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Tarja - Until My Last Breath

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Wisakedjak
232 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Wisakedjak
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 29 Ağustos 2014 Cuma at 08:02:06

Artist: Tarja
Title: Until My Last Breath
Tags: nightwish turunen symphonic metal what lies beneath shiro odaril -Bakari-
BPM: 127
Filesize: 8222kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Normal (1,68 stars, 251 notes)
  2. Easy (1,44 stars, 197 notes)
  3. Hard (2,89 stars, 444 notes)
  4. Shiro's Insane (3,67 stars, 602 notes)
Download: Tarja - Until My Last Breath
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Until my last breath, you'll never know~

Hit-sounds are taken from Shiro's beatmap, Come Cover Me. Thank you for sharing them with me Shiro<3 =D ~Also thank you for the storyboard, you helped me very much with this map.
Last edited by Wisakedjak , edited 61 times in total.
Sapherd
1 post
Joined September 2012
Sapherd
Thank you very much for making this! :) Can't wait for the finished product!
Any idea if you'll be making more by Tarja in the future?
Wisakedjak
232 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Wisakedjak

Sapherd wrote:

Thank you very much for making this! :) Can't wait for the finished product!
Any idea if you'll be making more by Tarja in the future?
Yes, I'm planning to make 3-4 songs from Tarja. Also I'm trying to finish this beatmap as soon as possible, hope you'll like it =P
Mercurial
Mercurial
Supporting because Tarja.
Dualityy_old
1 post
Joined September 2012
Dualityy_old
It'll be amazing :3
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin

Mercurial wrote:

Supporting because Tarja.
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro

XavierJones wrote:

Hit-sounds are taken from Shiro's beatmap, Come Cover Me. Thank you for sharin' them with meh Shiro<3 =D
You're welcome. You better use them well though. >=(
I'm making an Insane for this, as you asked me.
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Finished *-*

http://puu.sh/1dIHg
Mercurial
Mercurial
This map will be awesome ♥
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Hi, just posting to say that offset needs +5ms (8088). And that I'm still mapping the Insane - very slowly.
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Hitsounds modu istedigin icin yapıyorum :(

Normal

00:15:647- finish
00:23:206- ^
00:30:765- ^
01:23:678- ^
01:46:355- 1 sol lütfen
01:52:025- 1 sag lütfen
02:59:584- 3 grid asagı cekmek icin elinden geleni yap bar a dokunuyo
03:47:300- tekrar kiai yaparsan bütün difflerde hepsi aynı olmak zorunda kalıyo ve bu cok igrenc bana göre shiroya da sor oda begenmicek :D

Hard

00:43:993 (1,2,3,4,5)- söyle bir combo pattern yaparsan daha iyi olur
SPOILER

01:08:560- finish
01:16:119- ^
01:23:206- ne yapcagını biliyosun ilerdede var
01:34:780- circle ekle 01:35:017- spin ekle
02:16:591- finish
02:24:150- ^
02:31:710- ^
02:46:828- bi finish koy birde bu slideri bir tik daha uzat kırmızıyla dönüs saglasın daha güzel oluyo
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
FINALLY DONE AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Took me over a month, sorry. =x

Here's the diff. Make a new difficulty and name it Shiro's Insane, then open the .osu in notepad and delete everything after [TimingPoints] (this line included), then copypaste this into the .osu file. Also add Shiro and Odaril to the tags of all difficulties.

I tweaked the timing a bit, so here's what I have. It's already changed in my diff. BPM staying 127,000 all the time:
offset 8088
offset 106362 01:46:362 -
offset 113914 01:53:914 -

Remember to resnap everything. And don't kd.


[TimingPoints]
8088,472.44094488189,4,1,0,30,1,0
13757,-166.666666666667,4,1,0,30,0,0
14229,-142.857142857143,4,1,0,35,0,0
14702,-125,4,1,0,40,0,0
15174,-111.111111111111,4,1,0,45,0,0
15647,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
38265,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
68560,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
98796,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
106362,472.44094488189,4,2,1,50,1,0
113914,472.44094488189,4,2,1,50,1,0
136591,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
166810,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
166827,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
197063,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
227299,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0


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HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
also add to tag ''copy - paste'' ASFGHNJMKÖKMNVFD

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Wisakedjak
232 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Wisakedjak
thank you for that lovely diff shiro, now we are done! <3
hehe helldawn =D and thanks everyone who supports meh :P
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
alright~ mod time o3o/ from in-game pm ♥

Reply my mod and tell me what's fixed or not - if not - WHY! It's important because it will help me to improve my mods :)

[General]
  1. According to AiBat 1.0 kiai#2 (Shiro's Insane) starts 1ms earlier than on other diffs
  2. try slider tickrate 2? I'm not sure - but it sounds better for me
  3. Aspect ratio on your bg looks a bit wrong. Anyway, i'm not sure
[HellDawn's Easy]
  1. OD-1 or -2 because you have too many OMGSOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG sliders
  2. 00:15:647 - this is START of another part of music. Guitar and drumms actually STARTS here. You totally shouldn't END slider here because it feels wrong and pointless.
  3. 00:25:095 - at least separate this loud beat from others - if you want to keep this long and pointless (imo) slider - at least make 00:25:095 - MUCH louder to follow music.
  4. 00:34:072 - music/vocals and everything STOPS here. There's absolutely NOTHING to follow. Yeah, cut this slider please because it's unplayable. and by the way, 00:34:544 - it will be great if you put here start of another slider.
  5. 00:51:552 - i'm sure that slider should starts here because vocals start here. It will be perfect if you move slider 1/1 arlier and fix spacing.this way
  6. 00:55:332 (1) - I think that this slider should ends at 00:56:749 - to follow vocals. By the way 00:57:221 (2,1) - swap new combos to follow vocals
  7. 01:06:906 (1) - really awkward beat. if I were you I'd replace it with 1/2 reversed slider and some of NCs here are totally pointless. this way
  8. 01:12:339 - You should put circle here or end slider here to FOLLOW vocals vecause I can clearly hear that word "Breath" ends at 01:12:339 -
  9. 01:14:229 (4) - start of slider is overlapped by hitburst. It will confuse beginners and they probaly will not know how to read this pattern. :( just unstack this pattern to fix it
  10. 01:21:788 (1) - i bet that you've put this slider here just to put something. It sunds off and plays awkward. Same problem as before - should ends 1/1 later (at 01:22:261 ) - i think it will follow music much better
  11. 01:36:906 (1) - nonononononono! start spinner at 01:36:434 - or at 01:37:379 to follow vocals. (if you will start spinner at 01:37:379 - add reverse at 01:35:962 (4) - to follow music)
  12. 01:46:362 - I really don't like that BPM-change section doesn't has note. It will confusing for beginners. So.. try to start mapping from 01:46:362 - and move break somewhere else? This beat totally SHOULD be mapped
  13. 02:05:253 (1) - meh.. guess what? you're too fast! This slider should ends at 02:08:559,
    how to.jpg
  14. 02:24:150 (1) - same probleam. your sliders are OFF vocals, imo. I think you should end this slider 02:28:402 - to be more reasonable and to follow vocals
  15. 02:28:875 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't you think that 7 circles in a row is a bit too many gor easiest diff? i think so - please convert some of circles into sliders.
  16. 02:47:773 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst! It's okay for harder diffs - but here it's confusing for beginners.
  17. 03:01:709 - I'd put circle here to end this part with the loudest beat of this section. 9circle at 03:01:709 - + finish at this circle :V)
[Normal]
  1. Somehow I feel like AR5 fis better
  2. OD/HP Drain - 1? BPM isn't really fast and no need to stress players with hard OD/HD, don't you think so? :)
  3. 00:15:647 (3) - without new combo SUDDENLY volume/music change may confuse players. New combo here? If you'll do it you can also try to put some 1/2s here to make combo-chains look better this way
  4. 00:21:316 (6,1) - swap NCs to follow music? :) by the way, it will fit with your pattern
  5. 00:38:088 (1,2) - and you're breaking your pattern again :P NEWCOMBO1/2 and after this vocals start with (2) and it looks awkward. 00:38:088 (1,2) - swap NC here and it will fork fine, imo
  6. 01:06:198 (4,1,2,3) - a bit hard to read/understand. May confuse some normal players - it will be great if you'll make it easier to read
  7. 01:08:560 - start of kiai section supposed to be something EPIC and awesome - that's why you must put circle at 01:08:560 - this way?
  8. 01:11:631 (5) - sounds a bit off to me. i think that word "breath" starts at 01:11:395 - if you want to fix it try this?
  9. 01:24:623 (4,1) - same problem here. but this time it sounds the way better. but there's always space for improvements! try this pattern
  10. 01:33:481 - seriously? reverse here? It doesn't even fits here :V
  11. 01:38:796 - don't silence this section! PUT HERE LOUD FINISH :V It will follow music better
  12. 02:10:213 - how about circle here to follow vocals? I think it's a good idea.
  13. 02:16:118 (1,2) - remove (1) and put new combo at (2) start of kiai should have new combo because kiai is the most AWESOME part of any map
  14. 02:57:457 (5,7) - listen to them. (5) sounds so weak - and (7) is clearly hearable. Remove (5) to make flow/rhythm consistent
  15. 03:16:590 (1,2) - same as 02:16:118 (1,2)
[Hard]
  1. Same AR as Insane? o3o looks a bit..weird. anyway, Ar7 fits here perfectly
  2. 01:08:560 - sam as always - start of kiai should be start of a slider or circle - not end/reverse of a slide because it looks boring and weird.
  3. 02:16:118 (1,2,3) - same as above here ;_;
  4. 02:27:929 (9,1) - OH MAN I used to love your rhythm and here you break my heart :< 02:27:929 (9) - remove reverse here and put circle with new combo at 02:28:402 -
  5. 02:30:764 - let's just put random vocals in the middle of slider? :V sounds awkward and plays bad as well. meh..
  6. 02:34:780 (5) - oh.. what happend? Why did you stopped? flow was awesome before kiai #2 and here 02:34:780 (5) - this one should starts at previous white tick
  7. 02:34:780 (5) - a perfect place for circle or stream? Put at least something here to keep consistent flow
  8. 03:01:473 (5) - point out spacing changes with new combo. It'll be great and we will know how to play your map
  9. 03:01:473 (5) - same problem as before. DO NOT PUT SOMETHING TO FILL empty space. Put beats to follow rhythm! Slider follows nothing. And vocals appear in the middle of sliders actually confusing
  10. 03:43:520 - start spinner here to be consistent with other diffs and to follow music?
[Shiro's Insane]
  1. AR7? :V It's a bit too slow for your flow and it looks boting. Try at least AR8. please!
  2. 00:30:765 (1,2,3) - jump>antijump pattern right after streams? May confuse some beginners and probably some players will play it as 1/4 stream. (use regular spacing instead of antijumps? :V)
  3. 03:43:520 (1,2,3,4) - and some similar patterns - I'd like to see more consistent jumps D: 1 > 2.7 > 1.7 > 1.0 flows really weird.

    well, Shiro is Shiro. This diff is good.
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good luck :3/
Wisakedjak
232 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Wisakedjak

-Bakari- wrote:

[Normal]
  1. Somehow I feel like AR5 fis better - okay
  2. OD/HP Drain - 1? BPM isn't really fast and no need to stress players with hard OD/HD, don't you think so? :) okay
  3. 00:15:647 (3) - without new combo SUDDENLY volume/music change may confuse players. New combo here? If you'll do it you can also try to put some 1/2s here to make combo-chains look better this way
  4. 00:21:316 (6,1) - swap NCs to follow music? :) by the way, it will fit with your pattern okay
  5. 00:38:088 (1,2) - and you're breaking your pattern again :P NEWCOMBO1/2 and after this vocals start with (2) and it looks awkward. 00:38:088 (1,2) - swap NC here and it will fork fine, imo okay
  6. 01:06:198 (4,1,2,3) - a bit hard to read/understand. May confuse some normal players - it will be great if you'll make it easier to read okay
  7. 01:08:560 - start of kiai section supposed to be something EPIC and awesome - that's why you must put circle at 01:08:560 - this way? NO! :p
  8. 01:11:631 (5) - sounds a bit off to me. i think that word "breath" starts at 01:11:395 - if you want to fix it try this?
  9. 01:24:623 (4,1) - same problem here. but this time it sounds the way better. but there's always space for improvements! try this pattern okay
  10. 01:33:481 - seriously? reverse here? It doesn't even fits here :V okay
  11. 01:38:796 - don't silence this section! PUT HERE LOUD FINISH :V It will follow music better okay
  12. 02:10:213 - how about circle here to follow vocals? I think it's a good idea. NO, it already fits with music.
  13. 02:16:118 (1,2) - remove (1) and put new combo at (2) start of kiai should have new combo because kiai is the most AWESOME part of any map I can't remove this new combo after the spinner, but added new combo on the start of kiai
  14. 02:57:457 (5,7) - listen to them. (5) sounds so weak - and (7) is clearly hearable. Remove (5) to make flow/rhythm consistent NO, this part is ok :p
  15. 03:16:590 (1,2) - same as 02:16:118 (1,2)
[Hard]
  1. Same AR as Insane? o3o looks a bit..weird. anyway, Ar7 fits here perfectly 7 is ok in hard, shirooo will do it 8 i think, am i right shiro? =P
  2. 01:08:560 - sam as always - start of kiai should be start of a slider or circle - not end/reverse of a slide because it looks boring and weird.
  3. 02:16:118 (1,2,3) - same as above here ;_;
  4. 02:27:929 (9,1) - OH MAN I used to love your rhythm and here you break my heart :< 02:27:929 (9) - remove reverse here and put circle with new combo at 02:28:402 - couldnt find anything to do here haha :D but okay :p
  5. 02:30:764 - let's just put random vocals in the middle of slider? :V sounds awkward and plays bad as well. meh.. NO, here it is fit with drums.
  6. 02:34:780 (5) - oh.. what happend? Why did you stopped? flow was awesome before kiai #2 and here 02:34:780 (5) - this one should starts at previous white tick no, no.
  7. 02:34:780 (5) - a perfect place for circle or stream? Put at least something here to keep consistent flow
  8. 03:01:473 (5) - point out spacing changes with new combo. It'll be great and we will know how to play your map okay
  9. 03:01:473 (5) - same problem as before. DO NOT PUT SOMETHING TO FILL empty space. Put beats to follow rhythm! Slider follows nothing. And vocals appear in the middle of sliders actually confusing sliders are following the drums' rhythm, thats ok.
  10. 03:43:520 - start spinner here to be consistent with other diffs and to follow music? okay
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
good luck :3/ ty for your mod bakari! <3
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
http://puu.sh/1rBut

I accepted few suggests
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro

-Bakari- wrote:

[Shiro's Insane]
  1. AR7? :V It's a bit too slow for your flow and it looks boting. Try at least AR8. please! O_o I'm not even sure why I used AR7 here. That would explain why it felt so weird when I was testplaying. Fixed !
  2. 00:30:765 (1,2,3) - jump>antijump pattern right after streams? May confuse some beginners and probably some players will play it as 1/4 stream. (use regular spacing instead of antijumps? :V) The spacing of the anti-jump isn't the same as the spacing for the streams. Also, the jump before the anti-jumps makes them behave like stacks (and they're meant to be like stacks). I wanted to make the difference between the guitar (high-pitched, and very energic, with different tones and stuff) and the bass (low-pitched sounds, and tons of times the same note) by having a very energic mapping for the guitar (jumps and stuff) and a slower one of the bass (anti-jumps).
  3. 03:43:520 (1,2,3,4) - and some similar patterns - I'd like to see more consistent jumps D: 1 > 2.7 > 1.7 > 1.0 flows really weird. I can understand. Changed. I don't know what similar patterns you're referring to though, it would have been good to point them out.

    well, Shiro is Shiro. This diff is good. thanks
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
good luck :3/
Thanks for the mod !

osu file format v10

[General]
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UnderminE
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UnderminE
[Easy]
00:42:576 (3) - Ne yapmaya çalıştığını anlar gibi oldum ama yine de çirkin durmuş
00:52:025 (1) - Easy oynayanlar için bunu yakalamak zor olur, istersen iki tick geriye alıp "voice" derken yakala.
01:07:615 (1,2) - Şu ikisinin sesini normal kullandığın volume'den birazcık daha fazla kullan ki arkadaki gümbürtüyü yakalayabilesin.
01:16:119 (1) - Biraz karışık değil mi ya bu Easy için. Sağ kısım geliyo ama ortada nereye gittiği belli değil altta kalıyo Normal olsa neyse de :P
01:33:127 (1) - Azıcık sola kaydır ortalasın alttaki iki circle'ı.
01:54:859 (3,2) - Düzgün stackla : <
GENE KOYMUŞ KALBİ :D:D Ha bir de ek not, bazı yerlerde normal-whistle kullansan şöyle sliderda falan çok deli gider bu mape.

[Normal]
00:34:544 (1,2,3) - Bunun yerine 2 pattern öncesi gibi arkadaki o gitarın melodisini yakalasan daha mantıklı olur. Hem aynı çeşit slider tipini çok fazla kullanmamış olursun.
00:44:229 (1,2) - Ayrıca hep böyle distance snap'e uymak zorunda değilsin, üstüste stackleyerek de güzel patternler yakalarsın. Normal'de kullanabilirsin böyle şeyleri.
01:33:127 (4,5) - whistle koy buralara da, sessiz kalmasın
02:32:654 - Ya şu kısımlarda Normal whistle kullanmak çok hoş olur bence. Yani sadece slider'ın üstünde kısa kısa normal whistle'lar iyi gider, çok yükses sesle olmamak şartıyla.

[Hard]
00:30:765 - ve 00:38:324 - arasında deli hitsound eksikliği var.
01:07:615 - Uğur'a da dediğim gibi bu arkadaki baterinin sesi yükseldiği için sen de buraya azıcık bi volume-up yapsan fena olmaz bence sessiz olmasından iyidir.
01:34:662 (1) - çok erken çıkıyo bu spinner ya. Burası 01:34:899 - ya da 01:35:017 - burası daha uygun bence.
Hitsoundlarda farklı şeyler yaratabilirsin şarkı çok uygun. Mesela şu kısım için 03:31:236 - 1'e Normal vericek şekilde 1 normal 1 soft şeklinde gidebilirsin o kısım için. Softlara whistle gelicek tabi. Sadece soft sounda sadık kalma yani.
Hmm sonda spinner'ı beyaz tick üzerine koymuşsun, o zaman o demin dediğim 01:34:662 (1) - şunu da beyaza koy.
Normal whistle'lar dediğim gibi çok güzel gider bu mape. İnceledim şu an ve Shiro yardırmış mesela tam aklımdaki gibi kullanmış :D

[Insane]
01:06:906 - How about a bit volume-up for this drum part? Or using Normal hitsounds?
02:14:937 - Same

Şimdilik bu kadar bakalım, hayde iyi şanslar gençler \:D/
Birdy
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