Aleks719 wrote:

Hi there !

Normal
00:14:477 (1) - remove clap
00:14:669 (2) - add clap at start of slider
00:16:015 (6) - add whistle at the start. Remove whistle from the end
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make it 1/2 early , imho. this looks crazy for me...
others all fixed.
Easy
00:40:246 (4) - too hard for easy. make 1/2 later.
00:55:054 (3,4) - try to make slider at place of this notes.
01:16:977 (4) - add finish, remove whistle
01:23:900 (4) - remove clap from the finish
02:02:746 (5) - remove clap, add whistle
02:02:938 (6) - remove clap
02:31:015 (4) - remove note
02:31:208 (5) - remove note
02:31:400 (1) - start it on to 02:31:015 and finish at the 02:33:131
all fixed.
Uh, Star. Keep working :3

artpiggo wrote:

Normal

00 09 092 maybe add note
01 16 785 ^
01 18 323 ^
01 18 515 maybe add clap
01 21 208 ^
01 31 785 add finish, i think
01 33 515 maybe add clap
02 02 939 add finish, i think
02 03 323 add note, i think
02 15 246 maybe add clap
02 16 592 ^
02 33 900 add finish, i think
all fixed.
star then !

vincerio wrote:

[CHAS's Hard]
00:38:900(1) - remove new combo here fixed
00:40:054(8) - new combo here fixed
00:40:631(1) - remove new combo fixed
01:09:669 - extend to 01:10:439? no.
01:26:400(4) - new combo no.
01:45:054(1) - remove new combo no.
01:45:439(1) - new combo ^
01:46:592 - remove new combo ^
01:47:554 - new combo ^
01:58:515 - now combo fixed
02:01:785 - new combofixed
02:15:246(5) - a bit offscreen ;w; it would be nice if you replace this one... ok~

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked. fixed......

[CHAS' Hard]

It's fine... for an Insane. Change the name of the diff is easier to change several things like AR, OD and some jumps. this diff played easy lol

vincerio wrote:

้hi hi :3

[General]
bad news.... I don't agree the way you set the same slider velocity in [Easy] and [Normal] both 1.0 =3= tried 1.2.
^ this issue may trouble you in nearly future lol
TAG : ending single

[Easy]
00:25:439(2) - make this slider straight like (3) fixed
00:41:015 - make more rest space for beginner... start it as 00:41:400 end at 00:42:746 then the note afterwards is quite difficult.
00:49:669(2) - move the end of this slider down 1 grid lv3 fixed
00:52:746(4) - ^ same fixed?

[Normal]
00:40:631(1,2) - a duplet like this is really fit with normal hitsound(remove whistle and reduce volume a bit)
00:41:208 - extend slider to 00:43:131 sounds nice no.
01:43:515(1) - remove new combo
01:44:092(5) - new combo
01:45:054 - new combo
01:48:900 - extend to 01:50:823 sounds nice no.
others are fixed.
I really love this song x3~
*shoot kudo star*

ask me if you want my insane diff :3

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[General]

Check if ALL spinners have the "New Combo" marked.

[Easy]

AR -1

01:49:477 (5,1) - A jump ? It's an Easy one, but not for an Easy difficult. If was a Normal, could stay. Think of a change.
all fixed.
[Normal]

AR -1
OD -1

00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern for a normal it's a little too much. Change it? For one like these 00:26:785 (1,2,3,4).
01:01:400 (1) - 2 beats instead?
01:22:169 (1) - ^
01:34:477 (1) - ^
02:01:977 (4) - A single beat instead?
02:02:362 (5) - ^
02:03:515 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:05:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little much for a normal. ehh...
02:15:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
others all fixed.
That's it.

CHAS wrote:

幫我在難度名稱改成 CHAS's Hard
現在應該無誤吧...?
英文文法博大精深...
話說怎麼給我kd..
誤中了.

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard .

[CHAS's Hard]

00:31:015 (4) - a good time to slow down - to here 00:40:055 (1) i think this ok.

here is not appropriate, such tricks with spinner >_> i think this ok.

00:49:862 (1,1,1) - (×̯×)

02:17:555 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - (×̯×)

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[General]

CHAS's hard rename CHAS' Hard got it.

00:43:515 - start kiai time and finish 01:07:939

01:51:208 - start kiai time and finish 02:03:323

02:25:054 - start kiai time and finish 02:33:131

all diffs

[Easy]

00:41:400 (1) - spinner start here 00:41:208 (1)

02:31:015 (1) - finish here 02:32:939

02:26:208 (3) - Move the slider here 02:26:592 (3) and 02:26:208 (3) - add circle
all fixed.
[Normal]

01:45:054 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them equal and symmetrical? It looks like



no, but copied from something in 00m3Xs

I liked it

S T A R ~

CHAS wrote:

justnobody你打算加kiai time麼?也有人討厭kiai time的說 我先不加kiai time 看看你意向

話說為什麼我的是CHAS' Hard...
究竟何時加s 何時不加s chas表示完全不明白(打滾)
麻煩了你了 justnobody..幫我再改回CHAS' Hard.......

Xeno32 wrote:

[CHA's Hard]
00:41:785 (4) - New combo no.

Xeno32 wrote:

Good job! -.-
Star!!

[Normal]
00:09:092 (6) - Add clap :> fixed.
00:21:400 (5) - Add clap fixed.
00:57:362 (5) - End on red tick then repeat once? repeat once looks odd to me but tried repeat twice.

[vincerio's Insane]
00:25:054 (1) - Remove New combo
00:32:362 (3) - add clap
00:32:362 (3) - Add clap
00:35:439 (4) - Add clap
00:36:977 (1) - Add clap
00:37:746 (3) - Add clap at start of slider
00:38:515 (5) - Add clap at start of slider
00:39:285 (7) - Add clap at start of slider
00:40:054 (3) - Add clap
00:40:631 (5,6,7,8) - Add claps
00:42:169 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps

ShiroKitty wrote:

sorry for late mod reply.. ;/

There's just my suggestions, cuz I think the beatmap is already very nice ^^

Easy:
02:18:515 (1) maybe give here the same slider and note as in 02:16:977?
02:31:015 end this spinner at 02:33:131

Normal:
00:22:939 (3) 1 grid up
01:02:169 (5) maybe make thiss lider look nicer?
01:03:701 (4) ^
02:31:208 same as in Easy diff?

star! )

winber1 wrote:

General

--sometimes there are random claps in the middle of a whistle sections (speaking of normal and easy, didn't pay that much attention to hitsounds in hard and insane). In my opinion, claps should be used in systematic pattern (even if it's some extremely long, almost incomprehensible pattern). I do realize that you use claps in a specific phrase (like when you have two 1/2 notes together), but other times it's just a clap (or a few claps) in a whistle pattern section. At least that's what it strikes me as. Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention. 00:13:515 in easy would be one example I have.

that's why i think the claps there looks strange...
but sometimes i would feel bored when the hitsounds are like "don don don clap don don don clap ....."
that's why i tried to make it different...
anyway it does look strange and i've fixed them.

Normal

00:14:285(4) - start the new combo here
02:19:669(break) - umm.. very awkward break in my opinion. You don't have to have notes for that echo, but i think at least put some notes starting at 02:21:400

Easy

00:13:515(2...etc) - either get rid of these claps or add claps from 00:25:823 to the spinner
00:30:439(spinner) - end spinner here
02:21:400(break) - same as in normal, maybe add some notes starting here

Nice map.

Star~

Garven wrote:

Aaah, what happened?

[General]
I'm not seeing a reason for "lazy" to be in the tags.not removed.
Also remove ending and single from tags. removed.

on post #49:

frost-b-spec wrote:

[General]
suggestion
add tags : lazy,cover

as i know this song is somewhat an old song in japan.
see: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VyQkccOwWrc
if this is not a reason then i will remove it.



[Easy]
01:51:208 (1) - I'd rather not see a stack like this in an easy. It may be difficult to discern the rhythm like this. fixed.
02:15:823 (2) - Finish on start?fixed.
02:25:054 (2,4) - ^ There are a bunch of others, if you feel that they work with the general hit sound pattern you've used. probably fixed...but i sometimes think that they are a bit noisy.

[Normal]
01:25:054 - Surprised you didn't go with the "だめだめ" again oh my fault. fixed.

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Easy

Nice

00:32:362(3) - it may move 1 gird left(lv4)
00:32:362~00:40:823 - i think that those claps might be reduced velume by 15%

here you are

timing

SPOILER

32265,-100,4,2,0,84,0,0
32458,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33804,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
33996,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
35342,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
35535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
36881,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
37073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
37746,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
37842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
38515,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
38612,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
39189,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
39381,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
40150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
40727,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
40919,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

01:38:900~01:47:939 - same with 00:32:362~00:40:823

timing

SPOILER

100054,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
100150,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
101592,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
101689,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
103131,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
103227,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
104669,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
104765,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
105342,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
105535,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106112,-100,4,2,0,86,0,0
106304,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
106881,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107073,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
107650,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
107842,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
108131,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
110631,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

02:23:515(5) - change the shape of the slider

Normal

00:32:362~00:40:823 and 01:38:900~01:47:939

i think you need to reduce the volume by 10% or 15% in those sections.

star...