This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 26, 2009 at 7:19:21 PM

Artist: Perfume
Title: Electro World
Tags: Electro World Perfume
BPM: 144.1
Filesize: 3929kb
Play Time: 03:46
Difficulties Available:

1. Bleeding Hands (4.86 stars, 470 notes)
2. Normal (4.32 stars, 270 notes)
3. Shinde's Easy (2.69 stars, 116 notes)

Download: Perfume - Electro World
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Here is my second song that I have submitted and I hope that it turns out better than my first. Suggestions are appriciated.

04-05-09
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Updated beatmap to not force skin.

04-06-09
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Nexy comments

04-07-09
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A few notes added to the bleeding hands map.

04-25-09
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Been a while since I have worked on this. I really want to get this ranked.
Nexy comment and DawnII comments.

04-28-09
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Resnapped EVERYTHING!
A few changes with the beeat spacing.

04-29-09
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Updated Normal and fixes a few beat sounds on Bleeding Hands

05-01-09
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(Morning)
Felt bored this morning so I decided to change the background a bit.

(Evening)
Updated Bleeding hands beat sounds and fized Normal beat covering up a reverse arrow.
Fixed the SB not working correctly. (1.5 Hours)

05-26-09
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Added new Shinde Difficulty!

Is no one even going to look at this?

Lazy mod: Suggestions/Corrections

Normal:
00:21:685 - 00:22:309(7,8) - Spacing is weird here assuming you used 0.8.
00:24:391(12) - Sounds better at 00:23:975 to 00:25:640.
01:33:926 - Is this timing section needed?
02:12:649 & 02:13:481 - Add a hitcircle on these timings. Sounds better in my opinion.

Bleeding Hands:
01:33:926 - Is this timing section needed?

You're still forcing the default skin. User's preference (No Change) is the one that should be selected. Click save after you change it.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

DoctorToxn wrote:

I left the break in the song due to high drain on the Bleeding Hands difficulty.

D: You misunderstood me. Didn't say to remove the break, so go ahead and put it back. The red timing line at 01:33:926; is that really needed? I removed it and it still sounded good to me. Of course, I'm still new at this, so please tell me if I'm wrong here or if I missed something about it.

i try it and really appreciate it.

hope that song gonna be ranked.

Very fun to play.

Good Work doc

You should ask for mod requests, there are too many maps that most of them get overlooked. Most the stuff below are cosmetic changes/suggestions. You don't have to follow them and it's perfectly fine if you don't.

I used Grid Level 3. You have some spacing issues; you should go back and re-align most of your notes.

Suggestions

Normal:
00:01:07 (2) - Nudge left.
00:01:49 (3) - Nudge right.
00:01:90 (4) - Align this with 1. Move right to the middle of the grid.

Click here for how to place 5 & 6.

00:07:32 (1) - Straighten this out and make the starting point rest on the middle grid line.
00:07:73 (2) - Nudge down twice to the point the tip of the 2 touches the end of 1.
00:09:40 (5) - Nudge down.
00:10:65 (8) - Nudge this down then move to the right a bit, so it rests exactly where 00:07:32 (1) started. Click here for picture.
00:11:90 (1) - After fixing 8,9,10; nudge 1 to the right.
00:13:35 (4) - Nudge left.
00:13:98 (1) - Too close to 2. If you look at 3, it's a bit further from 4.
00:15:02 (4) - Nudge down and then to the right.
00:16:48 (8) - Align this with 4's starting point after doing the step above.
00:23:97 (12) - This slider is ugly. Think of a better one that won't overlap 1.
00:29:80 (10) - New combo.
00:30:63 (12) - Place this directly across from 11.
00:30:84 (13) - Place this directly across from 10.
00:31:46 (14) - After doing the steps above, you should be able to place this where 9 starts. Click here for picture.
00:34:17 (5) - Move this to where 15's starting point is. After that move the 4 close to 5.
00:50:41 (4) - This slider is ugly.
01:14:35 (1) - Place this where the previous slider 5 starts.
01:30:595 - Insert a break here. You never fixed after misunderstanding me.
02:09:73 (6) - Move this down a bit so you can align 7 with 3.
02:20:97 (1) - This slider is ugly.
02:26:38 (1) - Shorten this by 1/4 and add a hitcircle on the white tick while making it a new combo.
02:40:96 (3) - Place this where 1 starts and new combo.
02:52:62-02:53:87(1,2,3,4) - Think of a better patten here.

Increase the overall difficulty so it's directly in the middle, or under Normal.

Bleeding Hands:
00:13:98 (1) - Too close to 2. Look at 3's distance to 2.
00:15:43 (6) - Too close to 5.
00:18:97 (1) - Place this 1 somewhere else and make a pattern out of the next 1 and 2.
00:20:64 (3) - New combo.
00:36:46 (1) - A jump to this combo would probably be better.
00:50:41 (4) - This slider actually looks a lot better here than in Normal.
01:21:64 (5) - New combo.
02:07:65-02:08:90 (1,2,3,4) - Arrange these so the 3 ends up in the center of the playing field. Make sure the 7 stays in the center as well.
02:14:31 (1) - Make the end of the slider rest on the 5.
02:20:97 (1) - Ugly slider.
02:40:54 (1) - Move this to the center of the playing field.
02:54:91 (7) - Too close to 6. Look at 6's distance to 5.
02:55:32 (8) - Too close to 7.
02:55:74 (9) - Too close to 8.

02:58:45 (9) - Make the end of this slider rest on top of 1
-OR-
02:59:28 (1) - Make the 1 rest on the ending point of 9.

03:16:97 (4) - Ugly slider.

Remember these are all suggestions. You don't have to follow any of them. Just my personal opinion on how it would make the map better. Since I hate the background you currently have, I'll post 2 that I found that you might like. Again, you don't have to use them.

BG1: http://image-fast.com/image/706e79e774e8/Perfume.jpg
BG2: http://image-fast.com/image/d09a7b61be71/Perfume.png

Offset is better at 646.

[Normal]
00:01:90 (4) - New combo.
00:30:62 (12) - New combo.
01:21:63 (5) - New combo.
01:30:37 (3) - Insert break after this.
02:26:37 (1) - Make this end going towards (2).
02:50:11 (5) - Too far from (4).
00:44:16 (4) - Too far from (3).

[Bleeding Hands]
01:10:19 (10) - Extend one repeat.
01:20:18 (4) - This is technically fine, but I find it to be ugly.
01:21:64 (5) - New combo.
02:26:38 (1) - End stacked with (1).

I wish I could help, it's just that I can't even map myself. Oh well, good luck Doc.

Use a different background... This one is already used in a ranked map

Go here: http://perfume.ekuseru.net/2008/03/27/p ... o-gallery/

There are actually a few wallpapers that are for Electro World

You might want to look into the timing during kiai time, it seems off somehow, not knowing much about timing, that's about all I can tell you.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Normal:
00:15:02 (4) - Feels empty. Add a hitsound maybe?
00:15:64 (5) - The repeat is hidden. Tilt? Sorry if I told you to place it like this in my previous post. D:
02:52:62 (11) - New combo.
02:53:87 (13) - Maybe move horizontally to 11's slider end.

Bleeding Hands:
Get rid of combo color #4 or pick a new less dull color D:<!
00:01:07 (3) - Too close to 1,2. Check the spacing up to 12 starting from here. Some notes are touching and others are not when they are clearly the same distance from each other.
03:07:19 (8) - New combo.

Storyboard:
End both OverlayPerfume.png and OverlayElectroWorld.png at 03:46:750 or a little before it. You can also have it fade out. Don't make them go all the way to the end of the map as you have to wait even after the song is finished. Since I don't know much about storyboarding, I think you may have to separately make a different one or redo it for Normal because as after normal finishes, you have to wait before going to the results screen.

Rawr

Nexy wrote:

Normal:
00:15:02 (4) - Feels empty. Add a hitsound maybe?
00:15:64 (5) - The repeat is hidden. Tilt? Sorry if I told you to place it like this in my previous post. D:
02:52:62 (11) - New combo.
02:53:87 (13) - Maybe move horizontally to 11's slider end.

Bleeding Hands:
Get rid of combo color #4 or pick a new less dull color D:<!
00:01:07 (3) - Too close to 1,2. Check the spacing up to 12 starting from here. Some notes are touching and others are not when they are clearly the same distance from each other.
03:07:19 (8) - New combo.

Storyboard:
End both OverlayPerfume.png and OverlayElectroWorld.png at 03:46:750 or a little before it. You can also have it fade out. Don't make them go all the way to the end of the map as you have to wait even after the song is finished. Since I don't know much about storyboarding, I think you may have to separately make a different one or redo it for Normal because as after normal finishes, you have to wait before going to the results screen.

Rawr

Done. Any other comments are appreciated!

Finally done with an easier difficulty, so here ya go like I promised. xd
Hope this song gets ranked soon, it's really nice.

I'll have you know for someone who doesn't know how to storyboard, readjusting the parts you did was pretty hard to figure out, lol. I finally got it done though. Was a good learning experience. I ran into so many problems, this took like 5 hours, haha.

Any advice on what could be improved would be great too. Hope the sound effects were alright.

Download: Perfume - Electro World (DoctorToxn) [Shinde's Easy].osu

bleeding

Can you add new combos for jumps? this was extremely confusing to play most of the time and very un-intuitive (??) because of the jumps/combo colors

Other than that the map is actually very cool and sure is fun to do if you work up on some things
So heres your star

Doc, hurry up and get this ranked!

I love this song... needs more attention! I should spam it on #mod.. no not really but yeah xDAnd I could make a difficulty for you if you want, too... oh heck I'll make one right now. <3 You can choose if you wanna use it or not if you like it or not, I don't mind.

Here's a trick for hit sounds, use taiko.^w^

Shinde's Easy

00:23:97 (3) - confusing spacing. Should be more close together or stacked.
00:33:55 (2,3,4,5,6) - confusing spacing on (2,3,4) seeing that spacing changed during the chorus you should stick to that for this part
00:42:92 (1) - move two ticks back then extend two ticks
00:52:28 (3,4) - I don't see a place for this... you can fill in the blanks.. and be sure to delete and replace break after you're done with that
01:14:77 (2) - closer to (1)
01:16:85 (6...) - I think it's weird how the spacing just shifts like that... since it's Easy I think you should stick to one spacing for one part (like how you did with the chorus or something..)
01:21:64 (1) - 1 tick back
01:31:63 (x) - I think you should at least map the part until they say Electro World xP

Normal

00:45:03 (7) - move closer to (6)
00:54:40 (break) - delete and replace
01:18:72 (1,2,1,2,3) - messy
01:36:00 (5) - closer to (6)

Bleeding Hands

00:32:30 (10) - new combo for jump? Like what Hanyuu said. It doesn't look right.
00:33:76 (4,5,6,7,8) - spacing looks random
00:46:04 (1,2,3,1,2) - maybe add some claps to these on the ends?
00:50:41 (4) - clap at the start
00:54:37 (break) - delete and replace break
01:11:02 (2,3,4,5,6) - possibly add hit sounds?
01:30:59 (break) - delete and replace break
01:47:25 (break) - ^

EDIT 6/15/09 - Here you go

Name it whatever you want if you wanna use it

Download: Perfume - Electro World (DoctorToxn) [Senbon's Insane].osu

Senbon wrote:

Shinde's Easy

00:23:97 (3) - confusing spacing. Should be more close together or stacked.
00:33:55 (2,3,4,5,6) - confusing spacing on (2,3,4) seeing that spacing changed during the chorus you should stick to that for this part
00:42:92 (1) - move two ticks back then extend two ticks
00:52:28 (3,4) - I don't see a place for this... you can fill in the blanks.. and be sure to delete and replace break after you're done with that
01:14:77 (2) - closer to (1)
01:16:85 (6...) - I think it's weird how the spacing just shifts like that... since it's Easy I think you should stick to one spacing for one part (like how you did with the chorus or something..)
01:21:64 (1) - 1 tick back
01:31:63 (x) - I think you should at least map the part until they say Electro World xP

I believe I fixed everything, I just patched it up in like 3 minutes, lol. I'm not sure what DoctorToxn wants to do with this at this point. You can feel free to edit anything you want in my difficulty yourself Doc, I just added a few things. This was like my first attempt at creating a difficulty for something/a map in general, lol. There are so many mistakes, I'm sure there are still some for modders. I'll try to check back in here and there.

Download: Perfume - Electro World (DoctorToxn) [Shinde's Easy].osu