Ooh! This looks like it will be fun to play! Let's see if it will be fun to mod too!
Okay, your offset/BPM is spot-on. Let's get started!
Warning: Long Mod post is long.
0:14.611: (5) This may look right pattern-wise, but space-wise, it should actually be a bit to the right.
0:29.611: (1) Too far of a jump from your previous combo. Move this closer.
0:31.861: (4) This is actually too close to the previous note. Move it farther (and move any notes after it that you must to compensate for this change). Same thing with (5), actually; move it farther away.
0:37.111: (1 Sl Tail), (2), (3) Too far away from each other. Space these closer.
0:39.361: (4) This should be a New Combo. (The orange repeating slider before it can be part of the red combo before it if you want).
0:40.861: (7) No. This is obviously too close to the (6) considering the spacing of the rest of this combo. Move it further away.
0:42.361: (9) Same issue; too close, even in relation to the rest of the combo it's part of. Stick it further away somewhere.
0:46.861: (2) Same issue; too close again. In this combo, the (3) & (4) should be closer together than the (1) & (2).
0:52.486: (3) I finally get to say "too far away" again. Move this closer to the (2) circle.
0:57.361: (1) Doesn't matter if this is a new combo, it should be the same distance from the (12) that precedes it as the entire previous combo's circles are from each other.
0:59.986: (4) A bit too close. Move it down a notch or two.
1:02.986: (5) Too close to the previous slider ^. That solution should fix this problem as well.
1:05.986: (1) Way too close to the end of the previous slider. Move the thing two notches up.
1:07.861: (2) Too far off, actually. Move this closer to the end of the previous slider.
1:09.736: (1), (2), (3) Spaced too close. Give these notes the same amount of room as is seen between (3) and (4).
1:13.861: (5) Absolutely way too far. Move it closer to the end of the previous slider.
1:16.111: (Entire Combo) The first circle should be further from the end of the slider it comes after, and you should seriously consider spacing this combo's notes closer together.
1:25.486: (4) Move this closer to the (3).
1:28.486: (1), (2), (3) Put these closer together, but move the (4) a but further away.
1:35.986: (5) I'd put this farther away from the (4).
1:37.861: (4) Move this a grid notch to the right.
1:39.736: (Red 1) Move this further from the end of the slider that comes before it.
1:47.986: (4) Move this slider over to the right (and move any notes after it that you must to compensate).
1:53.986: (5) NO. Entirely too close to the (4).
1:54.736: (6) Also entirely too close to the (5).
2:10.486: (2) Move this a grid notch to the right.
2:11:986: (1) Move this slider down a bit to space it from the last note in the previous combo.
2:17.236: (5) Turn off Grid Snap temporarily so you can move this HALF a grid notch to the right.
2:22.486: (2) For some reason I feel like forgiving this because of how far it is time-wise from the end of the slider. To "fix" it anyway, move it further away.
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2:50.986: (2) should be closer to the end of the slider. Don't move the rest of the combo, as the rest of the combo is spaced properly.
2:53.236: (6) Too close to the (5).
2:54.736: (9) Too close to the (8).
2:55.486: (10), (11), (12), (13) What is this?! Space these further apart! As much room as you have between (13) and (14).
2:59.986: Praise for a really nice lengthy slider that isn't boringly easy to follow.
3:04.486: (1), (2), (3) I'd move these closer to the end of that freakishly awesome slider, personally, but considering the fact that one did just complete a big slider, you can consider these fine where they are if you like.
3:07.486: (6) Too close to the (5).
3:12.736: (2) Put this further away from the end of the previous slider.
3:17.986: (5) Should be further from the (4) circle. Also, (5) (6) (7) should be a bit closer together than that.
3:21.611: (10) Too close to the (9) circle.
3:23.986: (3 Sl) & (4 Sl) Move these sliders down a bit to space the (3) apart more from the (2) that comes before it. The (5) should be closer to the (4 Sl)'s tail, and your (6) is way too close to the (5 Sl)'s tail.
3:29.986: (1) This slider should be moved a bit to the left to get it closer to the tail of the slider before it.
3:35.986: (1 Sl) Turn off Grid Snap temporarily and move this to the left like a notch and a half or so to get it closer to the previous combo's (4).
3:40.111: (2) You'll have to move this closer to the end of the slider you just moved.
3:42.461: (3) Move this to the left a notch or two.
3:44.986: (6) I'd move this a tad closer to the (5).
3:46.486: (7), (8), (9) Put these closer together.
3:52.111: (2), (3), (4) Put these closer together.
3:53.986: (1) Must be closer to the end of the previous combo.
3:59.611: (Sp) Move your spinner one white tick to the right on the timeline, so it starts at 3:59.986. This will feel more appropriate to players.
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I will accept kudosu in the form of credit, debit, or a declaration of undying love; whichever suits you best (although I really like the third one ^.^).
Seriously though, for some strange reason, I like this song. I want to see where you go with this.
Despite the heavy modding seen in this post, I supply a star, as I want to show my support for this beatmap.