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tom800510

Joined June 2008

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tom800510 2009-03-19T13:11:59+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年8月16日 at 上午 10:25:30

Artist: Kirari
Title: Last Piece
BPM: 188
Filesize: 3932kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:

Great Teacher!!? (4.77 stars, 487 notes)
Ordinary Teacher!!? (2.74 stars, 258 notes)

Download: Kirari - Last Piece
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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i love both this cool anime/comic and Onizuka!

he is veryveryveryveryvery cool!!@

Last edited by tom800510 2009-08-16T02:25:34+00:00, edited 17 times in total.

An64fan

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Joined September 2008

An64fan 2009-03-26T00:33:16+00:00

Maybe consider turning off letterboxes from the storyboard tab of setup? It's just kind of weird when the letter

Easy
01:44:80 (5,6,7) - Slight spacing inconsistency here.
Kind of bothers me that your only break is nearing towards the end, but I guess this map's not too heavy. No huge problem.

Onizuka!!?
For some reason it's also listed as "Onizuka!!?" on the song list but as as "Onizuka!!" in the editor open menu... Not really a problem though, just felt to point it out.
01:43:52 (1,2,3) - Would personally add in another beat a half-beat before here, though that's entirely up to you.
02:04:27 (1-9)
02:12:56 (14-19)
02:14:48 (1-9)
02:39:37 (3-8)
03:17:67 (2-7)
These sections seem just a little odd with the triplets. Not a huge problem, although maybe just take another look at those to make sure you really want them like that.

02:21:50 (1) - Why is there ONLY a giant G in this map and no TO?

Fix please?
03:13:52 (5,6) - Most BATs probably won't agree with a sudden stop like this, but I say....Gopher it! (go for it)

Starring for now, as the only really big thing I find with this that I really have a problem is the G thing~

vytalibus

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870 posts

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vytalibus 2009-06-13T07:35:18+00:00

[Easy] (Suggestion: Rename to [Normal])
00:27:88 (4) - Align with (2).

[Onizuka!!]
00:28:52 (8) - New combo mark.
00:33:63 (8) - ^
00:39:37 (8) - ^
00:44:32 (8) - ^
00:49:27 (5) - ^
00:54:37 (7) - ^
01:24:69 (5) - ^
01:29:80 (8) - ^
01:34:91 (8) - ^
01:45:76 (11) - ^
01:50:54 (9) - ^
02:11:29 (9) - ^
03:27:25 (8) - ^
03:32:35 (7) - ^
03:37:46 (10) - ^

tom800510

258 posts

Joined June 2008

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tom800510 2009-06-21T11:57:37+00:00

bumped

UtaMi_old

3 posts

Joined August 2008

UtaMi_old 2009-06-27T09:00:20+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Larto

4,128 posts

Joined June 2008

Larto 2009-06-27T09:13:41+00:00

Timing:
Offset might be like 3-4 ms late but I think that's fine.

Onizuka:
Fine

Normal:
Custom difficulty name would be nice.
Also, maybe put a spinner at the end. Just a hitcircle is a bit boring and a spinner would really fit. You can make the end of the spinner fade out via timing sections if you wanna.

tom800510

258 posts

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Topic Starter

tom800510 2009-07-14T15:00:06+00:00

Difficulty name:
normal

OT
onizuka

GT

Timing:-6

Yuukari-Banteki

1,534 posts

Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2009-08-10T19:18:04+00:00

[Ordinary]
03:24:51 - kiai should happen on the note of the "hit" it fountains on ;o
03:45:57 - ^
other than that this looks great ^_^

[Great...lol]
01:05:52 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe put some hitsounds in here?
02:05:52 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
02:18:92 (2,4) - end 1/4 earlier
03:18:92 (7,8,9) - spacing is too close compared to the rest of the combo
03:24:83 - kiai should happen on the note of the "hit" it fountains on
also increase slider tick rate to 1
04:04:88 (8) - try half instead of quarter bpm

call me on IRC when you have finished and I will remod, starred for now~

tom800510

258 posts

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Topic Starter

tom800510 2009-08-16T02:27:28+00:00

Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Great...lol]
03:18:92 (7,8,9) - spacing is too close compared to the rest of the combo what? I guess this part is find
also increase slider tick rate to 1 seem unnessesary
04:04:88 (8) - try half instead of quarter bpm no