I want that massage =P
[General]
- Kiai time, it's odd to have kiai time for the build up and then... nothing. If you want to keep the current kiai time maybe add kiai time at 02:47:987 - and 03:02:987 - or maybe just remove it all together. I think the song would be fine without kiai time.
[Facil]
- AR +1
00:18:924 (1) - New combo
00:23:143 (3) - Remove all whistle, so noisy for too long. Just clap the start instead?
00:38:143 (4) - ^
00:47:987 (1,2) - I think it would be better if you kept it 1/1 here. The overlapping spacing doesn't look great and it's the only section in the map that uses it.
00:51:737 (1,2) - ^
01:16:112 (1,2) - 2 sliders and a circle would make more sense here or just circles. Right now you expect 01:16:112 (1) - to have 1 more return.
02:01:580 (2) - Adding finish sounds good here.
01:59:237 (2) - Not a fan of this whistle, even with reduced volume it sounds bad imo.
02:02:987 (1,2) - Think it would be better as 1/1, same thing I said about 00:47:987 (1,2) -
02:06:737 (1,2) - ^
02:32:049 (4) - Move this? It's in an awkward position after 02:31:112 (3) - maybe put it in the same place as 02:30:174 (2) - but you'd have to rearrange stuff.
03:01:580 (2) - Why stack? Plays better if you move it. Also soft finish instead of clap like 03:16:112 (1,2) -
[Mediu]
00:43:768 (1) - Remove new combo
00:44:237 (2) - New combo here
00:51:033 - Needs a note since you're following the vocal, like 00:54:783 (6,7) -
00:54:783 (6,7) - Stack? Looks ugly right now.
01:02:987 (1) - New combo
01:17:518 (1) - Remove new combo
01:17:518 (1,2) - Make this part of the 01:15:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern, make a heptagon or something.
02:01:112 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:44:705 (2) - Don't stack this, it'll look better if you move it away and make a pattern with 02:44:705 (2,3,4,5) -
[Dificil]
00:21:737 (5) - New combo here since it's the start of new vocal?
00:22:205 (1) - Remove new combo if you do ^
00:47:987 (1,2) - The jump here is not great. Compared to the rest of the section it makes no sense (like why no jump at 00:52:440 (2) - for example)
01:01:112 (1) - New combo
01:59:237 (1) - Too noisy imo, remove whistle?
02:17:987 (1,2) - Jump isn't that good, also why no jump at 02:02:987 (1,2) - makes no sense.
02:32:987 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Didn't like this, sorry! With AR7 the compressed spacing and jumps are terrible to read and ruins the flow. Can you think of something better?
02:45:057 - Note? I know you probably want to keep your pattern but it's a heavy beat and odd to have a gap in the stream.
02:51:737 (1) - This jump makes me sad. Vertical flip 02:51:737 (1,2,3) - and it makes it much better.
03:10:487 (1) - Noisy, remove whistle?
03:12:596 (2) - Whistle the end sounds good
03:14:471 (2) - ^
03:25:487 (1) - Remove whistle?
03:27:596 (2) - Whistle end?
And that's it, a few more mods couldn't hurt, feel free to call me back after. Star.