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Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura

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antony11
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 7 July, 2009 at 2:11:06

Artist: Aaron Kwok
Title: Para Para Sakura
BPM: 151
Filesize: 3957kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.2 stars, 262 notes)
  2. Echo's Insane (5 stars, 576 notes)
  3. Hard (4.87 stars, 528 notes)
  4. Normal (4.55 stars, 359 notes)
Download: Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura
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郭富城-Para Para Sakura (芭啦芭啦櫻之花電影主題曲)

Enjoy it..

13/5 Added Echo's insane
blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
A lot of this might be already covered by blissfulyoshi. I'm too lazy to remove the ones that are already done. Brace yourself.

[Normal]:
00:37:86 (9) - New combo.
00:39:25 (11) - I don't think you need this beat.
00:50:97 (8) - New combo?
00:59:12 (5) - New combo.
01:01:11 (9) - This overlap looks ugly. And new combo?
01:17:40 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
01:22:56 (8) - New combo.
01:26:14 (1) - Remove this beat?
01:30:11 (3) - I don't think you need this beat.
01:32:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 1 to the right on the timeline in Beat Snap Divisor 1/1.
01:44:81 (1) - Make this slider repeat only THREE times and move it to 1:45:21.
01:49:98 (6) - New combo.
01:51:57 (9) - This overlap looks ugly. New combo.
01:57:53 (1) - Move this to 1:57:927.
01:58:32 (2) - Move this to 1:58:523.
01:59:51 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1.
02:00:70 (1) - Remove this beat.
02:01:10 (2) - This isn't necessary, but new combo.
02:02:69 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1.
02:03:88 (1) - Remove this beat.
02:04:28 (2) - This isn't necessary, but new combo.
02:31:30 (11) - New combo.
02:32:89 (15) - New combo.
02:37:66 (11) - New combo.
02:41:63 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
02:46:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:47:19 (2) - Add new combo.
03:09:44 (11) - New combo.
03:11:03 (15) - New combo.
03:15:80 (11) - New combo.
03:19:77 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
03:24:94 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:25:33 (2) - New combo.

[Hard]:
00:14:62 (10) - New combo.
00:19:19 (4) - It's spaced a little too far.
00:20:98 (10) - New combo.
00:23:96 (1,1,1) - These spinners are illegal because Auto cannot 2000 them. It's a new rule.
00:36:07 (2,3) - This spacing is inconsistent.
00:37:86 (8) - New combo.
00:44:62 (9) - New combo.
00:59:32 (1,2) - This spacing can trip someone up because it looks like the 1/4 ones. Space it out more.
01:16:60 (12) - New combo.
01:26:93 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:28:72 (8) - New combo.
01:35:47 (9) - New combo.
01:50:18 (1,2) - This spacing can trip someone up because it looks like the 1/4 ones. Space it out more.
01:54:74 (10) - New combo.
02:11:83 (4) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 2.
02:31:30 (7) - New combo.
02:32:89 (12) - New combo~
02:37:66 (11) - New combo.
02:43:61 (1) - Move this to 2:44:01 and make it only 5 repeats. Then add a beat at 2:43:61.
03:09:44 (8) - New combo.
03:15:80 (11) - New combo.
03:20:37 (5) - Move to the center of the playing field.
03:22:16 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks sloppy.
03:25:33 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above.
03:29:70 (3,4) - Move them more to the left so they'll be looking like they're the middle of (1) and (2). The final shape should be a trapezoid.

This is an interesting map. Somewhat. Yes. Make the corrections and you'll earn a star, haha.

The song feels a little too repetitious, especially on [Normal].

Also, create an easier difficulty. :)

Good luck!

Also give kudosu where kudosu is due :>
Topic Starter
antony11
thank^^

easy mod added
Starrodkirby86
Hey again.

[Easy]:
00:34:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:68 (2) - New combo.
00:38:46 (1) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 2.
01:22:96 (x) - I feel like there should be a beat here. If there is, that would get the new combo.
02:09:06 (5) - Remove this beat.
02:09:45 (1) - Move this to where (5) used to be. Extend it by 1/1.
02:42:43 (5) - New combo?
02:45:61 (5) - New combo?
02:48:79 (5) - New combo?
02:52:17 (1) - A near ninja-spinner on Easy? O_o

I liked [Easy] a lot...

I may as well Star this and all so you can have something here. :P

Get this map modded more^^ Good luck.
aquabluu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
antony11
Thank all of you@@
Alace
<Hard>
I am sure those spinners will get troubke REMOVE PLZ
spacing
00:36:08 (2) (3)
01:09:45 (3) (4)
01:27:33 (3) (4)
01:29:52 (4) (5)
01:40:45 (6) (7)
01:50:18 (1) (2)
02:18:39 (3) (1)
02:32:90 (6) (7)
02:34:09 (13) (14)
dawn010
It is great
mtmcl
00:59:32 (1,2) - These are spaced just like (3,4) and (5,6) yet they are timed differently. There is room for some creativity in spacing, but this case may be unacceptable. That said, have a star for now. Great map!


EDIT: I keep forgetting to put difficulty. I think this was Hard?
Topic Starter
antony11

mtmcl wrote:

00:59:32 (1,2) - These are spaced just like (3,4) and (5,6) yet they are timed differently. There is room for some creativity in spacing, but this case may be unacceptable. That said, have a star for now. Great map!


EDIT: I keep forgetting to put difficulty. I think this was Hard?
Ha...actually 00:59:32 (1,2) is a spacing mistake =口=
Fixed it already, thank^^
mtmcl
Fragile Mark bubble. Don't poke it too hard.
yanki
Support <3 HK ppl :)
stAR !!!!!!
vytalibus
[Easy]
01:59:92 (1) - Really short for my liking, especially since it's an Easy.
02:03:10 (1) - ^
02:06:27 (1) - ^
02:09:06 (1) - Extend this by 1/1.
02:42:43 (1) - I don't know about this jump. It's a surprise. Many beginners (who are supposed to be the targets of Easy difficulties) will definitely get confused.
02:52:17 (1) - Same with 02:09:06.
03:20:58 (1) - Same with 02:42:43. I also sense copy-pasta, which isn't really bad.

[Normal]
01:44:82 (1) - Move the starting point forward by 1/1. Sounds WAY better.

[Hard]
00:23:96 (1,1,1) - I don't like these streams of spinners, especially the first one since it's too short for my liking.
Topic Starter
antony11
Fixed all already
thanks vytalibus :P
Echo
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Echo
Here you go~

One thing - perhaps offset 11420?

edit: offset now at 11435 as discussed on irc

Download: Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura (antony11) [Echo's insane].osu
Topic Starter
antony11
Awesome map, Echo yoyo~ :)
I can't find any problem with your map.

But only one suggestion to you
02:21:35 (6) and 02:22:94 (6) - extend 1/6 beat will be better
Echo
I think if I make it longer there isn't enough time to get to the next beat.

Update for mine, I changed the ending slightly. It was too 乱 before.

Download: Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura (antony11) [Echo's insane].osu
WyndII
Can't find anything wrong. :)
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