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BanYa - Maria

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flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 16, 2009 at 8:49:49 AM

Artist: BanYa
Title: Maria
BPM: 136.1
Filesize: 9682kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Godly (4.93 stars, 255 notes)
  2. Hard (4.58 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Normal (3.23 stars, 140 notes)
Download: BanYa - Maria
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Banya revival! D:

Btw, I think the timing is okay, but I'm not very confident in my note spacings. May someone please give some suggestions?

Fix 1: Revamped the whole note spacings. :P
Fix 2: Added new dificulty
Fix 3: Complete map.
Fix 4: Fixed note placements.
Fix 5: Fixed stuff and replaced notes. <3
Fix 6: Fixed more note placements
Fix 7: Fixed stuff based on SFG's suggestion
Fix 8: Added BG <3
Fix 9: Fixed offset and edited hitsounds
Fix 10: Edited hitsounds and some note spacings.
Fix 11: Note spacings~
Fix 12: Fixed title and hitsounds~
Fix 13: Fixed hitsounds based on SFG's suggestions
Fix 14: Updated offset, BPM and timing positions based on vyt's suggestion.
Last edited by flyboy87 , edited 18 times in total.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
I do really like this map.. but I think the main problem here is your distance snap. It's FREAKISHLY small, which makes it in some parts too easy, and in other parts wayyy too jumbled to really know what's going on, like here for instance
00:55:42 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1)
My face kinda resembled my username here :P
So yeah, it does look promising, but I would seriously consider increasing the distance snap to make this map legible. It's looking good though, so voila a * !

EDIT: Oh also, that spinner at the end is too long for ranking. Cutting it off at 01:39:538 sounds good; its still on the long side but it just might be short enough

EDIT 2: Actually, you could do some fancy slider art instead. Or both. Take your pick :P
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flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
Oh, I see. I have always left my note spacings at 0.5x.

I have now modified the map to 1.0x. Looks much better now.

Thanks.
flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
Bump...?
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
All right, Round 2!

Normal
01:14:61 (3,4) - Can you make it so these don't overlap?
01:24:75 (4,1) - These don't look great overlapping, can you rotate 4 so it looks cleaner?

Hard
00:13:95 (5) - Rotate this a tad so it lines up with the previous notes
00:18:80 (3) - Nudge this 1 level 3 grid to the left

Godly
Keep in mind here that I don't play a lot of Insanes, so take this section with a grain of salt.
00:32:25 (15) - what is THIS doing here :P
00:43:28 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - its pretty hard to know what's going on here with the hitcircles blending in with the background. Personally I would just keep those in stacks of 3
00:45:71 (7) - Personally I would unstack this from 6
00:47:03 (1,2,3,4) - I had to watch this about 3 times to actually get what was happening here :P Mind making this clearer?
01:14:39 (3,4) - This slider is very decieving, (1,2) before it has the hitcircle first, so one would expect the same for this part. I would just copy (1,2) and replace it with that.

The only other thing that stood out to me where some ugly sliders in Normal and Hard, maybe just go over those and see if you can make them look more natural?

But yeah, awesome job! Godly has definitely improved over last time, its a lot more fun when you can really move around the map.

:)
flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
Fixed!

Thank you!
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Map seems fine. Merry Christmas, here's a star!
AdvanceBoy
284 posts
Joined October 2008
AdvanceBoy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
My English is poor =(
[Normal]
00:08:877(4)-use distance snap

[Hard]
01:10:641(10)-cancel the hitsound 'finish',you may use whistle,I think finish isn't suitable here

How about add a background picture?
Not bad +star :D
flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
Thanks for modding this map, everyone! :)

Still couldn't find a nice background though. :(
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:08:21 (2) - hidden under 2
00:13:06 (1) - stack under fading 1
00:25:42 (1) - align horizontally with 3
00:52:55 (1) - starting this 1/2 later would be easier for nubs
01:09:09 (1) - align with 5,6
01:10:86 (1) - align with 4
01:16:15 (1) - align above the end of 4
01:24:75 (4) - move the end so it isnt partly under 3
01:27:18 (1) - align vertcially with 4
(note: some of these may be outdated cus you reuploaded in the middle of my mod o0)


[Hard]
00:06:01 (2) - align vertically under the end of 1
00:25:42 (2) - align with 3,1
00:34:02 (5) - should be centered between 3 and 4
00:50:12 (2) - align with 1
00:56:30 (5) - imo you need a note 1/2 after this ends with a finish
01:04:68 (5) - align with 4
01:14:83 (6) - align with 5
01:17:70 (5) - center between 3 and 4
01:30:71 (7) - new combo
a note on inherited timing sections for sound changes: you should put them a bit before the note you want them to affect, otherwise early clickers will get it in the previous section


[Godly]
tick rate should be 2 or 4, not 3
00:13:51 (7) - new combo
00:21:89 (1) - looks really bad half hidden by 11 and 12
00:31:59 (9) - new combo
00:37:55 (11) - align with 10
00:39:53 (8) - new combo
00:43:28 (5) - ^
00:51:00 (9) - looks bad with respect to 8
01:13:06 (5) - align with 4
01:28:50 (7) - clap for consistancy


have a nice shiny star
flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
Updated, thanks! :)
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
try offset: 712

[godly]
why is the 2nd offset not inherited?

[hard]
same with the 2nd offset, why not inherited :O?
Why tick rate 2 here while [godly] uses 4? It makes no difference for the difficulty of the map...
00:56:03 (5) - repeat once more, sounds better

[normal]
same with the 2nd offset, why not inherited :O?

everything else seems fine. Fun map, star 4 u :)
flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
Updated~!

Thank you very much! :D
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
I don't care about the kudosu if I failed to mod.

[Normal]
1:36:020(1)-> Extend 1/4 beat.

[Hard]
1:36:020(1)-> Same as Normal.

[Insane]
1:36:021(1)-> Same as Normal.

In my opinion, you need a BAT to check/approve this.

Have a star~

P.S Thanks for requesting!

EDIT:
Another Suggestion~

[Normal]
53:786(1)-> Stack with 53:649(2).
vytalibus
osu! Alumni
870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
I'm having issues with the BPM, but I can't seem to point it out. Get a better BAT to check on it.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
BPM is spot on if you ask me.

BUT

The name of the song is "BanYa - Maria" afaik.

Do it and I bubble.
flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
flyboy87
413 posts
Joined January 2008
Topic Starter
flyboy87
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:12:40 (3) - clap
00:14:38 (4) - ^
00:28:50 (6) - remove clap
00:36:00 (1) - hitsound end
00:43:06 (8) - add a(nother) hitsound
00:50:56 (1) - ^
00:53:76 (1) - finish
01:14:60 (3) - remove clap
01:16:59 (2,3) - claps?


[Hard]
00:28:06 (7,8) - flip hitsounds
00:32:03 (1,2,3,4,5) - volume changes are ugh
00:40:41 (5) - clap?
00:41:52 (2) - unclap end
00:42:62 (5) - unclap
00:43:94 (2) - whistle
00:51:66 (7,8) - align w 6
00:56:30 (5) - finish end
01:12:62 (3) - whistle end
01:17:47 (4) - whistle


[Godly]
00:10:63 (9) - kill whistle
00:14:38 (1) - histound this (not all hits)
00:25:41 (3) - whistle
00:51:88 (12) - align
01:02:91 (9) - ^
01:13:06 (5) - hitsound
in general needs more hitsound
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