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Buckwheat Boyz - PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME

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fartownik
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 kwietnia 2009 at 17:43:17

Artist: Buckwheat Boyz
Title: Peanut Butter Jelly Time
Tags: Banana Dancing Peanut Butter Jelly Time Buckwheat Boyz
BPM: 153,75
Filesize: 2769kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Big Banana (4,98 stars, 314 notes)
  2. BIGGEST BANANA EVER (5 stars, 415 notes)
  3. Little Banana (1,39 stars, 90 notes)
  4. Not So Big Banana (4,2 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Buckwheat Boyz - Peanut Butter Jelly Time
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi. This is my first beatmap, so help me and mod this

Edit1: SteRRuM's suggestions fix.
Edit2: Shinxyn's suggestions fix.
Edit3: JarJarJacob's suggestions fix.
SteRRuM
I will speak polish, so fartownik will understand me better :)
[Little Banana]
Lol ale żeś songa trzasnął xD
00:09:65 (1) - ten slider wychodzi za ekran lol, nowe combo można dawać gdzie sie chce więc przenieś go bardziej na środek
00:12:78 (1) - zrób w równej linii z 2, tak żeby nachodziło na pojawiające się 3
00:17:46 (1) - przenieś bo zasłanie go slider
Haha spinnery też niczego sobie :P
00:31:50 (5) - daj na znikającą 3
00:33:06 (1) - zrób tak żeby koniec był na końcu poprzedniego slidera
00:34:62 (1) - to samo
00:36:18 (1) - wtedy to też
00:43:98 (1) - slider za długi o 1/4
00:45:54 (1,1,1) - te też, i zrób później tak żeby na siebie dokładnie nachodziły w takim układzie jakim są
00:50:22 (2) - nowe combo
01:15:19 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - zrób tak żeby żadne slidery na siebie nie nachodziły
01:30:79 (1) - przesuń żeby nikt go nie zasłaniało
01:37:03 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing

[Not So Big Banana]
00:17:46 (1) - zasłonięty
00:25:26 (2) - nowe combo
00:36:18 (1) - zasłonięty
00:43:20 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:50:22 (2) - nowe combo
01:18:31 (9) - nowe combo
01:26:11 (1) - zasłonięty

[Big Banana]
00:14:34 (6) - nowe combo
00:15:90 (11) - ^
00:17:46 (16) - ^
00:49:44 (5) - zrób jako stack z 4, bo wychodzi za ekran
01:22:21 (3) - ułóż równo w linii z końcem 2
01:22:60 (4) - to tak samo tylko, że z końcem 3
01:45:71 (4) - przesuń o 1/4 do tyłu

[BIGGEST BANANA EVER]
00:56:46 (1) - zrób tak żeby kończyło się o 1/4 wcześniej
01:05:73 (1,1) - obydwa 1/4 dłużej
01:32:35 (1,1,1) - w ogóle co to jest??? usuń to
01:38:69 (1,2) - 1/4 do przodu
Ogólnie lekki overmapping :cry:

Nom powiem Ci, że może być oprócz tego że ten ostatni troche overmapped
Masz ode mnie ofkoz :P
Topic Starter
fartownik
// Fixed praktycznie all.
skratch
napiszę po polsku, zajebiste brat, gwiazdknę Cię
Shinxyn
>_<
Ahh can't say much for timing since it works fine

Just pointing out-
-Please use a set distance snap on all difficulties, aside from jumps. The spacing seems very random.
-Orginize the maps better please, they're all pretty messy in a way.
-Center the flashing sign a bit more
-For insane - too much finish hitsounds and you have ninja spinners that auto cant get 2k on, that's not too good.

That's all for now.

Edit- It's much cleaner now~ Though only thing I can point out is the many uses of 1/6 beats, I don't think its necessary, but your choice.
Sure, its enough for a star
Topic Starter
fartownik
Thanks man. I fixed that. +Kudosu.
Selectus
Great map, i love it :P
Stared
Kirbydude13
Awesome and fun I NEED THAT SKIN
Jarby
BPM: 153.75 works better. You don't need to put skin elements in the Design tab. They will work as long as they are located in the map's folder and are named correctly. Change the text on the comboburst flag to a picture, since the text won't appear correctly when it is mirrored. Keep breaks at the same place on all difficulties.

BIGGEST BANANA EVER:

I don't like the way combos are used. Keep it consistently done. If you're keeping it this way, raise the HP Drain. In fact, you should raise the HP Drain even if you are changing it, as it's lower than the easier difficulties.

00:57:83 (1) - Move forward 1/2 and shorten 1/2.
01:04:95 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hidden.
01:13:72 (1) - Move back 1/4 and lengthen 1/4.
01:24:16 (1,2,3) - Spacing, and hidden.
01:29:29 (1) - Move back 1/6 and lengthen 1/6

Big Banana:

00:12:48() - Remove soft soundset.
00:32:86 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2.
01:05:04 (1,2,3) - Move up 1 square on a level 3 grid and line vertically with the last slider.
01:27:28 (4) - Move it. It's practically invisible.
01:29:23 (3) - Spacing problem.0
01:29:91 (1) - Too short. Replace with circles and sliders.
01:33:03 (1) - Too short. Replace with circles and sliders.

Not So Big Banana:

00:14:14 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2.
00:19:41 (2) - Hidden.
00:32:86 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2.
00:57:83 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2.
01:18:31 (1) - The slight diagonal spacing between the last circle is ugly.
01:31:96 (1) - Spacing.
01:45:61 (4) - No sound.

Little Banana:

Change Slider Tick Rate to 1.

00:19:02 (3) - Remove.
00:19:41 (1) - Move back 1/1 and lengthen 1/1.
00:22:14 (1) - Replace with spinner. This slider is too sudden for a difficulty this Easy.
00:37:93 (1) - Move back 1/2 and lengthen 1/2.
00:40:86 (1) - Replace with spinner. This slider is too sudden for a difficulty this Easy.
00:43:98 (1,1,1,1) - Shorten 1/2.
00:56:46 (5) - New combo.
01:45:61 (1) - No sound.
Topic Starter
fartownik

JarJarJacob wrote:

BPM: 153.75 works better. - fixed
You don't need to put skin elements in the Design tab. They will work as long as they are located in the map's folder and are named correctly. - I just wanted to be sure ;) It's my first beatmap, that's why.
Change the text on the comboburst flag to a picture, since the text won't appear correctly when it is mirrored. - fixed
Keep breaks at the same place on all difficulties. - I'm not able to do it now... ;p Too late :P

BIGGEST BANANA EVER:

I don't like the way combos are used. Keep it consistently done. If you're keeping it this way, raise the HP Drain. In fact, you should raise the HP Drain even if you are changing it, as it's lower than the easier difficulties.

00:57:83 (1) - Move forward 1/2 and shorten 1/2. - fixed
01:04:95 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hidden. - fixed
01:13:72 (1) - Move back 1/4 and lengthen 1/4. - fixed
01:24:16 (1,2,3) - Spacing, and hidden. - fixed
01:29:29 (1) - Move back 1/6 and lengthen 1/6 - fixed

Big Banana:

00:12:48() - Remove soft soundset. - fixed
00:32:86 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2. - fixed
01:05:04 (1,2,3) - Move up 1 square on a level 3 grid and line vertically with the last slider. - fixed
01:27:28 (4) - Move it. It's practically invisible. - fixed
01:29:23 (3) - Spacing problem.0 - fixed
01:29:91 (1) - Too short. Replace with circles and sliders. - fixed
01:33:03 (1) - Too short. Replace with circles and sliders. - fixed

Not So Big Banana:

00:14:14 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2. - fixed
00:19:41 (2) - Hidden. - fixed
00:32:86 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2. - fixed
00:57:83 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and shorten 1/2. - fixed
01:18:31 (1) - The slight diagonal spacing between the last circle is ugly. - fixed
01:31:96 (1) - Spacing. - fixed
01:45:61 (4) - No sound. - fixed

Little Banana:

Change Slider Tick Rate to 1. - fixed

00:19:02 (3) - Remove. - fixed
00:19:41 (1) - Move back 1/1 and lengthen 1/1. - fixed
00:22:14 (1) - Replace with spinner. This slider is too sudden for a difficulty this Easy. - fixed
00:37:93 (1) - Move back 1/2 and lengthen 1/2. - fixed
00:40:86 (1) - Replace with spinner. This slider is too sudden for a difficulty this Easy. - fixed
00:43:98 (1,1,1,1) - Shorten 1/2. - fixed
00:56:46 (5) - New combo. - fixed
01:45:61 (1) - No sound. - fixed
Thanks JarJarJacob :)
Starrodkirby86
Oh man, it's this song, haha.

[Little Banana]:
00:22:14 (1) - Extend by 1/1.
00:33:07 (1) - Move 1 to the left on Grid level 2?
00:40:88 (1) - Extend by 1/2.
00:51:02 (2) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 2.
01:01:17 (1) - Add break after this slider.
01:42:53 (1) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 3.
01:43:31 (1) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 2.

[Not So Big Banana]:
00:22:14 (1) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
00:32:88 (1) - Make this like the other spinners throughout the song.
00:25:27 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This looks a bit sloppy overall. :(
01:31:61 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing...D:


[Big Banana]:
00:15:51 (1) - I don't like this being here. Perhaps move it to the red tick ahead?
00:40:88 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Have those whistles like in the other set.
00:44:00 (5) - New combo.

[BIGGEST BANANA EVER]:
01:33:75 (1) - Move this to where the upcoming (2) of the teal combo is.


The beatmap is very repetitive. Fortunately, I can't blame you for that. You do what you can, I suppose.

It would need some number of work. The fact that it was repetitive made it somewhat dull.

I didn't understand the inherited time section around the end that muted the volume. I also didn't understand the fact that you have different breaks. D: (Oh well)

Eh, good luck. ^^;
Larto
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