1. Another (5 stars, 466 notes)
2. Extra (5 stars, 475 notes)
3. Hyper (4.9 stars, 267 notes)
4. Normal (3.01 stars, 112 notes)

CMP wrote:

Can I possible to make CTB difficulty?

1. 00:04:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I wish you have tried to map that strange horn sound since it is primary sound at this part.
2. 00:25:537 (3) - If you listen at slowmotion, you can hear that music pitch is decreasing at this point. But you end reverse slider one note earlier, and it gives a feeling that something must change in the music at (2) circle, but it does later. Due to that offbeat, repeat slider confuses and doesn't represent the music fully. What I suggest to do: just remove it and place circles instead. And place a 1/4 slider with one repeat arrow at this position (00:25:537) to underline the pitchdown!
3. 00:31:272 (5) - Move it a bit to the left to fix little spacing problem.
4. 00:34:095 (8,9,1) - Please make it 0.7x like the rest.
5. 00:37:625 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Strange hitsounds :c
6. 00:51:919 (1) - You actually don't need 5-beat slider here, the sound is 3-beat slider and a beat after that. You've mapped it like that: http://puu.sh/MMgk , while it must be like that: http://puu.sh/MMjU (sorry for the poor quality)
7. 00:55:389 (1) - This slider must start at 00:55:360, 1/4
8. 01:05:213 (3,4) - Please make this two to construct better encircling.
9. 01:06:037 (2) - You've undermapped this, I can hear plenty of piano sounds, please map them.
10. 01:08:154 (1,2,3,4) - Why speedup here? I can't see any reason for it.
11. 01:14:507 (7) - If you invert the middle point to the top, it would look much better and fit the zig-zag thing before it: http://puu.sh/MMpJ
12. 01:16:625 (1,2) - Again, why speedup?
13. 01:20:419 (2) - This is pretty confusing, man, I thought that it's 1/6 or something, please use usual SV!
14. 01:38:154 (3,4) - This rhythm is pretty bad hear. Listen to the sound at 01:38:154 − it's bass. Listen to the sounds at 01:38:272 - 01:38:742 − they're claps. So first note does not belong to the slider imo. You must separate the bass and claps to better fir the music! For example, like that: http://puu.sh/MMt8 (cursor is at 01:37:801)
15. 01:39:448 (2) - Move it a bit farther from previous slider, looks too clustered. Also you might delete the next note and add a repeat to this slider for better readability and better sounding. Of course, you will have to move 01:39:095 (1,2) closer to 01:40:037 (3) (this is also easy to do).
16. 01:42:742 (1) - I wish you could emphasize the sound at 01:43:448 by adding one repeat to this slider (moving spinner a bit later). Cause spinner start has no sound and everything.. But we have to place note on 01:43:448 anyway. At least that looks better.

1. 00:04:360 (4,1) - Ok, you have many places like that, when 1/4-spaced sliders are too far from each other. You might let them go closer for better readability, like you did here: 00:01:801 (1,2), or here: 00:02:860 (1,2) (even if spacing is just visually close).
2. 00:05:684 (1,2) - The same. I know that it starts at the other's slider start, but that's not a reason to lack readability here.
3. 00:06:919 (3,4,1) - Again, distance is so fucking different so I can't tell if that's 1/4 or 1/2. Please make distances equal.
4. 00:07:448 (1,2) - Again, too far... It's almost similar with the next 1/2 distance.
5. 00:08:507 (1,2) - Ok, I can't point every such place, so just look throught the diff and look what you can do.
6. 00:15:037 (4,5) - This counts too!
7. 00:22:095 (3,4) - Not parallel :V
8. 00:51:919 (1) - The same thing as in Another.
9. 00:55:360 (1) - The same thing as in Another.
10. 01:06:037 (2) - Saaame as in Another.
11. 01:12:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ok, I was talking about distances, but this is ridiculous. Why do you separate stream after a slider? Probably because slider ends on 1/6, but why are you NOT separating it here: 01:15:213 (1,2,3,4), at the exact same place?
12. 01:20:419 (4) - Because of some strange reasons, slowdown here is not so confusing as in Another. Dunno why.
13. 01:38:154 (3) - The same thing as in Another. You need to separate clap from bass sound, it's like a start of a new measure, sounds much better separated.

grumd wrote:

Ok lemme try.

Another

— Overall
This is pretty nice and neat diff as always. Not too much to say actually.

— Mapping

1. 00:04:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I wish you have tried to map that strange horn sound since it is primary sound at this part. It snaps to 1/8. Mapping it would be suicide.
2. 00:25:537 (3) - If you listen at slowmotion, you can hear that music pitch is decreasing at this point. But you end reverse slider one note earlier, and it gives a feeling that something must change in the music at (2) circle, but it does later. Due to that offbeat, repeat slider confuses and doesn't represent the music fully. What I suggest to do: just remove it and place circles instead. And place a 1/4 slider with one repeat arrow at this position (00:25:537) to underline the pitchdown! Both work here, but I'd rather keep the stream shorter. Kicksliders are like resting spots.
3. 00:31:272 (5) - Move it a bit to the left to fix little spacing problem. Moved the 3 to the left
4. 00:34:095 (8,9,1) - Please make it 0.7x like the rest. No, the stream is pointing in a different direction than the player is moving. If I spaced it out properly it would be painful to play. This allows the player to focus on getting to the objects.
5. 00:37:625 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Strange hitsounds :c But they are cool
6. 00:51:919 (1) - You actually don't need 5-beat slider here, the sound is 3-beat slider and a beat after that. You've mapped it like that: http://puu.sh/MMgk , while it must be like that: http://puu.sh/MMjU (sorry for the poor quality) If I were to properly map to that drum, it would be a pain to play. Also, the fourth beat of the repeat does land on the piano.
7. 00:55:389 (1) - This slider must start at 00:55:360, 1/4 Actually if I did that the end would be snapped wrong. Gotta pick one or the other, and I picked 1/6 snapping because the start matches that finish noise.
8. 01:05:213 (3,4) - Please make this two to construct better encircling. Sure
9. 01:06:037 (2) - You've undermapped this, I can hear plenty of piano sounds, please map them. Nooo that's too much
10. 01:08:154 (1,2,3,4) - Why speedup here? I can't see any reason for it. Readability and it doesn't change gameplay. It did this before.
11. 01:14:507 (7) - If you invert the middle point to the top, it would look much better and fit the zig-zag thing before it: http://puu.sh/MMpJ Nah
12. 01:16:625 (1,2) - Again, why speedup? Readability
13. 01:20:419 (2) - This is pretty confusing, man, I thought that it's 1/6 or something, please use usual SV! That ends up not actually changing gameplay. I don't think it's worth changing.
14. 01:38:154 (3,4) - This rhythm is pretty bad hear. Listen to the sound at 01:38:154 − it's bass. Listen to the sounds at 01:38:272 - 01:38:742 − they're claps. So first note does not belong to the slider imo. You must separate the bass and claps to better fir the music! For example, like that: http://puu.sh/MMt8 (cursor is at 01:37:801) I think either one would work, but I prefer what I originally had
15. 01:39:448 (2) - Move it a bit farther from previous slider, looks too clustered. Also you might delete the next note and add a repeat to this slider for better readability and better sounding. Of course, you will have to move 01:39:095 (1,2) closer to 01:40:037 (3) (this is also easy to do). That's not really cluttered
16. 01:42:742 (1) - I wish you could emphasize the sound at 01:43:448 by adding one repeat to this slider (moving spinner a bit later). Cause spinner start has no sound and everything.. But we have to place note on 01:43:448 anyway. At least that looks better. I don't want to have a circle there, I want to keep that beat empty.

Extra

— Overall
I liked this less, cause it's too random and hard, but anyway.. Nice one.

— Mapping

1. 00:04:360 (4,1) - Ok, you have many places like that, when 1/4-spaced sliders are too far from each other. You might let them go closer for better readability, like you did here: 00:01:801 (1,2), or here: 00:02:860 (1,2) (even if spacing is just visually close). Actually the spacing is very important in the map and designed to be very specific. Spacing after sliders, if it's 1/4 it's either proper spacing or somewhat close by. If it's 1/2, then it must be extremely far away to make sure the player doesn't try to jump it. For circles, anything after them follows traditional spacing. While the spacing looks stupid, it's designed to make the map easy to read.
2. 00:05:684 (1,2) - The same. I know that it starts at the other's slider start, but that's not a reason to lack readability here. Same as above
3. 00:06:919 (3,4,1) - Again, distance is so fucking different so I can't tell if that's 1/4 or 1/2. Please make distances equal. Same as above
4. 00:07:448 (1,2) - Again, too far... It's almost similar with the next 1/2 distance. Yet it changes from slider to circle, that's the trick
5. 00:08:507 (1,2) - Ok, I can't point every such place, so just look throught the diff and look what you can do. Noted above
6. 00:15:037 (4,5) - This counts too! Same
7. 00:22:095 (3,4) - Not parallel :V Yes they are
8. 00:51:919 (1) - The same thing as in Another. Same as in another
9. 00:55:360 (1) - The same thing as in Another. Same as in another
10. 01:06:037 (2) - Saaame as in Another. I don't think the piano would be fun there.
11. 01:12:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ok, I was talking about distances, but this is ridiculous. Why do you separate stream after a slider? Probably because slider ends on 1/6, but why are you NOT separating it here: 01:15:213 (1,2,3,4), at the exact same place? Because either one works
12. 01:20:419 (4) - Because of some strange reasons, slowdown here is not so confusing as in Another. Dunno why. Ok
13. 01:38:154 (3) - The same thing as in Another. You need to separate clap from bass sound, it's like a start of a new measure, sounds much better separated. Nah

Oh, and that's all. Extra needs full rework, unfornunately. Better look it throught and try to fix distances so they will be better readable and will make more sense. But Another was pretty beautiful diff anyway, I enjoyed it so much <3
Good luck with it :3

Love wrote:

Darn you Charles I can't find anything D:

[Hyper]
01:24:742 (5) - Distance snap will bring this down and left 1 grid, do that
01:41:331 (1) - Move this up 1 grid?

[Normal]
Maybe remove the unused inherits?

no kd, I'll star this