothing~
[Collab]
00:31:801(1) - Remove NC?
That's all~ Very nice map. Good Luck :)
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Genkishi
Hello!

  • [General]
  1. Uncheck letterbok during breaks
  • [Easy]
  1. AR -1
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:25:634 (3) - Make the slider like here 00:22:968 (3)
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:53:301 (5) - Move this circle 1 grid to the right
  • [Collab]
  1. 00:42:801 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:42:968 (1) - New Combo
  3. 00:48:135 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 00:48:301 (1) - New combo

Very Good Map!! and Cute song! :)
Xakyrie
667 posts
Joined February 2011
Xakyrie
thanks for taking part in this queue and choosing me as your requested modder ^~^ I'll keep it simple due to language barrier.

General
  1. no kiai times in any diffs? ;w; please include them ><
  2. the N:C2 and N:C1 changes from 02:00:301 - 02:10:968 or so doesn't really fit...consider changing them or removing them.


Easy
song setup
  1. I find the slider velocity doesn't fit with the spacing... consider changing one of them ><

note arrangement
  1. 00:09:635 (1,2,1) - spacing like this looks kind of ugly, it's close to overlapping but just touching.. maybe decrease spacing throughout?
  2. 00:18:968 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:20:301 (3,4) - definitely change spacing like this.
  4. 00:26:968 (1) - slider not very pretty x.x
  5. 00:31:634 (4,1) - yup.
  6. 00:34:968 (1,2,3) - all the spacing that looks like this after this section, fix it. Like I had said, try a smaller number for spacing.
  7. 01:29:634 (2) - fix shape; move the red point up one grid point or redo xD
    SPOILER
  8. 02:16:301 (1,2) - (1) blanket (2)?
  9. 02:24:968 (2) - can you fix? D:

hitsounding
  1. 00:58:968 (1) - remove whistle?
  2. 01:17:634 (1) - something at the beginning
  3. 01:49:634 (1) - remove whistle at beginning? o.o
  4. 01:56:968 (4) - hitsounds on both ends; soft would work.
  5. 02:01:634 (2) - remove or replace finish.
  6. 02:04:301 (2) - ^
  7. 02:06:968 (2) - ^
  8. 02:09:634 (2) - ^
  9. 02:10:301 (3) - missed a really obvious clap o:

volume points
  1. 00:10:926 - unsnapped timing point silly o3o
  2. 01:00:801 - increase volume here for the remainder up until break.
  3. 02:00:259 - unsnapped again D: ?
  4. 02:05:593 - ^ ;w;
  5. 02:32:259 - ^ ._.
  6. 02:34:218 - increase volume here.
  7. 00:09:635 - 02:34:968 - increase overall volume?

new combos
  1. perfect O~O/

comments

really nice diff, though the flow of the map goes around in circles too much, I would suggest rearranging it so it doesn't go clockwise constantly.


Normal
song setup
  1. looking good.

note arrangement
  1. 00:10:301 (3,4,1) - to make this easier (it's a normal), I would suggest removing (3), moving it up to where (3) was and fixing spacing between the notes, like:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:18:968 (1,2,3) - kind of overdone for a normal... try an alternative, like:
    SPOILER
    92,120,18968,6,0,B|106:90|111:54|111:54|154:44,1,110
    244,104,19634,2,0,B|274:85|286:60,2,55,0|0|8
    264,212,20301,2,0,B|203:238|144:201,1,110
  3. 02:04:134 (3,4,5,1) - two sliders here: try using a blanketing technique.
  4. 01:51:634 (3) - maybe just two notes where the beginning and ends of the slider are?

hitsounding
  1. 01:17:634 (1) - missed a finish at the beginning o.o
  2. 01:50:301 (2) - end should be soft hitsounds too I think.
  3. 02:01:468 (3) - remove finish at the beginning.
  4. 02:04:134 (3) - ^
  5. 02:06:801 (3) - ^
  6. 02:09:468 (3) - ^

volume points
  1. same suggestion as Easy.
  2. fix those unsnaps I mentioned!
  3. 02:10:301 (4,5) - louder here so we can hear this?

new combos
  1. 01:19:968 (3) - new combo.
  2. 01:20:634 (1) - remove new combo.
  3. 01:54:968 (3) - new combo?

comments

I liked this a lot, it played well so no overall complaints. good job :3


Hard
song setup
  1. seems fine.

note arrangement
  1. 00:14:801 (1,2) - music doesn't really call for this kind of pattern, so fix it.
  2. 00:20:134 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:54:801 (3,1,2,3) - flow break. try reversing (1), (2), and (3) somehow that doesn't break flow.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:56:301 (1,2) - to flow with ^, these are flipped. 
    256,310,55301,6,0,B|256:240,1,70,10|0
    188,188,55634,2,0,B|131:228,1,70,2|0
    380,228,55968,2,0,B|324:188,1,70,10|0
    188,99,56301,6,0,B|256:68|324:100,1,140,6|10
    324,284,56968,2,0,B|256:315|188:284,1,140,6|8
  5. 01:53:301 (1,2,3) - because you don't use this anywhere else, it sticks out too much, try removing (2) and rearranging notes.
  6. 01:56:801 (1,2) - this plays sort of bad because the amount of the repeats isn't the same. try placing a note in-between and shortening the amount of repeats on (2).
  7. 02:21:468 (1,2,3) - for consistency, this isn't seen anywhere else in the map, consider removing (2) or something.
  8. 02:32:301 (1) - move this away from the spinner, it gets in the way of the spin uqu

hitsounding
  1. 00:35:634 (3,4) - remove hitsounds completely from these.
  2. the finishes during 02:00:301 - 02:10:968 like I had mentioned in the previous diffs should be removed as well.
  3. 02:13:634 (1) - remove whistle?
  4. 02:16:301 (3) - ^
  5. 02:23:968 (4) - remove hitsounds?
  6. 02:26:634 (1) - ^

volume points
  1. 00:10:926 - fix this unsnap.
  2. 02:10:134 (3,4) - increase volume here so we can feel the increase in tempo.
  3. since I found unsnaps in other diffs, be sure to check for them here too.

new combos
  1. 00:30:968 (5) - new combo?
  2. 00:31:468 (1) - remove new combo?
  3. 00:32:301 (7) - new combo.
  4. 00:33:134 (1) - remove new combo.
  5. 01:32:634 (1) - remove new combo.
  6. 01:40:634 (1) - remove new combo.
  7. 01:44:134 (1) - ^
  8. 01:44:301 (2) - new combo.
  9. 01:50:801 (4) - ^
  10. 01:51:634 (1) - remove new combo.
  11. 01:53:301 (1) - remove new combo.
  12. 01:53:634 (3) - new combo.
  13. 01:54:634 (1) - remove new combo.
  14. 01:54:968 (3) - new combo.
  15. 01:56:801 (1) - remove new combo.
  16. 02:15:968 (1) - remove new combo.
  17. 02:16:301 (3) - new combo.
  18. 02:17:468 (1) - remove new combo.
  19. 02:25:468 (4) - new combo.
  20. 02:26:634 (1) - remove new combo.
  21. 02:26:968 (3) - new combo.

comments

other than some repeat spams and inconsistent new combos, a pretty solid diff.


Collab
song setup
  1. good to me I believe.

note arrangement
  1. 00:15:301 (2,3,4) - the flow sort of breaks here ._.
  2. 00:38:801 (1) - flip this so the curve faces up.
  3. 00:40:801 (2) - just make this section a triplet.
  4. 01:46:634 (4,1) - transition is funny, please change D:

hitsounding
  1. sings great together =3=

volume points
  1. I see the unsnaps again... also, I suggest volume changes similar to those of previous suggestions I made.

new combos
  1. 00:14:801 (6) - new combo.
  2. 00:15:134 (1) - remove new combo.
  3. 00:27:968 (1) - ^
  4. 00:28:301 (3) - new combo.
  5. 00:30:801 (7) - ^
  6. 00:31:468 (1) - remove new combo.
  7. 00:31:801 (1) - ^
  8. 00:32:968 (1) - ^
  9. 00:33:634 (5) - new combo.
  10. 00:41:301 (4) - new combo.
  11. 00:41:801 (1) - remove new combo.
  12. 00:46:801 (6) - new combo.
  13. 00:46:968 (1) - remove new combo.
  14. 00:52:468 (1) - ^
  15. 00:52:635 (2) - new combo.
  16. 00:56:301 (4) - ^
  17. 00:56:801 (1) - remove new combo.
  18. 01:40:134 (1) - ^
  19. 01:40:634 (2) - new combo.
  20. 01:42:801 (1) - new combo.
  21. 01:43:301 (2) - remove new combo.
  22. 01:43:968 (1) - ^
  23. 01:44:301 (3) - new combo.
  24. 01:45:468 (1) - remove new combo.
  25. 01:45:968 (2) - new combo.
  26. 01:54:134 (1) - remove new combo.
  27. 01:54:634 (2) - new combo.
  28. 01:54:968 (1) - remove new combo.
  29. 02:14:801 (7) - new combo.
  30. 02:14:968 (1) - remove new combo.
  31. 02:26:301 (1) - ^
  32. 02:26:801 (8) - new combo.
  33. 02:27:468 (1) - remove new combo.
  34. 02:29:634 (4) - new combo.
  35. 02:30:134 (1) - remove new combo.

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fun to play, just make sure the new combos are consistent.

good luck uqu
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