[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

yo, finally \o/
wee~
first star is mine this time

>.</ you won this time :<

диван D: grumd, next time let me know when you'll submit your map

at least let me be first person who will check your map

[General]
ты диван я ожидал другого бг. :/ НУ КРУЧЕ ЖЕ
даа, классная картинка, но сюда не подойдёт(
add preview point (00:20:005 - ?) 00:09:338
add some tags: жанр музыки например. (classic?) done

[Easy]
000:25:338 (4) - сделай сюда нк. Я не уверенн, но +6 на нотах в изе выглядит не очень.okay
00:32:671 (4) - ^ done! really reasoned NCs, thanks!

[Normal]
some 1/4's here. do you really want to use it here? (even for slow bpm it's kinda fast)
its fine as for me. this diff follows classical string sound so yea
00:37:005 (7) - висл+финиш? (тоже самое проделать с изей и хардом)
yep. added this for all diffs

[Hard]

generel

1. offset +30.. right. will ask somebody to check timing
2. no timebreak ,no letterbox not necessary but fixed

hard
1/4 > 1/6 > 1/8 beat snap lol

1. 00:02:257 (6) - start at 1/3 (00:02:257 - ) but ended at 1/2 (00:02:535 - ) maybe u need to make it other way
   my suggest : , hitsound (clap)(clap)( - )(whistle)
   reworked fully
2. 00:07:146 (5) - snap?
   yup
3. 00:11:868 (3) - ^1/4
   yea
4. 00:19:701 (1,2,3) - hmmm hm?
5. 00:21:146 (5) - 1/4 yup

about pattern is excellent but 00:06:035 (2,3,4,5) - o_____o
its fine

normal
1/6 D:

easy

1. 00:23:338 (3) - nooo........ beat please

no, this is easy lol

nightcore mod for quality play

Okay, okay..
this map is really simple, yet it's like there's something cryptic behind this song, and the map.

[General]

No previewpoint? 00:10:005 - Sounds good. :> already added, just cant upload
Uncheck letterbox since your maps doesn't have breaks. bla bla bla
Offset 30? we'll see

[Easy]
Clear.

[Normal]
Most of the slider-numbers on here are covered :< (Since this 'Normal' maybe you should change some.) i dont think this is a problem anyway. let me see
00:02:227 (1) - It will be kinda hard to read this slider for newbies, Move it a bit to right like this maybe? so newbies can read the slider numbers. :>
i'd better keep 1.0x snap not to confuse the player by that DS changes
00:05:338 (2) - ^ (Make the slider number a bit visible)
00:05:338 (2) - ^ lol the same timestamp
00:14:671 (2) - ^
00:16:005 (4) - ^
well, have to refuse everything, because i cant throw out the distance snap just because numbers are not visible anyway, nobody looks at them

[Hard]
Clear.

Goodluck, grumd. (:~

EDIT: HEY WVS YOU'RE SO FAST

привет
третий б комбоцвет коричнево-красный под паруса, красивее ж

Combo1 : 153,51,43

слишком выделяется. не добавил(

[Easy]
00:25:338 (4) - нк, потому что больше пяти комбо нежелательны в изе и потому что

grumd wrote:

NCs are set at the downbeats.

00:32:671 (4) - ^
сделал

[Normal]
00:07:838 (5) - вот так и слышу ее на следующем синем тике D: алсо в похожем паттерне и месте в мелодии 00:23:838 (1,2,3,4) - нота стоит на синем
хм, нет, посмотрел остальные паттерны, в общем, как есть - лучше
00:20:893 (1) - какие причины для нк? никаких, товарищ камандир!
[Hard]
HP-1, AR+1?
сделал OD+1
00:02:227 (6) - мб (по 1/6) на сл.красный тик?
в прошлом моде полностью переделал
00:11:338 (2,3,4) - снапнуть концы (и ноту офк) по 1/4?^

ignore this mod please /runs

Short mod here we go~


General:
Clean~


Easy:

1. 00:04:671 (1) - make this slider like this. it looks much better o.o
   
   SPOILER

   
   no actual difference so not changed (i even dont know what have you fixed)
2. 00:12:671 (2) - remove this finish and add a clap instead ~ no, the sounds changed here. finish fits better
3. 00:14:005 (4) - ^ but on slider's start~
4. 00:28:671 (1) - ^
5. 00:30:005 (2) - ^
6. 00:32:671 (4) - ^ all the same

Normal:

1. 00:20:005 (1) - remove this NC i dont it's needed here~ this NC emphasizes the change of sound in 00:17:338 (1,2,1,2)
2. 00:34:671 (4) - NC here to make it consistent with the other combos oh right. i could not understand why i had 7 combos there

Hard:
Nothing really much to say ~



Clean mapset =3=/ inb4 another speed rank~ i guess you will be right lol

omg harpsichord. add "harpsichord" to tags so I can find it later.
ok!

[hard]
00:03:338 (2,3) - slider circle
its reasonable, but the map will become too repetitive if i do that
00:05:838 - add note no sound there
00:06:005 (2) - just make it a circle, no tail end, no
there is a drum soudn there
00:06:671 (4) - 1/8. Btw, this is 90 BPM so 1/8 is fine here.
right
00:07:116 (5) - move to the blue tick, probably better to make 2 circles instead of slider
done in prev. mods ;_;
00:08:421 (2,3) - fml these are 1/9. I can help you get these into 1/9 snap if you want, but the quickest solution is this: make a slider start and end in the right place, then divide that length (in the .osu file) by the number of notes-1. In this case, these start on a 1/6 snap and end on a 1/1 snap with 4 notes. The length is 53.333, so a 1/9 slider is 17.777
dunno what made you to say that. i can hear 4 drum (or bass, whatever) notes after the end of a slider
00:13:338 (1) - move 1/8 later, extend the previous slider out to the beat
that sounds reasonable, btu ruins the gameplay imo
00:15:338 (5,1) - slider whistle
right
00:19:671 (1,2,3) - don't stack these with the previous notes
why? i like it

everything i have applied is applied to the similar parts as well
I think that's pretty much it, apart from repeats. I doubt this can be ranked due to shortness, so do it right!

[normal]
In Vallista, I made everything fall under an exponential distance spacing. Something like 0.6x^2. Especially with this slider velocity, I think it's important to be able to easily tell the difference between 1/1, 1/2, 1/3, and 1/4. Right now 1/2 and smaller all overlap. If you change that so that 1/2 has just a little bit of space between the notes, it will mean that 1/3 is slightly overlapping, and 1/4 is about half covered, making it much easier IMO to read. And it looks better too, since you don't have nearly as many overlaps. I would also ask that you give the same leniency to the sliders, so that 1/2 sliders show a little bit of slider track between the circles.

1.4x 1/2, 1.2x 1/3, 1.0x 1/4

that is a good suggestion too, but remapping whole thing only for the sake of this... imo it doesnt cost it. 1.0x is fine. 1/2 and 1/4 are easily recognized and 1/3 is only used after the sldier end with the slider with repeats: readablility has been done with the help of slider ends and repeats - so i think its fine as it is.


That's it.