1. 0108 (5 stars, 792 notes)
2. Easy (1.31 stars, 147 notes)
3. Hard (4.99 stars, 465 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 726 notes)
5. Normal (3.46 stars, 228 notes)

1. 00:34:244 (4) - ..?? why 3/2
2. 00:42:888 (1) - move 1 grid left ..?
3. 00:52:549 (1,2) - 2nd slider start at 00:53:058 ..? consistent with later pattern

1. 00:33:990 (6) - I think ctrl+r plays better...
2. 00:36:024 (7,8) - change to slider going up or single note? I think it's better to play than stacking
3. 00:37:930 (2) - the place of the reverse arrow makes it a little hard to react to this o.o maybe move end to (364,249)
4. 00:51:532 (3,4,5,6) - bigger spacing..?
5. 01:26:744 (2,3,4) - remove..?
6. 01:49:371 (3) - ^

1. 00:37:803 (3,4) - I think a single slider is better because I find easy to slider combo break here ...
2. 00:56:235 (3,4,5) - follow drop is a little hard to read as hard diff imo, just follow vocal and it's easier to hit?
3. 01:51:024 (3,4) - ^^^
4. 02:11:744 (4,5,6,7) - hard to read imo o.o plz space
5. 03:11:235 (8) - remove..? o.o

1. The soft hitsounds at the end of the map seem too quiet. I suggest raising the volume to about 70%.
2. There's a big gap between your normal and hard difficulties.

1. In the .osu file, it says that the slider multiplier is 0.400000005960464. Change that to 0.4.
2. +1 HP drain. I believe that 1 is much too low for any easy difficulty.
3. 00:17:464 (4) - I was expecting this to be one tick earlier. It makes sense to put it there due to being obvious in the rhythm of the song. Don't forget to extend the slider by one tick if you do this!
4. 00:21:532 (4) - ^
5. 00:25:473 (4) - ^ This could be the same case as before, but it would be okay if you kept this on the white tick.
6. 01:16:447 (1) - A whistle should be on the beginning of this slider to keep consistency with your whistle pattern.
7. 01:47:973 (1,2) - A better looking arrangement would be for these sliders to blanket each other like this.
8. 02:52:041 (4) - A finish should be on the end of this slider due to it being in the music and being on the heavy beat.

1. 00:18:481 (1) - A whistle should be on the end of this slider for consistency.
2. 00:21:024 (2) - A whistle should be on the beginning of this slider.
3. 00:25:091 (2) - ^
4. 00:31:702 (3) - You need to add a new combo to this note due to an unrankable NC glitch.
5. 00:51:024 (4,5) - Make these blanket eachother. It looks pretty nice on top of being intuitive.
6. 01:25:600 (4) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider. It's in the music.
7. 02:00:176 (1) - ^
8. 02:10:346 (1) - ^ (Optional, you did this in some of the other difficulties.)
9. 02:11:363 (2) - Finish on the end of this slider.

1. 00:14:668 (4) - You really should add a NC here.
2. 01:44:159 (1) - You need to add a new combo to this note due to an unrankable NC glitch.
3. 01:47:973 (1) - You should add a finish to the beginning of this slider for consistency.

1. OD 8 please. Challenging!
2. 00:48:990 (1) - Finish on the beginning of this slider for consistency.

Jacob wrote:

In the .osu file, it says that the slider multiplier is 0.400000005960464. Change that to 0.4.