S.H.E - The Days Broken · forum

yaya

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yaya 2009-01-28T15:41:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年2月9日 at 17:37:14

Artist: S.H.E
Title: The Days Broken
Tags: S.H.E
BPM: 154
Filesize: 5977kb
Play Time: 02:41
Difficulties Available:

Alace Difficulty (4.9 stars, 386 notes)
Easy (2.4 stars, 145 notes)
Relaxing (4.06 stars, 250 notes)

Download: S.H.E - The Days Broken
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for my teacher Alace join this beatmap and make so great map & hitsound

My 3rd map .

Hope you like it !

Last edited by yaya 2009-02-09T16:37:34+00:00, edited 35 times in total.

deepsea

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deepsea 2009-01-30T18:52:28+00:00

Great map, only thing I found is 1-2 of bpm change fools me, I am not sure is that I am too stupid lol, need to look it in detail when my mind is wake.

Also, need another difficulty to get ranked.

Starred.

yaya

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yaya 2009-01-30T18:54:42+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Alace

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Alace 2009-02-03T19:44:33+00:00

Oya~
My job is done

Download: S.H.E - The Days Broken (osu_CN_yaya) [Alace Difficulty].osu

James

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James 2009-02-07T02:23:00+00:00

timing feels really good...

alace diff:
nothing to fix

relaxing:
i think changing bpm is kinda wrong in an easier difficulty, but it seems you put alot of work into it and it DOES look good while watching it in edit mode so i guess i just leave it as is.
and i assume this is a hard-ish difficulty too. (i hate the word assume)
anyways, im just suggesting here. just to make it sound good. feel free to ignore this.
01:05:79 - place a circle here, i dont care where, maybe under the slider?
01:08:91 - this too
01:12:02 - and this
01:27:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this looks wrong in an easier difficulty but its awesome at the same time...
01:50:50 (1) - start this spinner at the white tick (1/4 beat forward)
01:55:66 - place a circle here
01:58:78 - this too
02:08:13 - and this
02:11:24 - that
02:14:36 - this
02:58:00 - that
03:01:11 - this
03:10:47 - that
03:13:58 - that

the other random difficulty name:
01:37:74 (1) - too high? i mean in the playfield... but i do this too so i dont mind lol
02:42:09 - remove this break lol

yaya

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yaya 2009-02-07T03:04:14+00:00

Thanks James. Fix done .

i put so much change bpm just want to fit the music . and want player feel good . maybe a little hard to play :<

Hitsound . I'm so suck at this.

. so i can only make it normal

The most important .! i'm not a NEWER now . when i can become a great mapper like the person in my map doesnt need fix ?

Alace

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Alace 2009-02-07T04:47:17+00:00

Fix Something~

Download: S.H.E - The Days Broken (osu_CN_yaya) [Alace Difficulty].osu

Last edited by Alace 2009-02-09T16:12:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

yaya

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yaya 2009-02-07T12:54:44+00:00

upload done

Larto

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Larto 2009-02-07T18:24:52+00:00

Alace:
Nothing

Relaxing:
00:49:82 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make this combo symmetric? Looks a bit ugly.

Easy:
Why Not Soft sound sample?

Well.. that's it I guess. Starred

EDIT: Okay, fixed... bubble.

yaya

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yaya 2009-02-07T18:43:49+00:00

thanks larto

James

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James 2009-02-09T15:42:51+00:00

all diffs:
set stack leniency to 7

alace diff:
00:11:44 - remove this short break
01:43:58 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - think of another slider pattern haha
02:03:26 (5,6,7,8) - move one grid downwards lol

other two diffs: none

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edit: ranked