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Easy00:17:443 (2) - You should NC this to keep the consistence, you put a NC on every big white tick, except this one.
I didn't put those NC on purpose. In this Special case I don't add it because of the pattern. The times below are either same reason, or because the vocal is still belonging to each other, so I didn't add it.I'll show below the places you should put NC because ^
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00:26:673 (1,2) - It would be good if you improve this blanket.
Changed01:06:366 (3,2) - What about curve these 2 sliders a bit to improve the flow? Example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951042 Done 01:10:058 (2) - You can curve this a bit too, for the same motive as above. Example:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951044 DoneNormal00:59:904 (1) - Rotate it 10° with Selection Centre marked for improve the flow.
Not possible to Keep DS to following pattern then, so I kept it the way it is01:05:443 (3) - Same as above but 15º or 20º here.
Disaggree here01:48:827 (3,4) - These 2 notes, they look a bit hard for a normal, I think you should stack with 01:49:750 (5) - , move 01:49:750 (5) - to x212 y308 and stack 01:48:827 (3,4) -
I don't think it's too hard, so I'll Keep it for now01:57:135 (3) - Same as above, it's a bit hard and the flow is weird. But don't stack, instead of stacking do this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951079.
Disaggree02:05:443 (6) - Ctrl + G This for better flow imo.
Messes DS, since they are symmetric to each otherHard00:24:827 (6,7,8) - Ctrl + G these for a better flow. The flow between 00:24:366 (5,6) - isn't good, this is why you should Ctrl + G.
Done00:28:519 (5) - There is no reason for a big jump like this imo. Decrease the DS between 00:27:596 (4,5) - a bit:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951101.
I will Keep those, I think they do fit00:29:443 (6) - If you agree with what I said above, move to x264 y144.
00:32:212 (6) - Again this jump is too big. If you want to keep a jump move this to x340 y120, 00:32:673 (7) - to x188 y96 and 00:33:135 (8) - to x132 y236, so it won't flow weird.
01:00:366 (2) - I think you should Ctrl + G this, it will flow much better.
Done01:05:559 (2) - Object isn't snapped.
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Fixed all three01:12:827 (5) - Do what I said on 00:28:519 (5) - if you want.
01:33:135 (1) - It will flow much better if you do this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951124.
Done01:40:981 (4,5,6) - You should Ctrl + G, this triplet + jump is a bit hard, and it will flow much better.
Done01:44:673 (2) - Also, Ctrl + G, there is no reason for a big jump like this ):
DoneInsane00:57:480 (9,10) - Ctrl + G for a better flow, and symmetry.
Done01:41:788 (9,10) - Sabe as above.
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