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Download: Fang - Moon Light Dance -Night Battle- (CDBacklash) [Pasonia's Insane Demo].osu
Download: Fang - Moon Light Dance -Night Battle- (CDBacklash) [Pasonia's Insane Demo].osu
Just a friendly reminder that what I say is mostly *suggestion* on how to possibly improve your map and not a *command* that you change your map!
00:17:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is unintuitive
00:20:03 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and notes on top of sliders generally both look bad and hide the slider
00:23:67 (5) - spacing?
00:24:76 (10) - ^
00:27:67 (1) - move the slider end away from the slider start so I can tell which direction the slider goes
00:32:12 (4) - delete and replace break
00:43:67 (1) - sliders cannot completely overlap themselves like this
00:52:39 (7) - stack this under 6
00:54:21 (1,2,1,2,3) - spacing?
01:03:30 (3) - ^
01:05:85 (6) - hidden underneath previous slider
01:06:21 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing?
01:08:39 (7) - stack more neatly
01:12:39 (5) - stack this so it isnt hidden
01:11:79 (4) - snap to blue tick plz
01:13:48 (8) - not stacked right
01:18:03 (8,9) - ^
01:21:03 (2) - stack this on the end of 1
01:22:39 (1) - spacing?
01:23:48 (3,4) - two notes cannot be in the same place at the same time! either make 3 a hitcircle or move 4 so it doesnt start on the end of 3
01:25:30 (1) - spacing?
00:17:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is unintuitive
00:20:03 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and notes on top of sliders generally both look bad and hide the slider
00:23:67 (5) - spacing?
00:24:76 (10) - ^
00:27:67 (1) - move the slider end away from the slider start so I can tell which direction the slider goes
00:32:12 (4) - delete and replace break
00:43:67 (1) - sliders cannot completely overlap themselves like this
00:52:39 (7) - stack this under 6
00:54:21 (1,2,1,2,3) - spacing?
01:03:30 (3) - ^
01:05:85 (6) - hidden underneath previous slider
01:06:21 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing?
01:08:39 (7) - stack more neatly
01:12:39 (5) - stack this so it isnt hidden
01:11:79 (4) - snap to blue tick plz
01:13:48 (8) - not stacked right
01:18:03 (8,9) - ^
01:21:03 (2) - stack this on the end of 1
01:22:39 (1) - spacing?
01:23:48 (3,4) - two notes cannot be in the same place at the same time! either make 3 a hitcircle or move 4 so it doesnt start on the end of 3
01:25:30 (1) - spacing?
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Cheers for the indepth assist. Can anyone confirm/advise on this? In my opinion it is more correct as it is at the momentSaturos-fangirl wrote:
Just a friendly reminder that what I say is mostly *suggestion* on how to possibly improve
01:11:79 (4) - snap to blue tick plz
edit: nvm i was looking at the wrong note
Distance snap. DISTANCE SNAP. LEVEL ONE. DISTANCE SNAAAAAA- You get the idea. Use it.
Hitsounds are a bit too quiet. Raise their volume.
The current HP Drain is too forgiving for an Insane difficulty.
00:27:67 (1) - It's difficult to see where this slider starts and ends. Move it around a bit so you can at least see the start and end.
00:43:67 (1) - I don't like the overlapping, not at all. This combo is also loooooong; I can see how you tried to use the green circles to compensate for the HP, but it shouldn't really work that way.
00:57:48 (1) - Overlapped by the last slider.
01:23:67 (4) - Impossible to hit at the right time. It starts at the same time the last slider ends.
01:24:39 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Distance snap these to 1.5. Short combos are fine, just don't use 7 single combos in a row.
01:31:48 (10) - Overlapped.
Good job.
Hitsounds are a bit too quiet. Raise their volume.
The current HP Drain is too forgiving for an Insane difficulty.
00:27:67 (1) - It's difficult to see where this slider starts and ends. Move it around a bit so you can at least see the start and end.
00:43:67 (1) - I don't like the overlapping, not at all. This combo is also loooooong; I can see how you tried to use the green circles to compensate for the HP, but it shouldn't really work that way.
00:57:48 (1) - Overlapped by the last slider.
01:23:67 (4) - Impossible to hit at the right time. It starts at the same time the last slider ends.
01:24:39 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Distance snap these to 1.5. Short combos are fine, just don't use 7 single combos in a row.
01:31:48 (10) - Overlapped.
Good job.
Oh, Um yeah. This looks like it would be fun if you were real real good at osu!. Unfortunately, this is something I am not. I haven't even tried to play this cos I know I wouldn't hit any beats. Ah well. Most of this is probably wrong so if you don't think it helps then don't do it. 
There are tons of things that need to be distance snapped, but I'm not even going to point them out. Just what looks ugly or isn't done well.
13:12, 1 - End this one half earlier
16:58 - A note here sounds cool
21:39, 7 - Get rid of this
46:39 - Put a note here
48:39 - Put a note here
48:76, 3 - Doesn't sound right, change it
50:58, 4 - Make this a clap
54:58, 2 - Make this a finish
58:21, 2 - Move this down a grod square
01:00:00, 4 - Make this a finish
1:07:48, 6 - No, this isn't allowed. No 2 notes at the same time.
1:16:94, 6 - Make this a finish
1:40:85, 5-12 - This sounds wrong. Change it.
1:45:30, 3 - Again, you can't do this.
1:46:94, 4 - Make the end of this a finish
Yeah. That was fun.
There are tons of things that need to be distance snapped, but I'm not even going to point them out. Just what looks ugly or isn't done well.
13:12, 1 - End this one half earlier
16:58 - A note here sounds cool
21:39, 7 - Get rid of this
46:39 - Put a note here
48:39 - Put a note here
48:76, 3 - Doesn't sound right, change it
50:58, 4 - Make this a clap
54:58, 2 - Make this a finish
58:21, 2 - Move this down a grod square
01:00:00, 4 - Make this a finish
1:07:48, 6 - No, this isn't allowed. No 2 notes at the same time.
1:16:94, 6 - Make this a finish
1:40:85, 5-12 - This sounds wrong. Change it.
1:45:30, 3 - Again, you can't do this.
1:46:94, 4 - Make the end of this a finish
Yeah. That was fun.
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Yeah, distance snap is the way to go. It's not TOO bad here, but it would certainly help.
[Insane]
00:19:12 (7) - ...but first, turn off all snaps and place this one's starting point directly beneath the end of 6.
00:20:76 (5) - Should be same spacing as the 1 - 4 in this group.
00:27:67 (1) - Though I really like the look of this slider, it's going to be hard for people to know which direction it goes (especially if they don't have snaking sliders on). Move the endpoint to the lower-right of the starting point and adjust the slider body appropriately.
00:43:67 (1) - Erm... OK, I guess, but might be a bit confusing.
00:46:58 (2) - Move this out from behind 1.
01:06:94 (5,6) - This is impossible to get 300s on both, and the whole area is too clustered in comparison with the rest of the song.
01:22:94 (2) - Move parallel to 1.
01:44:76 (2,3) - Similar problem to 01:06:94.
So, in summary, fix this type of thing:
and you'll be well on your way to a good map. It wouldn't hurt to have a background image, though.
[Insane]
00:19:12 (7) - ...but first, turn off all snaps and place this one's starting point directly beneath the end of 6.
00:20:76 (5) - Should be same spacing as the 1 - 4 in this group.
00:27:67 (1) - Though I really like the look of this slider, it's going to be hard for people to know which direction it goes (especially if they don't have snaking sliders on). Move the endpoint to the lower-right of the starting point and adjust the slider body appropriately.
00:43:67 (1) - Erm... OK, I guess, but might be a bit confusing.
00:46:58 (2) - Move this out from behind 1.
01:06:94 (5,6) - This is impossible to get 300s on both, and the whole area is too clustered in comparison with the rest of the song.
01:22:94 (2) - Move parallel to 1.
01:44:76 (2,3) - Similar problem to 01:06:94.
So, in summary, fix this type of thing:
and you'll be well on your way to a good map. It wouldn't hurt to have a background image, though.
Hi there,
1~ For a perfect Offset: 17518
2~ Resnap all notes.
3~ Activate distance snap. Press Alt and choose 0.5 on the right top part of your screen. Use middle mouse for this.
4~ Go to View - Grid lvl, and pick Grid lvl 3 (most precise).
5~ Start snapping everything. (Thats clicking every single beat and moving it, if you cant move it back to their original position when using distance snap, that means they wernt snapped correctly)
Fixes~
00:20:97 (6) - stack (7)-(8) on that slider's end.
00:23:15 (2) - Snap
*Try making the beats that follow a pattern, have the same distance between them, even when using distance snap*
Starting here: 00:23:15 (2) -
00:22:97 (1) - de-activate distance snap, move that up so it matches the middle of (2) - (3)
Activate now distance snap and move 00:23:69 (5) - so it matches the middle of (3) - (4)
Will keep editing tomorrow with you. Ill leave it there for the moment.
1~ For a perfect Offset: 17518
2~ Resnap all notes.
3~ Activate distance snap. Press Alt and choose 0.5 on the right top part of your screen. Use middle mouse for this.
4~ Go to View - Grid lvl, and pick Grid lvl 3 (most precise).
5~ Start snapping everything. (Thats clicking every single beat and moving it, if you cant move it back to their original position when using distance snap, that means they wernt snapped correctly)
Fixes~
00:20:97 (6) - stack (7)-(8) on that slider's end.
00:23:15 (2) - Snap
*Try making the beats that follow a pattern, have the same distance between them, even when using distance snap*
Starting here: 00:23:15 (2) -
00:22:97 (1) - de-activate distance snap, move that up so it matches the middle of (2) - (3)
Activate now distance snap and move 00:23:69 (5) - so it matches the middle of (3) - (4)
Will keep editing tomorrow with you. Ill leave it there for the moment.
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