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This is a good map, first try or otherwise. Kudos to you.
BPM is right and the offset is alright

00.34.148-0.35.384 - Turn grid snap off and place the starts/ends of them so they cover the others and do not overlap.
00:51:972-00:54:442 - Doable for sure.
01:02:295-01:03:531 - Yes, change it.
01:42:354-01:43:324 - The first one is too short. Remove it and replace it with circles or sliders.

00:09:08 (5) - Spacing problem. Move it.
01:17:56 (13) - Spacing.
01:58:67 (5) - Make this 1/4 longer.

You also forgot to inherit the fourth and fifth timing sections.
There are probably more spacing inconsistencies, I will check more carefully later.

JarJarJacob wrote:

This is a good map, first try or otherwise. Kudos to you.
BPM is right and the offset is alright

00.34.148-0.35.384 - Turn grid snap off and place the starts/ends of them so they cover the others and do not overlap.
Done
00:51:972-00:54:442 - Doable for sure.
cool
01:02:295-01:03:531 - Yes, change it.
Removed the earlier slider (5) and replaced it with a circle and made a new slider (6) that covers it up
01:42:354-01:43:324 - The first one is too short. Remove it and replace it with circles or sliders.
Replaced the first spinner with one circle(01:42;442), thinking about removing the second circle and replace with sliders, thoughts?

00:09:08 (5) - Spacing problem. Move it.
Distans snapped it, or should i place it even further away?
01:17:56 (13) - Spacing.
done
01:58:67 (5) - Make this 1/4 longer.
done

You also forgot to inherit the fourth and fifth timing sections.
done
There are probably more spacing inconsistencies, I will check more carefully later.

alright i will aswell, thanks alot

00:48:795 (12) : Make it finish 1/4 earlier
01:15:089 (1) : Big spacing problem (teleport?)
01:58:677 (5) : Finishes at 01:59:912

There were spacing problems but i didn't check them, i prefer let someone with more spacing skills for this

Sushi971 wrote:

00:48:795 (12) : Make it finish 1/4 earlier
Done
01:15:089 (1) : Big spacing problem (teleport?)
lol must have dreamt away, fixed tho
01:58:677 (5) : Finishes at 01:59:912
fixed

There were spacing problems but i didn't check them, i prefer let someone with more spacing skills for this
ill check up on it abit more aswell

thanks alot

Change the 'H' in hina to a capital for the source.
These combos are just guidelines. You can place them where you want, just make sure it makes sense.

Normal:
00:21:08 (1) - New combo.
00:24:26 (9) - New combo.
00:27:08 (5) - Remove new combo
00:54:79 (1) - New combo.
00:49:85 (9) - New combo.
00:35:73 (6) - New combo.
00:36:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:67 (3) - New combo.
00:43:50 (10) - New combo.
00:58:32 (9) - New combo.
01:17:91 (8) - New combo.
01:23:20 (8) - New combo.
01:27:79 (3) - Shorten by 1/2.
01:32:20 (4) - New combo.
01:36:08 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:37:67 (2) - New combo.
01:43:50 (1,2,3,4) - Move all back by 1/2 and add a new circle where the 4 used to be.
01:58:67 (3) - Shorten by 1/4.

JarJarJacob wrote:

Change the 'H' in hina to a capital for the source.
These combos are just guidelines. You can place them where you want, just make sure it makes sense.

Normal:
00:21:08 (1) - New combo.
00:24:26 (9) - New combo.
00:27:08 (5) - Remove new combo
00:54:79 (1) - New combo.
00:49:85 (9) - New combo.
00:35:73 (6) - New combo.
00:36:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:67 (3) - New combo.
00:43:50 (10) - New combo.
00:58:32 (9) - New combo.
01:17:91 (8) - New combo.
01:23:20 (8) - New combo.
01:27:79 (3) - Shorten by 1/2.
01:32:20 (4) - New combo.
01:36:08 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:37:67 (2) - New combo.
01:43:50 (1,2,3,4) - Move all back by 1/2 and add a new circle where the 4 used to be.
01:58:67 (3) - Shorten by 1/4.

i was gonna get to that earlier but forgott hehe ^^

all done, thanks

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Sorry for the delay, I've been out with a very very bad cold.

Normal:
Not a useful comment, but I wish I could make sliders behave like 00:14:38 (4)
00:48:79 (8) - It sounds one 1/4 tick too long to me. Try shortening it to 00:49:325


Hard:
00:17:20 (1) - Too close to the end of the spinner, in my opinion.
00:23:91 (9) - not stacked properly. Perhaps move this out of the stack? Might work.
01:32:56 (3) - This is more of a personal gripe, but this really does not look decent with the slider behind it. It's perfectly fine in terms of rankability, but its just ugly, imo.
01:39:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1) - to me, this just looks like a confusing cluster fuck. the last three really throw me off bad though.
01:48:79 (4,9) - These two in particular are improperly stacked.
01:57:44 (1,2,3,4) - holy crap this threw me off a bad loop. Just thought you should know. Don't change now unless an actual BAT says otherwise. Not quite sure on this one.


Here, have a star.

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Wrong tab I are dumb. Sorry. Of course once I had posted I had to mod.

Oh snap, correct timing, THANK YOU!!!

[Normal]
01:41:91 (5,6) - Impossible to tell which way this is going unless you are watching it as it comes in.

[Hard]
I'm far too tired to mod something as intentionally confusing as this right now, but aside from the obfuscation everywhere this looks solid.

Starred for great justice.

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Normal
01:45:26 (1) - Remove new combo
01:46:50 (8) - New combo
01:33:26 (2) - New combo
01:33:61 (3) - New combo
01:36:08 (3) - New combo on all slider sections matching this one.
01:46:50 (8) - New combo
Now, Because of the way you have your combos setup through out the map i have ignored quite a few more that could probably be changed, Combo wise. Other than that, i dont see much else here. You may wanna go through again yourself and just see if there is anything you can change combo wise.

Hard
01:42:61 (1) - Remove 2 timing sections here. They don;t seem to be doing anything. I have looked and looked into it and i see no difference other than tick color change and thats not necassary.

OK, i think that there are just to many elements here. Mostly confusing for a hard map. You have exceded hard in several spots, example follows.
00:22:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

This is just very confusing because the fading 2 completely overshadows the 5
00:24:79 (4,5) - This really need to be changed.

back to the difficulty lvl.
00:25:50 (6,7) - The jump here from 6 to 7 is just to fast. especially for this diff.
Not only that. The spacing doesnt match the rest of the immediate map. Also, again the spacing just doesn't match what you have going there.

00:36:44 (5,1) - This jump from 5 to 1 is not only to much for this diff. it's pretty much just warp speed.
There are so many areas like this that are either just either impossible or that should be in a much harder map. You need to go through and address the areas. Just my opinion, but i think it's valid. Also, again the spacing just doesn't match what you have going there.


00:45:44 (7,8,9) - This area is just confusing because you can't tell what's going where. Doesn't belong in this map.

Well that's it for now. I believe im just gonna find more of the same which i'm sure you are capable. Good map for the most part. I like Normal.
Alotta potential.


Starred.

1:36:08 goes against what jarjar said but mebbe somethings have changed. I for sure think that needs to be a new combo 100% and all sliders like it. i think there are 2 or so more.

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oops double posted by accident sorry

Hi

[Normal]
It seems that you have followed different note spacings here. Not that it's bad, but it's preferable to keep it at one standard note spacing for a Normal difficulty. This is mainly a suggestion, though.
56:737 (8) - Move 1 grid to the right
59:913 (6) - Hmm... the slider doesn't fit into the pattern you made very well. Maybe it's better you do this way as shown below. Oh, whoops, move it down one grid more from the picture I showed you. My bad

1:41:913 (5,6) - The note placement looks a little confusing, especially to newbies.

[Hard]
7:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can see that you're trying to follow the "M" pattern, but youone of your notes looked a little off. Try this without distance snap.

22:501 (11) - Move 1 grid to the left
31:325 (3) - Sounds nicer if you shorten it to 31:854
48:089 (7) - Move up 1 grid
48:266 (8,9,10) - Move them to where (6) was
48:619 (11) - Align to (7)
48:795 (12) - Align to (10)
57:442 (13) - Move 1 grid down
1:17:207 (12) - Move 1 grid left
1:26:384 (1) - Don't make this a new combo
1:31:413 (4) - Move the end of the slider up 1 grid and place (5) and (6) at the end of that slider
1:37:060 (1) - Sounds nicer if you shorten it to 1:37:501
1:44:031 (4) - Move 1 grid to the right
1:49:501 (9) - Move this to where you place (14)
1:52:678 (12) - Start new combo
1:58:678 (5) - I think it's nicer to end with a spinner, but this is entirely up to you

Cool map. I hope I didn't nazi too much. o.o

Here's a star.

flyboy87 wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
It seems that you have followed different note spacings here. Not that it's bad, but it's preferable to keep it at one standard note spacing for a Normal difficulty. This is mainly a suggestion, though.
56:737 (8) - Move 1 grid to the right
59:913 (6) - Hmm... the slider doesn't fit into the pattern you made very well. Maybe it's better you do this way as shown below. Oh, whoops, move it down one grid more from the picture I showed you. My bad
[attachment=1:10042]hina1.jpg[/attachment:10042]
1:41:913 (5,6) - The note placement looks a little confusing, especially to newbies.

done

[Hard]
7:325 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can see that you're trying to follow the "M" pattern, but youone of your notes looked a little off. Try this without distance snap.
[attachment=0:10042]hina2.jpg[/attachment:10042]
done ^^
22:501 (11) - Move 1 grid to the left
31:325 (3) - Sounds nicer if you shorten it to 31:854
48:089 (7) - Move up 1 grid
48:266 (8,9,10) - Move them to where (6) was
48:619 (11) - Align to (7)
48:795 (12) - Align to (10)
57:442 (13) - Move 1 grid down
1:17:207 (12) - Move 1 grid left
1:26:384 (1) - Don't make this a new combo
1:31:413 (4) - Move the end of the slider up 1 grid and place (5) and (6) at the end of that slider
1:37:060 (1) - Sounds nicer if you shorten it to 1:37:501
1:44:031 (4) - Move 1 grid to the right
1:49:501 (9) - Move this to where you place (14)
1:52:678 (12) - Start new combo
1:58:678 (5) - I think it's nicer to end with a spinner, but this is entirely up to you
i agree thanks ^^

Cool map. I hope I didn't nazi too much. o.o

Here's a star.

fixed all

thanks alot ;D

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