1. Easy (2,07 stars, 121 notes)
2. Flask's Normal (3,35 stars, 184 notes)
3. Hard (4,91 stars, 365 notes)

[Dellirium] wrote:

[General]
Song Name — 9 PM (Till I Come)
Offset — +10 ms (thx TicClick for that)
No Lead In?

[Hard]
Это всё можно не читать, так как я хреновый маппер
00:27:279 (7,8) - может между ними тоже ноту запихнуть? ~!
00:54:460 (4) - clap whistle~
00:59:988 (2) - вот тут вообще не понял к чему слайдер привязан. Если ориентироваться по 01:03:558 (3), то надо бы его тогда тоже начать с синего тика ноту на синий
Закончить бы пораньше спиннер и добавить на 01:44:214 (1) ноту. И 01:44:329 (1) тоже.~
02:07:939 (1) - а чо так мало? =(

Tanmak wrote:

[Flask's Normal]
01:54:820 (5) - Remove? no

1. 00:04:485 (1) - This slider has quite a noticeable drum triple on it, far more noticeable than this 00:04:370 (9) -
   You'd better remove 00:04:370 (9) - and add a triple instead of 00:04:485 (1) -
2. 00:05:176 (3,4) - Try to fix the spacing
3. 00:27:174 (6) - 00:27:519 (9) - 1 grid down. This makes the stream to be shaped better, but you'll have to move 00:25:677 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit to keep encircling. Also try to curve the slider like this, to fit stream shape:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:36:272 (5) - This note can be confusing, too sudden 1/2. Just stack it under (4) to make it clear.
5. 00:59:768 (1,2,3) - It's better for a kickslider to start from a white tick, not red. That will play more intuitively. Swap the kickslider and notes after it.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:10:248 (9) - If you agree with finishes (see Hitsounds section below), I think it would be better to remove one repeat here too. It sounds nice to stop the stream at finish hitsound.
7. 01:50:443 (3) - Two grids down to keep same distance between sliders.
8. 01:52:747 (5) - Try to encircle (1)'s end.
9. 02:11:635 - End spinner here, obviously. Music ends at this point, not at the blue tick.

1. You miss plenty of finish hitsounds here:
   
   • 00:15:542 - 00:22:913 (2) - 00:45:026 - 00:59:768 - 01:03:453 -
     01:06:908 (5) - 01:07:139 (1) - 01:08:751 - 01:08:981 (1) - 01:10:594 -
     01:10:824 - 01:11:285 - 01:11:745 - 01:12:206 - 01:14:510 - 01:29:252 (1) -
     01:51:365 - 01:58:736 - 02:06:107
2. And you can add many nicely fitting whistles here:
   
   • 
     00:31:205 - 00:31:896 (4) - 00:34:890 - 00:36:042 (4) - 00:38:576 - 00:39:267 (4) - 00:42:261 -
     00:43:413 -00:45:947 - 00:46:638 (5) - 00:47:099 (1) - 00:47:559 - 00:49:632 - 00:50:784 (1) -
     00:51:245 (3) - 00:51:475 - 00:53:318 - 00:54:009 - 00:54:470 (1) - 00:54:930 - 00:57:003 -
     00:58:155 - 00:58:616 - 00:58:846 - 01:01:380 (6) - 01:02:532 - 01:04:374 - 01:05:065 - 01:06:217 -
   I hope I didn't miss something D:
3. 01:13:358 (2,4) - Try to add whistles here too.

1. I'd suggest +1 AR. It feels too slow compared to Slider Velocity atm.
2. 00:02:642 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap please.
3. 00:15:542 - 00:59:768 (1) - 01:03:453 (1) - 01:12:667 (5) - 01:51:365 You forgot a finish.
4. 01:20:729 (5,6) - Here you have a spacing error, make it 1.0x as everywhere.
5. 02:11:635 - End spinner here. As suggested in Hard.

1. +1 AR looks fine here too, but that's up to you.
2. 00:20:148 (2) - Move 3rd point a bit up to make it curved:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:44:565 (1,3) - Well, this touching is ugly, fix it.
4. Check all suggestions about hitsounds from Hard diff modding. Both whistles and finishes, just click the links on this diff and if you find a beat that lands on an object, add proper hitsounding on this diff too.
5. 02:11:635 - End the spinner here.

From our queue \( ^_^)/

1. A muted soft and normal sliderslide here will be perfect owob

1. Tick rate 1 please, 2 seems too much
2. 00:15:542 (1) - If you could put soft-hitwhistle on the reverse, it would be so good
3. 00:17:384 (2) - ^
4. 00:21:991 (4) - If you followed the advice above, please add soft-hitwhistle here, if not, you shouldn't.
5. 00:42:722 (3,4) - How about http://puu.sh/1r63Z
6. 00:46:408 (4,1) - ^
7. 00:54:930 (5) - Something loud here please, feels drowned with the music
8. 00:56:082 - Add note here to reinstate polarity
9. 00:59:307 (3) - Add clap on start
10. 01:10:824 - 01:12:667 - Add spinner? .w.
11. More soft-hitwhistle on kiai time plz www
12. 01:35:010 (1) - This one is better: http://puu.sh/1r66T
13. 01:39:387 (2) - o.o nice
14. 01:42:151 (1) - Add finish?
15. 02:05:646 (1) - Add clap on reverse?
16. 02:07:949 (1) - Add finish? Awkward wwithout it

1. 00:01:337 - hi
2. Why no much whistle? D:
3. 00:02:642 (3,1) - Overlap
4. 00:20:609 (2,3) - Unstack please, breaks flow here ><
5. 00:23:373 (2,3,4) - Try to make a blanket please
6. 00:42:952 (3,4) - Combine into a slider?
7. 00:44:565 (6,1) - Unstack please, since you don't stack patterns before
8. 00:51:475 (6,1) - ^
9. 00:53:318 (3) - Why not a simple circular? Looks weird here >w<
10. 01:36:623 (1) - Finish?
11. 01:43:994 (1) - ^
12. 02:07:949 (1) - Same treatment like on Easy

1. AR -1 or -2? Too fast here
2. Again, why few whistles here DD: if you could add more especially on the streams i and everyone would be very happy .w.)b
3. 00:28:441 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know that you're decelerating spacing here, but please make it more spacer, to avoid confusing space
4. 00:47:559 (3) - Whistle on slider end?
5. 00:51:245 (3) - Remove whistle to fit music?
6. 00:57:694 (6) - Add whistle?
7. 01:12:206 (7) - Awkward placement and bad flow. Try placing the slider start on 01:11:054 (2) - 's location.
8. 02:03:342 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try placing the streams like a blanket, but better
9. 02:07:949 (1) - Same treatment like on Easy

inverness wrote:

From our queue \( ^_^)/

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

unofficial request lol

[General]

1. A muted soft and normal sliderslide here will be perfect owob

[Easy]

1. Tick rate 1 please, 2 seems too much same tickrate for all diffs. 2 fits better, imo
2. 00:42:722 (3,4) - How about http://puu.sh/1r63Z too hard for [Easy]
3. 00:46:408 (4,1) - ^_^
4. 00:56:082 - Add note here to reinstate polarity ^ [this easy] >.</
5. 01:10:824 - 01:12:667 - Add spinner? .w. hm.. plays quite awkward, imo :V
6. More soft-hitwhistle on kiai time plz www >.</
7. 01:35:010 (1) - This one is better: http://puu.sh/1r66T i'd like to avoid them. this is [easy]
8. 01:39:387 (2) - o.o nice OPPAN BAKARI STYLE
9. 02:07:949 (1) - Add finish? Awkward wwithout it there's no finish sound in music :V

That's all :3

[Hard]

1. AR -1 or -2? Too fast here beeeeeeecaaaaaauuuuse of streeeeeeeaaaaaams
2. Again, why few whistles here DD: if you could add more especially on the streams i and everyone would be very happy .w.)b D:
3. 00:28:441 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know that you're decelerating spacing here, but please make it more spacer, to avoid confusing space buuuut i loooove my anti-juuuump style T_T
4. 00:51:245 (3) - Remove whistle to fit music? it sounds good to me :V
5. 02:07:949 (1) - Same treatment like on Easy same answer

I LOVE THE STREAMS /o/

nice map baka. i love your style .w.)b and i love your style, too

good luck \( 'w')/

inverness wrote:

[Flask's Normal]

1. 00:01:337 - hi hi
2. Why no much whistle? D: D:
3. 00:02:642 (3,1) - Overlap k4now :<
4. 00:20:609 (2,3) - Unstack please, breaks flow here >< changed a little bit :3
5. 00:23:373 (2,3,4) - Try to make a blanket please QAQ
6. 00:42:952 (3,4) - Combine into a slider? k
7. 00:44:565 (6,1) - Unstack please, since you don't stack patterns before k
8. 00:51:475 (6,1) - ^^
9. 00:53:318 (3) - Why not a simple circular? Looks weird here >w< I like that one: OPPAN FLASK STYLE <3
10. 01:36:623 (1) - Finish? k
11. 01:43:994 (1) - ^ k
12. 02:07:949 (1) - Same treatment like on Easy Followed with bakari's diff so...no owo

Nice map flask :3 O3<

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue~

Easy
00:15:542 (1) - remove finish on end? feels weired yea
00:40:879 (3) - add whistle why? there's clap sound hearable
00:59:768 ~ 01:14:510 i think this breaks not goond on this song maybe add some notes , sliders or spinner? nah, beginner need it :V

goooooooooooood xD

Hard
00:06:328 (1) - make more blanket slider? to cover 00:05:637 (6) - this slider more perfectly - nazi - nazi
00:22:913 (2) - maybe soft finish better? why? it's not, imo -> i can hear Normal Finish here
00:35:581 (3) - add whistle ~
00:38:576 (3) - add whistle on start disagree. it doesn't feels like whistle should be here
00:42:952 (3) - ^_^
00:59:768 (1) - add soft finish on start sure
01:10:248 (9) - ^ on end i don't want to spam with finish hitsound. there's already finish in next circle (1)
01:12:206 (7) - finish on start same as above
01:24:414 (3) - how about 01:24:414 (3) - add note and 01:24:645 (4) - add 1/2 slider with 1 repeat 01:25:336 (1) - note here with NC 01:25:566 (2) - and delete NC but why? Rhythm here seems good enough for me, and players need some rest, too. So, it's ok.
01:35:471 (3) - you know this ._.

nice song and diff haha good luck for rank!