Hori Festa - Zinnia · forum

Gabi

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Gabi 2009-03-08T00:32:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 14 mars 2009 at 17:30:25

Artist: Hori Festa
Title: Zinnia
Source: Death Note
Tags: Death Note Zinnia
BPM: 179
Filesize: 4088kb
Play Time: 02:19
Difficulties Available:

Death notes (4,9 stars, 370 notes)
Hard (4,65 stars, 308 notes)

Download: Hori Festa - Zinnia
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Im not 100% sure but i think this song is from the real movie, not the animated one.
hitsounds are messed up so they are still not finished because i suck at them.

EDIT1: made the changes loginer told me too, changed some note placement.
EDIT2: made alot of changes to the note placement and used alot more accurate distans snapping. changed all the sliders to be one 1/4 longer (tell me if it sounds right). i still have some time stamps and hitsounds to add and remove, ill get on to that soon.
EDIT3: changed the stuff vyt told me to, and updated sliderS!!!!!!!!!
EDIT4: changed the things loginer told me, alltho still unsure of my changes. note, still havent done hitsounds. changed the soft sound to normal at the normal bpm parts.

Last edited by Gabi 2009-03-14T16:33:49+00:00, edited 8 times in total.

Loginer

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Here since the beginning

Loginer 2009-03-09T16:37:34+00:00

This beatmap is pretty good, but I do have a few complaints.

First of all, you've disabled note stacking. That's fine, unless you're going to hide notes, like you've done in 00:04:417-00:05:087 ([Death notes]). You can't see those two new notes appear, making it hard to know whether you're supposed to stay on the same spot and click twice or backtrack on the third one. Set stack leniency to 2 or 3 to solve this.

Second, some parts sound a bit off. For example, 01:41:245-01:49:960 would sound better if you moved everything back by 1/8th, and 00:33:913-00:36:511 / 01:17:153-01:19:332 sound off because the song's BMP gradually increases on those two spots. A way to solve that problem would be replacing the hit circles from the fifth beat and onwards with a spinner.

Finally, the spacing is a bit inconstant, but it's not really a problem here. Have a star.

Gabi

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Gabi 2009-03-10T17:58:47+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

vytalibus

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vytalibus 2009-03-10T20:35:11+00:00

[Hard]
00:27:04 (3,4) - Too far, compared to the previous two notes.
00:30:56 (9) - Make a new combo, or rehaul this together with (10, 11)
00:45:64 (6) - So-so slider.
00:52:34 (1,2) - If I would follow Distance Snap, (2) should be closer.
01:16:14 (4) - Put this far from (3) but closer to (5).
01:39:27 (4) - Horrible slider. Also, it's too near to (3).
02:08:94 (8) - You can put this closer to (7). I suggest rehauling this part with a better pattern.
02:19:41 (13,14) - Put this farther away.

[Death notes]
00:27:04 (3,4) - (3) covers the end point. Players will not know if the slider's repeating.
00:35:08 (5) - Quite a jump from its pattern.
00:37:60 (6) - Horrible slider.
00:42:96 (6) - ^
00:45:64 (6) - ^
00:48:32 (6,7,8,9) - This is a horrible pattern.
00:56:37 (3) - Horrible slider.
00:58:04 (4) - WTH? This is like a jack-in-a-box slider. I disapprove of this.
00:59:89 (9) - Remove this shit.
01:01:73 (7,8) - Rehaul.
01:03:41 (1) - Personally, this is too much of a jump.
01:11:12 (2,3,4) - Uneven spacing.
01:20:50 (4) - Horrible slider.
01:22:85 (5,6) - Confusing sliders. The start points of the first slider covers up the second.
01:32:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uneven spacing.
01:37:09 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4, 5) - Confusing multi-patterns. Rehaul this part.
01:39:27 (6) - Horrible slider.
01:50:79 (3,4,5,6) - Put this farther apart from each other so that (3) isn't too close to the previous note.
02:02:40 (1,1,1) - NO.
02:11:11 (3,4,5) - Too far from each other.
02:20:16 (1,1,1) - NO.

Gabi

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Gabi 2009-03-10T21:56:26+00:00

vytalibus wrote:
[Hard]
00:27:04 (3,4) - Too far, compared to the previous two notes.
00:30:56 (9) - Make a new combo, or rehaul this together with (10, 11)
00:45:64 (6) - So-so slider.
wot?
00:52:34 (1,2) - If I would follow Distance Snap, (2) should be closer.
01:16:14 (4) - Put this far from (3) but closer to (5).
01:39:27 (4) - Horrible slider. Also, it's too near to (3).
02:08:94 (8) - You can put this closer to (7). I suggest rehauling this part with a better pattern.
02:19:41 (13,14) - Put this farther away.

Done

[Death notes]
00:27:04 (3,4) - (3) covers the end point. Players will not know if the slider's repeating.
changed
00:35:08 (5) - Quite a jump from its pattern.
its been distans snapped tho, but ive put it closer myself now
00:37:60 (6) - Horrible slider.
00:42:96 (6) - ^
00:45:64 (6) - ^
00:48:32 (6,7,8,9) - This is a horrible pattern.
hmm ok replaced with a slider
00:56:37 (3) - Horrible slider.
00:58:04 (4) - WTH? This is like a jack-in-a-box slider. I disapprove of this.
00:59:89 (9) - Remove this shit.
Harsh harsh harsh, ive changed them, however the 9th note do follow a BGM tone, but ive removed it. i hope the new sliders satisfies you
01:01:73 (7,8) - Rehaul.
01:03:41 (1) - Personally, this is too much of a jump.
01:11:12 (2,3,4) - Uneven spacing.
01:20:50 (4) - Horrible slider.
01:22:85 (5,6) - Confusing sliders. The start points of the first slider covers up the second.
well it is an insane map and you can see the first slider before the second, however im not gonna argue about it so i put one of the sliders abit lower down
01:32:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uneven spacing.
i belive this is doable enough for rank.
01:37:09 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4, 5) - Confusing multi-patterns. Rehaul this part.
ive turned it around abit to make it clearer but not much ^^
01:39:27 (6) - Horrible slider.
01:50:79 (3,4,5,6) - Put this farther apart from each other so that (3) isn't too close to the previous note.
02:02:40 (1,1,1) - NO.
02:11:11 (3,4,5) - Too far from each other.
02:20:16 (1,1,1) - NO.
YES!