1. Hard (4,59 stars, 358 notes)
2. kosiga's Normal (2,77 stars, 211 notes)

1. 01:25:289 (4) - *nazi* 時計回りに10度ほどRotate? 直前の(3)と合います
2. 02:17:789 (1) - whistle on the reverse?
3. 03:09:963 (1) - ^
   

1. No break for more than 200 seconds? You should add some breaktime like kosiga's diff
2. HP-1~2 for the balance
3. 00:43:876 (4,1) - replace NewCombo
4. 02:15:832 (4) - missing clap?
5. 02:30:017 (1) - This circle is hard to read, because before the spinner the rhythm goes with 1/2 tick but this circle is 1/4(blue) tick suddenly. If you change this circle to a slider from here to 02:30:506 - this case may be better.
6. 02:32:136 (1) - clap ---> finish?
7. 02:33:115 - add a note here or make a slider from 02:32:626 -
8. 03:03:441 (5) - missing clap (end)? 03:06:050 (5) - as well
9. 03:09:963 (4) - add NewCombo
10. 03:10:615 (5) - add clap on the head
11. 03:30:832 - seriously you should add a circle here (for you~)

Naryuga wrote:

yay :p
requested in-game

[Hard]

1. No break for more than 200 seconds? You should add some breaktime like kosiga's diff I added one break 01:25:941 - 01:31:321
2. HP-1~2 for the balance -1 :3
3. 00:43:876 (4,1) - replace NewCombo
4. 02:15:832 (4) - missing clap?
5. 02:30:017 (1) - This circle is hard to read, because before the spinner the rhythm goes with 1/2 tick but this circle is 1/4(blue) tick suddenly. If you change this circle to a slider from here to 02:30:506 - this case may be better.
6. 02:32:136 (1) - clap ---> finish?
7. 02:33:115 - add a note here or make a slider from 02:32:626 -
8. 03:03:441 (5) - missing clap (end)? 03:06:050 (5) - as well
9. 03:09:963 (4) - add NewCombo
10. 03:10:615 (5) - add clap on the head
11. 03:30:832 - seriously you should add a circle here (for you~)

I neeeed you~
Nice mapset! :3 Goodluck

1. 00:28:876 (1) - Why is this 3/2? I can't really think of what are you actually following... Maybe split this into a 1/1 slider and a circle 1/2 beats after?
2. 02:39:473 - The break here is too forced and awkward, IMO. Why not map this part too? It won't make the gameplay much harder than before, anyway.

1. 01:25:615 - I'm sure enough the kiai time is supposed to end here (like on kosiga's diff)... If it's because of the 01:25:289 (3) slider, I suggest to change it into a 1/2 triplet of circles, since they fit better with the song anyway.
2. 01:46:484 (4,1) - There should be an NC swap here "according" to the song itself. I don't really think pattern-based combo placement would work nicely here... (I probably missed some cases like this, so if you want to, check them out.)
3. 01:42:571 (4) - Wait... This looks so out-of-place. Ctrl+G?
4. 02:30:506 - Add a circle somewhere to follow the vocal? The spot feels really empty currently...
5. 02:33:115 - ^
6. 02:40:941 - ^
7. 03:09:963 (4) - Since we're entering a new stanza, why you don't NC this?

Hinsvar wrote:

*rolls*

Mod.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.


>Hard

1. 01:25:615 - I'm sure enough the kiai time is supposed to end here (like on kosiga's diff)... If it's because of the 01:25:289 (3) slider, I suggest to change it into a 1/2 triplet of circles, since they fit better with the song anyway.
2. 01:46:484 (4,1) - There should be an NC swap here "according" to the song itself. I don't really think pattern-based combo placement would work nicely here... (I probably missed some cases like this, so if you want to, check them out.)
3. 01:42:571 (4) - Wait... This looks so out-of-place. Ctrl+G?
4. 02:30:506 - Add a circle somewhere to follow the vocal? The spot feels really empty currently...
5. 02:33:115 - ^
6. 02:40:941 - ^
7. 03:09:963 (4) - Since we're entering a new stanza, why you don't NC this?

...That's it, I guess?

Good luck on the way

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, IchiGUN

My mod from your request in pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

kosiga's Normal

1. Good diff. I don't find any problem.

Hard

1. 00:28:713 (5,1) - I try to listen to the rhythm and vocals. It isn't appropriate to use NC in (1). I suggest switch NC them.
2. 00:36:702 (3,4) - Move them to up 1 grid <Grid lv4>
3. 01:34:419 (3) - Spacing from (2) to (3) is little close, and spacing from (3) to (4) is little far. So move (3) to left 1 grid <Grid lv4>
4. 02:35:560 - I felt empty and strange. I think that add a circle here.
5. 02:35:723 - ^ Here as well. And add clap, if you add circles.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

1. The timing kinda feels weird. Maybe it's just me
2. Tickrate 2 would fit imo

Saten wrote:

hello~~

[General]

1. The timing kinda feels weird. Maybe it's just me Maybe you right -.-
2. Tickrate 2 would fit imo Ok, let's try it :3

[Hard]
00:32:789 (3) - new stanza here, finish on tail?
00:43:876 (1) - finish
01:04:745 (2) - chorus start, finish?
01:15:180 (2) - finish on head
01:25:615 (4) - finish
01:35:397 (3) - finish on tail
01:46:484 (1) - finish
02:07:354 (2) - finish on head
02:17:789 (2) - ^
02:38:495 (6) - this should start at 02:38:658 - with a finish on the head, and add a hitcircle at 02:38:495 -
02:41:267 (4) - finish
02:46:484 (3) - ^
02:47:789 (7) - ^
02:48:441 (9) - ^
02:49:093 (2) - finish on head
02:59:528 (2) - ^
03:09:636 (3,1) - finish on head of (1) instead?
03:20:397 (2) - finish on head

Solid mapset
Good luck~

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi

SPOILER

kosiga's Normal
Nothing to say nice

Hard
00:59:202 (5) - add finish on end
01:01:484 (4) - add finish
01:25:941 (5) - delete note?
02:02:136 (6) - add finish
02:15:180 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G?
02:31:810 (4) - add note here
02:32:626 (2) - make 3/4 slider? 02:30:017 (1) - like this
03:28:876 (4,5,6) - crtl + G?

Beautiful song and nice map! should be ranked xD star~ good luck!

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi Ichi Kun :3 my mod for you

Hard

00:30:017 - эту нотку лучше поставить на красный тик, звучит приятнее
00:32:136(2) - честно мне не нравится этот слайдер, сделай его округлым или углом но поровнее http://puu.sh/1ovaZ
00:44:691 - добавь нотку сюда, а со следующего красного перемести на синий чтобы звучало как двойки
00:46:973 - ^
01:56:593 - сюда лучше добавить нотку, или заменить на слайдер 1\2

Не плохая диффка) попробуй на киаи таймах default клапы, звучит более подходяще, и мапа в целом разнообразнее~

Это всё, нормал смотрится хорошо :3

good luck~~

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

Heyuu~ Mod Request from My Modding Queue~

[kosiga's Normal]

This map is so perfect *w* So beautiful and neat mapped >w<

[Hard]

00:30:017 (2,3) - This felt a bit weird for me to play, maybe remove 00:30:017 (2) - ?
00:39:310 (3,4) - I personnally would hit ctrl+g on both so it makes a nice curve.
01:45:506 (2) - two hitcircles instead work great as well, just a suggestion.


Really awesome maps, and so beautiful song >w< star~

Taris wrote:

Awesome song omg <3