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Natasha Bedingfield - Pocketful Of Sunshine

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Aurele
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 octobre 2012 at 21:59:57

Artist: Natasha Bedingfield
Title: Pocketful Of Sunshine
Tags: Konei Sky Anne
BPM: 110,02
Filesize: 3104kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Konei's Cloud (3,01 stars, 159 notes)
  2. Rain (1,22 stars, 93 notes)
  3. Sunshine! (4,56 stars, 215 notes)
Download: Natasha Bedingfield - Pocketful Of Sunshine
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song makes me thinks of alot of things ♥
Third ranked map♥ Thank you!

Rain by me
Cloud by Konei
Sunshine! by me


and now.. Have fun!
Topic Starter
Aurele

Beatmap Information





Artist: Natasha Bedingfield
Title: Pocketful of Sunshine



List of people who tested the map before its submition
Gaba
deadbeat
Konei

<- Finished beatmap here. ->
Stefan
giO-
Gumix3
Elly-chan
SoujiTheFox
[Luanny PhNyx]
Kuria
eLtigreXXx
Gaba
*Once again*

Thank you everyone \:D/

Difficulties

Rain by me
Cloud by Konei
Sunshine! by me


*Updates*
  1. 10-01-2012: Submited Map.
  2. 10-04-2012: Konei's Cloud is finished. Rain is almost done!
  3. 10-06-2012: MOVED TO PENDING!
  4. 10-07-2012: Fixed with Bass' mod.
    :arrow: Fixed with Stefan's mod
  5. 10-09-2012: Fixed with -Bakari- & Flask's mod
  6. 10-12-2012: Fixed with Mercurial's mod
  7. 10-14-2012: Fixed with MathiasXII, Roxas & p3n's mods
    :arrow: Fixed with Konei's mod.
  8. 10-16-2012: Fixed with Scorpiour & Leorda's mod.
    :arrow: Bubbled~
  9. 10-17-2012: Fixed with Chewin & mancusojuanmattos's mod.
  10. 10-18-2012: Rebubbled~ and.. Ranked~!

*Modders* (Different Modders : 14) (Recheck : 0) (Total Mod :14)
  1. Bass
  2. Stefan
  3. -Bakari-
  4. Flask
  5. Lally (Haven't used any suggestion, but she atleast tryed! :3)
  6. Mercurial
  7. MathiasXII
  8. Roxas
  9. p3n
  10. Konei
  11. Scorpiour
  12. Leorda
  13. Chewin
  14. mancusojuanmattos
Konei
Nya~
Flask
Cool and of course I'll mod it soon !!!
Topic Starter
Aurele
Everything is done, moved to pending.
Let's the magic happens!
Bass
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Topic Starter
Aurele
a dot.

Stefan

Once again, Luanny is a Diff.
Topic Starter
Aurele
Blame Luanny's name, not me. LOL
Breeze
Hey man I found nothing in this map (except the normal hitsound in the last diff, personally I don't like that much, but oh well, how to use hitsound is all depend on yourself), why are you so awesome?
Go getting some more mod from others and I can bubble this, yay
Bass
I started modding it yesterday, just few slider nazi changes found so far... will post soon!

[Rain]
  1. 00:28:538 (2) - move 2nd anchor like that http://puu.sh/1c4fA
  2. 00:37:264 (2) - this slider really could look better, for example like that http://puu.sh/1c47C
  3. 01:33:981 (1) - extend by 1/2
  4. 01:23:619 (3) - move it like that http://puu.sh/1c4b7 looks more nicer
  5. 02:04:521 (1) - move last anchor to 144;264 then that part of slider will be parallel with last straight part of previous slider and will look nicer.

[Konei's Cloud]

  • 00:28:538 (3) - move 2nd nod 1tick left, symmetrical looks nicer :3
    00:36:173 (2,3,4,1) - look http://puu.sh/1ciXl and http://puu.sh/1ciXv so move (3) 1 grid up so it won't touch slider, looks really nicer
    00:49:534 (1,2) - same here, move (2) away from (1) a bit
    02:07:520 (4) - move away abit from (3)

[Sunshine!]

  • 01:10:803 (2) - this slider could be aligned better to previous slider, maybe like that http://puu.sh/1cjn7
    01:25:255 (4) - replace with this code:
    SPOILER
    144,208,82255,2,0,B|168:256|136:304,2,100,2|10|0
    now will look better http://puu.sh/1cjp5
    02:15:973 (2,3,4) - this rhythm could sound nicer if done like that , since I see you mostly followed vocal in kiai
    02:27:971 (4) - move 2nd nod to the center, looks nicer then.

This map is really nice. If I were XAT I'd bubble it after these fixes. Before someone will complain I will have to say that such cases occured in past. Good luck!
Konei
http://puu.sh/1cjU6

All done~

Thanks~

@Breeze: You're awesome~
Topic Starter
Aurele

Bass wrote:

I started modding it yesterday, just few slider nazi changes found so far... will post soon!

[Rain]
  1. 00:28:538 (2) - move 2nd anchor like that http://puu.sh/1c4fA Hm, sure.
  2. 00:37:264 (2) - this slider really could look better, for example like that http://puu.sh/1c47C Did something similar.
  3. 01:33:981 (1) - extend by 1/2 No. Every difficulty has an object here with a Finish. So to make it consistent, I will keep it.
  4. 01:23:619 (3) - move it like that http://puu.sh/1c4b7 looks more nicer Ukay o_o
  5. 02:04:521 (1) - move last anchor to 144;264 then that part of slider will be parallel with last straight part of previous slider and will look nicer. Ukay o_o

[Sunshine!]

  • 01:10:803 (2) - this slider could be aligned better to previous slider, maybe like that http://puu.sh/1cjn7 Normally, I thook the slider (1) and rescaled it to make this form. But I did something similar but more curved.
    01:25:255 (4) - replace with this code: I will say no for this one because I actually did a form like this for the next circle and slider.
    SPOILER
    144,208,82255,2,0,B|168:256|136:304,2,100,2|10|0
    now will look better http://puu.sh/1cjp5
    02:15:973 (2,3,4) - this rhythm could sound nicer if done like that , since I see you mostly followed vocal in kiai Did something similar.
    02:27:971 (4) - move 2nd nod to the center, looks nicer then. Done.

This map is really nice. If I were XAT I'd bubble it after these fixes. Before someone will complain I will have to say that such cases occured in past. Good luck!
Thank you Bass! ♥
Stefan
- Remove Letterbox during Breaks, they are ugly with the BG.
- I understand that the Kiai Time can be different at Guest Diffs, but it's not more like 100 ms Difference between your and Konei's Part. Just saying.

[Konei's Cloud]
01:47:069 (3,4) - Remove them and make something similar as 01:44:888 (1). http://puu.sh/1cmQO
02:13:246 (1,2) - You could change this part like here: http://puu.sh/1cmTB

Rest is too op.
riffy
I AM SO CUTE

Hi Gabe.

random short mod

[General]
Gabe is so awesome :3
how about tickrate 2 (for vocals)? (ticr rate 1 feels empty :<) (if you'll do it => you'll have to add more green lines o3o)
yeah 70% volume for the whole map looks lazy-mapped.

personally i want to say that your bg is too bright and may hurt eyes. what about something like this BG?
BG/Colours test

Combo1 : 197,197,150
Combo2 : 253,255,159
Combo3 : 95,172,79
Combo4 : 182,114,114

[Rain]
00:48:716 (3,4,5) - more easy patterns. (since you have AR3 it's better to make diff easier because AR3 is quite fast for beginners and 1/2 might be hard to read >.<) blanket slider? o3o (this one isn't well done and i don't feel like i should give a code for it.
00:57:714 (2) and 00:59:896 (1) - this circle feels a bit hard for beginners, imo. what if we'll try to make something easier to play? for example 2/1 slider here? example with some weird but playable blanket sliders. o3o actually yyour map contains some similar patterns. if you want feel free to change them in the same way. but i want you to keep some of them without changes (01:24:437 (1,2) - for example). if you will change some of them it will make diff a bit more interesting for beginners and they will study some things from this diff :)
01:57:431 (2) - overlapped with hp-bar. slider is still readable but it may confuse some beginners. OMG! WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS SLIDER? SHOULD I CLICK AT HP BAR OR WHAT? D: SDASASDSDASDASDAD DRAMA it will stress beginners.
02:02:339 (2,1,2) - it's quite awkward to see them . i understand that you want entertain player with some cool shapes but not here! there's no place to curve sliders this way and it looks odd. yeah. don't use this weird shapes (nazi)

I expected to see more sliders in the end of map. But your rhythm is awesome, too.

[Konei's Cloud]
meh.. Slider Velocity is sooooooooo fast. Even for low BPM it's too fast, imo. also because of so fast velocity there's big space between circles. :< it looks a bit messy, imo. Anyway, what done is done. Just keep it in mind for your future maps :)

00:53:079 (1) - because your diff is already too hard for Normal. try at least avoid overllaps, please >.</ (1) is overlapped with spinner's hitburst. To make this diff easier (and userrating higher) please avoid this overlap
01:07:804 (1) - the previous combo chain looks so short. how about removing this new combo? won't hurt your patterns and will make diff looks more consistent
01:16:529 (1) - same as 01:07:804 (1)
01:27:982 (1,2) - same as 00:53:079 (1) i expected to see them perfectly symmetrical. after spinner when you're able to start whereever you want it will be okay to have some symmetrical atterns, right? (nazi)

that's a cute diff with a nice rhythm and nice flow.

[Sunshine!]
nazi: remove "!" from diff name o3o
how about HP Drain: 6? It's quite hard to keep HP during 1/1 notes >.<
02:17:064 (5) - overlapped with hp-bar. can you fix it, please?

note: some blankets aren't perfect but still looks good.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bye Gabe.
Konei
Thanks Bakari~
Combos fixed

http://puu.sh/1cZ0D
Flask
Here's my mod for my favorite MAT /o/


[Rain]
  1. 00:44:626 (1) - (nazi)Delete this note? This is too close to the spinner D:
  2. 01:01:259 (1,2) - This would be more blanket, even if you don't make a blanket here
    SPOILER

    (2) > x:408 y:264
  3. 01:19:529 (1) - Same as above so nazi again :\
  4. 01:27:436 (1,2) - It's hard too tell what of these slider make me feel... creepy. I'm just kidding. But try this if you need
    SPOILER

    240,248,87436,6,0,B|296:312|296:312|368:304|384:224,2,210,4|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0
    304,152,89618,2,0,B|248:88|248:88|176:96|160:176,2,210,4|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0
  5. 01:32:617 - So why here's no finish/object?
  6. 01:56:613 (1) - meh
    Pretty well!
[Konei's Cloud]
  1. 00:50:625 (1) - meh, this should be instead by some sliders/notes, not a good place to place a spinner imo. And the following note is too close to the spinner D: change it by your own idea or my opinion? :3
  2. 01:12:166 (1) - I like what you did, but It's a good point to make a blanket when you do some special slider. This is what I would do, codes are here:
    292,12,72166,6,0,B|352:12|372:72|372:72|372:156,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0
  3. 01:25:528 (1) - Aha! Same as above
  4. 01:33:163 (1) - (nazi)I'm not really sure of this... but maybe 1/2 longer? finish at the downbeat sounds great imo.
  5. 01:51:432 (1) - Ah, 1/1 shorter to make the following objects be more far from the spinner, and it's a good time to end spinner due to the song
  6. 02:02:612 (1) - You know that
  7. 02:11:337 (1) - ^
  8. 02:20:063 (1) - ^
  9. 02:24:153 (5) - You should do a blanket here with (1). Try this!
[Gabeshine]
  1. 00:17:904 - Add a note? I feel so empty here ;-;
  2. 00:50:352 (1) - You add whistle at the "slider", not the begin and ends. I don't like what you did here because it's too noisy ;_;
  3. 01:19:529 (2) - (nazi) It's a good time to make a blanket with (1)'s end. Well I have no idea to do this so change by your own idea~
  4. 01:44:888 (1,2) - Well, you make a good slider! But you can blanket here like this. Maybe you will say: Hey! I follow spacing! But Anti jumps are great at the same time ovo
  5. 01:46:796 (3) - ^try to make on other side
  6. 02:19:790 (1) - Same as above
I get pocketful of sunshine /o/
Awesome map, well constructed!! Have my star >w<!
Topic Starter
Aurele
Thank you both, going to look at it soon :3

Baka Bakari's mod

-Bakari- wrote:

I AM SO CUTE

Hi Gabe. Hi Baka Bakari♥

random short mod

[General]
Gabe is so awesome :3 I know right.
how about tickrate 2 (for vocals)? (ticr rate 1 feels empty :<) (if you'll do it => you'll have to add more green lines o3o) <- Exactly why I won't do it. LOL
yeah 70% volume for the whole map looks lazy-mapped. Wait, what? o_o. It seems pretty good like this, seriously. Also, the song is pretty soft, I don't know why I should make it more louder D:

personally i want to say that your bg is too bright and may hurt eyes. what about something like this BG? Asked to three people to see which background was better, and they all said that the current one is better. But I like both backgrounds.

[Rain]
00:48:716 (3,4,5) - more easy patterns. (since you have AR3 it's better to make diff easier because AR3 is quite fast for beginners and 1/2 might be hard to read >.<) blanket slider? o3o (this one isn't well done and i don't feel like i should give a code for it. I tryed something similar to yours and I didn't really liked it. So I will keep this one because of 00:49:534 (1) - which it fits with the vocal and the hitsounds I've placed.
00:57:714 (2) and 00:59:896 (1) - this circle feels a bit hard for beginners, imo. what if we'll try to make something easier to play? for example 2/1 slider here? example with some weird but playable blanket sliders. o3o actually yyour map contains some similar patterns. if you want feel free to change them in the same way. but i want you to keep some of them without changes (01:24:437 (1,2) - for example). if you will change some of them it will make diff a bit more interesting for beginners and they will study some things from this diff :) Tryed something similar to your slider at 00:59:623 (4) -
01:57:431 (2) - overlapped with hp-bar. slider is still readable but it may confuse some beginners. OMG! WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS SLIDER? SHOULD I CLICK AT HP BAR OR WHAT? D: SDASASDSDASDASDAD DRAMA it will stress beginners. DRAMAAA, DRAMAAAAAAAAA. Done.
02:02:339 (2,1,2) - it's quite awkward to see them . i understand that you want entertain player with some cool shapes but not here! there's no place to curve sliders this way and it looks odd. yeah. don't use this weird shapes (nazi) Well, for this part I did some uncurved shape like this one. So I won't change it :3

I expected to see more sliders in the end of map. But your rhythm is awesome, too.

[Sunshine!]
nazi: remove "!" from diff name o3o No, no, no! Q.Q. I really like the "!" for this difficulty. I don't want to delete it D:
how about HP Drain: 6? It's quite hard to keep HP during 1/1 notes >.< Erh, sure.
02:17:064 (5) - overlapped with hp-bar. can you fix it, please? Should be better now.

note: some blankets aren't perfect but still looks good.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bye Gabe.
Thank you for the mod Bakari ♥

Flask's mod

Flask wrote:

Here's my mod for my favorite MAT /o/


[Rain]
  1. 00:44:626 (1) - (nazi)Delete this note? This is too close to the spinner D: It's not too close. I saw worst, seriously. Also, it fit well because of the finish.
  2. 01:01:259 (1,2) - This would be more blanket, even if you don't make a blanket here Seems to be better now
    SPOILER

    (2) > x:408 y:264
  3. 01:19:529 (1) - Same as above so nazi again :\ No.
  4. 01:27:436 (1,2) - It's hard too tell what of these slider make me feel... creepy. I'm just kidding. But try this if you need Lol, did another form.
    SPOILER

    240,248,87436,6,0,B|296:312|296:312|368:304|384:224,2,210,4|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0
    304,152,89618,2,0,B|248:88|248:88|176:96|160:176,2,210,4|4|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0
  5. 01:32:617 - So why here's no finish/object? Deleted the second slider to make one reverse slider.
  6. 01:56:613 (1) - meh Meow :3
    Pretty well!
[Gabeshine]
  1. 00:17:904 - Add a note? I feel so empty here ;-; When I was with my friend, we both said no on this because it doesn't sound really good.
  2. 00:50:352 (1) - You add whistle at the "slider", not the begin and ends. I don't like what you did here because it's too noisy ;_; I added one here because of when she sings: Take me awaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. so it represent the awaaaaaaaaaaaay.
  3. 01:19:529 (2) - (nazi) It's a good time to make a blanket with (1)'s end. Well I have no idea to do this so change by your own idea~ k, done?
  4. 01:44:888 (1,2) - Well, you make a good slider! But you can blanket here like this. Maybe you will say: Hey! I follow spacing! But Anti jumps are great at the same time ovo The spacing, that's exactly why i will reject this suggestion since the slider 2 and 3 will overlap each others.
  5. 01:46:796 (3) - ^try to make on other side Same.
  6. 02:19:790 (1) - Same as above No, o3o..
I get pocketful of sunshine /o/
Awesome map, well constructed!! Have my star >w<!
Thank you! ♥
Konei

Flask wrote:

[Konei's Cloud]
  1. 00:50:625 (1) - meh, this should be instead by some sliders/notes, not a good place to place a spinner imo. And the following note is too close to the spinner D: change it by your own idea or my opinion? :3 Hm, I like this Spinner, so I'll keep
  2. 01:12:166 (1) - I like what you did, but It's a good point to make a blanket when you do some special slider. This is what I would do, codes are here: Doesn't follow DS
    292,12,72166,6,0,B|352:12|372:72|372:72|372:156,1,170,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0
  3. 01:25:528 (1) - Aha! Same as above Same as above~
  4. 01:33:163 (1) - (nazi)I'm not really sure of this... but maybe 1/2 longer? finish at the downbeat sounds great imo. nope, finish here sounds better imo and it's conisistent with other diffs~
  5. 01:51:432 (1) - Ah, 1/1 shorter to make the following objects be more far from the spinner, and it's a good time to end spinner due to the song nope, I see the Spinner end should be here and want to keep clap at this place
  6. 02:02:612 (1) - You know that Yeah, and I want to keep them~
  7. 02:11:337 (1) - ^ ^
  8. 02:20:063 (1) - ^ ^
  9. 02:24:153 (5) - You should do a blanket here with (1).Try this! Uh I like this

Thanks for mod~ :3

http://puu.sh/1d9sY
Lally
Hi Gabe moe moe moe (๑╹ω╹๑)/ as you requested here a mod :3

[General]

why kiai time ? i don't find it nice ;W;
00:43:808 - 00:43:944
00:52:534 - 00:52:670
01:18:711 - 01:18:847
01:27:436 - 01:27:573

[Rain]

00:46:807 remove this and add a reversarrov-slider from:
00:46:535


01:21:710 remove this and add a reversarrov-slider from:
01:21:437

01:58:794 remove this and add a reversarrov-slider from:
01:58:794 same here

02:22:790 remove this and add a reversarrov-slider from:
02:22:517

02:27:153 remove this and add a reversarrov-slider from:
02:26:880

[Konei's Cloud]

01:33:163 - better to end this spinner here 01:35:617

01:51:432 - what about something like this here :


[Sunshine!]
00:53:352 - it sounds so empty :V try with something like this:


00:55:533 - here too ^

01:26:073 - here too ^

01:35:344 (1,2,3) - thats looks not good :V i think here it will be nice to see a little jump try maybe to give more spacing

btw
01:13:257 (3,4,5,6,1) i like it *-*
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