Yay! much better
00:40:16 (6) - Maybe new combo?
00:42:80 (17) - Even if you follow the lyrics, make it finish 1/6 beat earlier, sounds better
01:10:40 (7) - Same as above, move it 1/6 beat earlier
02:08:12 (8) - Sounds weird, try to move it 1/6 beat earlier
02:12:32 (6) - New combo?
02:14:96 (17) - Even if you follow the lyrics, make it finish 1/6 beat earlier, sounds better
02:21:08 (10) - move 1/6 beat earlier
02:30:08 (10) - repeat one more time
02:30:68 (11) - move 1/6 beat later
02:31:40 (13) - well timed but sounds weird, it's up to you if you change or not
02:42:67 (7) - Moving this 1/6 beat earlier sounds better
03:05:71 (8) - Move 1/6 beat earlier