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Fun. - We Are Young (feat. Janelle Monae)

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Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2 octombrie 2013 at 0:06:55

Artist: Fun.
Title: We Are Young (feat. Janelle Monae)
Tags: some nights
BPM: 116
Filesize: 4395kb
Play Time: 04:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fun. (4,7 stars, 421 notes)
  2. Interesting. (2,86 stars, 275 notes)
  3. Relaxing. (0,99 stars, 176 notes)
Download: Fun. - We Are Young (feat. Janelle Monae)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I mapped this because my friend and classmateTitucris forced convinced me to do it!
special thanks to -Bakari- for the support,
happy30, Faust and Charles445 for the timing ;)
Enjoy!
Last edited by Tony , edited 63 times in total.
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Offset // BPM

213 // 116
41592 // 92
90585 // 116 -- for the second note here, use 1/3
91040 // 96
109792 // 82
111249 // 92
239061 // 90
240394 // 82
241857 // 90
243210 // 78
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
thanks man :D
Melan Blue
321 posts
Joined October 2009
Melan Blue
[General]
Not sure about the timing @_@ But I can't figure it myself...

Got combo colors for you:
Combo1 : 169,160,86
Combo2 : 125,150,95
Combo3 : 91,122,153
Combo4 : 152,107,92

[Boring]
All clear.

[Interesting]
00:34:868 (3) - replace finish at the end with normal hs
00:36:419 (3) - make it normal hs
00:41:075 (2) - add whistle
00:54:635 (3) - add finish
02:03:640 (1) - too close to the previous slider. place it somewhere farther.

[Fun]
from 00:29:178 - to 00:33:057 - why did the hitsounds change? normal hs should be on the second white tick, not on the first one :o

That's all I've got. This mapset is pretty clean, so good luck!~
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
HIGHER THAN THE EMPIRE STATE

[General]
  1. Set same preview time for all diffs!
  2. Disable countdown for all diffs, it doesn't fits here good enough, imo.
  3. Add tag: some nights
  4. Title is kinda incorrect, imo. We Are Young (feat. Janelle Monáe) is a correct one [/b]confirmation confirmation (2)
  5. Set a preview point, 00:49:418 - thi one will be ok, imo.
  6. If it is possible, try to find 1024x768 BG, it'll fit better, imo. bg?
  7. Stop being awesome, or I'll love you forever.
  8. x1.25 x1.20 and x1.29. SV changes are TOO small. Can't you use x1.25 only to make it easier to understand/play!

[Boring]
  1. 00:59:852 (3) - personally, I feel like adding reverse will fit here (vocals/musci) and it gives you consistent rhythm! same for 01:20:722 (2) - 02:22:553 (2,2) - 03:46:031 (2) - - i don't think that you should ignore vocals and music here :< note: BPM is quite slow, so consistent 1/1 flow will not make diff TOO hard. It's totally ok here.
  2. 01:12:896 (1) - NC nazi - I feel like this NC is off your pattern and doesn't fits with vocals/music good enough. So, if it is possible, remove it.
  3. 01:30:585 - [b]It'll be great if you place circle here , to let players FEEL that rhythm change. Otherwise, it's kinda confusing, imo.
  4. 02:09:509 (1) - inconsistent comboing. First of all NC doesn't fits here. Secondly, 02:06:901 (1,2) - this combo chain is too short. Thirdly, it doesn't even look good here! ;_;
  5. 02:43:422 (1,2) - 2x reverserd sliders are confusing. 2x reversed slider is wrong-placed! Beginner will not have enough time to notice second repeat here and they will not expect because usually sliders have only ONE repeat. Replace second repeat with circle, please.
    that flow thing

    see? it flows MUCH better in a wrong way, so you should move sliders reverse far from (1)'s end.
  6. 03:14:727 - I swear, circle with NC will fit here MUCH better! It will make finish of this part sooo awesoooome >3<
  7. 03:43:422 (4,1) - NC nazi - how about swapping new combos here? I think it will bring consistent pattern and will make your dif even more awesome! ♥
[Interesting]
  1. Uh.. man, you totally should try AR5 and HP Drain 4! It will make map more balanced. Right now it has awesome rhythm, but it's boring because of low HP Drain and AR, imo.
  2. 00:59:852 (4) - and so on - see borig diff. There's same thing. But in Normal you should do ti, because rhythm needs it!
  3. 01:57:118 (5,7) - nazi (i have nothing else to say ;_;) - you can make PERFECT blanket slider here, so don't be lazy and do it!
  4. 02:27:444 (3,4,5,1) - mostly because of low AR, flow here is confusing for normal-players. don't you think so? (5) appears too quickly and player will click it before (4), probably.
  5. 03:14:727 - I swear, circle with NC will fit here MUCH better! It will make finish of this part sooo awesoooome >3< [2]
  6. 04:04:748 - move spinner 1/4 later and ad circle here for consistency.
[Fun]
  1. 03:05:596 (3) - uh.. it'll be more consistent if you unstack it. Much more playable with Hidden
  2. 03:05:596 (3) - I swear, circle with NC will fit here MUCH better! It will make finish of this part sooo awesoooome >3< [3]
nice one
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

By the way, if you will need anything (except bubble/rank, ofc) poke me and I'll do my best to help you! ♥
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
since the sv is that slow, I can't consider that 3repeatslider confusing. :)
most things fixed thanks guys ~
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Boring

03:14:727- touch it, because unsnapped (break drag*

Interesting

03:55:162- Unsnapped green line

Fun

00:41:592- finish

Generally good without easy sliders.
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi, from the Queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 205ms BPM: 116,00
6. Offset: 91.032ms BPM: 96,00
2. Offset: 41.584ms BPM: 92,00
Resnapp after and set the timing points right

Easy

General
Overall you could improve the normal curved sliders with the new slider system, so it matches the Normal and Hard sliders too!

Overall
02:48:640 (1,2,3) - What about following the other pattern ? 02:43:422 (1,2) -
02:59:727 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above just with 02:54:509 (1,2,3,4,5) -
03:51:248 (1,2) - I would reserve them two, so it flows better with the music
04:04:748 (1) - Remove this NC please, it unnecessary and too much combo

Normal

00:27:109 (4,1) - To follow your own combo pattern make a NC at (4)
01:28:222 - Add a circle to make the transition better, also feels a bit empty
01:28:548 (1) - Remove NC, still part of the previous pattern and vocal
01:49:792 (1) - ^
02:24:509 (1) - Feels odd when playing, it feels forced and it stops a little. Ctrl + G and Ctrl + H and rotate it a little, so it also follows the next slider. Flows much better and doesnt seems so forced
Example
02:30:379 (1) - Remove NC, still part of the previous pattern and vocal
03:53:857 (1) - ^
03:56:466 (1) - ^
03:59:061 (1) - ^ ... so much combo spam
04:04:748 (1) - Remove NC again, its so unnecessary

Hard

00:39:264 (1) - Remove NC, still part of previous vocal
00:53:657 (2,3) - , 00:54:309 (4,1) - , 00:55:613 (2,3) - This jump really needed? It feels wrong and the song is already slow at this part, so it doesnt fit
00:58:222 (2,3,4,5,6) - Improve the spacing between each circle, so the star is symmetric and the spacing is normal and consistent!
01:08:657 (4,5) - You want to repeat this rythm but here it doesnt fit at all it feels out of place, 01:09:146 - here is just no sound which could fit this rythm, just make a normal slider without circle after, extend the slider to 01:09:309 - and remove the circle
01:49:792 (1) - Remove NC, still part of the previous pattern and vocal
02:02:662 (3,4) - , 02:05:270 (3,4) - Same as 01:08:657 (4,5)
02:20:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adjust the spacing like i said above
02:23:531 (3,4) - Doesnt fit at all again, improve this again by extending
02:26:140 (3,4) - ^
02:52:227 (3) - To follow your own combo placement, NC here and remove here 02:53:205 (1) -
03:44:401 (2,3,4,5,6) - Like above
03:57:281 (4) - No sound to it and totally wrong when playing, remove it
04:00:394 (1) - Combo spam, remove NC, still part of the previous vocal
04:03:210 (1) - ^

Nothing more
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
O parte din

[General]
Romanised title is supposed to show it without any foreigns marks. You have "á" in it. Just change it manually trough .osu file, on "Title" in [Metadata] section.
Resize background to 1024x768.
Kiai time is not consistent trough diffs.


[Boring]
  1. 01:57:118 (2) - please move 2nd and 3rd anchor in right direction to make it fit better with (3)
  2. 04:01:857 (1) - unsnapped slider end
[Interesting]
  1. 01:06:700 (3) - a whistle there would fit perfectly because of melody in background
  2. 01:07:678 (1) - same there on slider end
  3. 04:04:748 (1) - in [Boring] and [Fun] there is whistle, so add it for consistency

[Fun]
  1. 01:30:585 (1,2,1) - ha, I thought it's triplet, unfortunately not. As I see there is bpm change, yet you stack them, which causes problems with readablity. Just don't stack 1,2 together with slider.
  2. 02:52:227 (3,4) - this pattern looks much nicer if placed like that
    SPOILER
  3. 03:57:281 (4,5) - I am assuming you mapped these to vocal, but for me it doesn't sounds well, just...sounds off since vocals are not 1/4... hm
    Removing these and extending previous slider to 03:57:444 would sound much better

Nothing more to add. Very neat map. Good luck!
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
[Fun]
00:20:644 (5,1,2,3) - This is more cool to see and play http://puu.sh/21rPN
Code from 00:19:092 (1) - to 00:21:937 (3) - 
220,292,19092,5,0,0:0:0
220,292,19221,2,0,P|176:272|116:280,1,78.7500030040742,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,268,19609,2,0,P|36:244|28:164,1,157.500006008148,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,180,20385,1,2,0:0:0
187,134,20644,1,0,0:0:0
336,140,20902,6,0,P|308:168|271:178,2,78.7500030040742,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,92,21678,1,2,0:0:0
187,41,21937,2,0,P|215:13|252:4,2,78.7500030040742,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:32:799 (5,6) - CTRL + G and move 00:33:057 (6) - on 00:33:057 (6,2) -
00:41:333 (4,5) - Distance
00:55:613 (2,4) - I suggest to move these beats at the center of 00:54:635 (1,3) - (x: 128; y: 192)
00:58:222 (2,3) - CTRL + G and 00:59:200 (5,6) - CTRL + G and 00:58:874 (4,5) - CTRL + G and 00:59:200 (5,6) - CTRL + G (it flows moooore)
01:14:200 (1) - CTRL + G and move/change 01:14:852 (2) - to fix the spacing with 01:15:505 (3) -
01:22:352 (2) - CTRL + G and move 01:22:841 (3,4) - under the new end
01:34:790 (3) - Move it some squares to right to make it more adherent with 01:33:852 (2) -
02:11:466 (3) - Move it in the center of 02:09:509 (1,2) - (x: 404; y: 264)
02:52:716 (4) - Move it on x: 236; y: 228
03:41:792 (2,4) - Move them in the center of 03:40:814 (1,2) -
03:44:401 (2,3) - CTRL + G and 03:44:727 (3,4) - CTRL + G and 03:45:053 (4,5) - CTRL + G, no star but it flows more
03:57:281 (4,5) - Not stacked

[Interesting]
00:33:057 (5) - x: 256; y: 368
00:39:006 (4) - 1 square to left in the grid
03:55:162 (1) - 1 square to left (center)

[Boring]
01:41:665 (1) - I prefer it flipped vertically
01:44:165 (3) - Same
02:49:944 (2) - Simmetry
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
updated after 6 months. yay!
now let's get this to rank.
Chronotakular
64 posts
Joined March 2013
Chronotakular
Hello! Mod 4 Mod from your queue! (:

General:

-Love this song. I'm a huge P!atD and Fun. fan. (:
-Isn't there a music video for this song? Scratch that. I KNOW there is a music video for this song. Consider adding it, unless it makes the file to huge.
-I like your difficulty names. :D

[Relaxing]
This is an extremely clean map with a really identifiable beat. Almost no issue with it.

04:04:748 (2) - Yeah, I know, I'm picking on the second to last note. I don't even think it's necessary. I'd delete this, and move the slider back to where this note is now. Just for this difficulty, though.

[Interesting]
Another really well made map.

03:33:638 (1) - This spinner feels out of place. I'd get rid of it and chart normally here.
03:56:464 (3,4,5) - Something went awry here. Make these sliders end on the red ticks, and start on the white ticks. This is too hard for this difficulty, and the distance snapping is pretty tough too.

[Fun]
I think you should put the period after Fun on this difficulties name, but either or is fine.

00:10:945 (2) - I would move this to the white beat, and distance snap it.
01:31:040 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with circles 1 and 2 before it. It makes it just a little bit too hard to read.
02:06:573 (1,2) - I would try to make these more symmetrical, just so it's a little bit more pretty.
02:16:355 (2,3) - Consider removing this jump. It's just a little weird to me.
04:03:210 (1,2) - Hmm. Try this. Make the slider end on the red tick, and put the circle on the blue tick.
[]
This is an excellent map. I can't wait until this is ranked! I hope this helped some how, good luck! :oops:
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,783 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
Timing check on request.

Timing:

1st half:

BPM: 116.00, Offset: 213
BPM: 92.00, Offset: 41,592
BPM: 88.30, Offset: 88,548
BPM: 70.00, Offset: 90,756
BPM: 96.00, Offset: 91,041
BPM: 80.00, Offset: 109,791
BPM: 90.00, Offset: 110,916
BPM: 92.00, Offset: 111,249

2nd half: About 3:57 onwards

BPM: 93.00, Offset: 237,770
BPM: 90.00, Offset: 239,060
BPM: 86.00, Offset: 239,726
BPM: 82.00, Offset: 240,423
BPM: 88.00, Offset: 241,520
BPM: 89.00, Offset: 241,860
BPM: 78.00, Offset: 243,208
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
uh oh. the timing seems awesomer now!

Updated Timing and changed some things from Chronotakular's mod! thanks guys :)
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle 
[TimingPoints]
213,517.241379310345,4,2,0,70,1,0
8488,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
41592,652.173913043478,4,2,0,70,1,0
49418,-80,4,2,0,70,0,0
88548,679.501698754247,4,2,0,70,1,0
89737,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
89907,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
90756,857.142857142857,4,2,0,70,1,0
91041,625,4,2,0,70,1,0
91041,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
109791,750,4,2,0,70,1,0
109791,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,70,0,0
110916,659.340659340659,4,2,0,70,1,0
111249,652.173913043478,4,2,0,70,1,0
111249,-80,4,2,0,70,0,0
151683,-80,4,2,0,10,0,0
152988,-80,4,2,0,70,0,0
215596,-80,4,2,0,70,0,1
235162,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
237770,645.161290322581,4,2,0,70,1,1
239060,666.666666666667,4,2,0,50,1,0
239060,-80,4,2,0,50,0,0
239726,697.674418604651,4,2,0,40,1,0
239726,-80,4,2,0,40,0,0
240423,731.707317073171,4,2,0,50,1,0
240423,-80,4,2,0,40,0,0
241520,681.818181818182,4,2,0,40,1,0
241860,674.157303370787,4,2,0,30,1,0
241860,-77.5193798449612,4,2,0,30,0,0
243208,769.230769230769,4,2,0,30,1,0
244938,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
so basically you did no changes lol. at least you confirmed this timing is good then. thank you :s
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,783 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
You switched the 90 BPM to 91 BPM.

???

I don't even.
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
I verified both timing and I see exactly same thing. did I miss something?

what happens I don't even.
Faust
osu! Alumni
4,783 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
The map starting from 111249 is now 4ms behind ?
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
my bad. fixed~ o3o
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