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Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu]

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Makyu
424 posts
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Topic Starter
Makyu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 03 de abril de 2013 at 11:48:41 a.m.

Artist: Nomizu Iori
Title: Black + White (TV Size)
Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai Kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
Tags: Gero 0gre sakamaki izayoi kudou asuka kasukabe you kuro usagi black rabbit asanuma shintarou nakajima megumi bridcut sarah emi
BPM: 192
Filesize: 3344kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0gre's Muzu (4.78 stars, 382 notes)
  2. 0gre's Oni (4.78 stars, 437 notes)
  3. Black + White (5 stars, 226 notes)
  4. Gero's Easy (2.77 stars, 84 notes)
  5. Hard (4.91 stars, 196 notes)
  6. Normal (3.55 stars, 104 notes)
Download: Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Makyu , edited 14 times in total.
Onisakura
170 posts
Joined October 2012
Onisakura
[Normal]

00:19:607 (1) - 00:19:607 (1) - wrong slider's start, 00:19:763 (1) - is correct
00:19:763 (1) - 00:19:763 (1) - same problem
00:19:763 (1) - 00:19:763 (1) - same problem
00:19:763 (1) - 00:19:763 (1) - wrong spinner's end, 00:19:763 (1) - correct
00:39:294 (2) - 00:39:294 (2) - wrong slider's start, 00:39:372 (2) - is correct
00:39:294 (2) - 00:39:294 (2) - slider isn't on bit, 00:40:232 (1) - 00:40:232 (1) - correct
00:45:232 (1) - 00:45:232 (1) - same problem, 00:45:232 (1) - 00:45:232 (1) - correct
00:47:419 (4) - 00:47:419 (4) - same problem, 00:47:732 (5) - circle + 00:47:732 (5) - 00:47:732 (5) - slider
00:49:607 (1) - 00:49:607 (1) - same problem, 00:49:607 (1) - 00:49:607 (1) - correct
00:55:232 (1) - 00:55:232 (1) - same problem, 00:55:232 (1) - 00:55:232 (1) - correct
00:55:232 (1) - 00:55:232 (1) - maybe should change on spinner?
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Makyu

Onisakura wrote:

[Normal]

00:19:607 (1) - 00:19:607 (1) - wrong slider's start, 00:19:763 (1) - is correct
00:19:763 (1) - 00:19:763 (1) - same problem
00:19:763 (1) - 00:19:763 (1) - same problem
00:19:763 (1) - 00:19:763 (1) - wrong spinner's end, 00:19:763 (1) - correct I don't get what you try to do here, but I think everything is ok, no changes
00:39:294 (2) - 00:39:294 (2) - wrong slider's start, 00:39:372 (2) - is correct I don't think so
00:39:294 (2) - 00:39:294 (2) - slider isn't on bit, 00:40:232 (1) - 00:40:232 (1) - correct I don't get this, please put the time good
00:45:232 (1) - 00:45:232 (1) - same problem, 00:45:232 (1) - 00:45:232 (1) - correct Look at this, all times are the same what should I do?
00:47:419 (4) - 00:47:419 (4) - same problem, 00:47:732 (5) - circle + 00:47:732 (5) - 00:47:732 (5) - slider This is on the correct bit
00:49:607 (1) - 00:49:607 (1) - same problem, 00:49:607 (1) - 00:49:607 (1) - correct Same
00:55:232 (1) - 00:55:232 (1) - same problem, 00:55:232 (1) - 00:55:232 (1) - correct Same
00:55:232 (1) - 00:55:232 (1) - maybe should change on spinner? Why?
Thanks c:
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
Por tu propia petición! :)

☢ General☢

  • ☢ Offset: 75
    ☢ Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai Kara Kuru Sō Desu yo?

☢ Normal ☢

  • Esta dificultad es bastante difícil para un principiante como por ejemplo la distance tiene que ser corta y constante ya que grandes espacios es complicado para un novato X.
    Yo te recomendaría que pusieras esto en "Difficult"
    SPOILER
  1. 00:19:607 (1) - quita NC, ya que es innecesario en esta nota.
  2. 00:25:232 (1,2) - trata de no hacer stacks de notas ya que es un poco difícil para jugadores novatos.
  3. 00:28:669 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:27:732 (1,2) - quita NC (New Combo) y quita el stack
  5. 00:32:107 (1) - ajusta este spinner, te sugiero que sea de 1/1, es decir, línea blanca con línea blanca
  6. 00:37:732 (1,2) - quita new combo y stacks
    le falta un poco más de trabajo a esta diff, pero nada mal. ;)

☢ Hard ☢

  1. 00:19:060 - a 00:19:841 - , 00:19:216 (2,3) - suena mal con 80% de volumen y claps igual como 00:19:607 (1) - consiguete algún hitsound clap para este o3o digo yo
  2. 01:18:044 (9) - Borra esto de aquí, ya que no tiene ninguna utilidad en ese lugar
  3. 01:23:513 - ¿agrega circle?
  4. edit: 01:23:591 - ^

☢ Black + White ☢

  1. 00:11:169 (1,1,2,1,2) - New Combo
  2. 00:12:419 (1,2,1,1) - ^
  3. 00:13:200 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - ^
    Hay muchos errores de Combos, no sé como explicarte cuando se ponen ya que la explicación que tengo es difícil de entender.
  4. 00:31:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - te sugiero que no hayan cambios drásticos de velocidad, pasó de un slider de 0,50 a 1,00
  5. 01:02:575 - a 01:03:982 - breaktime

    Nada mal, pero tiene el mapa problemas de Combos, arreglable pero lo debes hacer si o si.

Disculpa si me demoré! ;) suerte
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Makyu

-Cloudchaser wrote:

Por tu propia petición! :)

☢ General☢

  • ☢ Offset: 75 :arrow: Okey
    ☢ Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai Kara Kuru Sō Desu yo? :arrow: Idiota yo olvidé agregarlo.

☢ Normal ☢

  • Esta dificultad es bastante difícil para un principiante como por ejemplo la distance tiene que ser corta y constante ya que grandes espacios es complicado para un novato X.
    Yo te recomendaría que pusieras esto en "Difficult"
    SPOILER
  1. 00:19:607 (1) - quita NC, ya que es innecesario en esta nota.
  2. 00:25:232 (1,2) - trata de no hacer stacks de notas ya que es un poco difícil para jugadores novatos.
  3. 00:28:669 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:27:732 (1,2) - quita NC (New Combo) y quita el stack
  5. 00:32:107 (1) - ajusta este spinner, te sugiero que sea de 1/1, es decir, línea blanca con línea blanca
  6. 00:37:732 (1,2) - quita new combo y stacks
    le falta un poco más de trabajo a esta diff, pero nada mal. ;)
:arrow: Todo hecho, dejé el OD como estaba y quité casi todos los stacks, no veo necesidad de quitarlos todos ya que en mi opinión notas stackeadas no deberían suponer problema para los newbies.

☢ Hard ☢

  1. 00:19:060 - a 00:19:841 - , 00:19:216 (2,3) - suena mal con 80% de volumen y claps igual como 00:19:607 (1) - consiguete algún hitsound clap para este o3o digo yo :arrow: He pensado en cambiar los hitsounds de la canción por unos de bateria más fuertes.
  2. 01:18:044 (9) - Borra esto de aquí, ya que no tiene ninguna utilidad en ese lugar :arrow: Sigue la bateria.
  3. 01:23:513 - ¿agrega circle? :arrow: Listo
  4. edit: 01:23:591 - ^ :arrow: Nope, no le veo sentido añadir un triple ahí.

☢ Black + White ☢

  1. 00:11:169 (1,1,2,1,2) - New Combo
  2. 00:12:419 (1,2,1,1) - ^
  3. 00:13:200 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - ^
    Hay muchos errores de Combos, no sé como explicarte cuando se ponen ya que la explicación que tengo es difícil de entender.
  4. 00:31:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - te sugiero que no hayan cambios drásticos de velocidad, pasó de un slider de 0,50 a 1,00 :arrow: No le veo problema a ese slider en slowmod seguido de un stream, es totalmente leible.
  5. 01:02:575 - a 01:03:982 - breaktime :arrow: No me gusta, pero lo añado por ahora, quizá alguien con low acc en esa parte pierde por el espacio.

    Nada mal, pero tiene el mapa problemas de Combos, arreglable pero lo debes hacer si o si.
:arrow: Respecto a los combos, están muy random, debo trabajar más en ello.
Disculpa si me demoré! ;) suerte
No te preocupes, yo que soy paranoico y algo apuron, aunque no me gusta apurar a las personas. Te agradezco mucho el mod, especialmente en la normal ya que soy bien malo mapeando algo que no sea insane.
Hazuki Watora
74 posts
Joined June 2012
Hazuki Watora
Hi!

[Hard]

00:13:045 (3) - Unsnapped
00:13:357 (1,2) - overlap
00:15:388 (2) - 2 grid up
00:48:200 (2,3) - make more beautiful like this
00:50:544 (1) - 1 grid left

[Black + White]

01:20:857 (3,4,5) - move to 183|332
01:21:169 (6) - move to 327|332
01:21:325 (7) - move to 317|196

Sorry for bad modding..
Last edited by Hazuki Watora , edited 1 time in total.
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Makyu

L-Len wrote:

Hi!

[Hard]

00:13:045 (3) - Unsnapped :arrow: I didn't see anything unsnaped here, but I move it just in case
00:13:357 (1,2) - overlap :arrow: Fixed I think
00:15:388 (2) - 2 grid up :arrow: I moved only once
00:48:200 (2,3) - make more beautiful like this
:arrow: I made all that I can do :D
00:50:544 (1) - 1 grid left :arrow: Looks better thanks

[Black + White]

01:20:857 (3,4,5) - move to 183|332
01:21:169 (6) - move to 327|332
01:21:325 (7) - move to 317|196
:arrow: Made all
Sorry for bad modding..
Thanks <3
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
GO GO Makyu >//</!!
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
irc mod
c:
10:07 Makyu: Gero me dijo que no te enojarías si te pido mod :c
10:07 eLtigreXXx: dile a ese tal jero que
10:08 eLtigreXXx: no no me enojo quieres un mod c:
10:08 Makyu: :D
10:08 Makyu: Entonces, te pido un mod :3
10:08 Makyu: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/79042
10:10 eLtigreXXx: oks pero puedes echarle un vistaso a un betmap projecto que ando asiendo
10:10 Makyu: Me esforzare lo que pueda
10:10 Makyu: pasa link
10:10 eLtigreXXx: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/221404 Shibayan ft. yana - Fall in the Dark]
10:11 eLtigreXXx: si quieres dale un tes asta orita solo 2 partes estan terminadas
10:11 Makyu: a ver
10:12 Makyu: Me avisas
10:13 eLtigreXXx: listo
10:14 eLtigreXXx: ai si ge mi parte :P
10:15 Makyu: hm
10:15 Makyu: quiza drain -1
10:16 Makyu: era el skin
10:16 Makyu: xD
10:17 eLtigreXXx: nesesito checar timing tambien
10:18 Makyu: La primera parte necesita más trabajo quiza
10:18 Makyu: No me gusta que esté toda la song silenciada :c
10:18 Makyu: Te cuento que me encantó la cancion
10:19 eLtigreXXx: au no tiene hit sounds y ando esperando que los demas terminen su partes
10:20 eLtigreXXx: le dare un tes primero a tu mapa
10:20 Makyu: Insane es muy dificil
10:20 Makyu: aunque le cambie cosas para que sea más fácil
10:23 eLtigreXXx: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/220760 Nomizu Iori - Black + White (TV Size) [Black + White]]
10:29 eLtigreXXx: buen ba aser un irc mod
10:29 Makyu: O:
10:29 Makyu: ok
10:29 eLtigreXXx: bueno la mas dificil
10:31 eLtigreXXx: -1 en hp drain rate la cancion ya es muy dificil
10:32 Makyu: He pensado en eso, pero al final decidí por dejarlo así, ya que quiero que tenga un 5.00 exacto la insane
10:32 eLtigreXXx: oks
10:32 Makyu: Igual lo seguiré teniendo en mente pq quizá sea demasiado alto el drain
10:34 eLtigreXXx: 00:13:196 (4,1,2,3,4) - todas estas muevelas al sentro se mira mas bonito y mas ordenado
10:34 eLtigreXXx: i aparte se ase un jump con esta 00:13:978 (1) -
10:34 Makyu: Me gusta
10:35 Makyu: sip
10:35 Makyu: me gusta
10:37 eLtigreXXx: no se pero siento que esta 00:14:915 (1) - deveria de terminar aqui 00:15:540 -
10:37 eLtigreXXx: queda mui bien con el ridmo
10:38 Makyu: hm
10:39 Makyu: Sip, entonces solo silenciaré el tick y dejaré el end con sonido
10:39 eLtigreXXx: http://puu.sh/24qtU algo asi
10:39 eLtigreXXx: esa partesita confundia mucho
10:40 eLtigreXXx: soltaba el eslider antes de que terminara
10:42 eLtigreXXx: 01:01:790 (1,2) - estas tienen que ir bien apiladas
10:43 Makyu: listo
10:45 eLtigreXXx: siempre cuando queden notas asi como estas 00:53:196 (4,1) - intenta apilarlas bien
10:46 Makyu: Esas dos las veo bien stakeadas
10:50 eLtigreXXx: bueno eso es todo ases isiste una mui buena diff aqui
10:50 Makyu: :D
10:51 Makyu: gracias
10:51 Makyu: 01:13:665 (2,3,4) -
10:51 Makyu: me gustaria tu opinion respecto a ese triplle
10:52 Makyu: los strackeo o los dejo asi?
10:52 eLtigreXXx: llo creo que seria mejor apilarlas
10:56 Makyu: Vale
10:57 Makyu: postea el mod te doy el kd
10:57 Makyu: gracias man ^^
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Some irc mod :3

SPOILER
01:44 Natsu: avisame cuando termines te lo hare el mod por irc
01:45 Natsu: hay unas cosas para explicar
01:46 Makyu: O:
01:46 Makyu: yo me demoro
01:46 Makyu: xD
01:46 Makyu: igual todo lo guardo en notepad
01:46 Makyu: xD
01:46 Natsu: si queres hacemos el tuyo 1º?
01:46 Makyu: vale
01:46 Natsu: ok anda a normal
01:46 Makyu: dejame anoto unas cosas primero
01:46 Natsu: okis
01:46 Makyu: que luego lo olvido
01:47 Makyu: vale
01:48 Natsu: El 1º spinner en normal
01:48 Natsu: debe terminar aca 00:10:853 
01:48 Natsu: porque si ves la siguiente nota queda muy cerca 
01:49 Natsu: y se ve cuando aun estas girando eso es unrankable en easy y normal
01:49 Makyu: a ok
01:49 Makyu: eso no lo sabia
01:49 Natsu: Tambien en toda la diff de normal  has usado diferentes distancias entre las notas
01:50 Makyu: pq sino lo termnaba ahi, pensaria que un principiante podria equivocarse en 00:11:165 -  y undir el slider antes de que comience
01:50 Natsu: exacto
01:51 Natsu: se te olvido poner un clap en la cola
01:51 Natsu: 00:11:478
01:51 Makyu: listo
01:51 Natsu: pues en normal tenes q usar el distance snap siempre a lo mismo
01:51 Makyu:  si
01:52 Makyu: no se pq se movio
01:52 Makyu: revisaré las notas otra vez
01:52 Natsu: hay partes q tenes a 1.10 0.80 1.63
01:52 Natsu: deberia ir todo a 1.0
01:52 Natsu: 00:12:728 (3,4,5,1,2) -  esa parte seta muy confusa para un normal deberias de hacerla un poco mas limpia
01:53 Natsu: el spinner de aca tambien finalizalo aqui mejor 00:22:415
01:53 Makyu: ok, ya lo arreglé creo
01:54 Makyu: listo
01:55 Natsu: 00:23:040 (1,2,3) - 
01:55 Natsu: Error de distancia
01:56 Natsu: clap en la cola 00:24:290 (3) - 
01:57 Natsu: 00:25:228 clap
01:57 Makyu: listo
01:58 Natsu: 00:28:196
01:58 Natsu: el 5 queda muy confuso puesto stacked con el 4
01:58 Natsu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/617918
01:58 Natsu: quedaria mejor asi no?
01:59 Makyu: si
01:59 Makyu: No es que sea confuso, no lo veo así, pero si me gusta más esa forma
01:59 Natsu: 00:29:915 (3,4) - 
02:00 Natsu: error de distancia aqui
02:00 Makyu: vale ya lo arreglé
02:00 Natsu: 00:31:946
02:01 Natsu: el spinner es muy corto en mi opinion para normal deberias intentar poner unos slider mejor
02:02 Natsu: este queda escondido debajo del otro slider 00:38:196
02:02 Makyu: el auto hace 6k, es bien para un normal yo creo
02:02 Natsu: demasiado confuso para un normal
02:02 Makyu: Esa nota estaba stakeada antes en tres
02:03 Makyu: pero la quité pq es muy confusa supuestamente
02:03 Makyu: le quité el stack*
02:03 Natsu: si el auto hace 6k
02:03 Natsu: yo me refiero a la nota q sigue al spinner
02:04 Natsu: se ve durante el giro
02:04 Natsu: 00:43:665 (3,1) - 
02:04 Natsu: intenta q los dos slider la cola y el inicio del otro queden stacked exactas
02:05 Natsu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/617924
02:05 Makyu:  sip, hice algo parecido
02:05 Natsu: esto de aqui es unrankade
02:05 Natsu: 00:47:415 (4,1) - 
02:05 Makyu: volvi el slider un poco más circular
02:06 Natsu: el 1º slider tapa la repeticion del otro
02:06 Makyu: bajo las notas?
02:07 Makyu: 00:48:978 (1,2) - 
02:07 Makyu: las bajo y el slider tambien?
02:07 Natsu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/617925
02:08 Natsu: algo asi por ejemplo nomas
02:09 Natsu: 00:52:728 (1,2,3,1) -  ese overslap tambien es unranked
02:09 Makyu: ok
02:09 Natsu: el 1 tapa al 3 y el 2tapa al otro 1
02:10 Natsu: aca tambien error de distancia 01:03:978 (1,2,3) - 
02:10 Natsu: tambien aca 01:08:353 (3,1) - 
02:13 Natsu: 01:10:228 (1,1) -  los dos slider se estan tocando lo deberias de arreglar los demas modders te diran lo mismo
02:14 Makyu: ok
02:15 Natsu: 01:23:665
02:15 Natsu: 01:23:978
02:15 Natsu: en esos dos lugares deberias de poner circles
02:15 Natsu: escuha la musica
02:15 Natsu: la linea verder de aca esta unsnaped tambien 00:49:817
02:16 Natsu: tendria q estar aca 00:49:837
02:16 Natsu: tambien la linea de aca 01:02:657
02:17 Natsu: tendria qestar aqui 01:02:649
02:17 Makyu: listo
02:17 Natsu: en hard tambien
02:18 Natsu: linea verde mal puesta aqui 01:13:519
02:18 Natsu: tendria q estar aca 01:13:509
02:19 Makyu: listo
02:19 Natsu: 00:13:353 (1,2) - 
02:19 Natsu: ponlos exactos uno sobre otro
02:20 Makyu: listo
02:20 Natsu: 00:18:821 (1,2,3) - esto es sugerencia nomas
02:21 Natsu: el 2 y el 3 como es un mini stream
02:21 Natsu: deberian estar separados por 0.5
02:21 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/617939
02:21 Natsu: pero eso es tuyo si lo haces o no
02:22 Makyu: Lo dejaré así por ahora
02:23 Natsu: 00:29:603
02:23 Natsu: ctrl g
02:23 Makyu: ok
02:23 Natsu: 00:35:228
02:23 Natsu: finish
02:24 Natsu: quita el clap
02:24 Natsu: lo mismo aqui 00:37:728
02:26 Natsu: stack perfect aqui 00:48:665 (3,4) - 
02:27 Makyu: listo
02:28 Natsu: 00:49:603 (1,2,1,2) - 
02:28 Natsu: overslap es unranked
02:28 Natsu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/617947
02:29 Makyu: 00:49:603 (1) - 
02:29 Natsu: finish  en el inicio de el slider 01:03:978
02:29 Makyu: si lo muevo para abajo ignorando el distance será problema?
02:31 Natsu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/617952
02:33 Makyu: http://puu.sh/24syr
02:33 Makyu: asi lo pus
02:33 Natsu: nice
02:33 Natsu: en el insane la linea verde 00:40:225
02:33 Natsu: va aqui 00:40:228
02:34 Makyu: que vista
02:34 Natsu: lol xD
02:35 Natsu: 00:11:478 quita el nc
02:35 Natsu: 00:11:478
02:36 Natsu: que queden stacked perfect 00:57:259 (2,2) - 
02:37 Natsu: igual aqui 00:58:353 (2,1) - 
02:37 Makyu: listo
02:38 Natsu: finish en el inicio 01:03:978
02:38 Natsu: igual q en hard
02:39 Natsu: finish aqui se te olvido :o 01:25:696
02:39 Makyu: ya esta
02:40 Natsu: sip posteo el log en el foro espero haberte ayudado un poco x_x
02:40 Makyu: me ayudaste mucho, especialmente en la normal que soy bien manco para mapear normales
02:40 Makyu: D:
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Makyu
New background, please redownload the song. Thanks.
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Offset: 214. Don't forget to fix green lines!

[Black + White]

Almost can't hear your hitsounds :/

Combos are weird on this diff. (and all other diffs)

00:13:978 (1,2) - It's a bit confusing, I keep thinking these are regular sliders and not slowed down. Maybe using tick rate 2 would help with this slider and all slow sliders after it
00:20:917 (1) - Not sure if this plays well right after the spinner, I'd suggest removing this note
00:39:915 (4) - pretty weird spacing, looks ugly too. Try spacing this note out at the same distance as (2) and (3)
00:45:071 (3) - I know you tried to make this symmetrical but it looks pretty mad
00:54:290 (2) - if you want symmetry here, move it a bit to the left?
00:54:446 (3) - looks bad, it's way too close to (1)
01:04:915 (1) - why is this a new combo? :(
01:21:321 (7) - aaargghh my eyes, maybe try to make a star like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619311

[Hard]

00:40:540 (2) - Try moving this note away from (1)? Something like this would probably work better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619315
00:46:790 (1,2) - lonely lonely new combo, you don't really need it for just 2 notes hehe
00:58:821 (1,2) - same problem as 00:40:540 (2)
00:59:915 (1,2) - here too
01:04:915 - it feels so empty here without a note :(
01:13:509 - unused timing section. not very important thoguh, doesn't affect the gameplay :D
01:17:103 (6) - how about you move this note to 01:16:946 - and add a note here 01:17:259 - and here 01:17:415 -
01:23:978 - this part is unmapped? it's so nice, add something here

[Normal]

00:35:696 (1) - consider moving this note further away
00:49:603 (1) - lonely new combo for one slider :(
00:55:228 (1) - here too

your new combos... try following this pattern: count the beat 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8, this way you have consistent combos

01:25:228 - this part is empty too!! :(

[Gero's Easy]

clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap...

Terrible hitsounds.

Also last part is unmapped.
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero

Natteke wrote:

[Gero's Easy]

clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... clap... e.e

Terrible hitsounds. meh!!

Also last part is unmapped.
I like this now NO CHANGES e.e
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
Here My Diff Makyu-Sama :3!

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Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Makyu

Natteke wrote:

Offset: 214. Don't forget to fix green lines! :arrow: I will wait for more opinions, I think the offset is ok

[Black + White]

Almost can't hear your hitsounds :/ :arrow: I will up the volumen, but not now c:

Combos are weird on this diff. (and all other diffs)

00:13:978 (1,2) - It's a bit confusing, I keep thinking these are regular sliders and not slowed down. Maybe using tick rate 2 would help with this slider and all slow sliders after it :arrow: Ok i use tick 2 for now
00:20:917 (1) - Not sure if this plays well right after the spinner, I'd suggest removing this note :arrow: I removed just because it start in blue dot.
00:39:915 (4) - pretty weird spacing, looks ugly too. Try spacing this note out at the same distance as (2) and (3) :arrow: Ok fixed
00:45:071 (3) - I know you tried to make this symmetrical but it looks pretty mad :arrow: I move the note now I think is good
00:54:290 (2) - if you want symmetry here, move it a bit to the left? :arrow: Didn't notice that, thx
00:54:446 (3) - looks bad, it's way too close to (1) :arrow: I stacked with (2)
01:04:915 (1) - why is this a new combo? :( :arrow: Cuz it may confuse if ther's no NC ther
01:21:321 (7) - aaargghh my eyes, maybe try to make a star like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619311 :arrow: Fixed

[Hard]

00:40:540 (2) - Try moving this note away from (1)? Something like this would probably work better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619315 :arrow: I like the way it is
00:46:790 (1,2) - lonely lonely new combo, you don't really need it for just 2 notes hehe :arrow: I put it because of the drum, but I removed now
00:58:821 (1,2) - same problem as 00:40:540 (2) :arrow: I stacked (2) with the slider
00:59:915 (1,2) - here too :arrow: I like the way it is
01:04:915 - it feels so empty here without a note :( :arrow: Ok c:
01:13:509 - unused timing section. not very important thoguh, doesn't affect the gameplay :D :arrow: I like it so much :D
01:17:103 (6) - how about you move this note to 01:16:946 - and add a note here 01:17:259 - and here 01:17:415 - :arrow: I like it
01:23:978 - this part is unmapped? it's so nice, add something here :arrow: Cuz that part is special for Insane players, is a bonus

[Normal]

00:35:696 (1) - consider moving this note further away :arrow: Nope sorry, it may confuse newbies
00:49:603 (1) - lonely new combo for one slider :( :arrow: I put a NC ther cuz the voice, but now I removed
00:55:228 (1) - here too :arrow: Same, but I didn't removed it

your new combos... try following this pattern: count the beat 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8, this way you have consistent combos :arrow: I will work on combos is all diffs

01:25:228 - this part is empty too!! :( :arrow: Same as hard

Thanks <3!!
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
Don't give kd for this post.

source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?

please check this typo from your source

from: wiki
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Makyu

spboxer3 wrote:

Don't give kd for this post.

source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?

please check this typo from your source

from: wiki
yea, you are right, thanks, I will fil it later.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Hello o: From my queue~ Sorry that it took ages.. but still, you're the first one of round three who gets a mod. ^^;

[General]

I suggest use some custom hitsounds! Write me a pm for more informations~

[Easy]

00:16:478 (1,2) - This plays weird .. especially as a beginner
00:19:290 (1,2) - Overused finishes
00:31:790 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:728 (2) - NC
00:43:353 - Don't like this gap here, maybe add a circle.
01:05:853 - She says three here.. add a circle! xD
01:04:290 (1) - You're not allowed to do this in easy, you have to either make the spinner shorter, or delete this slider (It's too near to the spinner)

Note: Can't say much else about this diff.. If I were you, I would go over the whole diff again, and listen closely to the music, maybe you find even better solutions!

[Normal]

00:22:103 - I think the spinner ends here o.o
00:32:728 - The Spinner definetly ends here
00:40:228 (1) - Listen to the music: She says something like Wa-Ha-Shi 00:40:696 - "Ha" is said here: so the reverse has to be here. 00:40:696 -
00:56:165 (1) - Remove NC
Why are the hitsounds so quiet in Kiai time? I think they should be louder than before XD

Note: Same as Easy

[Hard]

00:18:821 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sounds very odd. 1) The rythm you placed seems wrong. 2) The hitsounds.. why normal? o.o Try to remap it.
00:23:353 - Add a circle
I looked at it until this part 00:41:165 - : I suggest another beatpattern. Try this: 00:22:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/256rl and repeat it until 41 seconds. (except there are other beats, i hope you can understand me o:)
00:46:165 (4) - no hitsound
00:52:571 (4) - Add a circle
01:03:353 - o.o what about adding something here? xD
The same thing with the hitsounds make them louder xD

This diff is cool. You got some nice patterns here :D But still - go over it again, and maybe fix some wrong hitsounds: Remember; use the same hitsound pattern as much as you can!

[Black + White]


00:13:353 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking is pretty boring
00:13:978 (1,2,1) - Well.. i don't recommend this slow-thing
00:17:728 (2,3,1,2,3) - Weird placing

Well.. i suggest you take a look at http://osu.ppy.sh/s/75509 , i think this is nice placed and stuff - maybe you get some ideas! Also, sorry for that short mod. But i think i gave you some tips, and in this case, you can ask me for a re-check! PM me whenever you want :D

See you then~
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Makyu

Irreversible wrote:

Hello o: From my queue~ Sorry that it took ages.. but still, you're the first one of round three who gets a mod. ^^;

[General]

I suggest use some custom hitsounds! Write me a pm for more informations~ :arrow: There are custom e.e

[Normal]

00:22:103 - I think the spinner ends here o.o :arrow: Nope, I follow the rhythm
00:32:728 - The Spinner definetly ends here :arrow: If I do that the spiner will be too short for a Normal
00:40:228 (1) - Listen to the music: She says something like Wa-Ha-Shi 00:40:696 - "Ha" is said here: so the reverse has to be here. 00:40:696 - :arrow: Fixed
00:56:165 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: ok
Why are the hitsounds so quiet in Kiai time? I think they should be louder than before XD :arrow: I will filx them in a future

Note: Same as Easy

[Hard]

00:18:821 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part sounds very odd. 1) The rythm you placed seems wrong. 2) The hitsounds.. why normal? o.o Try to remap it. :arrow: I like the way it is, but I changed the sounds to soft
00:23:353 - Add a circle :arrow: It may confuse
I looked at it until this part 00:41:165 - : I suggest another beatpattern. Try this: 00:22:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/256rl and repeat it until 41 seconds. (except there are other beats, i hope you can understand me o:) :arrow: I really don't get this
00:46:165 (4) - no hitsound :arrow: There is a drum ther, but I deleted the finish In the slider tail before that note
00:52:571 (4) - Add a circle :arrow: I follow rhythm, sorry but nope
01:03:353 - o.o what about adding something here? xD :arrow: Nope
The same thing with the hitsounds make them louder xD :arrow: Same as Normal

This diff is cool. You got some nice patterns here :D But still - go over it again, and maybe fix some wrong hitsounds: Remember; use the same hitsound pattern as much as you can!

[Black + White]


00:13:353 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking is pretty boring :arrow: I think is funny
00:13:978 (1,2,1) - Well.. i don't recommend this slow-thing :arrow: Why, is funny and rankeable
00:17:728 (2,3,1,2,3) - Weird placing :arrow: I will change it when I have some Imagination

Well.. i suggest you take a look at http://osu.ppy.sh/s/75509 , i think this is nice placed and stuff - maybe you get some ideas! Also, sorry for that short mod. But i think i gave you some tips, and in this case, you can ask me for a re-check! PM me whenever you want :D

See you then~
I defenitly not going to see others map to map my owns, sorry.
And I will call you for a recheck when I get more mods :D
thanks <3
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old
Hello ~ sorry to be sudden

Do you accept any taiko diffs here ?
I may can make first to decide if necessary ~

Makyu wrote:

Go ahead, but please, make two of them, or find someone to make the other onem you know, that rule.
yes! of cause!
thanks XD
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