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JarJarJacob wrote:

Alex is already mapping this. You'll want to contact him.

Raise HP Drain. The way you use combos in this map desires it. Done
00:53:09 (1) - You shouldn't really use circles when the artist is drawing breath.Not based on the breath, it was just a coincidence. Anyway, added a note for no confusion
01:01:59 (1) - This spinner isn't auto 2000'd. Whether this is unrankable or not isn't up to me. Fixed
01:12:69 (1) - See above. See above
01:19:62 (1) - This would play better either 1/2 or 1/1 forward. Done
02:26:21 (1) - See above above. See above above
02:37:31 (1) - See above. See above
02:40:09 (2) - You could make this double speed if you wanted to. Because it waves like that, it isn't unorthodox at double.
02:43:38 - Put something here, maybe? Done
02:51:18 (1) - See above above ABOVE. See above above above
03:02:28 (1) - See above.See above
03:05:06 (2) - See above above above ABOVE. If you don't want to use it at both points, or either, it works better closer to the conclusion.
03:08:35 - See above above above above. See above above above above
03:16:50 (1) - Sort of out of place. It's an unfitting ending. Fixed

I should start colour-coding my modding.

See above... woops

Well, almost everything was fixed, except this :

JarJarJacob wrote:

You could make this double speed if you wanted to. Because it waves like that, it isn't unorthodox at double.

I understood the slider was really weird, but didn't understand your way to fix it.

I modded your see-above-mod-post too =D

Offset sounds like 712 to me.

I couldn't find anything else wrong, but you'll need an easier difficulty for this to be ranked.

Sushi971 wrote:

I understood the slider was really weird, but didn't understand your way to fix it.

It isn't a fix, but a suggestion. Either way is fine, normal or double speed. I thought double would emphasize the sliders more.

DawnII wrote:

I couldn't find anything else wrong, but you'll need an easier difficulty for this to be ranked.

I'll take care of that.

Okay,

JarJarJacob, if you intend to map a normal diff, i'm going to start an easy diff

Sushi971 wrote:

Okay,

JarJarJacob, if you intend to map a normal diff, i'm going to start an easy diff

You may want to cut it down to around 1:30 for the Easy difficulty.

Download: Goto Yuko - Koi no Mikuru Densetsu (Sushi971) [Jar's Normal].osu

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WOW this song is ANNOYING.

The vocals hurt.

I'm in physical pain here. ._.

Also WHY is NORMAL more points than HARD? Fix it. Naow.

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Ok, let's do this. LEEEEEEEEEEEEROY

Easy and seem ok.

Normal:
00:20:82 (3) - Make this one beat longer. Remember to check distances.

Aside from that, you have a few beats which aren't alinieted properly but it's a minor thing.

Though I don't personally like the song you've done a good job here.

Edit:
Ups, completely overlooked MIKURU BEAAAAAAAM.
But that one is pretty much perfect.

Fixed

[Easy]
00:03:48 (1) - spacing is too close here
third timing section should have a louder hitvolume imo
00:56:37 (1) - for an Easy map, this note comes too soon after the end of a spinner. I suggest kill a repeat and move it back 1/2 beat
01:26:02 (3) - line the start up with 2 vertically
01:27:76 (3) - line this up vertically with 2


[Jar's Normal]
00:27:76 (1) - align vertically with the end of the slider
00:35:22 (2,3) - even though this follows the lyrics these two notes sound weird
01:06:95 (3,4,5,6,7) - should be 1/2 earlier
01:11:29 (1) - i should at least be able to see the edges of the sliderpath as it unwinds. this is not unreadable but it is a bit of a mindfuck


[Hard]
00:25:68 (1) - spacing?
01:18:39 (2) - align horizontally with the end of 1
01:40:59 (2,3) - the slider overlap looks kinda bad? fix if you like
01:48:22 (2) - move this so it isnt partly underneath 1
01:51:34 (2) - align vertically with 1
02:24:12 (2) - ^ horizontally
02:26:72 (2) - stack more neatly
02:34:00 (1) - the lyric youre trying to map occurs 1/2 beat earlier
02:43:02 (3) - either make this 1/4 longer or make it repeat twice more
02:51:69 (2) - stack more neatly
02:58:97 (1) - again, the lyric is 1/2 earlier
03:07:99 (3) - either make this 1/4 longer or make it repeat twice more


[Mikuru Beam]
00:07:30 (4,1) - slider overlap is ugly
00:10:94 (3) - stack under fading 1
timing section 3 could be slightly louder
00:58:28 (3,4,5,1,2) - this is a tad clusterfucky
01:07:12 (4,5,6,7) - i cant even read this
01:09:38 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - clusterfucky. now with added repetition to make it even worse!
01:15:45 (1) - either this or 4 should go cus theyre in the same spot
01:18:05 (4,5,6,7) - back to unreadable
01:19:61 (1) - delete and replace break
01:36:43 (1) - can you make this end on the fading 3?
needs more hitsounds, EXPECIALLY in the soft section
map is very repetitive as well, although the hitsounds will help with that

I fixed Most of the points SFG noticed, except some ones for some reasons :

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:03:48 (1) - spacing is too close here I spaced it a little more, but can't really space it or it will mess the map
third timing section should have a louder hitvolume imo I am at maximum volume....

[Jar's Normal]
00:35:22 (2,3) - even though this follows the lyrics these two notes sound weird Ah?
01:06:95 (3,4,5,6,7) - should be 1/2 earlier I'll see with JarJar if it was intentional
01:11:29 (1) - i should at least be able to see the edges of the sliderpath as it unwinds. this is not unreadable but it is a bit of a mindfuck see above... however this can be my fault as i did the circles bigger


[Hard]
02:34:00 (1) - the lyric youre trying to map occurs 1/2 beat earlier not mapping the lyric, but the rythm, I know it looks weird, but it's a choice
02:58:97 (1) - again, the lyric is 1/2 earlier ^


[Mikuru Beam]
timing section 3 could be slightly louderMax Volume....
01:07:12 (4,5,6,7) - i cant even read this Seriously? i'll have someone else opinion to be sure that it is unreadable
01:15:45 (1) - either this or 4 should go cus theyre in the same spot If we're not in the editor, it's not really that bad
01:18:05 (4,5,6,7) - back to unreadable See above above....
01:19:61 (1) - delete and replace break I really DON'T agree with that, why would I delete this spinner? it was in other difficulties too! and I don't see the problem with it
needs more hitsounds, EXPECIALLY in the soft section
map is very repetitive as well, although the hitsounds will help with that I use various hitsounds in the soft sections, except if you want me to whistle on every notes. the thing is that we don't hear them

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Fixed

Hanyuu is making another Hard difficulty.

Download: Goto Yuko - Koi no Mikuru Densetsu (Sushi971) [Hanyuu's Hard].osu

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Also fixed the jump at 01:28:11 (1) -

Download: Goto Yuko - Koi no Mikuru Densetsu (Sushi971) [Jar's Normal].osu

Fixed!

I PMed Hanyuu to know if he's still mapping his hard difficulty. Wiating for answer.

EDIT : Hanyuu answered, and I don't need to wait his diff (he said it was to help Alex, and that I don't really need help)