Leader wrote:

ohai lasagna \:D/ Oh LASAGNAA \o3o/

Just some suggestions.
[General]
Add "tatu" in the tags. Okay :3

[gomenasai]
00:09:819 (2) - Move to x:316 y:140 done
00:43:348 (1,2) - Not really good to play in my opinion, I'd rather to do something like http://puu.sh/2ecH5 changed ><
00:47:584 (4) - CTRL+J and of course move (5) to x:400 y:220 naah I dont like this :/
01:28:878 (1,2,3) - x:256 y:48 looks better imo :3 It was like this before, just dunno what happened here ;A;
02:10:172 (5) - remove nc hmm.. okay

[gomen]
01:59:584 (2) - x:256 y:260 Changed
02:02:054 (4) - NC? done

Nice map, gomenasai for noob mod and good luck for rank :3 aah aah Thank you >.<//

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Modding queue Hello o3o

[Genera]
So nice song q-q
Make a Easy less than 3 Stars so you can rank it, other wise it goes for Approve only .-.
(Unless that rule is changed) I dont think it needs ^^


[Gomen]
00:00:290 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/648400
The curves looks better this way No change here, because it is okay like now too

Nothing more ._. it's so nice made :c

[Gomenasai]
01:15:819 (4,5,6) - They don't look precisely stacked ._. fixed, hope it's fine now
01:43:348 (2) - 1 Grid to left ok
01:42:642 (1) - 1 grid to right okay :3
So they wont touch each other and they look better :3


Nothing else :**

I'll note for re-mod later :c
Sorry for the weak mod. The map is nice to me D:

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ Random mod.

General:
Deselect Letterbox during breaks. because you haven't storyboard done

gomen:
00:34:878(1) - reduce to 00:35:231 and add note to 00:35:584
I think it will be more readable No change here :/

gomenasai:
00:44:231(2,4) - maybe delete this patterns? done
01:17:231(1) - reduce to 01:17:584 and add note to 01:17:760
01:18:642(4) - remove pattern
01:17:937(3) - extend to 01:18:642
01:36:113 - add note
03:10:525 - add note?
No change >.<

Pretty nice background~ and goog luck.

On_WanWan wrote:

Hi I try my best to mod

[gomen]
there are 9 objects aren't snapping , check it on Aimod ctrl+shift+A aah >.< fixed
00:38:231 (2) - I think delect it is better done :3
02:29:937 ~ 02:49:613 - kial time start and end no change :/

[gomenasai]
there are 26 objects aren't snapping , check it too 0.0 done
00:44:231 (2) - delect it? i think it's weird already did
00:44:937 (4) - ^ ^
01:31:833 (2) - x196 y104 ?
01:31:878 - add a circle here x196 x104 I dont like this huh :/
01:54:642 - add a NC? ok
02:29:937 ~ 02:49:613 - kial time start and end no change here too

beautiful song and map and GOOD LUCK!

-iCo- wrote:

M4M for your queue~~

Gomen

00:29:231 (2,3) - ctrl+g looks better done

00:46:878 (1) - flip this slider so the shape matches with 00:47:584 (2) - dont think it need

01:18:995 (6) - extend this slider to 01:19:701 and remove 01:19:701 (7) - I'm not agree tho

01:28:525 (5,2) - overlap nope ><

02:01:348 (3) - 1 grid right ok

02:27:819 (1) - 2 grid down ok

Gomenasai

Wow... Just Wow... i couldnt find anything that was wierd o.o Such a great difficulty!!

jonathanlfj wrote:

mod upon request
u make such good song choices <3

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
BPM: 85, confirmed this with a few others; just double ur sv and tick rate to compensate for the change (mod is still based on 170bpm)
offset is good in the beginning, but starting from 00:22:525 (1) it sounds a bit late compared to the music...might want to find someone good in timing to check that
tag "Dangerous and Moving" since its the original album containing the song (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gomenasai) done both

[gomen]
00:04:172 (2) - whistle? okay
00:09:819 (2) - ^ okay
00:34:878 (1,4) - blankets can look better I dont think it needs ^^
00:58:878 (6) - spacing fixed
01:24:995 - do one of those short kiai burst things here? same applies to gomenasai okay
01:41:231 (6) - spacing fixed
02:14:760 (4) - do NC here to indicate transition from instrumentals to vocals done
02:34:878 (2) - not perfectly symmetrical >< fixed (I guess xD)
02:46:172 (6) - spacing fixed
02:49:348 (4) - finish on slider end there is already one

[gomenasai]
00:23:584 (4) - NC done
00:56:054 (6,7) - the slider sounds like a triplet to me, how bout this rhythm: no change sorry

SPOILER

01:23:584 (5) - NC to correspond with the finish u added ok
01:32:760 (4,5) - a similar thing with 00:56:054 (6,7) no change too here
02:00:289 (1) - one grid right done
02:14:760 (4) - NC okay
02:38:231 - add note nope :c
02:44:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be cool if you could perfectly center this cant because of spacing
03:08:848 (6) - was this accidental? if it is then snap this to 03:08:760, if not then please use a slider here because the stack is almost impossible to read with the second note on a blue tick I dont know what going on here o.o fixed ><

Great map u got there, good luck on ranking ^_^

Nichiyouki wrote:

Sawatdee khrab, Ai :3 Sawatdee kha Nichiyouki ^-^

Mod request from pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Offset is 261 (-29) because I feel that 290 is too late for the rhythm. Okay

gomen

1. 00:05:584 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It isn't smoothly to play for 00:05:584 (4,1). So I will suggest that make to this pictures will be more beautiful and more smoothly. ok
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
2. 00:58:878 (6,7,1) - Move (6,7) to down 2 grids, and move slider begin of (1) to stack with 00:57:113 (1) (Symmetric with 00:58:525 (5)). okay
3. 01:09:466 (3) - Remove finish wll be better? ok
4. 01:23:937 (3,4) - Spacing is too far. Please move (3) to up 1 grid, and move (4) to down 1 grid. Although spacing is 1.04x, but I think these is no problem. done
5. 01:41:231 (6,7,1) - Same with 00:58:878 (6,7,1). fixed
6. 02:06:995 (2) - Add finish on slider end to follow the rhythm. ok
7. 02:46:172 (6,7,1) - Same with 00:58:878 (6,7,1). fixed

gomenasai

1. 00:22:525 (1,2) - I feel weird when I play and try to compare it with rhythm. I think it will be better if you change 2 circles into a slider instead. no change sry
2. 00:34:172 (3) - Hitsound on here is relatively quiet. You can fix it by add finish here imo. done
3. 01:19:348 (5) - I hear hitsound weird here, and I think you probably did not intend to add clap. So remove it. okay
4. 01:19:701 (7) - Try to make it into curve slider, but for me, I suggest that make to symmetric with 01:20:760. okay
5. 01:33:113 (5) - Add finish on slider end to follow the rhythm. done
6. 01:36:290 (8) - This, too. Please add finish. done
7. 01:39:466 (1,2) - Spacing is too far, and I feel very weird. So please move (2). I'm not agree tho. :/
8. 01:55:348 (3) - Use ctrl+G. It will be more smoothly. done
9. 01:52:878 (2) - Add finish on sider end will be better? okay
10. 02:07:348 (6) - Add finish to follow the rhythm. okay done
11. 02:08:761 (1) - Hitsound on here is too loud. I think remove finish after you fixed note on 02:07:348 (6). Okay
12. 02:38:407 (5,1) - Spacing is too close. I suggest that move (5) farther from (1), or move slider end to stach with (1). done
13. 02:40:878 (6) - Remove clap. fixed
14. 02:56:054 (1) - I think you forget add clap on slider begin. So add it. done
15. 03:08:407 (5) - This rhythm of note is weird for me. Maybe remove a circle will be better. no fixed
16. 03:08:848 (6) - Why do you put a circle on blue tick? Please move it at 03:08:760. already fixed
17. 03:11:231 (3) - Move to x:296 y:96 will be better. okay

Comment: The pattern your mapping is quite good, but I think that these are have problem only putting hitsound which may want more work. However, this map is still possible to be ranked. I think.

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~