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Toni Braxton - Un-Break My Heart

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riffy
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 3 декабря 2012 г. at 12:30:12

Artist: Toni Braxton
Title: Un-Break My Heart
Tags: The World's Greatest Love Songs
BPM: 55
Filesize: 2768kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Break (3,65 stars, 232 notes)
  2. Un-Break (1,01 stars, 124 notes)
Download: Toni Braxton - Un-Break My Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away...
Last edited by riffy , edited 15 times in total.
Sieg
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Sieg
Ага, будет без красивого форматирования извини

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генерал:
бпм же 110 вроде, хотя это не важно вобщем
ты выбрал такой плавный, гладкий и ровный стиль so много наци тут, ну ты конечно можешь на это забить, но если ты все-таки захочешь что-то из слайдеров поправить я с удовольствием сделаю вариант к любому из указанных.
анннн брейк май харт и такой внезапный конец, две с половиной минуты пролетели очень быстро. обрезано жестковато

Un-Break:
00:10:909 (2) - n обводка не ровная, слайдер сразу бьет мне в глаз
00:43:636 (2) - n кривоват же
01:12:546 (3) - ^
01:14:727 (1) - ^
брейк - для такой медленной песни слишком большой имо, может вообще без него? Мне нравится ее играть она приятная, медленная и несложная, я хочу играть, а ты брейк такой большой делаешь :cry:
крутая дифа, легкая и красивая и с отличным ритмом, хз что тут модить

Break:
00:50:719 (8) - ой, это точно надо менять он провисает как-будто к низу, это даже не наци
01:21:265 (1) - ^
брейк - то же, что и на Un-Break
01:53:447 (4) - раскривить его? в принципе он и так нормально смотрится, просто подумай насчет этого
02:26:174 (1) - n эээ, это же и не было задумано как полукруг, имо полукруг смотрелся бы тут лучше
все клево.
riffy
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И так, поехали.
[too lazy to quote your post]
  1. БПМ - 55. Я проверял, и даже с МАТом это обсудил.
  2. Обрезка - говно, но я исправдю.
  3. Замапил брейк.
  4. Выправил все слайдеры на [Un-Break]
  5. Добавил хс к замапленному брейку
  6. Не менял слайдеры на [Break] (провисания = обводка)
  7. Попытался выпрямить себе руки.
~~~~~~~~~~~

Спасибо!

new mp3 soon! :3
Natteke desu
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Natteke desu
оффбит.
лучше замиксуй найткар микс.
riffy
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riffy
To be fixed soon.
L_P
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L_P
[Break]
00:11:719 (1) - too loud on playing with the bonus sound!! really annoyed me in this beauty song
00:15:265 (2) - remove body whistle? or lower the volume plz...
00:48:537 (4) - actually i think you mapped this on rhythm as well, it does not follow vocal at all (head starts at middle of nowhere, vocal ends middle part of slider 00:49:356 - ) it works perfectly fine to me but just to point it out
01:12:265 (4) - feel like slider would be better to start here, up to you~
01:21:265 (1) - a bit too boring...
01:46:901 (4) - a bit awkward when vocal start on next blue tick but nothing else makes it feel like place a note here..
01:47:447 (5) - finish and NC
01:51:265 - a note? feel too long for next slider and next slider have no NC
02:22:356 (5) - maybe a 20% volume finish?
02:31:083 (1) - ^
02:31:083 (1) - if you does not remove whistle on 00:15:265 (2), add body whistle here

my father loved this song, so do i~

like it. song and the map
riffy
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riffy

L_P wrote:

[Break]
00:11:719 (1) - too loud on playing with the bonus sound!! really annoyed me in this beauty song ~
00:15:265 (2) - remove body whistle? or lower the volume plz... ~
00:48:537 (4) - actually i think you mapped this on rhythm as well, it does not follow vocal at all (head starts at middle of nowhere, vocal ends middle part of slider 00:49:356 - ) it works perfectly fine to me but just to point it out ~
01:12:265 (4) - feel like slider would be better to start here, up to you~ 1/2 slidr here
01:21:265 (1) - a bit too boring... but.. i think it fits D:
01:46:901 (4) - a bit awkward when vocal start on next blue tick but nothing else makes it feel like place a note here.. ~
01:47:447 (5) - finish and NC ~
01:51:265 - a note? feel too long for next slider and next slider have no NC ~
02:22:356 (5) - maybe a 20% volume finish? whistle
02:31:083 (1) - ^ ^
02:31:083 (1) - if you does not remove whistle on 00:15:265 (2), add body whistle here

my father loved this song, so do i~

like it. song and the map

thank you :3
pw384
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Joined January 2012
pw384
hey! from in-game PM request :3

nice song!
[Un-Break]
* 00:09:748 (4) - suggestion 0.0 http://puu.sh/1jfHN
* 00:33:748 (3) - i'm not sure whether it should be new combo
* 01:21:748 (1) - haha

[Break]
I guess this is hard diff right? :3
so here we go 0.0
* HP+1
* 01:08:384 (4) - do not look so good if you select the current time between 01:07:566 and 01:07:839. 01:08:384 (4) - can be similar with 01:06:475 (1) -
e.g. http://puu.sh/1jfV6
* 01:26:111 (1) - P(536,256) to P(528,256)

that's all :)
good map and i can't find any issues lol

edit: perhaps you can try some other heart styles :3
riffy
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384059043 wrote:

hey! from in-game PM request :3

nice song!
[Un-Break]
* 00:09:748 (4) - suggestion 0.0 http://puu.sh/1jfHN but i can't make blanket without ruining flow >.<
* 00:33:748 (3) - i'm not sure whether it should be new combo It follows vocals :V
* 01:21:748 (1) - haha :O

[Break]
I guess this is hard diff right? :3 right :3
so here we go 0.0
* HP+1 sure
* 01:08:384 (4) - do not look so good if you select the current time between 01:07:566 and 01:07:839. 01:08:384 (4) - can be similar with 01:06:475 (1) -
e.g. http://puu.sh/1jfV6 tried to fix. looks better
* 01:26:111 (1) - P(536,256) to P(528,256) ~

that's all :)
good map and i can't find any issues lol

edit: perhaps you can try some other heart styles :3


thank you <3
BCI
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Joined May 2011
BCI
\о

[Un-Break]
суровые настройки для изи (а судя по 2/1 это изя, а не нормал) хп -1 как минимум
00:11:384 (2) - ноту сюда и сократи слайдер до сл.белого тика :<
00:44:111 (2) - это должно обводить (1) ровнее :с http://puu.sh/1jg8y
00:49:566 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/1jg9d
01:10:839 (1) - продли чтобы репит был на синем http://puu.sh/1jgac вокал же
01:21:202 (4) - стакни под (2)

[Break]
00:15:748 (2) - оно неровное D:
00:33:748 (4) - прыжок как-то тут не ок имо, сделай лучше треугольничек с (2) и (3) :3
00:38:111 (2) - нк сюда, с (1) офк убрать (на (1) он(а) поет тихо, а на (2) уже как обычно)
01:21:748 (1) - два репита D: /me dislike лучше спиннер для разброса очков
01:26:111 (1) - второй пойнт на клетку вниз и влево
01:39:202 (1) - нк ненужно
02:22:839 (5) - вот сюда бы финиш на начало и нк (ну и на начале киаи закончить but nobody cares)

good luck, ignore my naziness~ /runs
riffy
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riffy

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

le mod
fixed almost everything. except adding 1/4s to [Normal]. o3o because it sounds weird to me
Flask
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Flask
Mod Request via In-Game PM <3

[General]
  1. Add The World's Greatest Love Songs to tags due to the album name
  2. Is this short ver? Add to (Short Ver.) to title... maybe? lol
[Un-Break]
  1. 00:34:839 (4,5) - I suggest you to make rhythm like this. It's a litttle bit fit with the vocal, and I think the hitsound problem will be solve if you do like this :3
  2. 00:54:475 (1) - (reserve) Finish here please, I've heard a finish sound in the music. (Or you can use N-finish here)
  3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^
  4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish instead whistle? There's a finish sound, too lol
  5. 01:30:475 (1) - ^ (nazi)
  6. 02:31:566 (1) - clap this to keep inconsistency :3
  7. 02:35:930 - I'd suggest you to add a 1/1 slider + a reserve here. Clap at the reserve ofc then Finish at end please
[Break]
  1. 00:26:111 (1) - I hate this jump. put on x:264, y:136?
  2. 00:55:566 (1) - finish instead whistle?
  3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^
  4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish? Same reason as Un-Break lol
  5. 01:38:111 (2,3,4,5,1) - Make like a star? Such like this. I think you can do it by yourself <3
  6. 02:35:930 - Same as Un-Break.
About the mapset: I've ask some of my friends, they said E-N mapset could be rank. But your mapset is like E-H. Your Break diff is such like Hard-. Maybe try to make a diff between Easy and Hard-? Or just do something on your Break lol

Good luck, star :3!
riffy
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Flask wrote:

Mod Request via In-Game PM <3

[General]
  1. Add The World's Greatest Love Songs to tags due to the album name
  2. Is this short ver? Add to (Short Ver.) to title... maybe? lol
[Un-Break]
  1. 00:34:839 (4,5) - I suggest you to make rhythm like this. It's a litttle bit fit with the vocal, and I think the hitsound problem will be solve if you do like this :3 ~
  2. 00:54:475 (1) - (reserve) Finish here please, I've heard a finish sound in the music. (Or you can use N-finish here) ~
  3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^ ~
  4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish instead whistle? There's a finish sound, too lol ~
  5. 01:30:475 (1) - ^ (nazi) ~
  6. 02:31:566 (1) - clap this to keep inconsistency :3 ~
  7. 02:35:930 - I'd suggest you to add a 1/1 slider + a reserve here. Clap at the reserve ofc then Finish at end please how about moving spinner to a bit later? o3o
[Break]
  1. 00:26:111 (1) - I hate this jump. put on x:264, y:136? something else. but still cute :3
  2. 00:55:566 (1) - finish instead whistle? ~
  3. 02:05:384 (1) - ^ ~
  4. 01:21:748 (1) - finish? Same reason as Un-Break lol there's no any sound in the end of spinner o3o
  5. 01:38:111 (2,3,4,5,1) - Make like a star? Such like this. I think you can do it by yourself <3 <3
  6. 02:35:930 - Same as Un-Break. done in different way :3/
About the mapset: I've ask some of my friends, they said E-N mapset could be rank. But your mapset is like E-H. Your Break diff is such like Hard-. Maybe try to make a diff between Easy and Hard-? Or just do something on your Break lol personally I think that my diffs are [Normal] (consistent 1/2 flow and N-diff settings) o3o + [Hard] (slow one but still Hard)

Good luck, star :3!
Thank you! <3
alacat
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alacat
Hi :3 As requested.

[General]
●Lead-in to 2000ms Since this is a relaxing map.
●Blue line is unnecessary .

[Un-Break]
●HPDrain Rate-1
●00:09:748 (4) - bend slider to the opposite direction? Aim for the next note :3
●00:11:111 (2) - miss mapset ? xD
●00:13:020 - add note and add clap .it needs clap sound here.
●00:35:930 (1,2,1) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:30:475 (1) - volume dwon to 30% here ? it is too loud ><
●try this ? I think the flow is good.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/477897

[Break]
●00:03:202 (1) - add whistle
●01:25:293 - remove note.it is overmap ><
●02:25:021 (2,3,1) - Make the spacing equal here.Fix this one, so it looks better

I think I want to put more whistle :P

nice song ~ Hope you fine this helpful :3
riffy
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riffy
Fixed all except AudioLeadIn >.</ I still prefer 1500 because it doesn't make players wait too long :3

Thank you! :)
Lizellota
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Lizellota
Hello~ from my que
[General]

Change offset to 00:00:999

[Break]

00:03:202 - Мне кажется тут лучше финиш будет о.о
00:20:657 - финиш
00:26:111 - пропустил хлопок т.т
00:31:020 (3,4,5) -
мм..
после них, я тоже слегка изменила, смотрится вроде лучше :3 
244,228,30475,5,8,0:0:0
160,204,30748,1,0,0:0:0
84,232,31020,2,0,B|32:184|48:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,220,31839,1,0,0:0:0
120,355,32111,2,0,B|136:280|84:232,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,220,32930,5,0,0:0:0
256,196,33202,1,0,0:0:0
340,220,33475,1,0,0:0:0
00:35:384 (7) -
не знаю как тебе его нормально показать т.т
400,304,35384,2,0,B|472:304|520:256|520:256|520:176|464:120,2,270,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,208,37839,1,0,0:0:0
384,128,38111,6,0,B|384:64|444:28|492:40,2,135,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:43:020 (3) - красную херню подвинь как то так D:
и 00:44:111 (1) - х:464 у:320 ; 00:44:384 (2) - х:352 у:176
00:44:657 (3) - 
256,320,44657,2,0,B|208:256|144:256|144:256|168:192|137:123,2,270,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:55:566 - добавь вистл
01:04:293 - финиш и еще бы я поставила нк, хотя не знаю как ты
01:09:748 (7) - без грид снапа х:274 у:121
01:13:020 - может быть витсл поставить? и нк я думаю..
01:14:930 (4) - убери нк
01:16:839 (1) - а сюда нк о.о/
01:19:020 (1) - убери нк
01:19:566 (2) - нк
01:56:657 (5) - финиш
02:05:384 - и тоже вистл
02:14:111 - финиш и нк
02:17:657 (1) - зачем здесь нк?
02:22:839 - финиш и нк
02:23:657 (1) - убери нк :/
02:31:566 - финиш офк

[Un-Break]

00:03:202 - финиш
00:12:475 - убери хлопок х.х
01:04:293 - финиш и нк
01:05:384 (1) - убери нк
01:13:021 (3) - нк
01:15:202 (1) - убери нк
02:14:111 - финиш
Хорошая дифка для новичков :3

Good luck~
Edit: тупыеновыестраницы ;w;
riffy
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riffy
Ahhh.... i'm in a hury o3o
going to give quick list with fixes

what's fixed
  1. offset
  2. some nazis
  3. some whistles \ (instead of finishes I use whistles. much softer)
  4. Of course finishes (one or two) but they're fit here
  5. missed/extra claps
didn't fixed
  1. some nazis
Thank you.
Saten
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2010
Saten
so calm

[Break]
01:12:998 - end the kiai here instead?
01:50:089 - why 30%?
02:22:817 (1) - finish on head. Also shouldn't the kiai end here instead?
02:34:817 - move this timing section to 02:38:089 - where it actually starts to fade

[Un-Break]
00:40:271 (2) - too close the edge. But meh, this usually pass anyway
01:12:998 - end the kiai here?
01:47:908 (4) - finish. I hear a small resemblance of a finish here, and your other diff has a finish here I noticed
02:22:817 (3) - finish & end the kiai here as well?


Nothing wrong really with this mapset o3o
Goodluck
riffy
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riffy

Saten wrote:

so calm

[Break]
01:12:998 - end the kiai here instead? no, because.. I like it the way it is
01:50:089 - why 30%? why not? changed to 45%, anyway.
02:22:817 (1) - finish on head. Also shouldn't the kiai end here instead? whistle. kiai fixed
02:34:817 - move this timing section to 02:38:089 - where it actually starts to fade ~

[Un-Break]
00:40:271 (2) - too close the edge. But meh, this usually pass anyway fixed
01:12:998 - end the kiai here? same as [break]
01:47:908 (4) - finish. I hear a small resemblance of a finish here, and your other diff has a finish here I noticed ~
02:22:817 (3) - finish & end the kiai here as well? same as [Break]


Nothing wrong really with this mapset o3o
Goodluck
o3o/ thanks
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi there :3

[General]
* i find a new offset is 990~ Remember to double-check. xD

[Un-Break]
00:13:544 (4) - downward one grid? x:16 y:200
00:19:544 (2) - suggest end this slider at 00:20:635 ?~
01:41:362 (3) - downward one grid? x:356 y:92
01:45:180 (2) - this slider looks weird @.@

[Break]
00:39:998 (2) - hmm.. move it to grid x:108 y:136 ?
00:42:998 (3) - start this slider at 00:43:271 ?
00:54:180 (2,3,4) - change them like this? --> http://puu.sh/1mk27
00:57:726 (1,2,3) - ^ --> http://puu.sh/1mk3f
01:20:362 (3,4) - ^ --> http://puu.sh/1mk5l
01:53:635 (4) - upward one grid? x:348 y:236
01:57:453 (x) - add a circle at here?
01:59:635 (2,3) - reverse both of them? --> http://puu.sh/1mkb0
02:31:544 (1) - hmm.. try to make this slider looks perfect?
02:36:726 (x) - add a circle at here?
02:36:726 (x) - add a circle at here?

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Awesome !~ :D
Hope this map can fast to rank!!~ xD
Btw, why just have two diff?? Q.Q
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