Easy
Rename to Normal.
00:07:37 (4) - Move so it's not under (3). Extend for one more repeat.
00:17:83 (3) - Too far from 00:18:28 (1). Move it closer.
00:16:52 (1) - 00:16:47 (1/8 back!).
00:25:44 (3) - Move to 00:25:56 (1/4 forward).
00:26:47 (1) - Horizontal alignment feels weird here, especially with a new combo.
00:38:06 (4,5) - Move further from (2,3) and closer to (6).
00:49:19 (3) - New combo.
00:52:60 (3) - New combo.
00:54:19 (x) - New note here.
Normal
Rename to Hard. It's not really Hard (not what she said), but it's harder than Normal, at least.
00:06:92 (6) - Move to 00:06:81 (1/4 back).
00:11:01 (8) - Move closer to the start of 00:11:47 (1).
00:19:65 (4) - Move closer to (3) and to 00:19:53 (1/4 back).
00:14:65 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move these closer, or...
00:18:28 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move these further apart.
00:21:92 (1,2,3) - Move these so (3) is closer to 00:23:06 (1).
00:23:06 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Move to the right, or...
00:24:65 (1) - Move to the left (preferable).
00:25:56 (5) - Move to the left, or...
00:25:78 (1) - Move to the right.
00:29:19 (1) - Move away so it's not under 00:28:74 (4).
00:35:56 (7,1,2,3) - Move down and to the left so (7) is diagonal to (6) and (6) doesn't overlap (1,2,3).
00:38:06 (7,8) - Move to the right.
00:46:01 (11) - Move up, under 00:45:56 (10).
00:52:26 (5) - Add a note here (1/4).
00:53:97 (1) - Spinner is not appropriate. Use a hit circle instead, at 00:54:19.
General
Timing looks good. Your main issue is spacing. Be sure to double-check and use Distance Snap if necessary. Song has great potential for an Insane difficulty. =]
Working on the video offset. It's off by a bit. (Did you add the black pause?)
Video offset is -396 ms.