Hi, as asked by pm.
Also, M4M :3
[Easy]
First Try•00:10:521 (4) - I have two things to say here, you should try to make this slider curved and also, why you started this slider at 00:10:521? I know you placed it for the vocal, but I don't think it fits well here. Moving it to 00:10:745 will be better because of the bass' sound at 00:11:193.
•00:32:685 (1,3) - These two sliders can be improved by curving it a bit more, like
this•00:32:238 (5,2) - Add a new combo to the circle (5) since the vocal is following and also, stack these two circles toogether.
•00:45:670 (1) - Delete the new combo here since 00:44:775 (3,1,2) - is a pattern and it will fit the vocal with the previous combo. Also, 00:47:461 (3) - Add and 00:47:909 (1) - Delete the new combos.
•00:51:491 (1) - For this one, I thought you could add a red node on the center just like
this•01:08:058 (1,2) - This "blacket" can be way more better by changing some nodes' emplacement.
•01:15:670 (1) - For this slider, you could add a whistle on the slider-slide. It will mostly fit with the thing he's singing.
•01:29:999 (2) - Since the previous slider is a straight line, you could make this slider curved or do any other form with it.
•01:31:790 - This whistle breaks the Finish consistency. So you should replace the whistle by a Finish and I don't think it makes it too loud.
•01:45:223 (1) - You should reverse the beginning of this slider because the flow is not really good with the previous note. (You should also reverse the other notes after this slider)
•01:53:730 (1,2,3,4) - Something is really wrong here, there's no consistency at all. Make the claps on two and fourth line of the timeline.
Pretty well constructed, these emplacement, hitsounds are really good.
[Normal]
•00:01:790 (2) - This whistle
MUSTshould be deleted because the previous and the next whistle are accompagned with the bass. So I don't really think it's necessary to add a whistle here since there's no bass/drum or any other instrument's sound.
•00:10:521 (1) - I sincerely think this slider should be in the bottom instead because the transition from the previous slider to this note, won't be really good.
•00:17:014 (3,4) - Look at your previous difficulty (Easy). This is not the same thing. On the Easy difficulty, you had a whistle to the circle (3) (Because it was a slider) and nothing on the circle 4. So I don't know, maybe keeping the consistency with your difficulties may be better? Anyways, I will try to do another consistency because of this difficulty.
•00:25:521 - Since there's an instrument sound here, add a whistle
•00:29:103 (1,2) - We can see that both ends are not stacked together. Try to stack them.
•00:47:909 (1,2) - I don't know, I feel like these two sliders are weird in some ways. The end of the slider one is not really close from the beginning of the other sliders and then, the end of the slider 2 is close for the beginning of the other slider. Ohwell.
•01:24:626 - It feels empty here. Add a whistle like the next combo.
•01:40:745 (4) - You could add a finish here to keep the consistency.
•02:04:476 (4,5,1) - To reproduce these sliders: 02:02:685 (2,3) - , the slider 4 and 1 should be reversed.
•02:08:506 (4) - A whistle should be added here for the consistency.
The only thing I may say here, be carefull with the new combos. New combos are normaly used to fit with the vocal..
[Hard]
•00:01:790 (2) - Same as the previous difficulty, do not add a whistle here because there's no instrument sound here.
•00:23:730 - Add a whistle here because
there's an instrument sound here.
•00:33:133 - A whistle sounds pretty good here because of your combo.
Seriously, I can't can't find that much on Hard. Because of this, I'm going to come back to recheck Hard.
Good luck! :3