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Hard:
00:31:88 (9,11) - please use 80% volume for normal hitsounds.. compare to soft sound, it suddenly very loud.
03:38:07 (7) - I guess everyone will hate this one , that almost hidden by the slider (4) that comes before it, and hard to notice. Also, people is doing a big combo @ 3:37, if combos break at here, it's really annoying.
03:45:69 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ similar , (4) hidden by 03:44:86 (5)
00:31:88 (9,11) - please use 80% volume for normal hitsounds.. compare to soft sound, it suddenly very loud.
03:38:07 (7) - I guess everyone will hate this one , that almost hidden by the slider (4) that comes before it, and hard to notice. Also, people is doing a big combo @ 3:37, if combos break at here, it's really annoying.
03:45:69 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ similar , (4) hidden by 03:44:86 (5)
<timing>
We got offset 2121
BPM 126
If you agree this offset +16ms to all timelines (except those bpm changing lines)
fix two lines
21154-->21152
23059-->22581
resnap all notes
<play time>
I suggest end on 03:16:38
too many repeat at last part and the scores are too high (1300K)
OR
take a break from 03:16---->03:30
make the first part(00:17---->01:37) easier
<hard>
02:36:39 (1) (2) (3) (4) sounds not so good
02:53:53 (1) (2) (3) (4) ^
overall
It is a good map you can try to use more 1/2 divisors nor 1/4 divisors
We got offset 2121
BPM 126
If you agree this offset +16ms to all timelines (except those bpm changing lines)
fix two lines
21154-->21152
23059-->22581
resnap all notes
<play time>
I suggest end on 03:16:38
too many repeat at last part and the scores are too high (1300K)
OR
take a break from 03:16---->03:30
make the first part(00:17---->01:37) easier
<hard>
02:36:39 (1) (2) (3) (4) sounds not so good
02:53:53 (1) (2) (3) (4) ^
overall
It is a good map you can try to use more 1/2 divisors nor 1/4 divisors
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Topic Starter
fixed.
Whoa wait, what?
Ignorethis, I may be a tard for noting this down... But, I noticed there was some pretty horrible Engrish (if you don't know what this is, it means English sentences that makes no actual sense whatsoever) in your background picture, LOL!
Maybe use another background picture, or try to 'shop away the Engrish.
Only one point I'm particularly concerned in Hard:
03:07:83 (4) - Hidden. When I first played through this, I got trapped because I thought it was a single hitcircle. Change this.
Twinkle twinkle little star.
Ignorethis, I may be a tard for noting this down... But, I noticed there was some pretty horrible Engrish (if you don't know what this is, it means English sentences that makes no actual sense whatsoever) in your background picture, LOL!
Maybe use another background picture, or try to 'shop away the Engrish.
Only one point I'm particularly concerned in Hard:
03:07:83 (4) - Hidden. When I first played through this, I got trapped because I thought it was a single hitcircle. Change this.
Twinkle twinkle little star.
I think you should increase the HP drain on hard, especially since there are deathstreams and sliders etcetera. Such a nice song, but what else to be expected from Clannad(AS), KyoAni and Lia...
+5 ms
Normal
01:00:93 (4) - This one is just really close to the last note, which is only a problem since it's Normal.
Normal
01:00:93 (4) - This one is just really close to the last note, which is only a problem since it's Normal.
Really nice map, seriously 
Hard
Kiai Time:
01:04:98 - 01:39:26
02:42:12 - 03:16:41
03:31:64 ~
Normal
Kiai Time:
01:04:98 ~
Nothing else to say, really
Hard
Kiai Time:
01:04:98 - 01:39:26
02:42:12 - 03:16:41
03:31:64 ~
Normal
Kiai Time:
01:04:98 ~
Nothing else to say, really
整齐简洁又连贯（不是原来的风格啊），我喜欢~
一些意见：
Hard:
00:39:863(4): 有点多余
00:47:840(1): 改短些,从这里到前面第二根红线(00:48:554)
00:48:792(2): 然后拉一条2周期的slider到前面第二根红线（00:49:506）
00:50:459(4): 填一个circle
00:54:625(4): 移到前面的红线去，和(5)(6)重合,(7)也可以重合
00:55:459(1~4): 和前面一样，改了就简单了分也多点，不改的话容易出100(还不是你自己acc低!)
02:03:792(4): 周期太长了,一个周期就够,建议方案如下：
02:04:506(白线）来个三连击;
接下来的白线（02:04:982)放一根短slider到前面的红线(02:05:220)
02:24:982(1): 修改模式可以参照第二条
02:36:411(1~4): 都少一个周期比较好
02:53:553(1~4):^
03:04:743(10): 索性和接下来的slider一并改成spinner吧
03:09:386(4~6): 加上三连击，原本这里的slider紧接三连击后面.下一个slider相应后移。
03:11:172 移到前面的白线
03:14:505(break): 已经745了.要不后面的删掉..?有点累,感觉这里也该结尾了,后面还有的话就有点那啥了..
有些地方的slider周期有点长,改一下比较好.
做的确实不错我太喜欢了！star~
一些意见：
Hard:
00:39:863(4): 有点多余
00:47:840(1): 改短些,从这里到前面第二根红线(00:48:554)
00:48:792(2): 然后拉一条2周期的slider到前面第二根红线（00:49:506）
00:50:459(4): 填一个circle
00:54:625(4): 移到前面的红线去，和(5)(6)重合,(7)也可以重合
00:55:459(1~4): 和前面一样，改了就简单了分也多点，不改的话容易出100(还不是你自己acc低!)
02:03:792(4): 周期太长了,一个周期就够,建议方案如下：
02:04:506(白线）来个三连击;
接下来的白线（02:04:982)放一根短slider到前面的红线(02:05:220)
02:24:982(1): 修改模式可以参照第二条
02:36:411(1~4): 都少一个周期比较好
02:53:553(1~4):^
03:04:743(10): 索性和接下来的slider一并改成spinner吧
03:09:386(4~6): 加上三连击，原本这里的slider紧接三连击后面.下一个slider相应后移。
03:11:172 移到前面的白线
03:14:505(break): 已经745了.要不后面的删掉..?有点累,感觉这里也该结尾了,后面还有的话就有点那啥了..
有些地方的slider周期有点长,改一下比较好.
做的确实不错我太喜欢了！star~
Topic Starter
我能做出这样的图才是怪事，做出那些机车的反倒是正常的
这些建议我周日/周一再看吧，今天修不了，kd先给你了
这些建议我周日/周一再看吧，今天修不了，kd先给你了
I see no issues other than that there's obviously no background when I got this. So, once you got your background issue fixed, I can have this bubbled.
Starred.
Starred.
I has background. I don't see any problems, so have a bubble
leimiliya, 这个slider的design方式很像James的。
但是，不管怎样这还是个好map。
Have a rank. Have a kit-kat.
但是，不管怎样这还是个好map。
Have a rank. Have a kit-kat.