This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2008年12月25日 at 下午 11:07:03

Artist: Tommy Heavenly6
Title: Pray
BPM: 178
Filesize: 10260kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (3.11 stars, 184 notes)
2. Hard (4.8 stars, 363 notes)
3. Moonstar Difficulty (4.91 stars, 425 notes)
4. Normal (4.34 stars, 247 notes)

Download: Tommy Heavenly6 - Pray
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This my 14th map.

Hope everyone can enjoy it.

2009.02.16
[Hard] done.

2009.02.17
[Moonstar Difficulty] upload
[Normal] done.
[Easy] done.
Add a background.

hi~this is my part

Download: Tommy Heavenly6 - Pray (kioukiou) [Moonstar Difficulty].osu

Easy
00:47:86 (1) - i would do something to give more time after the spinner finishes to recover form spinning since this is targetted for newbies same goes for every other spinner in this dif but you dont really need to do this if you dont want to
01:14:49 (1,2) - line the enpoints together so its neat

Normal
01:26:97 (1,2,3,4) - line up sliders
01:52:25 (2,3) - line up
02:08:76 (5,6) - line up

Hard
fine

Moonstar
00:36:408 (1) - too close to previous note
01:13:824 (4) - same
01:19:21 (1,2,3,4) - these endpoints are sloppy so stack the endpoints
02:35:39 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders look sloppy on top of eachother

use moonstars custom colors for all difs

good map

Now for actual things that actually influence the map and that are noticeable (pre-supergarlic modding, BTW, though his things valid I guess, but not what I found)!

Easy:

Fine. Spinners were easy to recover from, but eh.

Normal:

Only thing here would be you might want to shorten some of the spinners by half a beat, so you have time to recover for the next note. Don't have to though, only had trouble with one or two spinners at first, then no issues.

Hard:

00:23:09 (2) - This feels weird, probably because it starts on a soft 'sss' sound. Might want to change that.
00:25:79 (2) - ^
Nothing else, really

Moonstar:

All I would really say needs changing here would be bumping up the overall difficulty by 1. Plays better, and higher score (considering it's the highest star difficulty, but eh).

You could tone down on the repeating sliders at the beginning, but that's just me, and doesn't really need changing

Good work both of you! Catchy song.

supergarlic wrote:

Easy
00:47:86 (1) - i would do something to give more time after the spinner finishes to recover form spinning since this is targetted for newbies same goes for every other spinner in this dif but you dont really need to do this if you dont want to - I think its ok , so i wont change it.
01:14:49 (1,2) - line the enpoints together so its neat - Fix

Normal
01:26:97 (1,2,3,4) - line up sliders - Fix
01:52:25 (2,3) - line up - Fix
02:08:76 (5,6) - line up - Fix

Moonstar - Fix
00:36:408 (1) - too close to previous note
01:13:824 (4) - same
01:19:21 (1,2,3,4) - these endpoints are sloppy so stack the endpoints
02:35:39 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders look sloppy on top of eachother

use moonstars custom colors for all difs - Done.

good map

Ekaru wrote:

Now for actual things that actually influence the map and that are noticeable (pre-supergarlic modding, BTW, though his things valid I guess, but not what I found)!

Normal:

Only thing here would be you might want to shorten some of the spinners by half a beat, so you have time to recover for the next note. Don't have to though, only had trouble with one or two spinners at first, then no issues.

Hard:

00:23:09 (2) - This feels weird, probably because it starts on a soft 'sss' sound. Might want to change that. - I think its fine , so I wont chang it.
00:25:79 (2) - ^ - ^
Nothing else, really

Moonstar:

All I would really say needs changing here would be bumping up the overall difficulty by 1. Plays better, and higher score (considering it's the highest star difficulty, but eh). - Done.
You could tone down on the repeating sliders at the beginning, but that's just me, and doesn't really need changing

Good work both of you! Catchy song.

Thanks for your help.

[Easy]
00:54:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you put these in two vertical lines?
01:46:85 (2) - make this parallel to 4
01:54:94 (2) - this isnt quite symmetrical
02:12:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you put these in vertical lines too?
02:18:54 (2) - not quite symmetrical


[Normal]
00:28:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, I would prefer these aligned vertically
00:45:17 (3) - stack on the fading 3
00:57:30 (9) - new combo and vertical lines thing :/
01:24:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - vertical lines?
01:49:21 (6) - stack on the fading 2
01:50:90 (1) - stack the endpoint on the start of 6
02:31:35 (3) - stack on the fading 3
02:40:45 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - horizontal lines?


[Hard]
00:25:79 (2) - move this out from under 4
00:31:68 (9) - make this symmetrical
00:43:15 (10) - stack under the fading 7
00:57:30 (10) - new combo
02:15:84 (10) - ^
02:42:64 (6) - this isnt quite centered between 5 and 7


[Moonstar Difficulty]
00:14:83 (1) - align horizontally with 3
00:33:03 (8) - stack more neatly under 7
00:35:06 (1) - align horizontally with 6
00:40:45 (1) - stack under fading 2
00:52:58 (2) - move out from under fading 2
00:55:28 (2) - stack under fading 5
01:19:21 (11) - new combo
01:19:89 (12) - stack the endpoint on the endpoint of 11
01:20:56 (13,14) - stack the endpoints
02:04:04 (3) - move out from under 2
02:06:07 (3) - ^
02:13:15 (1) - align vertically with 8
02:35:39 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints

Download: HO-KAGO TEA TIME - U&I (Full ver.) (Raging Bull) [Hard].osu

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:54:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you put these in two vertical lines?
01:46:85 (2) - make this parallel to 4
01:54:94 (2) - this isnt quite symmetrical
02:12:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can you put these in vertical lines too?
02:18:54 (2) - not quite symmetrical

All fixed

[Normal]
00:28:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - again, I would prefer these aligned vertically Fixed
00:45:17 (3) - stack on the fading 3 Fixed
00:57:30 (9) - new combo and vertical lines thing :/ not change
01:24:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - vertical lines? Fixed
01:49:21 (6) - stack on the fading 2 Fixed
01:50:90 (1) - stack the endpoint on the start of 6 Fixed
02:31:35 (3) - stack on the fading 3 Fixed
02:40:45 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - horizontal lines? Fixed



[Hard]
00:25:79 (2) - move this out from under 4 Fixed
00:31:68 (9) - make this symmetrical Fixed
00:43:15 (10) - stack under the fading 7 not change
00:57:30 (10) - new combo not change
02:15:84 (10) - ^ not change
02:42:64 (6) - this isnt quite centered between 5 and 7 Fixed


[Moonstar Difficulty]
00:14:83 (1) - align horizontally with 3
00:33:03 (8) - stack more neatly under 7
00:35:06 (1) - align horizontally with 6
00:40:45 (1) - stack under fading 2
00:52:58 (2) - move out from under fading 2
00:55:28 (2) - stack under fading 5
01:19:21 (11) - new combo
01:19:89 (12) - stack the endpoint on the endpoint of 11
01:20:56 (13,14) - stack the endpoints
02:04:04 (3) - move out from under 2
02:06:07 (3) - ^
02:13:15 (1) - align vertically with 8
02:35:39 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints

Some issues fixed.

Thanks for SFG's help.

Waiting for moonstar's fix.

Blub

Easy:
00:47:869,
00:53:262,
02:06:071,
02:11:464 以easy來說有點短(或對新手來說)
看要把spinner換掉或是延伸到前一拍的位置

01:04:048 比normal的spinner還短?(建議換掉)
01:27:223 可以試試結束在 01:30:088 聽起來比較好,只是稍嫌有點長

00:54:610~00:59:329,
02:12:812~02:17:532 感覺有點無聊? 放slider效果會好點

Spinner感覺有點多(12個)
用slider省略太多音,聽起來有點怪,試試做來回?
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Normal:
00:49:554 只有這個slider中間有哨音,後面的沒有
00:54:610~00:59:329 這種排法出現太多次?(副歌就很多)
01:28:992 看要不要結束在01:30:088 或是直接多二個來回就好了

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Hard:
副歌前的spinner我覺得沒必要,改成其他的會好玩點
01:49:554~01:50:902 這不是"新阿姆斯特朗旋風噴射阿姆斯特朗砲"嗎!!? (103訓)

slider扭的有點怪
沒有完整版的difficulty?
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Last
反正改不改應該都能rank
懶得話就別動吧

waiting for rank. so star it for higher position

Some small ideas (it's up to you if you want to follow them or not, of course):

Normal:

00:38:430 (5): Try reversing this slider once, and add a whistle to the last part. It sounds good to me, while still following the voice pattern (read below). Watch spacing if you do.
01:46:183 (x): Try adding a note with a whistle here. It follows the same pattern as the above note, and it sounds as good while still following the voice pattern. Watch spacing if you do.
1:56:970 (x): Same as above, try adding a whistle-note here. Also space.
02:32:026 (5): Make this note a slider (with whistle) whose end replaces 6. It feels better and follows the voice pattern.

Hard:

00:41:127 (5): Make this note a slider which ends at the red snap before 6 (1/8 Beat snap divisor)
00:41:633 (7): Remove this note. ;o
00:59:161 (17): Remove this note. ;o
00:59:498 (x): Add a note with clap here.


Some unspecific notes: I noticed some combos were long, review them. Also hitsounds, you're using clap alot. Make sure it sounds good. Sounding good has higher priority than sticking to a pattern.

Star awarded.

Easy:

00:57:30 (5) - New combo.
01:24:27 (4) - New combo.
02:15:50 (5) - New combo.

Normal:

00:57:30 (9) - New combo.
01:03:37 (1) - Move start 1/1 forward.
01:55:28 (8) - New combo.

Hard:

00:23:09 (2) - Out of place.
00:31:01 (6) - New combo.
00:56:29 (7) - New combo.
00:57:98 (7) - New combo.
01:14:16 (8) - Out of place. Plays better at 01:13:82.
01:21:91 (4) - New combo.
01:27:30 (7) - New combo.
02:15:50 (9) - New combo.

Moonstar Difficulty:

00:07:75 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:13:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:52 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:19 (10) - Add new combo.
00:18:54 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:89 (1,2) - Remove.
00:21:07 (1) - Drag spinner start to 00:19:89.
00:33:37 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:45 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:42:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:15 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:16 (4) - Add new combo.
00:59:32 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:02:70() - Add circle.
01:03:03() - Add circle.
01:02:70 (1) - Spinner goes from 01:03:71 to 01:05:39.
01:11:80 (3) - Out of place.
01:21:91 (15) - New combo.
01:22:58 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:26 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:93 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Out of place.
01:28:65 (1) - Drag end back 1/1.
01:47:19 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:51:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:62 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:56:97 (1) - Bad transition.
02:01:01 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:07:08 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:14:49 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:15:84 (9) - Add new combo.
02:16:52 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:17:19 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:17:86 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:32:02 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:34:72 (13) - Add new combo.
02:35:39 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:38:09 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:38:43 (9) - Add new combo.
02:45:17 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:45:50 (10) - Add new combo.
02:46:18 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:46:85 (1) - Remove new combo.

JarJarJacob wrote:

Easy:

00:57:30 (5) - New combo.
01:24:27 (4) - New combo.
02:15:50 (5) - New combo.

Normal:

00:57:30 (9) - New combo.
01:03:37 (1) - Move start 1/1 forward.
01:55:28 (8) - New combo.

Hard:

00:23:09 (2) - Out of place.
00:31:01 (6) - New combo.
00:56:29 (7) - New combo.
00:57:98 (7) - New combo.
01:14:16 (8) - Out of place. Plays better at 01:13:82.
01:21:91 (4) - New combo.
01:27:30 (7) - New combo.
02:15:50 (9) - New combo.

Moonstar Difficulty:

00:07:75 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:13:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:52 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:19 (10) - Add new combo.
00:18:54 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:89 (1,2) - Remove.
00:21:07 (1) - Drag spinner start to 00:19:89.
00:33:37 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:45 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:42:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:15 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:16 (4) - Add new combo.
00:59:32 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:02:70() - Add circle.
01:03:03() - Add circle.
01:02:70 (1) - Spinner goes from 01:03:71 to 01:05:39.
01:11:80 (3) - Out of place.
01:21:91 (15) - New combo.
01:22:58 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:26 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:93 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Out of place.
01:28:65 (1) - Drag end back 1/1.
01:47:19 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:51:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:62 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:56:97 (1) - Bad transition.
02:01:01 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:07:08 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:14:49 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:15:84 (9) - Add new combo.
02:16:52 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:17:19 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:17:86 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:32:02 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:34:72 (13) - Add new combo.
02:35:39 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:38:09 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:38:43 (9) - Add new combo.
02:45:17 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:45:50 (10) - Add new combo.
02:46:18 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:46:85 (1) - Remove new combo.

Sorry.

I wont be change anything in my difficulty.

because i think they are fine.

and thanks for help.

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