This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 3 aprile 2009 at 20.55.22

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: Being
Source: Shakugan No Shana II
Tags: Anime
BPM: 148
Filesize: 14364kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,66 stars, 374 notes)
2. Normal Short Version (4,56 stars, 183 notes)

Download: KOTOKO - Being
Download: KOTOKO - Being (no video)
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My 9th map. I hope you like it.

14/03/09 : Made [Hard] Difficulty.
14/03/09 : Added hitsounds on [Hard]
15/03/09 : Made [Normal] Difficulty and added hitsounds.
15/03/09 : Map moved to Pending Beatmaps.
19/03/09 : Made better [Hard]
22/03/09 : One fix on [Normal]
23/03/09 : Fixed spacing [Thanks to Kyocciola]
25/03/09 : Fixed all. [Thanks to vytalibus]
26/03/09 : Changed some things on [Normal] and [Hard]
26/03/09 : Fixed all. [Thanks to Larto]
02/04/09 : Much fix. [Thanks to vytalibus]
02/04/09 : Another fix by me.
03/04/09 : Fixed all. [Thanks to kingcobra52]

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Normal Short Version
00:45:60 (5) - centralo?
00:48:04 (2) - 1 giù e 1 sinistra
01:01:01 (3) - 1 in su
01:15:40 (4) - 2 su
01:16:21 (5,6) - 1 a destra 2 in su
01:45:20 (9,10) - 4 a sinistra (ma non ne sono convinta)

Hard
00:14:79 - ci starebbe bene un beat
00:42:36 (5) - 1 a sinistra (ma forse l'hai messo apposta li, quindi non so X3)
00:43:17 (1) - 2 in giù o 00:43:58 (2) - 2 in su (ma con questa devi rivedere quelli dopo)
00:49:25 (5) - 1 a sinistra
00:53:51 (1) - 1 in giù
00:54:32 (2,3) - 1 a sinistra
01:13:37 (1) - 1 su
01:14:19 (2,3) - 1 giù
01:26:65 (1) - falla partire a 01:26:55 (sulla linea bianca), la fine lasciala dov'è.
01:34:56 (1) - falla partire un segno prima, a 01:34:46, la fine va bene
01:37:50 (7,8) - 1 a destra
02:22:29 (4) - 1 a destra
02:25:33 (2,3) - 1 a destra
02:37:29 (1) - maybe aggiungi beat qui
02:39:62 (1) - falla partire 1 lineetta prima, a 02:39:52.. la fine è ok
02:41:35 (1) - 1 in giù
02:47:63 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 a destra
02:50:27 (1) - 2 su
02:51:89 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 a sinistra
03:05:67 (1,2) - 1 giù
03:14:79 (4) - ma poverino che ti ha fatto di male? TT mettilo 4 in su o 4 in su e in mezzo al 2 e il 3... povero 4 T.T (XD)

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Download: Ayana Taketatsu - HELP!! -Hell Side- (Hooker For Hika) [Hard].osu

Nice Beatmap

Ok! Please Check this map, i want to play it as soon as possibile XD

Offset: 14,158

[Normal Short Version]
00:50:44 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A cluster of poorly-spaced hitcircles is a NO-NO on my part.
01:24:90 (1) - DON'T end this on a blue tick.

[Hard]
00:19:93 (1) - DON'T start this on a blue tick.
00:42:33 (5,6,1) - Space accordingly. Either (6) is too far from (1) in relation with (5)'s spacing, or (5) is too near from (6) in relation with (1)'s spacing.
00:46:99 (1) - No point making this a new combo.
00:50:44 (1,1) - ^
01:06:86 (1,2,3) - Space accordingly.
01:09:49 (1,2,1,1,1) - Avoid using the "different spacing on very small combo chains" approach on this part. It's very confusing.
01:13:34 (1,2,3,1,1) - ^
01:15:98 (3,4) - Just to make it look nice, move these two to the right.
01:19:83 (1,2,3,4) - Scrape this one. Sounds awkward.
01:22:67 (2,4) - Position these two so that it stacks with the fading (4).
01:30:57 (1,2,1) - Same problem as 01:09:49.
01:47:50 (1) - DON'T start this on a blue tick.
01:49:32 (1) - ^
02:24:29 (1,2,1,2,3) - Scrape this one.
02:59:36 (2) - Put this completely under the fading slider's end point.
03:02:09 (1) - Same problem with 01:47:50.
03:05:03 (5) - Same problem with 02:59:36.

I see a lot of parts like 01:09:49 in [Hard]. While it's not really "illegal" to place them in, you might want to learn which certain parts they will fit in. I usually do that to emphasize strong parts like the chorus, but never randomly.

All fixed, thanks vyt <3.

[Normal Short Version]
00:17:80 (1) - line this up vertically with the end of 8
00:18:82 (4) - line this up with 3
00:20:84 (1) - center between 7 and 2
00:23:48 (2) - align vertically with 1
00:24:69 (3) - ^ with 2 and this is kinda a weird shape o0
00:26:32 (1,2,3,4) - spacing consistant plzkthnxbai
00:41:32 (3) - i dont think the shape of the slider matches the song o0
00:42:33 (4) - align under 3
00:51:65 (6) - should stack under 3
00:52:87 (1,2) - move so it isnt partly under fading hitcircles
00:57:13 (1) - imperfect stacking
00:58:54 (5) - again i dont see why the shape
01:05:23 (2) - why the turn at the very end?
01:06:86 (2) - ^
01:08:27 (3) - imperfect stacking
01:10:10 (4) - why the turn at the end?
01:14:96 (3,4) - i feel like you need a whistle somewhere in here
01:17:80 (1) - can you make this not under 6
01:19:83 (2) - line this up with 5,6,1
01:20:44 (3) - line up with the end of 2
01:20:84 (4,5,6) - hitcircles on top of slider = ugh
01:42:94 (4) - line this up horizontally with 3
01:47:19 (3) - move out from under 10
01:49:12 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - this pattern, the circles come too soon after the spinners for a normal :<


[Hard]
00:14:96 (5) - why the turn at the end?
00:15:57 (6) - line this up with 5
00:16:38 (8) - why the turn at the end?
00:17:19 (9,10) - line this up with 8
00:17:19 (9,10,1,2,1,2) - is this even mapped to anything? its certainly not mapped to the lyrics and it sounds bad
00:23:07 (2,6) - why the turns at the ends?
00:25:50 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds?
00:27:73 (6) - 1/2 after this there should be a note with a finish cus this is a TERRIBLE place to stop
00:41:32 (2,3,4) - make spacing consistant plz
00:49:22 (6) - align under 5
00:49:63 (7) - improper stacking
00:50:44 (9) - spacing?
00:50:84 (10) - ^
00:53:48 (1,5) - why the turn at the end?
00:55:10 (5) - too much whistle
00:57:73 (3) - align with 2
00:59:76 (1) - align with 6
01:01:38 (6) - why the turn at the end? its really annoying and kinda ugly
00:59:96 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2) - needs hitsounds
01:08:48 (3) - stack under 1
01:12:94 (2) - align with 1
01:14:15 (2,3,1) - sounds awkward
01:16:18 (4) - move this off of 5
01:21:45 (7) - align with 5,6
01:22:26 (1) - align with 7
01:24:29 (1,2,3) - imo should be 1/2 earlier, or place another note 1/2 earlier
01:25:91 (6) - move out from under fading 3
01:30:98 (8) - align vertically with 7
01:32:60 (4) - why the turn at the end??? why? WHY?
01:41:72 (1,1) - sounds weird
01:45:57 (4) - align vertically with 3
01:46:38 (5) - imperfect stacking
01:54:09 (1) - hidden
02:09:49 (4) - align with 3
02:11:11 (2) - align with 1 and why the turn at the end?
02:16:59 (1) - spacing is too far, and align vertically with 2
02:16:99 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what is this mapped to? it sounds bad
02:21:04 (1) - for a curve, i would suggest Belzier slider type
02:24:29 (1,2,3,4,5) - sounds bad, cant tell what its mapped to
02:28:95 (3) - imperfect stacking
02:45:37 (1) - spacing?
02:58:54 (1) - move out from under 5
02:59:36 (2) - imperfect stacking
03:05:03 (5) - ^
03:08:68 (2) - spacing? also shape is kinda ugly
03:09:49 (1) - align horizontally with 2
03:13:14 (1) - why the turn at the end?
03:13:95 (2) - align horizontally with 1

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Normal:
00:51:25 (4,5,6) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right
00:52:06 (7,8,9) - 1 Level 3 grid to the left
00:57:13 (1) - Not perfectly stacked with 10
01:08:27 (3) - Not perfectly stacked with 2

Hard:
02:14:96 (1) - Repeat is invisible!
02:28:95 (3) - Not perfectly stacked with 2
02:59:36 (2) - Not perfectly stacked with 1
03:05:03 (5) - Not perfectly stacked with 4


Also, I really don't like your use of hitsounds

Fixed, thanks <3

lol you stacked it manually.

Well I guess that works?

*waiting for a hitsound nazi to pop*

Map is perfect. For me hitsounds are good, so i don't change it. Waiting for a heart ?

I fix much things. Thanks to vytalibus i love this guy <3

Normal: Fine

Hard

00:17:19 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - A bit on the confusing side. Esp. the last 2 (5 and 1) since they don't seem to go to anything.
01:18:61 (2) - Add a beat here?
01:47:60 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - Adjust it so that the beats go with the song, like on normal.
02:08:48 (1) to the second chorus: Turn Kiai time off here methinks.

Starred for now.

Fixed. Thanks :3

I"ll rebubble then.