21:20 0gre: ここからは個人的な意見なのですが
21:21 ReySHeL: はい
21:21 ReySHeL: あ
21:21 ReySHeL: 00:19:744 - 
21:21 ReySHeL: こういうとこあけていって
21:21 0gre: 00:09:900 - 
21:21 ReySHeL: よくね
21:21 0gre: こういう間合いをもうちょっと作ったほうが良いかと
21:21 0gre: 00:19:744 (2) - 
21:21 0gre: k　で
21:21 ReySHeL: 同じこと
21:21 ReySHeL: 考えてるw
21:21 0gre: 00:20:096 (4) - 
21:22 0gre: これいらないのでは？
21:22 ReySHeL: ほうほう
21:22 0gre: 00:21:619 (2) - 
21:22 0gre: これは　k　
21:22 0gre: ミスですw
21:23 ReySHeL: 00:19:744 - 
21:23 ReySHeL: ここ省いた
21:23 ReySHeL: 00:21:619 - 
21:23 ReySHeL: ここも
21:24 0gre: 例えば
21:24 0gre: ここ
21:25 0gre: 00:21:619 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 
21:25 0gre: oo oo o o
21:25 0gre: 見たいなふうに
21:25 0gre: 少なくしていくのはどうでしょう？
21:25 ReySHeL: つまり？
21:26 0gre: こう遅い曲なら
21:26 0gre: 2連も多少使っていかないですか？
21:26 ReySHeL: (´・д・｀)ﾔﾀﾞ
21:26 0gre: なるべく
21:26 0gre: wwwwww
21:26 0gre: なるべく
21:26 ReySHeL: ww
21:26 ReySHeL: まぁピアノに合わせたらそうなるけどね
21:26 0gre: 3連同士が近いのは　省いていいかな
21:27 0gre: 今のはちょっとしたアイディアですが
21:27 ReySHeL: はい
21:28 0gre: 00:27:010 - 
21:28 0gre: ここから
21:28 0gre: 00:31:932 - 
21:28 0gre: ここまで
21:28 0gre: あ
21:28 0gre: でも
21:29 0gre: これはいいですね
21:29 ReySHeL: ども
21:29 0gre: 00:36:502 (2,3) - 
21:29 0gre: これは省けないですか？
21:29 0gre: それか
21:30 0gre: ノート1つでつなげるか
21:30 ReySHeL: 省くのもよさげですね
21:31 0gre: 00:42:947 (2,3,1,2,1) - 
21:31 0gre: ddk　k　？
21:31 0gre: or
21:31 0gre: kkd k ?
21:32 ReySHeL: おk
21:32 0gre: ほんとですか？ww
21:32 ReySHeL: んwww
21:32 0gre: 00:44:119 (1,2) - 
21:32 0gre: delete ?
21:33 ReySHeL: おk
21:33 0gre: 流れでいくと
21:33 0gre: 00:45:291 (2) - 
21:33 0gre: k で
21:33 0gre: 00:45:525 (1) - 
21:33 0gre: d　？
21:33 ReySHeL: no!!
21:34 0gre: oh !
21:34 0gre: 00:46:932 - 
21:34 0gre: ここボーカルも続いてて大きいドラム音もあるので
21:34 0gre: add d?
21:34 ReySHeL: ok
21:35 ReySHeL: 00:48:807 - 
21:35 ReySHeL: こっからは
21:35 0gre: a
21:35 ReySHeL: クラップ入って盛り上がってきますね
21:35 0gre: その前に
21:35 0gre: 00:48:455 (2) - 
21:35 0gre: delete ?
21:35 0gre: これはいいですねw
21:35 ReySHeL: はい
21:35 0gre: そこからの盛り上がりは
21:36 0gre: ノートを増やすのではなく
21:36 0gre: 繋げを多くしていけばいいと思います
21:36 ReySHeL: いえす
21:36 0gre: なので
21:36 0gre: 00:49:158 (4) - 
21:36 0gre: こういうのや
21:36 0gre: あーでも
21:37 0gre: 盛り上がりの入りですねー
21:37 ReySHeL: はい
21:37 0gre: 00:53:260 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 
21:37 0gre: ここから
21:37 0gre: o o ooo o o ooo の流れで良いと思います
21:38 0gre: o ooo o ooo はサビなど　多く必要とするので
21:38 ReySHeL: ほう
21:38 0gre: 全体的に少なくするなら
21:38 0gre: 流れも変えればちょっとはマシになるかも
21:39 ReySHeL: fm
21:40 0gre: 次行っても大丈夫ですか？
21:40 ReySHeL: はい
21:40 0gre: 01:11:541 (2,1,1,2,3,4,1) - 
21:40 0gre: サビの割には　ちょっと急に寂しくなりすぎると思います
21:41 0gre: 01:12:361 (3) - 
21:41 0gre: この辺に
21:41 0gre: 置いてみたり？
21:41 ReySHeL: もう一度
21:41 ReySHeL: 多分それミスってる
21:41 ReySHeL: コピーが
21:41 0gre: 01:12:361 - 
21:42 ReySHeL: ddddk？
21:42 0gre: はい
21:42 ReySHeL: いいねw
21:42 ReySHeL: 採用
21:42 0gre: ありがとうですw
21:43 0gre: 01:31:932 - 
21:43 0gre: ここまで　あとは綺麗ですねw
21:43 ReySHeL: ありw
21:44 0gre: もし
21:44 0gre: 00:18:807 - 
21:44 0gre: この辺ちょっと改善したのなら
21:44 0gre: 01:33:807 - 
21:45 0gre: ここも似てますので　　同じ部分があったら使っても良いかもしれません＞＜
21:45 ReySHeL: 使います :D
21:45 0gre: 編集の事です
21:45 0gre: では異常ですねw
21:45 0gre: あ
21:45 0gre: 以上ですwww
21:45 ReySHeL: modありがとうございます_(:3 」∠)_
21:45 0gre: いえいえw

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi Pokie ~ (:3 」_)=3　_(┐「ε:)_

From #modreqs lol

[relaxing]

Circle Size +1?　Done

00:27:947 (2,4) please 2 slider end and 4 slider end stack　Done

00:37:088 (4,1) stack ? seems to be a neat notes.　Done

01:11:072 (6,1) blanket ? http://puu.sh/28Xdu <- this　Done


[don't mind]

AR + 1? OD + 1?　Alright~

00:50:330 (5,1) Notes to the effect shown in the score effects will be hidden. And may cause discomfort to the player.
http://puu.sh/28Xrk Change gives a good idea.　Changed to another pattern

00:57:713 (4) Ctrl+G ?　hmmm..well, as expected modders are going to pick this, but it's on purpose.

01:16:580 (2,4) stack seems to be a neat notes.　Actually they're in different flow...But nvm, I'll consider to change or not.

01:25:135 (2,3) Placed with the intention you? If you are not placed with the intention of you guess the distance　If you mean it's kind of sudden for a big spacing changes, fixed.


[please be lazy]

00:09:197 (7,1,2,3) It think the bad pattern. http://puu.sh/28XPE change?　Used a lower spacing.

00:11:775 (1,3) stack　Both are obviously placed deliberately...imo.

00:12:713 (4,6) ^ too

00:13:045 (6,1,2) this is pattern better will be. http://puu.sh/28XY8 <- this　 There are plenty triples placed with this pattern.. Are you sure?

01:01:932 (1,2,3) I think could be improved. http://puu.sh/28Y57　Changed in another way.


I like a song lol Good luck ~

LunarSakuya wrote:

_(:3 」I love you ∠)_ 　_(┐Me too「ε:)_

General
looks fine

relaxing
00:11:307 (1) - Finish on head, there's some emphasis in the bg music　_(┐Fixed with Normal finish「ε:)_
00:33:807 (1) - Soft Finish for similar reason ^　_(┐Same here「ε:)_
00:59:588 (6) - Try stacking on the head of (2) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631431　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:31:932 (5) - NC?, kinda like 00:24:432 (1,2) - 　_(┐Okay「ε:)_

don't mind
00:09:314 (6) - Delete note, I don't really hear anything specific this is following　_(:3 」Actually there's a hit-hat∠)_
00:19:041 (3) - NC, kinda "introducing" the new stanza?　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
00:26:072 (1) - Delete NC, put NC on next note　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
00:53:494 (3,4) - This overlap stood out to me compared to the rest of the map, maybe something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631437　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:03:807 (3) - NC　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:06:619 (5,6) - Make these touch each other like the other similar rhythms in this diff (ex: 01:43:650 (2,3) - ); you could tack the end of (5) under the head of (3) 　_(:3 」hmm...worrying about the overlap (01:05:447 (1,2,3) - )∠)_
01:33:807 (3) - NC　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:36:150 (2,3) - Decrease distance for similar reason earlier　_(:3 」Since I'm keeping the previous one, I'll do it here as well.∠)_
01:41:072 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note 　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:41:775 (2,3) - Touch　_(:3 」Nyan!∠)_

please be lazy
00:17:869 (1) - if you want, center this within the square　_(:3 」huehue∠)_
00:18:338 (1) - Delete NC, it didn't have this in [don't mind]　_(┐Okay, mistake「ε:)_
00:19:744 (1) - Delete NC　_(┐Okay, mistakeagain!!!「ε:)_
00:29:119 (4) - Move this back to the blue tick http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631447 to match the rhythm better; then you could put a note or extend the slider to the red tick　_(:3 」hmm...added a triple instead, intended to follow the drum here 00:29:119 - ∠)_
00:30:525 (2,3,4,5) - This rhythm is more fitting imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631448　_(:3 」Similar to above, tried another rhythm pattern but failed. ∠)_
00:33:807 (2) - Soft finish on head　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
00:53:025 (2) - Felt awkward to play at first, maybe rotate like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631450　_(:3 」hmm..that breaks the flow quite much∠)_
01:01:228 (1) - Delete NC, didn't catch the point of this　_(┐Okay「ε:)_
01:14:939 - Add note here, will be nice with the bg music imo; maybe a pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/631452　_(┐Okay「ε:)_

hnnnngggg　_(┐Uguuuuuuuuuu「ε:)_

S o r d a wrote:

hi! sorry bit late T_T

[overall]:

1. nothing to say

[please be lazy]:

1. 00:24:432 (1,2) - もうちょっとスペーシング広くしてもいいかな・・？spacing1.4~1.6? 　Done
2. 00:48:455 - add note ?　追加するのなら、00:48:689 - こっちの方が良さそうです！(hit-hatの声がありますので) でもここは1/2でいいと思う
3. 01:11:307 (1) - finish?　ここはNoかな・・・
4. 01:40:135 (3) - remove finish? 　ここ00:25:135 (3) - と一緒だよ
5. 01:11:307 (1) - finish?

[don't mind]:

1. 00:47:635 (1) - clap 　Done
2. 01:11:307 (1) - finish?　あまり合ってないかも・・

[relaxing]:

1. fine

sorry bad mod T_T
nice map >w<
i hope ranked soon moe Pokie sama!