BCI wrote:

le M4SB lul /runs LOL

[General]

1. It's highly recommended to change le title. I understand you, but... it's original name :V Also Pony Spam and Wi-Fi Bridge have their titles in caps, and it looks okay. D: maybe later
2. Maybe try to find some BG with Truxton? o3o/ This music doesn't represent Truxton's music style after all.
3. Inconsistency in PreviewTime: Fixed.
   - [Hard] : 23380
   - [Normal] : 163850

[NM]

1. HP-1? It's so strange to see le easiest and le hardest diffs with almost the same HP (4-5) I'll increase the one on Hard instead.
2. Also if i were you I'll do AR-1. AR 6 in Normals is soo pro o3o lol ok
3. Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at: 01:10:203 and 01:57:027 (as AiBAT says, i'm not sure) Fixed.
4. 00:48:258 (2,3) - I remember this pattern in Gold, lul. Disable grid snap and move red point for this OK.
5. 00:51:184 (1,3) - Swap le NCs here. It makes the consistency with next combopatterns; also it shows two similar parts in music perfectly. tl;dr it looks awesome, so change this pls asldjasdsd fixed somehow
6. 01:09:477 (3,4) - Here clearly goes 1/3 (or 1/4, I'm not sure, IMO 1/3 fits better). It's Normal, so it's up to you lul, but it will be nice to do 1/3 (or 1/4) slider with repeat. If you do this, add to both (begin/repeat/end) claps. I know there's 1/3 here, but it doesn't really noticeable. Using a simple 1/4 here still works and doesn't break polarity flow here.
7. 01:10:209 (5) - NC pls /me likes NCs on the last notes Things like this just don't make sense at all. Imagine you're playing this map in TAG mode on multiplayer and when your part come you only hit 1 note.
8. 01:48:258 (1) - Why NC here? It breaks your combopattern, but I like it ;___; so two ways here:
   
   1. 01:48:258 (1) and 01:54:111 (1) - RNC
   2. 01:36:550 (5) and 01:42:404 (5) and 01:55:575 (4) - NC < Used this way. Thanks for pointing these out!
9. 02:10:209 (2,3) - same as 00:48:258 (2,3) - This one's no. I like the current one because it followed music's beat.
10. 02:18:989 (3,4) - same as 01:09:477 (3,4) - Not necessary o3o
11. 02:20:453 (5) - same as 01:10:209 (5) - lul No.
12. 02:46:794 (1) - Do a better blanket by moving middle point and last point ~2 grids left Done.
13. 02:55:575 (3) - NC this pls lul u mad this should be NC-ed lol bug, ok

[HD]

1. 01:07:282 (7,1) - You should swap NCs here D: current looks like fuck-logic lol ok
2. 01:09:477 (3,4) - It's the same as in Normal, but here it's highly recommended. It will be awesum and it plays better (current 1/1 looks off) Uhh.. maybe later. I'll see other's opinion about this.
3. 01:10:209 (5) - NC as I said in Normal lul no u
4. 01:39:294 - If I were you I'll add le note here (you hear something in da BGM) You can do it like this for making good pattern. (line+triangle) It goes at all the places like this (ex. 01:51:032 - ) but I see it was intentional, so inb4 no thanks lul b-but it's awesome ;w; oh you. Yep, it's intentional. I like it the way it is.
5. 02:19:721 (5,6) - y'know what to do lul (1/3) :/
6. 02:20:453 (7) - and here too lul (NC) D:
7. End have two moments which could be mapped as 1/3 ( 03:11:306 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/1RUeP and 03:22:465 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/1RUfI ) but it breaks the patterns, so I just saying it for making sure, hehe. lol u

so bad mod ajaksjdfsdshuehue
rank this pls
/runs

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey ~ Here my mod from my Queues >w<//

Fix it please
It's only what I think

General

1. Nice SB c:and also a nice song too >o< Thanks! \:D/
2. add ''Display epilepsy warning'', maybe it's unnecessary but I would do that I don't think so, there were no hard flashes/pulses here, and the white sprite fades soft enough.

Normal

1. 00:32:160 (1) - 2 grid down to fit it with 00:31:428 (3) OK.
2. 00:48:989 (3) - move this slider end point to x:228 y:228 OK.
3. 00:50:087 (1) - remove NC It's necessary.
4. 00:51:184 (3) - add NC here and delete the next one Uh, maybe no. I followed first vocal beat to add NC.
5. 00:59:599 (2) - Ctrl + C this Note and Ctrl + V and Ctrl + H here 01:00:697 to make the slider equal. Don't forget to click Ctrl + G too OK.
6. 01:41:672 (3) - stack it better with this slider end 01:39:477 (1)
7. 01:42:038 (4) - 2 grid down to fit it with 01:40:575 (2) OK.
8. 01:42:404 (1) - 1 grid down to fit it with 01:41:672 (3) Breaks blanket.
9. 02:12:404 (2) - spacing I don't see anything wrong `-`
10. That's all

Hard

1. This Diff feel like an Insane. :/ Rename it to Insane maybe? Nah. It's too easy to became Insane, but difficult enough to be a Hard. This is why I don't need Insane/Extra here.
2. 00:37:465 (4) - this slider doesn't fit here at all. Maybe add a note on 00:37:648 only? Nope, this is my pattern style.
3. 00:46:794 (1) - end this slider on 00:47:160 No I guess, I like it the way it is now.
4. 00:58:501 (1) - try to stack this slider with the end from slider (1) That'll break the spacing `-`
5. 00:58:501 (1,2) - make this like:
   Umm no. Consisting pattern from the previous pattern and I like it this way.
6. 02:52:465 (4) - remove clap. sound is ugly >< I know >< accidental mapping orz maybe I'll add whistle instead.
7. 02:58:501 (1) - 3 grid down to fit it with 02:57:953 (4) Breaks slider-cutting and blanket spacing.
8. 03:24:477 (4) - 1 grid up OK.
9. 03:24:660 (5) - 3 grid up OK.
10. That's all >.<

Sorry for my nooby Mod >o<//
But good luck with get it rank ;>

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hello hello hello!
Red:Unrankeable
Blue:Improvable
Black:Idea

[General]
I see something in the circles that makes me think he lacks the map, so I'll help you as best I can ..
[Normal]
00:24:843 (2) Delete Whistle ?
00:27:404 (1) Sound Ugly No it's not <_<
00:33:989 (2) Idea Hmm... pretty nice actually. I'll consider this.
00:36:550 (3) Delete Whistle Maybe no.
00:50:819 Add Circle x:188 y:148 why unrankeable? Because the level is so slow to mappear whole song I like it the way it is now.
01:07:282 (1) Keep Aesthetics

SPOILER

I don't get what did you mean here..
01:37:648 Add Circle x:328 y:156 No. I like it this way and it's my pattern style.
01:39:111 Add Circle :188 y:96 ^
01:43:501 ^ x:228 y:156 ^
01:50:819

SPOILER

...I'll think about this.

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue!

General
Right timing, is more correct:
1. Offset: 23.392ms BPM: 164,00 Your offset just feels late. I think mine is better.
Resnap after and set the timing points right!
lightning.png and rain.wav isn't used, delete it rain.wav is used on storyboard, find it on the very beginning of the map
About lightning.png, I'll delete it later

Normal

01:57:770 (1) - I suggest to not stack this, it feels forced There's a SV change here, which also affects spacing. Since the spacing was lowered down here and I don't want players to have their spacing flow ruined, I'll stack this instead.
03:08:014 (1) - ^ Same here.

Hard

00:45:697 (4) - NC for new pattern OK.
00:46:611 (9,1) - Jump is a little too big, reduce it Uh... I'll try.
01:57:038 - Why this slowdown? The song hasnt gone slower one bit. No need so delete this There's a less ambience on the song here. I think it's not a bad idea to lower the spacing, plus it can be used for "resting" time for the players since the gameplay is slowed down.
02:18:258 (2,3,4) - Spacing between 2 and 3 isnt similar with 3 and 4 I'll try to fix this by rotating the jump pattern.
03:07:282 - Slowdown again, like above Nah. Same reason but in a rather different condition.
03:16:062 (1,3) - Not stacked properly It's already perfect o.o
03:23:928 (1,3,5) - These arent the same height, fix them I know, but I just liked it the way it is now.

Not much, nice map and SB, GL