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Topic Starter
Shiirn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 05, 2012 at 12:04:56 PM

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: diving
Tags: Makar8000 xcherry
BPM: 175
Filesize: 2275kb
Play Time: 01:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (4.88 stars, 283 notes)
  2. Cherry's Taiko (4.83 stars, 414 notes)
  3. Hard (4.55 stars, 127 notes)
  4. Hyper (5 stars, 216 notes)
  5. Makar's Normal (2.99 stars, 80 notes)
Download: sakuzyo - diving
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Flowing water, falling rain
Filling the skies, cleansing our pain.
Dive into the depths,
the water is pure.
Nyan
May I make a taiko diff? owo
Topic Starter
Shiirn
late: no, got it covered
Makar
Mythol
Hello Shiirn-san~

Easy
00:13:078 (3) - Horizontal flip.

Hard
00:28:336 (1) - Remove NC?
00:41:878 (2) - I don't think this should be stacked.

Another
00:19:164 (5,7) - Suggest moving these down 1 grid.
00:56:964 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this instead? Lost my combo here, felt odd. http://puu.sh/hR1o

Hyper
00:54:221 (1) - Consider moving this stack?

Sorry this mod sucks, Makar8000 forced me into this >.>
Also, don't kd.
Makar

Mythol wrote:

Easy
00:13:078 (3) - Horizontal flip. okay~

Sorry this mod sucks, Makar8000 forced me into this >.> I'm just trying to give you practice :3
Download: sakuzyo - diving (Shiirn) [Makar's Normal].osu
dkun
good map!

BIG BIG YEAH!

ircmod

SPOILER
18:30 <Shiirn> : mod4mod request
18:30 <dkun> : sup
18:30 <Shiirn> : mod4mod?
18:30 <dkun> : (that meant yes)
18:31 *Shiirn is listening to (sakuzyo - diving)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44072]
18:31 <Shiirn> : ez pz
18:31 <Shiirn> : 1:05 x 4 diffs
18:31 <dkun> : mfw when test build doesn't have "Show Thread"
18:31 <dkun> : or the direct button at least.
18:31 <Shiirn> : lol
18:33 <dkun> : MY MIND
18:33 <dkun> : WHEN LOOKING AT THIS MAP
18:33 <dkun> : MY GODODODODODDDD
18:33 <dkun> : WTF
18:33 <Shiirn> : lol the sb
18:35 <dkun> : you can't mod perfection
18:35 <dkun> : I have nothing to say without being nazi, and even then, that's nothing much
18:35 <Shiirn> : =3=
18:36 <Shiirn> : what's the nazi stuff
18:36 <dkun> : just personal things
18:36 <dkun> : nothing really
18:36 <Shiirn> : "the sb is a total mindfuck"
18:36 <dkun> : haha, no, no
18:37 <Shiirn> : k i got you
18:37 <Shiirn> : lol
18:37 <dkun> : i'm looking at another
18:37 <dkun> : 00:11:021 (6,7,8,9,10) - why not keep consistency
18:37 <Shiirn> : ?
18:37 <dkun> : 00:57:136 (3,6) - I feel like these sliders don't fit the music
18:38 <Shiirn> : oh you mean stacking there
18:38 <dkun> : very nice sb, though
18:39 <Shiirn> : updatedededed
18:39 <dkun> : and in hard..
18:39 <Shiirn> : well
18:39 <Shiirn> : not yet
18:39 <dkun> : 00:45:993 (3,4) - what the shit
18:40 <Shiirn> : o?
18:40 <dkun> : totally felt like a complete mindfuck for me when I first looked at it
18:40 <dkun> : didn't expect that
18:40 <Shiirn> : oh, the slider stack things
18:40 <dkun> : also, I think you should end the ending spinner a 1/4ths early?
18:41 <Shiirn> : yep
18:41 <dkun> : and makar for a normal
18:41 <dkun> : nice choice
18:41 <dkun> : looks super clean
18:41 <Shiirn> : cherry's making a taiko
18:41 <Shiirn> : so jah
18:41 <dkun> : oh?
18:41 <dkun> : ic
18:42 <Shiirn> : but dont need to have taiko to get standard mods
18:42 <Shiirn> : sooo
18:42 <dkun> : holy shit these slider shapes in normal
18:42 <dkun> : hahah
18:42 <Shiirn> : over-the-top imo
18:42 <Shiirn> : but cool
18:42 <dkun> : very
18:42 <dkun> : but yeah, that's pretty much it
18:42 <Shiirn> : i love sakuzyo
18:42 <Shiirn> : too bad he doesnt do much
18:42 <Shiirn> : and most of his stuff is unmappable due to awkward beats
18:42 <dkun> : also, star rating troll
18:42 <dkun> : hyper w/ another
18:43 <Shiirn> : hm?
18:43 <dkun> : lawllll
18:43 <Shiirn> : lol yeh
18:43 <Shiirn> : cuz another is streamy as fuck
18:43 <Shiirn> : PAR FOR COURSE FOR SHIIRN
18:43 <dkun> : ahah
Saten
derp star rating ftw


I seriously thought it was a video

General
  1. Add preview time?
  2. Makar8000 to tags
Edit: I see, this is WIP

Another
00:30:907 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:33:650 (1) - ^
00:41:878 (1) - finish

Hyper
AR8 please? Much smoother imo
00:42:221 - Add something here? Feels kinda empty here
01:05:193 (1) - Finish? just like [Another]

Hard
00:28:336 (2) - Remove NC?
00:31:250 (2) - ^

Makar's Normal
01:04:164 (1) - Finish


Not much to poke on, nice~
Makar

Saten-san wrote:

Makar's Normal
01:04:164 (1) - Finish
@Shiirn: Add finish+whistle, remove clap please so it matches another :3
ziin
[SB]
well one, you fucked up the osb with some moves due to crappy sbe.

Second, the way my loop works, I had varying rotations at 4 seconds and 6 seconds. It just so happens the song is almost exactly 72 seconds, so the loop only works for 72 seconds, which means the bg just cuts out at the end. The key here is to find the perfect number for where the song truly ends. Let's call it 01:10:100 - which is 70100 ms. Well you have a 3 s lead in, so the song is 73100 ms long. If you can take off that extra 1100 ms leadin and use 1900 ms leadin, that should fix it. Change the -3000 in the storyboard to -1900, and change the final fade out time for the BG to be at 70100. Alternatively guess and check for the right lead in/song end time.

If you need to keep the hugely long lead in, I'm going to have to redo some stuff on the SB or something.

[hyper]
00:03:136 (4,1) - this is different from everything else, and of course I missed the anti-jump on first play through.
00:04:850 (1,2) - separate these more
00:05:878 (6) - spacing here makes it really tough to read coupled with the low AR. I go for (7) rather than (6) because (7) has equal spacing.
01:06:907 (1) - just blah

[another]
00:24:050 (1,2,3,4) - these are just tedious to read. I found it easier with the fake 4th note stacked and hidden away.
01:06:907 (1) - just blah

[hard]
00:45:993 (3) - inconsistent stack when compared later. it could be a little closer, and the other could be a little further away IMO.
Topic Starter
Shiirn
stuff done
Weez
Baka General
- No preview time?
- Set all the audio lead-in's the same for each diff. Another is at 3000 while the others are at 1900, all at 2000 should be fine
- Where the tags at D:

Baka Makar's Normal
00:44:621 (1) - Seriosuly feel you can do something else here then a long slider. Be creative here.
00:55:593 (1) - ^same thing

Baka Hard
00:41:364 (1,2) - Shouldn't be stacked. With all the 1/4 stacks this one just feels weird.
00:48:736 (3,4) - Stack properly. No idea if that was on propose but stacking them works better
00:59:708 (3,4) - ^same

Baka Another
- OK with me...baka

Baka hyper
00:43:936 (3,4,1) - It's better if you continue with what you were doing with 1 and 2 so stack the head of 4 to the tail of 3 (simple hit ctrl+R on 4...) Also good if you leave the following combo out of the whole stack. It's the start of kiai time so put some emphasis on it.

That is all...Nice map BAKA Shiirn!
Roddie
General
  1. For some reason, the thumbnail image for this map in the site isn't showing. Full submit this map again and that should fix it.
Makar's Normal
  1. 00:33:993- It would be best to add a new combo here. I have seen a couple of notes that have new combos after the note containing a finish.
  2. 00:35:021-Consider removing a new combo here.
  3. 00:36:736-The same reason I explained on 00:33:993.
Hard
  1. 00:11:707 (1)-Consider adding a finish here.
Cherry's Taiko
  1. 00:12:221 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5)-I suggest using a ddkdk formation? This sounds kind of bland without any hitsounds. :/
  2. 00:35:536 (2)-This note is not snapped on the time-line properly. Fix that.
Hyper
  1. 00:11:707 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning.
  2. 00:32:450-Perhaps it would be best to put a new combo here.
Another
  1. 01:06:907 (1)-This note after spinner is missing a new combo. Please fix that.
Here's a star for leaving an impression on me~
Makar

Roddie wrote:

Makar's Normal
  1. 00:33:993- It would be best to add a new combo here. I have seen a couple of notes that have new combos after the note containing a finish.
  2. 00:35:021-Consider removing a new combo here.
  3. 00:36:736-The same reason I explained oh 00:33:993.
Apply these for me Shiirn, thanks.
Topic Starter
Shiirn
done
Cristian
Okay, #modreqs as m4m
Well, i am only gona type here what need to mod, all the others are really cool

  • General
  1. Disable Countdown
  2. Disable letterbox
  3. 01:06:564 - Volume to 70%?, put it that on 100% too

    • Just one thing in the taiko
    _
  4. 00:55:507 - in the taiko diff don't delete that kai
  • Another
  1. 00:43:593 (6) - this slider look's ulgy
  2. 00:45:821 (1) - ^
  3. 01:06:907 (1) - Why is a note here?, in hyper too
Kyshiro
Makar's Normal:
00:25:764 (1) - Might want to give this one a little more curve and do this: http://puu.sh/kLyv
00:28:164 (1,2,3,4) - Move these a bit if you added the last one
Mother of god. Those long sliders are awesome.

Hard:
AR+1 or 2? o-o
00:15:821 (1,2,3) - Replace this with a combo like 00:10:336 (1,2,3)? (Sounds better imo)
00:45:307 (2) - Put this at the same height as (1)?
00:56:279 (2) - What's with this random whistle over here o-o


Another:
00:13:678 (3,4) - A bit to the right?
01:01:936 (5,6,7) - Replace these 3 notes with 2 notes(Jumps?)

Hyper:
00:41:021 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/kLO4 Goes along better with the song
00:44:621 (1) - Put this at the begin of 00:44:278 (4)?
01:04:336 (6) - http://puu.sh/kLQp (Rotated with +50 angle)

That's all I could find D: Hope it's usefull

~Kyshiro
Mystyk
Here's my mod:
SPOILER
Makar's Normal:
00:44:621 (1) - I think this slider is too long (in time), you should add more sliders and hit circles instead
00:55:593 (1) - ^

Hard:

In general I think that this difficult was too easy for Hard, I would make it a bit faster, more hit circles, or sliders.

00:08:964 (1) - I think this should be placed a bit further from 00:08:621 (3)
00:26:450 - add hit circle
00:26:621 (4) - remove hit circle
00:27:650 (6) - shorten this slider so that it lasts until 00:27:821
00:29:021 (3) - ^ until 00:29:193
00:30:221 - add hit circle
00:30:564 - ^
00:31:936 - add hit circle
00:32:107 (4) - remove hit circle
00:33:307 (3) - replace this so that it starts here 00:33:136
00:33:650 - add hit circle
00:35:878 - ^
00:37:250 - ^
00:37:936 (6) - shorten this repeat slider like this:

00:38:621 - add hit circle
00:40:164 - ^
00:40:336 (5) - remove hit circle
00:40:507 - add repeat slider that lasts until 00:40:850 + add new combo
00:41:021 - add hit circle
00:41:536 - ^
00:41:364 (1) - remove new combo
00:41:878 (2) - add new combo (if you add the repeat slider and hit circles and whatever of course but you'll see I guess)
but if you don't add anything at this place (2) is too close to (1), so you shuold put it further from it I guess)
00:42:221 - add hit circle

Another:
00:29:364 (6) - I think this should be put earlier, here 00:29:193
00:29:707 (1) - this should be put further from (6)
00:39:136 (1) - I think it would be nicer if it could be seen fully, because now (5) is kinda hiding it
00:40:336 (4) - ^
00:40:507 (1) - ^

Hyper:
00:19:936 (1) - the placement doesn't look good here (1 is kinda under 5) (stacking?)
00:29:364 (5) - this part is a bit slow? maybe it's strange because you started mapping to another sound
00:51:136 (4) - the placement is strange here (stacking?)
00:54:221 (1) - maybe you should put this further from (3)
00:59:707 (1) - maybe you should put this somewhere else to make it look better
01:03:478 (4) - add hit circle
01:03:650 (5) - remove hit circle
La Cataline
i love water

normal;
00:18:564 (1,2) - doesnt look good imo, ctrl r or something?
00:48:736 (3,4) - D:
00:54:221 (1,1,2) - uglyyy
another;
00:33:650 (1) - http://puu.sh/kM0q wat?
00:50:793 (3,4) - D;
00:52:507 (8,1) - stack properly?
01:02:793 (2,3,4) - claps? where?
01:04:850 (3) - ^

also
Topic Starter
Shiirn
Kurisuchianu

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Okay, #modreqs as m4m
Well, i am only gona type here what need to mod, all the others are really cool

  • General
  1. Disable Countdown
  2. Disable letterbox
  3. 01:06:564 - Volume to 70%?, put it that on 100% too

    • Just one thing in the taiko
    _
  4. 00:55:507 - in the taiko diff don't delete that kai
  • Another
  1. 00:43:593 (6) - this slider look's ulgy
  2. 00:45:821 (1) - ^
  3. 01:06:907 (1) - Why is a note here?, in hyper too
Volume staying. Sliders fixed. disabled stuff disabled. Note after spinner is for forced finish.
Kyshiro

Kyshiro wrote:

Hard:
AR+1 or 2? o-o +1
00:15:821 (1,2,3) - Replace this with a combo like 00:10:336 (1,2,3)? (Sounds better imo)[color=#FF00000]No, they're two very different rhythms.[/color]
00:45:307 (2) - Put this at the same height as (1)? o
00:56:279 (2) - What's with this random whistle over here o-o left over from start of kiai, removed


Another:
00:13:678 (3,4) - A bit to the right? ok
01:01:936 (5,6,7) - Replace these 3 notes with 2 notes(Jumps?) mmm okay, works well.

Hyper:
00:41:021 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/kLO4 Goes along better with the song yep
00:44:621 (1) - Put this at the begin of 00:44:278 (4)? like it the way it is
01:04:336 (6) - http://puu.sh/kLQp (Rotated with +50 angle) did my own thing here

That's all I could find D: Hope it's usefull

~Kyshiro
MystykAMV

MystykAMV wrote:

Here's my mod:

Another:
00:29:364 (6) - I think this should be put earlier, here 00:29:193
00:29:707 (1) - this should be put further from (6)
00:39:136 (1) - I think it would be nicer if it could be seen fully, because now (5) is kinda hiding it
00:40:336 (4) - ^
00:40:507 (1) - ^

Hyper:
00:19:936 (1) - the placement doesn't look good here (1 is kinda under 5) (stacking?)
00:29:364 (5) - this part is a bit slow? maybe it's strange because you started mapping to another sound
00:51:136 (4) - the placement is strange here (stacking?)
00:54:221 (1) - maybe you should put this further from (3)
00:59:707 (1) - maybe you should put this somewhere else to make it look better
01:03:478 (4) - add hit circle
01:03:650 (5) - remove hit circle
Generalized response: I like Hard at the difficulty it's at, it's less of a hard and more of a go-between between normal and Hyper. Normal is a bit easy, yes, but it's harder than an easy as well. The note placements in the other diffs are also fine to me; so no changes there. I did correct some of the smaller stuff you suggested.
LaCataline

La Cataline wrote:

i love water

normal;
00:18:564 (1,2) - doesnt look good imo, ctrl r or something?
00:48:736 (3,4) - D:
00:54:221 (1,1,2) - uglyyy
another;
00:33:650 (1) - http://puu.sh/kM0q wat?
00:50:793 (3,4) - D;
00:52:507 (8,1) - stack properly?
01:02:793 (2,3,4) - claps? where?
01:04:850 (3) - ^

also
All done.
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