Yeah, I can definitely tell you're new at this.
Unfortunately, this thing is so off there's virtually no way it can be ranked in its current state. It doesn't even look like you tried to time the thing (as evidenced by the default 60 BPM still being set), and the spacing is completely out of whack.
Might I recommend reading the
FAQ if you haven't already, and then try again. If all else fails, try playing some ranked maps and then emulating their style.