1. Easy (1,09 stars, 67 notes)
2. Hard (4,97 stars, 197 notes)
3. Normal (3,15 stars, 105 notes)

Andrea wrote:

to my Moe Lally <3

Mercurial wrote:

Moved to ranked.

jk.

1. I think this mp3 is quite bad imo i can hardly listen to anything
2. And your hitsounds is quite loud maybe lower them down a bit to 50% or 60% o.o
3. Your Background size is 1086x768 plz make it to 1024x768 ><
4. your sliderslide sounds weird plz add some sliderslider muter so it'll be nice to hear

1. 00:21:142 (1) - Andrea plz dont be lazy and making so many reveres like this because it makes some players confuse by how many reveres there is >< maybe make rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/1XAWf
2. 00:23:999 (1) - I think if you can make it blanket with the 2 slider maybe it will look much better imo like this? http://puu.sh/1XB01
3. 00:25:785 - why did leave this so empty i can hear a beat on the song so plz add a note here since it will fit so well with it, and 00:26:142 (1) - this will feel so sudden to click since it's an easy diff~
4. 00:30:070 (2) - i totally dont like how you placed this note so maybe move it to x:368 y:276 since it will make nice flow to the beat. And dont forget to fix the spacing after that~
5. 00:47:570 (2) - i dont think it's placed it right imo plz click ctrl+shift+r and rotate it to +4 with selection center it'll look much better :3
6. 00:53:285 (3) - same as i said 00:21:142 (1) -
7. 00:58:285 (1,1) - those slider's made me lol all on the same line and nothing great about them xD maybe do something like curving them or something, like this? http://puu.sh/1XBhC and http://puu.sh/1XBid
8. 01:07:570 (2,1) - note after this many curving slider is not really good idea tbh plz remove some reveres or remove this note 01:10:070 (1) - atm it'll confuse some players by that many reveres and sudden note shows up~
9. 01:10:428 (2) - Andrea why are so lazy to map ;w; this is kiai time and kiai time means fun, but i dont see anything fun by that sliders xD
10. 01:18:285 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm is a bit boring imo how about changing it to something more fun~ like this? http://puu.sh/1XBs5

1. 00:09:356 (1) - I dont think this slider is very fun to play how about making it to curve or something like that, because atm it looks like you were just bored and just wanted to finish that map faster orz. How about making it like this? http://puu.sh/1XBx4
2. 00:18:642 (5,1) - umm i can hear the vocal started on the 5 note on the 1 so i suggest you to switch those nc and it'll look much better imo
3. 00:21:499 (5,1) - ^

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  - 00:21:142 (1) - split to 2 1/1 sliders? or like this http://puu.sh/1YgV5 fits better

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  - 00:08:999 (3) - out of DS? , make better blanket 00:07:213 (2) - this slider with 00:08:999 (3) - this and move (3) note to fit DS
  - 00:13:285 (2) - 1 grid right , to make 0.9x DS with next slider
  - 00:24:713 (2) - http://puu.sh/1YgSi this is better for rhythm imo

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  - 00:04:178 (2) - ctrl g? flows better and current jump pattern is odd i think :/
  - 00:28:642 (8,1) - i think current slider look ugly try this? http://puu.sh/1YgLw -nazi
  - 00:32:571 (2,3) - ctrl G is better for play imo becuase next notes are have little jump, so maybe players want to little jump before break time
  - 01:01:856 (2) - make 1/2 slider instead a note? feels empty now
  - 01:11:142 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/1YgHp how about this? current pattern looks little bit bored

• • Aggiungi "osuplayer111" nelle tags.

• • HP Drain Rate 1? Troppo basso, aumentalo di uno/due tick.
  • 00:23:999 (1) - Ruota questo slider e spostalo a x:48 y:96.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:32:570 (4) - Cambia la forma di questo slider rendendolo ~.
  • 00:51:856 (1,2,3) - Prova a fare una cosa del genere:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:56:142 (1) - Allinea questo cerchio nell'asse x.
  • 00:57:570 (3) - ^

• • Aumenta anche qui l'HP Drain Rate.
  • 00:24:713 (2,4) - 2 ripetizioni nel (2) e nessuna nel (4); aggiungi due ripetizioni al (4) per consistenza ed elimina tutto ciò che viene dopo oppure elimina le ripetizioni dal (2) sempre per lo stesso motivo.
  • 00:31:499 (2) - Sposta questo cerchio a x:256 y:24 (la posizione del (4) capovolta verticalmente) e fixa lo spacing dei prossimi slider in modo che il loro puntino centrale sia allineato all'asse x.
  • 00:44:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - Se vuoi creare un pentagono perfetto vai in compose -> create polygon circles

• • Aumenta l'HP Drain Rate.
  
  Malinconia Simmetria portami via. C'è poco da dire in questa diff, per colpa della simmetria ogni tanto le new combo mi sembrano off (ad esempio qui 00:06:321 (1) se lo slider non avesse la ripetizione ed iniziasse a 00:06:678 la new combo avrebbe più senso) ma non mi viene nient'altro da aggiungere.