-Bakari- wrote:

OH YEAH, MORE NIGHTCORE \o3o/ yay

[General]

1. Your kiais are inconsistent, Kiai #2: Starts on 00:35:890 - Hard / Kiai #2: Starts on 00:36:066 - Other Diffs i know i did it on propose since it's a circle there i wanted to start it a bit erlier
2. AudioLeadIn 500 will be ok here, try it. o3o/ will think about u.u
3. Add tag remix because it is supposed to be in tags if you make a nightcore map. ok :3
4. For non-kiai part you can use soft-whistles instead of claps. I think it will fit here better i like claps :c

[Easy]

1. 00:07:185 (1) - this one is the way too long even for beginners. Can't you use shorter sliders and some circles? Too long sliders are stressful for beginners too, you know. meh i don't think so =w=) i like this slider
2. 00:18:103 (1) - short slider. too short. reverse arrow is overlapped with slider's start. IT will; confuse and stress beginners. If you want, you can use two circles or one 1/1 slider instead. But please, I'm begging you, DO NOT use THAT short slider here! >3</me cry T^T will think about if someone else will point it out
3. 00:21:977 - - place a circle here. for heavy beat, and start spinner at 00:22:682 - for vocals.
   Let me explain this pattern: 00:20:921 (1,2) - this combo is too short, try to keep combos 3-6 objects long, if it is possible. (I guess, you already know it) and I guess, 00:22:682 - that beat should have its own object.ok done :3
4. 00:39:236 (1) - same as 00:18:103 (1) BUT maybe it's ok to have these sliders for kiai part. Think about it >3</ i'll but for now no changes on this sliders :3
5. 01:06:003 (1) - not again, please! do not use them for CALM part of the song >3</ It's too much stress for beginners! baka i stress you now X3 how i said before ^
6. 01:24:318 (2) - probably will be overlapped with (3)'s hitburst. Not a big problem, but you can quickly fix it, right? it will not http://puu.sh/25vJj :3
7. 01:47:916 - How about loud sound here? I feel like this part of spinne feels different! true good idea o3o

[Normal]

1. 00:21:625 (2) - nazi - probably owerlap with hitburst is not a good idea here - 00:31:487 (4) - and here - 00:40:644 (1) - and here.. It's not even overlap, it's just a bit confusing to see a circle here. I think you can move it somewhere else to make better flow. i looked all map with default skin i don't see any big problems about is enought time to see the next slider/circle nothing is overlapped
2. 01:33:123 (5) - nazi - according to your pattern there should be a new combo, am i right? It's just the way too long, imo. ups forgot that one
3. 01:48:092 - same as Easy. Try to be consistent and fix it for all the diffs, or don't apply it for all diffs. sure u.u
   
   Awesome Normal here.

[Hard]

1. How about AR8 here? It will fit with your slider velocity and patterns better, i think.will think about if someone mention it :3
   Note: if you fix AR, don't forget to fix OD/HP Drain settings, too! To keep them balanced.^
2. 00:26:908 (1,2) - nazi - can't you make a better blanket here? It feels like you wanted to make a blanket slider here. You can try something jumpy or something regular. here is not supposed to be a blanket
3. 00:31:839 - I'd place here a circle for consistent rhythm. If you don't want to use circle here how about something vocals-related pattern here? ok o3o
4. 00:40:644 (5) - no-no-no! They kill all the fun from playing the map! With hidden they're too hard to read, and they don't fit at all! try me instead! See? You can follow song better without those weird sliders! What;'s more you had pattern WITHOUT 2x-reversed slider at 01:04:947 (6) - so, try to be consistent!T_T will think about bot atm no changes
   note: It's just my opinion, but I think many players hate them.
5. 01:16:217 (1) and 01:19:035 (1) - - same as above. 2x reversed slider. Try to be more creative, I know you can create AWESOME pattern here instead of this sillyl slider. :<meeeh :c
6. I'd like to see more jumps here, this is the hardest diff, and song is energetic, so jumps will fit! Use them more often, please!
   i'll see if somewhere i can place some

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