1. Hard (4.81 stars, 324 notes)
2. Ikusa! (4.95 stars, 447 notes)
3. Normal (2.84 stars, 129 notes)

JauiPlaY wrote:

HI
只听预览就能知道你用了啥音效... OAO 我决定换一套音效再传一张这图

[General]
osb杀掉
绿色的slider border跟红色配起来很那啥 真不如白的恩 ok
Source空着没问题么 我不知道这歌该写o2jam还是BMS还是什么其他的 于是等人mod

[Hard]
00:08:891 (5,6) - 喂 wa
00:32:270 (8,9) - 换成两个slider的末尾加whistle? 这类改动都会造成clap听的有问题吧 我觉得 clap和whistle走的是互补的感觉
00:35:581 (1,2,3,4) - 换成(1)(2)(4)加whistle?
00:38:891 (8,9) - 换成两个slider的末尾加whistle?
00:56:063 (6) - 有点想加whistle 我也是
01:47:167 (2) - 头尾反转下会好玩点 yess
02:01:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whistle加(2)(5)(8)? 也行 但我还是想做whistle多点

[Ikusa!]
00:08:787 (4,5,6,7) - 叠一起好点 那样战不痛快
00:35:684 (2) - Whistle? 那样加的太多了生硬
00:45:512 (1,2) - (1)的尾和(2)的头加whistle? 还是算了
00:59:167 (5) - 头whistle 我妄图造就一种抑扬顿挫的感觉 以某种节奏为单位
01:02:477 (4) - ^
01:06:305 (T) - 无用绿线 TvT
01:04:960 (2) - 头尾反转下会好玩点 yes
01:25:236 (5) - 尾whistle?
01:35:167 (6) - Nc? ok
01:58:753 (5) - 去clap yes

后面感觉map起来会挺不错的 是不是浪费了点 最近有点供过于求
Have my star~

Laurier wrote:

sorry late>.<

Muya wrote:

[General]
Disable countdown? yes

[Ikusa!]
00:29:994 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -　http://puu.sh/l0Pf http://puu.sh/l0Pi http://puu.sh/l0Pj bad looks in play mode. some down Stack Leniency? (maybe -1) -2
00:33:305 - ^
01:39:512 - ^
01:46:132 - ^

other diff are fine

have a some silence note.
it's rankable? I'm not sure I wonder this too. I didn't use silent circle on my diffs(approval), but Laurier did. maybe there need some negotiation

cool Samurai song

SliderBorder : 193,193,193

1. 00:04:960 (2) - I see no harm to put clap here, as it fits the background drums as well. This applies for next parts like this
2. 00:16:546 (1) - (optional) imo, slider like this plays better with your previous (4) :
   
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3. 00:30:615 (2) - Minor stuff, but move one grid rigt to make it encircled by (1) better
4. 00:31:443 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part's pattern here looks quite random, actually it plays fine but I prefer to create an arc here:
   
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5. 00:45:512 (3) - Whistle fits a lot in this part (2/1 before your long sliders)! This suggestion applies for next parts like this
6. 00:45:925 (4) - Hmm, move this two grids left so (3,4) will surround (2) better? (it also gives a better angle with your next (1))
7. 00:47:581 (2,3) - Eh... Is it intentional to put (3) slightly lower than (2)? (if you want to keep this positioning, I think it's better to curve (3) upward a bit)
8. 00:54:201 (2) - (optional) Try this slider shape? Looks less forced here imo:
   
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9. 01:04:132 (2,3,4) - Move these three to the far right of the screen? Plays better imo rather than forcing in the center
10. 01:24:408 (3,4,5) - I think it's better to move (4) more to the left so (3) and (5) could get an equal angle
11. 01:35:581 (2) - I highly recommend to use a N:C1 whistle with ~20% volume or so, plays great here :3
12. 01:41:787 (4,1) - (optional) It would be fancy here to let (1) encircle (4) and vice-versa~
    
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13. 01:53:374 (2) - Minor stuff, but move this one grid down to make it stand perfectly beside (1)
14. 01:53:581 (3,4,1,2) - I think you're sticking too much to your previous hitsound rhythm here, there's a lot of good places to put more whistles here (example: (4)'s end and (1)'s start + end)
15. 01:57:098 (x) - Add note with whistle here as well? I can hear a whistle from the song here

1. 00:09:925 (1) - Did you forgot to put clap on slider's end here, or is it intentional? (clap on slider's end here sounds great~)
2. 00:12:408 (4) - Place it more to the lower-left? Also, (optional) I think curving this a bit would build up some flow here:
   
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3. 00:15:718 (5) - I highly recommend to start your gradual volume increase here
4. 00:22:339 (1) - The rhythm here doesn't change compared to 00:19:029 (1,2,3), so I think it's better to keep the clap on slider's end instead of whistle
5. 00:28:960 (1,2,3,4) - Actually, rather than sparse rhythm like this, I was expecting for a double repeating 1/3 slider (: (00:28:960 and 00:29:374, with claps on)
6. 00:35:167 (7,1) - (optional) Stack these two to your previous (2,3)? It looks better imo (:
7. 00:42:926 (2) - Hmm, perhaps add clap here as well? It can build more power in this part imo
8. 00:49:236 (11) - Because your previous (10) has clap on it, I think it's best to put clap here as well (put together with your whistle won't sound bad imo)
9. 00:55:443 (5) - (optional) I think it's better to arrange like this (I like how this will create a jump with your next (6), plus your approach rate here is fast enough, so it won't cluster in play mode)
   
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10. 00:57:512 (5) - Clap here instead of whistle? (three whistles in a row sounds abrupt imo. Plus, I like your rhythm in 01:02:270 (4), so why not apply it here as well ><)
11. 01:04:753 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think it's better if you create a wider angle here - the main point I want to emphasize here is to put (4) somewhat more to the left compared to (3), it flows better imo:
    
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12. 01:22:753 (1) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid down to keep the symmetry here
13. 01:25:236 (5,6,7) - I highly recommend to put whistle only on (5)'s end and (7), as it fits your next rhythm a lot
14. 01:35:581 (2) - Same as [Normal] here
15. 01:41:581 (2,3,4) - There's something not perfectly stacked here (maybe (4)), barely noticeable though
16. 01:47:581 (3) - Is it intentional to reduce the spacing here (compared to 01:45:925 (1,2,3,4))? Plays fine though
17. 01:59:167 (1) - (optional) Curve this slider? Flows better with your (7) compared with a plain straight slider imo:
    
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1. 00:08:787 (4,5,6) - Actually I prefer to use a repeating slider as you did on [Hard diff], because in play mode (4) will touch (7) due to stacking's nature
2. 00:09:925 (1), 00:12:408 (4), 00:15:718 (5),00:22:339 (1) - Same as [Hard] here, as they're copy-pasted (:
3. 00:28:236 (2) - Hmm yes, this is where the silence could be deceiving, it's best to put whistle here as if silenced, it will sound like there's only one circle here
4. 00:28:443 (3,4) - If you do ^, switch these two's hitsound (simply selecting both and press CTRL+R will do)
5. 00:29:374 (8,9,10,11,12) - (optional) This plays fancier imo:
   
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6. 00:35:684 (2) - Again, the silence could be deceiving here (just adding whistle will do good here)
7. 00:37:029 (3,4,5) - As they're actually 1/6 here, how about altering them into a 1/6 slider? (stack the slider's end to your next (1) if you do this)
8. 00:45:512 (1,2) - (optional) Perhaps add whistle on both slider's end, and make (2) end in 00:46:132? Sounds better imo
9. 00:52:546 (4) - One grid lv4 down and right? Also, it's quite obvious this silder isn't really symmetrical
10. 00:54:615 (1,2) - (optional) Add a slight curve on these two? Plays better with your next (3) imo:
    
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11. 01:03:098 (2) - Hmm, why not repeating 1/2 slider instead? I think a whistle on 01:03:305 is required here
12. 01:22:960 (2) - I think the whistle is somewhat overused here, removing the whistle here can emphasize your next two whistles on (3) and (5)
13. 01:32:269 (5) - (optional) Why not stack to (1) instead? I like how there will be a delay on these two
14. 01:35:167 (1) - Also here, stack to (5), or do manual stacking like this? (I like how it will look on autoplay mode (: )
    
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15. 01:41:581 (2) - I highly recommend to place the whistle here instead of (3), as you don't need a whistle that fast after your previous one (1/1 is better)
16. 02:02:063 (4,5,6,7,8) - Why do you make this diff's ending easier than [Hard] orz >< (just curious)

arien666 wrote:

Something is fine
and something is good



but I wonder why only mapped 80% on this good song ;___;
Although fitting limit of queue orz...







meow :3

arien666 wrote:

Well then... I don't know either way orz



meow :3
needs some thing imo from next BAT about cutting mp3...