1. Chunin (3,47 stars, 93 notes)
2. Genin (1,64 stars, 77 notes)
3. Jonin (4,66 stars, 156 notes)
4. Kage (5 stars, 230 notes)

VinylDash14 wrote:

Hey Hey~

[Genin]

00:12:518 (1) - Start spinner at 00:12:089 -
01:06:946 (4) - NC
01:20:660 (5) - NC

all fixed in easy

[Chunin]

00:03:303 (1) - Touching the HP Bar. ( talked to vinyl on irc, its because of his skin, so its not touching at all )
00:25:589 (1,2) - Annoying to hit 2. Maybe the slider can end at 00:26:232 - and delete 2 ( i'll think about it )
00:30:732 (1) - Touching the HP Bar ( talked to vinyl on irc, its because of his skin, so its not touching at all )
00:48:518 (1) - I'd prefer it not under 00:46:803 (1) - ( i'll think about it )

[Jonin]

00:47:446 (2,3,4) - Move all of them to the left two time (Tiny) ( i think i know what you mean, i will work it my own way )

[Kage]

00:14:231 (9) - NC? ( maybe )
00:33:732 (4) - I'd like it if this was blanketed by 00:34:160 (5) - (no because 00:33:732 (4) is blanketed my the next slider already)
00:52:803 (9) - NC? ( if more people complain i'll use it )


Cool mapset. Nice skin. More mods on this and it'll be bubble worthy~

CDFA wrote:

RAM WIRE ?

Overall:
01:23:232 (1) - End this on the previous red tick to fit the words (It's all like "KUU-LA, KUU-LA" and the last one of those ends on the red tick) ( nice catch, fixed )

Skin:
The green sliderball clashes a lot with some of the colors ( i hope its ok, btw my 1st map is using the same color/skin )

Insane:
AR -1 (Possibly even -2) ( -1 )
00:10:803 (4) - Extend this to just be a regular 1/1 slider and remove a repeat? ( i like how it plays )
00:25:589 (2,3,4,5) - Make these jumps smaller, especially since this is a softer part of the song and nothing in the music calls for them ( if more people complain, maybe )
00:26:660 (1,1,1) - Remove NCs ( fixed )

Hard:
01:12:518 (4) - I'd prefer it if this was removed and (5) was moved to where this is, so it fits the connection of the words ( i will pass because it's symmetry based but i may consider if more people complain )
01:19:375 (4,5,6,7,8) - This might play better if it was made into a star jump instead of a star road ( i think 01:18:732 (1,2,3,4) - was suposed to be the jump part and 5 6 7 8 the normal part, follows the pacing better imo, but i may consider if more people complain )

Normal:
01:12:303 (3) - This is awkward. Add a note where this starts, move this to start on the large white tick, and remove a repeat ( disagree )

Easy:
00:00:946 (1) - Extend this to the white tick? (no, because its too long)
00:07:803 (2) - ^ (no, because its too long)
01:06:518 (3) - Please make this a star omg ( fixed )

I like it :3. Sorry it took so long for so little. Star star star go go go. (don't worry about it, and thank you a lot for mod and star )

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Depois de semanas preparando o mod, é eu finalmente terminei. ( finalmente um mod :') )

[General]

Não achei nada, mas eu acho que todas as diffs deveriam começar no mesmo ponto (Genin e Chunin começam em 00:00:946 enquanto Jonin e Kage começam em 00:00:518), mas isso fica ao seu critério. ( eu acho q começar a normal / easy no mesmo lugar q a hard seria confuso pra iniciantes, ja que nao tem nada antes disso pra eles entenderem o ritmo )

[Genin]

AR+1? ( beleza )

00:41:660 (1,2,3,4,5): Amei o flow daquí , mas eu acho que a posição do 5 quebra um pouco o flow. Então eu sugiro que você dê ctrl+g no (5) e depois mover o (5) ele para x:440 y:252. ( eu acho q parece meio random colocar esse slider assim, eu meio q to seguindo forma de curva nesse e em varios outros combos, talvez eu mude se mais gente sugerir )

SPOILER

[Jonin]

01:05:018 (1,2,3,4): Eu acho que stackear o (3) com o (4) deixaria a pattern mais interessante imo. ( parece funcionar tambem depois eu testo, mas por emquanto vou manter o original )

SPOILER

01:12:732 (5,6): Imo o flow poderia ser melhor se você stackeasse o (5) com o 01:11:875 (1) (A outra razão seria é porque eu amo esse tipo de flow rsrsrs então pode ignorar essa sugestão) ( eu queria jumps pra essas partes ^^ . se mais gente mensionar eu mudo isso )

As outras diffs parece boas pra mim, desculpa pelo mod ruim a map ta realmente muito boa

Amei o flow das diffs

Boa sorte no ranking ( brigadao pelo mod, se precisar de ajuda em algo só me chamar )

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
M4M (sorry I am late...). ( it's fine )

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. please try to get lead-in to 1.5 seconds, because 00:00:518 (1) - is too suddenly with the AR... in Jonin, Kage diff ,I know you want to let people play again but ... it is also a angry thing that miss note when start ( changed to 1.5... but i did not planned to make people play again, i just thought 1 sec was good enough 0.0 )

[Genin]

1. AR isn't suitable for this diff, it feels faster a bit. Try to -1, would be much better for the diff ( i'll think about it )
2. 01:18:946 (1,2) - I hear there vocal is same as 01:05:232 (3,1) - , so swap NC to make there like 01:05:232 (3,1) - 's NC setting ( nice catch, but i'll swap NC at 01:05:232 (3,1 - instead. )

nice diff, I like symmetry of this diff ( thanks )

[Chunin]

1. 00:06:732 (7) - I think this NC is unnecessary, re NC will reduce quandary when play ( disagree, but i'll consider if more people complain )
2. 00:26:232 (2) - please space it in 1.0x distance like front note, this might be confused for newbie ( disagree, but i'll consider if more people complain )
3. 00:30:732 (1) - well .. because the sliderfollowcircle is very like combo 1's color, it is hard to read for there and 00:32:875 (4,5) - for newbie(picture), try to change NC's color ( i gess you are right, i'll probably change the color order in the .osu file later )
4. 00:44:232 (1,2) - swap NC, I hear 00:45:089 (2) - have a stress instead 00:44:232 (1) - ( fixed )
5. 01:08:446 (2) - try to repeat a time to get much easier to read for newbie (picture) ( disagree )
6. 01:12:303 (3) - don't use slider which repeat many times, I think don't have to follow the vocal, you can make other way, because this is very suddenly and can't previse for newbie ( i'm mostly following vocal in this diff, and i think vocal should be followed specially in this part )
7. 01:18:732 (1,2) - I feel strange for there, because 01:19:375 - give me a feeling which there should have a note to hit ,but actually there no have note, try to get there like this (hm i think i know what you mean, but i think the vocal in this part sounds like should be mapped in "two parts" not three)

you should care the combo's color (run, but anyway, good diff :3 ( lol thanks ^^ )

[Jonin]

1. 00:06:518 (1) - this is a little hard to read the time point, because the combo color is a little dark for there and the sliderfollowcircle, try to get 00:06:303 (5,1) - swap NC ( i dont think its that bad, i may consider changing if more people point this out )
2. 00:12:946 (5,1) - swap NC, I hear there like 00:06:518 (1,2) - piano sound ( okay )
3. 00:32:018 (2) - there is uncomfortable with present distance when play, try to use 1.3x distance will much better ( i will change if more people complain )
4. 00:34:589 (2) - there flow isn't smooth or comfortable, how about get it on x:256 y:236? I think flow will better than present ( works too but i dont think its needed )
5. 01:12:732 (5) - this distance is a bit hard to read with the video, try to reduce distance or NC it will easier to read ( NC )
6. 01:16:375 (1,2,3) - spacing dosen't consistent, i think would fail to read for someone, try to get (2) on x:348 y:200, (3) on x:164 y:200 ( i will change if more people complain )

I have nothing to say, good :3 ( )

[Insane]

1. 00:10:803 (4) - I think this slider might be very confused for people when play, there shouldn't use this slider to set because isn't suitable, try to this ( i like this slider )
2. 00:26:446 (1,2,3,4) - this is hard to read, because jump is followed by anti-jump and the video, how about this, or 00:26:232 (5,1) - swap NC ( swaping NC )
3. 01:05:660 (4,5,6) - try to reduce a repeat, I think there is a little overmap for music, reduce a repeat would be suitable for music, comfortable for playing( if i remove the repeats it will feel boring, i think it fits the vocal btw )

nothing to say ~ ( )

good luck for rank~ pimpG :3 ( thanks, lets mod4mod again later )

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Need Mod? :3

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue
General
00:14:232~ I suppose this blank seems weird, you can put some notes better. (i dont like this part of the music, sounds so different from all the rest, i mean... if i mapped this part would need a different mapping style and it would look a different map.... its difficult to explain )
Genin
Placement
00:07:375(1) wrong spacing, set × 0.8 better. ( intentional, its fine since they are 2 beats away )
00:48:946(1,2,3,4,) to be symmetrical on the center, move like this? (not suposed to be simetrical, its fine too but i'll keep mines)

SPOILER

01:01:803(5) not curved nice imo (if more people complain maybe i change)

SPOILER

Chunin
Placement
00:26:232(2) this not isn't clear, move a bit away? (changed)
Rhythm
01:08:446(2) add reverse same as (1)? it's more nice flow/ (okay)
01:12:303(3) too many reverses make confused for newbie even if Normal. e.g) (i will try to find a good shape for this pattern, or i'll keep the current)

SPOILER

Jonin
Placement
00:47:446(2) 2 grid up to avoid touching (1) (intentional)
00:56:660(4) stack (3) not (5) better since the vocal has emphasized at (5) (disagree,but i'll consider if more people point this out)
Hit Sonud
01:07:803(1) add wwistle at head and reverse. (nice catch, fixed)

Kage
Placement
00:43:589(4) to make a tiny jump, Ctrl+G? (if more people point this, maybe)
Hit Sonud
00:27:732(1) add clap? same with Easy & Normal. (there is no clap here in the other diffs, clap would be too loud unless i decrease volume to something like 15%)
00:29:218(6) delete whistle at slider tick? not added in other diffs yet. (following piano, and yes its unique to Kage)
00:35:875(5)^ (^)
01:07:803(9) add whistle at head? (works for now, but i was thinking about remove this whistles in ticks that has claps already)

nice map. good luck & star~ ( thank you a lot for mod and star, i'll take a look at your map as soon as possible )

yurunneram wrote:

Genin
01:04:803 (2,1,2,3,4) - Did u form a proper pentagon with this? I'm sure the gap between 01:04:803 (2) and 01:06:518 (4) should be smaller ( my 1st idea for this part was not a pentagon, i just make it look a bit more like one, i think its fine as it is )

Chunin
00:26:232 (2) - a little hard to hit for normal... (changed a bit)
00:32:875 (4) - Distance problem. Sorry that you wanted it to be symmetrical but in normal diffs distancing is very important. Change ( distance is not bad here, it fits the small vocal pause, its fine to break ds a bit for symmetry, its even easier than the general ds)

Jonin
00:06:303 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Uh... Arrangement a bit weird... ( why? )
00:32:018 (2) - Closer to the previous note? (i'll decide asap)
00:50:553 (5,6) - Spread a bit? (if more people complain, maybe)

Kage
Nothin wrong. Nice streams (thank you )

Good luck for mod!

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ ( thank you a lot for mod ... it was normal mod request from your queue, right? anyways you can pm me to mod something for you in return)

1. 00:06:089 (4,5) - swap these two ?
2. 01:01:803 (5) - curved this one ?
   
   or just straight along y-axis
3. 01:27:946 - end spinner here instead. vocal ends here

1. 00:32:875 (4) - this confuse me a lot. DS look same to the previous one but time position isn't. move it further please.
2. 01:08:446 (2) - reverse this too
3. 01:20:660 (3,4,5,6) - unstack these ?
4. 01:27:946 - end spinner here

1. 00:34:375 (1,2,3,4) - why 1.5x spacing ? i don't feel any changed to the music yet.
2. 00:45:732 (2) - how about this
   
3. 01:12:089 (2,4) - swap this two ?
4. 01:27:946 - end spinner here

(i can't properly mod insane so.. )